Monday, January 10, 2011

Come back when you can (11)

Quwa;**


1. Shlonkoum?


2. el jaw bara iyaaanin! Finally yana bard?!


3.I need a new hair cut!


4. I didnt reply on ur comments on the last post becasue im SUPER BUSY! I'll to reply asap ;)


Enjoy it;**


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Basma: 6alagtne?




He nodded.

Basma's eyes were full of tears: laish?!



S3ood sighed heavily he put his hand on his forehead.



Basma: S3ood laish 6alagtne?!



S3ood: Basma ele baina kan musta7eel ykoun! Kan musta7el ykoun ela etha ana wiyaaach tamaina n7awil o intimasak ib ba3ath! Bas lama… lama dashaitay bil '3aybooba kint ana thid ahale o ahalich broo7i! ma kintay yami o kafi ele kint feh



Basma: o 8arart it6aligne?!



S3ood: mo ana ele 8arart … ahali o ahalich ohma ele 8ariraw



Basma and S3ood stayed silent for a while, Basma kept on staring at him and he stared at the space, She felt lost & left out and he felt sad & guilty.



Basma: o chithi 5ali9at 8i9atna?



S3ood: Basma-



Basma: laish ma giltole?! Laish ma7ad kan rathe ygoole inik rayle!?!



He shook his head.



She sighed: inik kint rayle!



S3ood: awal ma gimtay mn el '3aybooba kalamni oboch… gale inch fa8adtay el thakira o ma tathkren a7ad o el a7san ina ma7ad iyeblich 6areye o ine ma akalmch 3ashan la tit.thakraine



Basma was shocked.



S3ood: o nisait as2lich el mobile ele kalamtene mina mobile mno?



Basma: mobiley



S3ood shock his head: la hatha mo ra8mch



Basma: omi galat in mobiley tikasar o-



S3ood: mobileych ma tikasar … kil ele kan ib jan6itich tam nafsa



Basma gasped, everyone lied to her!



Tears escaped Basma's eyes, she sniffed and whipped them away.



S3ood: Basma sam7ene



He looked so sad and broken like he always did.



Basma: S3ood shil ma6lob mne asawi?! A3esh 7ayate 3adi? Wala iye 3ala bali ine kint murtik?



He nodded.



Basma grabbed her purse and stood up.



Basma: 9a3ib! S3ood ma agdar ansa ele sima3ta! Ma agdar asawi nafsi mo mihtama! Ib ay 7ag el kil 8arar ine ma a3arif ay shay 3an ele 9arli gabil el 7adith? Mo mn 7aghoum ya7rmoone mn ine a3arif ele 9ar ib 7ayati!



S3ood: adri wala adri



Basma: al7en istaw3abt laish kil ma ayeb 6ariyk oboy y3a9ib! al7en istaw3abt laish omik dgaratne awal ma shafatne! Al7en istaw3abt laish kil ele kint a9adifhoum kanaw ys2lon 3anik!



S3ood: o 3abalich ana ele marait feh sahil?!



Basma sat down.



S3ood: Basma! Ana… ana figadtich faj2a! o la mo bas figadch kint lazm ansach o amsi7ich mn 7ayati wala china kan baina shay! 3abalich hatha sahil?! Basma intay kintay murti! MURTI! O ib sa3tain in'3a9abt a6aligich



Basma's eyes were full of tears.



S3ood: kint kil youm ayech el mistashfa! Kil youm! 7ata 3ugb ma 6alagtich kint ayech… 7ayati Kilha wgifat ma gimt adawim bil sharika lama ingabat! O la inbagat mn mno? 5ali! O rija3na mara thanya o 6alabna musa3ada mn ahalich o kan shar6houm ine asht'3il 3indhoum



Basma nodded and stood up: madri shasawi … madri shagoolik



S3ood was so sad and she could feel it, She could feel how weak he was and it broke her



Basma: mashkoor s3ood.. mashkor la2anik el wa7eed ele rithait tgoole kil shay



Basma walked away but S3ood stopped her when he called her name



Basma: na3am?



S3ood: mithil ma intay t7isen inch ta3bana ham ana ta3ban… 9ij in9idamtay ib kil ele gilta o 7asaitay ina ana wiyach inthalamna… bas intay wath3ich ar7am mn wath3i



Basma: shlon?



S3ood: intay ma tathkren ay shay baina…. Ana athkir kil shay baina



S3ood gave her a weak smile: athkir kil shay



Basma whipped away her tears: chan zain tinsa nafs ma ana nisaita



S3ood: la Basoom ele baina 9a3ib yinise



Basma felt like throwing herself in S3ood's arms and crying her eyes out , she could feel his love, she could feel how much he loved and still loves her.



She sniffed and took a deep breath: Bas s3ood kafi 3alay… a7is ine mo gadra atnafas



Basma left S3ood and walked to the car, she got in the car and Shayi5 drove off.



Basma put her hand on her face and cried her eyes out, they finally reached home Basma whipped her tears away, grabbed her purse and walked inside the house.



"Mno ele da5al?! Basooooma?"



Basma sighed: eee Basoma



Basma was so mad at everyone the only person that she would want to talk to was S3ood.



Mother: wain kintay mama?



Basma: umm ri7t… ri7t el jam3iya



Mother: ok



Her mother felt that she was lying but didn’t say a word.



Mother: shlon rasich?



Basma: wayed a7san.. 3an ithnich



Basma left her mother and walked upstairs.


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S3ood got in the house and walked upstairs, he still lives in "their" apartment, His apartment with Basma.. he knew that it was pathetic but he couldn’t leave.



He switched the lights on and walked inside, Everything in the place reminded him of Basma, His eyes fell on the red couch that doesn’t match any of the furniture "Sa3ood loonha a7mmmmmmmmar tyanin!" he remembered her giggles and smiles when she came home from work and found the couch in front of her.



S3ood sighed and sat on the couch


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"Baba"



"Na3am 7abebte"



Basma stood in front of her father.



Father: gi3day 7abebte



Basma shook her head: mirta7a chithi



Her father looked at her with curios eyes: golay yuba shba'3aitay?



Basma: abe arid asht'3il bil sharika



Basma's father's eyes widened: triden tisht'3ilain?



She nodded: ee barid asht'3il bil sharika



Father: laish?!



Basma raised an eyebrow: la2ana 6agat chabdi mn ga3dat el bait!



Father: bas intay lal7en ta3bana o jismich yi7taj yirta7 o-



Basma: ma fene ela el 3afya o barid el sh'3il mn bachr



Basma left her father and walked to her room, she decided that she'll go back to work to fell like she has a life! And after what happened today she wanted to spend more time with S3ood.

17 comments:

  1. omg bsss 2 sentences :O
    hahahaha i was so excited wla alagi 2 sentences =))

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  2. Anon 6ab3an mo 2 sentences ;p
    I posted it bil '3ala6 o tawni 3adalta ;)
    Enjoy it ;)

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  3. 3ayal ana fiiiiirst!!!
    for the first time of my life
    anon. mo ma7sooba 'cause she didn't read the whole post 9a7? :p
    hyper much?! lol xD
    ok i will read now

    -munira

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  4. Anon Munira
    7ayaach allah! This is the first time that u comment right?
    Lol madri a5af agool mo ma7soba tiz3al :p
    Enjoy it;*

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  5. la thani mara :p
    i just commented on ur blog madri laish :p
    il baji agrahom bas i never comment

    -munira

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  6. loveeeeeeeeeed it and love ya more;p

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  7. ThaaaanQ 3la halpost al3ajeeeeb ;;*

    Zee

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  8. S3ooooooood <3
    shawgteene aby a3rf shi9er bil sharika bachr o shlon she falls in love with him again ;D
    loove u 9aloo7a ;**

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  9. 7araaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam

    mesakeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen.....romeo ow juliet wa3layaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....

    i hate their families ...eshd3wa yubaaaaaaaaaaaa sam7aw

    sm3aw e'3neyat same7 ow sam7aaaaaaaaaaaaaw :P

    ga6a3ti galbi 9aloooo7ti...basma t9ee7 ow ana a9ee7 weyaha....Allah yaster men el yay....


    love uuuuuuuuuuuuuu ow thanks 3al post

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  10. 7araaaaaam 3alehum breaking a perfect couple :(

    Now that Basma will start working again I hope their love for each other will rekindle and their relationship will patch itself! Can't wait!

    mashallah you're a great writer can't wait for your next post lat6awleen 3alena :D

    thanks for the awesome post!

    -Huda

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  11. s3ood kisar 5a6ry!!
    7atta basma 7adha '9ay3a!!
    i hope that things work out between them

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  12. OMG OMG OMG OMG LOVEDDD ITTTT!! <3
    3AD AL7EEN NABY ACTION!!

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  13. Akkkkkhhhhh yaaaa galbiiiiii :'(!!!!mskeen s3oud!!!!!o basma ba3ad takser il kha6er:(!!!9al7a raja'an nabi post a6wal:p!!
    -S.R

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  14. ALLAH SPEND MORE TIME WITH S3OOD!! A7LA SHAY!! 3AWAR EFADI S3OOD!!!! SARA7TAN, YE8HROON AHLHA! LOVE LOVE S3OOD AND I LOVE YOUR POSTS!<3

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  15. 7araaaaaam s3ooooooooooood :'(
    inshalla yrj3ooon elb3ath

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  16. S3OOOD 7RAAAAAAAAM ;((
    ENSHALLAH EREDOON 7AG BA3ATH
    i loved the post as usual
    i love u more duh ;p
    post soon love!

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  17. :O :O Ta3jibni basooma she's the maan!!! again 7aram s3ood i7ibha wayid khal yitzawajha again!!
    or he can marry me X_X :p
    I LOVE YOU:**
    geraninium

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