Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Come back when you can (9)

Quwa;**


1. Shlonkoum?!


2. I miss u guys;**


3. This is a really LONG post la2ane 6awalt 3alaikoum ;)


4. 6awfaw el badliyat I didnt check :p


Enjoy the post;**


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6OOO6…. 6ooo6… 6oo6




Basma's heart beats were increasing, she waited and waited for him to pick up the phone when she going to give up and hung up she heard his voice



Alo?



She went silent for seconds.



Alooo?



Basma: alo



S3ood: na3am?



Basma: shlonik S3ood?



S3ood went silent, she knew that he recognized her voice



S3ood: Basma?



Basma: ee



She heard him sigh.



S3ood: Basma ana shway mash'3ol al7en-



Basma knew that he was trying to end this conversation before it even starts



Basma: ma ra7 a6awil 3alaik bas bas2ilik so2al



S3ood: bas-



Basma: S3ood please, mit2akda ink el wa7ed ele tigdar itjawib 3ala so2ale!



S3ood: shdarach ine el wa7eed ele agdar ajawib



Basma: la2ana el so2al lah 3ala8a feeek!



S3ood: si2aly bas etha ma 3ajabne el so2al mane mjawib



Basma: way s3ood shda3wa!



S3ood: mn wain yibtay ra8mi?



Basma: zaina



S3ood: Zaina?



Basma: ee Zaina



S3ood: ay Zaina?!



Basma: hmm madri 3ad fakir! Wala agoolik laish mista'3rib inta cham zaina t3arif?



S3ood went silent for a minute.



Basma: way S3ood mn 9ijik ga3id tfakir



Basma giggled.



S3ood was shocked that Basma was so computable talking to him.



Basma was shocked that she was computable talking to him.



S3ood: ma giltele ay Zaina



Basma: Zaina bint Bader o Maryam



S3ood: shlon?



Basma: gitlik Zayoona 3a6atne yah



S3ood: ufff



Basma: inzain y9er as2al al7en?



S3ood: y9er



Basma felt like was a bit soft with her now ashwa!



Basma: Fay galatle ina 3ugub el 7adeth ele sawaita el kil lamik inta! O gal inik el sibab



S3ood: 9a7



Basma was shocked: laish?



S3ood sighed: gabil la tsaween el 7adith kintay ma3ay o tahawashna o 6ala3tay mn 3indi za3lana



Basma: 6ala3t mn 3indik? Ana wain kint gabil el 7adith?!



S3ood: 3indi



Basma gasped: 3indik?!!



S3ood: ee 3indi!



Basma: way s3ood ya3ni wain 3indik?



S3ood: bil bait



Basma gasped: O shasawi 3indik bil bait?!



S3ood went silent for a minute



Basma: s3ood jawibne!



S3ood: el 7ache ma yinfa3 bil telephone



Basma: ya3ni?



S3ood: intay bil bait?



Basma: ee



S3ood: taben intalaga ib lenotre ele 3al ba7ar? Hade o mafeh a7ad



Basma was hesitant to be seen outside with him, what if people got her wrong?



Basma: umm okay?



S3ood: ga3id tis2leen wala tjawbeen



Basma giggled: ga3d ajaawib!



S3ood: ok 3ayal ashoofich hnak ba3ad shway



Basma: ok



*Click*


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Basma got out of the car with her heart beating so fast, she put her hand on her heart and took a deep breath.



Basma: Shayi5 you wait here!



Shayi5: ok



Basma rapped her scarf around her neck and walked in, she quickly scanned the place with her eyes looking for S3ood, she found him.



She stood at her place and stared at him, he was busy with his mobile, when he raised his head his eyes fell in his and he stood up



Basma walked towards him



S3ood: 7asait inch ma ra7 tyen



Basma gave him half a smile, He stretched his hand and shook her hand



Hello madame would you like to have a meanu



Basma gave the waiter a smile and shook her head: no thank you



Basma: I'll just have water



Waiter: ok



Basma sat down and both of them were completely silent

Basma: s3ood ana yaya 3ashan inta titkalam o ana asma3



S3ood was about to say something but Basma interrupted him



Basma: ana ma 3indi shay agoola lik la2ane ma athkirik bas 3indi i7sas



She put her hand on her heart.



Basma: 3indi i7sas ygool ina kan baina shay! Akeed kan baina shay fa please goole kil shay! Ta3abt



S3ood sighed



Basma: ta3abt la2ana el kil y3arif shay 3ani ana wiyak o mo rathe ygoola!



S3ood nodded: ra7 agoolich kil shay mn el bidaya lay youm el 7adith



Basma smiled, she was really glad that they're finally connecting and he's finally welling to tell her everything.



S3ood: awal mara shiftich feeha kanat ib ma7a6at 8a6ar ib France



Basma smiled.



S3ood: kintay labsa nafnoof abyath o scarf wardi… lifatay intibahe mn awal mara shiftich feha… kint yay ma3a rab3i o kintay ma3a Najla o Maryam



Basma put her hand under her chin and lend on the table



S3ood: kintay bil side el thani mn el ma7a6a



Basma: oh



S3ood: ya3ni bil track el thani,,, ya3ni ma ra7 trkben nafs el 8a6ar… darait ina mako shay ra7 yijma3na fa tamait a6ali3ich a7awil a5ith lich 9iwar fe bali kithir ma agdar,,, lama el dinya yabitich lay 3indi



Basma: shlon yet lay 3indik? Na6ait bil trackes malot el 8a6ar?



S3ood laughed: la



Basma giggled: 3ayal?



S3ood: shiltay el scarf ele kintay labsita o madaitay edich 3ashan ta36eena Najla ma la7igat tamsika o 6ayira el hawa



Basma: 6ayira lay 3indik?!



S3ood nodded: Gitlich el dinya yabitich lay 3indi



Basma: o ba3dain



S3ood: kintay 7a6a edich 3ala 7aljich mn el 9adma … misakta o rifa3tlich yah… ma kan ako ay 6aree8a yo9lech feha el scarf mara thanya ila etha ana nisat 3ala el tracks malot el 8i6ar aw inch t6l3en mn el ma7a6a ele intay feha o tyene



Basma: nizalt bil tracks?!



S3ood: la ma w9alat romancete lay hal 7ad



Basma giggled.



S3ood: tamina n6ali3 ba3ath ma nadri shinsawi



He smiled: chan a9ar5 o agoolich "shlon ta5thena"… ibtisamtay o giltay "etha maktooble ashofik mara thanya ra7 a5tha o etha ma shitik 7alaal 3alaik!"



Basma giggled.



S3ood: w9alaw 8a6aratna o kil wa7id ra7 ib 6reeja… agoolich el 9ij?



Basma nodded.



S3ood: ma tiw8a3t ine bashoofich mara thanya o tamaw el shabab yi6tanzoon 3alay 6ol el safra



Basma: laish?



S3ood: mu5i thaaa3 mine! El shay el wa7eed ele kan ib bali ohwa el bint ele shift.ha bil 8a6ar o gimna nsameech 9a7ibat el scarf el wardi



He laughed



Basma: ya3ni nafs 9a7ibat el '6il el 6aweeel?



S3ood smiled: Yimkin madri shno ele kan ib bal el shabab



Basma smiled: o ba3dain shlon shifna ba3ath?



S3ood: 6ool ma ana ib France o ana na6ir ashoofich lama yah wagt radite el Kuwait



Basma: weeeeh!



S3ood smiled: ee! Kint mitwa8i3 ashoofich bil ma6ar, gilt aked btrden ma3ay ib nafs el 6ayara bas twa8o3ate kanat 5a6a2 o ma ligaitich bil ma6ar o radait el Kuwait!



Basma: o ba3dain?! Wain shina ba3ath mara thanya?



S3ood: ib sharikat yadiich



Basma: uff!



S3ood loved how exiting the story was for Basma, but he was sad at the same time Basma meant the world to him and he really wanted her to remember what they had between them.



S3ood: ee, kan yadich msawi meeting 7ag cham sharika 3inda o ri7t ma3a oboy o shiftich hnak, dashitay el ijtma3 mit2a5ira o ga3adtay yam Mubarak o5och…. 3araft inch bint Al Flani O 3araft ina musta7eel tkonen lee



23 comments:

  1. 9alooo7a shino hatha!!! :@
    malet 3ala ebleesich!!! Inshallah the long post matkoon 3 words that forms only 1 sentence!! ;)

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  2. OMG OMG OMG OMG! ISH'HAL CLIFF HANGER?! UFFFF! 7ADI ABEEHA IT3ARF OW ANA BA3AD ABY A3ARFFFFFF!!! :( ZI3ALT!

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  3. GWTPA
    Mn 9ijich hatha short? :p
    6al3aaay sh6ool el story ele galha 7ag Basma :p

    Noodie
    Sorry (A)
    Enshallah next post will be mush longer ;D

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  4. Hehehehe sorry bas my itouch em5arif!! :$ I apologize and yes it is LONG!! :D
    uufff 7ady mestansa... Al7een baroo7 Agra!!!
    3an ethnich!! ;P

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  5. Ambaaai Ambaaai Ambaaai!!!!!
    ana aghe6 oo lama ashta6 ma a3aber lazem I comment..ya allah 3alaich ya 9al7a intay min awal ma bedaitay oo intay 3ajeeba bas al7een 9ayraa a3jaaaab oo aaakh ana 3ASSHQA il qe9aa bas iffff 7aram 3alaich ta3lougatiich muuu 9ij :'( .. mkhalyatni kil 5sec achayik etha u posted wela la fa pls pls pls! LA 6awleen 3la ma tnazleen the next post !!!!!

    Your Loyal reader :p
    Cowii;* ;D

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  6. Eb9ara7a the post kan fee 8emat elraw3a!! ;D
    bas 3ad lawsama7tay lat6awleen 3alaina wayid!! ;p
    abi a3arif eshlon they became together itha ehya masta7eel etkon lah!!?!! ;)
    oo luv u waaaaayyyyiiiiiddd!! :B
    oo tc!! ;D

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  7. hatha long?? 3ayal il short shnw?:p

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  8. I've just finished reading all of your post and I think this is my fav one yet! marra mit7amsa w I really can't wait for your next post! Loving S3ood and Basma! I think they're my current fav fictional couple!

    -Huda

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  9. Walaa this one of the best stories i've ever read!! Wala mara ketabtay post oo ma kint met7amsa 7ag ilee wara!! Plzzz la6awleen 3alaina!!:D
    -A

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  10. :o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o!!!!!!!!!!!! SH9AAAAAAR?!?!?!? please post soon?! 7araaaam s3ood i7ibha!!!!!:(
    i love you;*
    geraninium*

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  11. This by far is one of the best post you've written ... La Jad wallah .. Its Awtistic i couldnt stop Awing through out the whole thing <3

    Ahhh cliff hanger or not i loved every bit of it bs i love you more .. cant wait for the next one :D

    Qb*
    XoXo

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  12. Laaaaaaa plz post sooon !!
    3alagteeena !!
    Ilpost 3ajeeeeeb kila feelings o 7sas 3ajeeb ;D
    7abait s3ooor <3!!
    yallaaa khal ykamil khal n3arf sh9ar ma3a um ilscarf ilwarde ;p
    love u 9aloo7a o walht 3alaich ;*

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  13. 9alooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo7a sheno hatha

    3ala asas long post :(
    its not longgggggggggggggggggggggg:'(

    more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......

    welcome back :D

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  14. laaa2 may9eer killa it3algeena chithy;p
    pweeeez post asap 9aloo7ka..
    love ya;*

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  15. 9al7a! awal shay 7mdla 3al salama w thany shay ana waray madresa bacher bs ga3ed w agraa ur post fa 6alaby el basee6 ena el post el thany ekoun jahez bacher (A)

    w el post aqal shay yenqal 3anah ena GREAT! keep it up

    -Mudmin Rwaished;p

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  16. :O:O:O
    i got excited while reading a7s s3ood 5a6eebha aw rayilha
    plzz dont put a cliff hanger like this one and the previous in your next post
    I WANNA KNOW MOREEE T_T

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  17. OMG T3ARFEEN 9a7b el'6il el6aweel? i thought enna bs ana elle a3arfa!!!! I LOVE IT


    laish ma tgder etseer malta???


    heaven

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  18. Ana " my prince charming"
    my account em3aleg when i comment ye6la3 anonymous
    el mohim!!
    I LOVED THE POST!! 6awaltay ;(
    post sooon
    luv ya;*

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  19. plz post soon! really excitiiing

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  20. Awal shay el7amdella 3ala salamtch ;* walhana 3laich 7aaail 9aloo7a!! (adry gowat 3ainn!!:P a'36 w tali faj2a ayee bas shasawi walla mo ebeedy:( )
    thany shay abi agolich ena 8I9ITCH ARWA3 MNHA MAKO!! la2 laa2 jaaad hal Qi9a wayd 3ajbtni ...wayd!! s3ood ba3ad 3umry yksr il 5a6r :'( 3ala golat sha3erna :

    وياليت مابه فوارق بين هالعالم وأن اللي تحبها .. فالاخر تزوجها

    waaaay a5er jomla "3rft ina musta7eel itkonen lee !! " aa5 bass aaa5 ;p

    3ashan a3wth 3ala ghyaby ile mala tabreeer wedi ahdee hatha il bait mn ilsh3r 7asaita iyloog 3ala wath3 s3ood ;p w gilt I make a great comebk ma3a il mazeed mn il ash3ar w byoot sh3r wl 7kam (3shtaw) lol;p more to come insh2Allah
    ygool:

    أنكسرت من الفراق وشوف عيني شوف عيني وأنت تدري ...... بنــــــــــــــــــــكــــــــــساري

    w salamatkum wt3eeshoon ;*

    -Anon N

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  21. Plzz post soon, i have exams really soon ou i keep taking breaks just to re-freash your page bs nothing new :( Can you post wa7da el'laila? plzz

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  22. Anon Cowii
    I miss ur comments!!
    Mashkooooooooooooooora wayed;** I just posted o enshallah ma 6awalt 3alaikoum ;) awww 7abebte I just posted!

    GWTPA
    Mashkoora;*
    lol I just posted enshallah ma 6awalt 3alaikoum ;)
    love u too;**

    Anon
    Eee, law kan short chan kan ag9ar mn hatha ib wayed :p

    Anon Huda
    7ayalllah my new reader ;)
    Thank you!! wana Mara mabso9a inch mit7amsa :p Awww Thank you soooooooo much;**

    Anon A
    Thank you so much ;) I just posted enshalah ine ma 6awalt 3alaikoum ;)

    geraninium
    :O:O:O I just posted part 10 ;)
    I love u too;*

    Queen Bee
    Mashkoooooooooooooooooooooora wayed wala u made my day;*
    I just posted ;)

    caramela
    I just posted!
    Thank you;*
    lol you'll know in part 10 ;)
    Love u too, wana akthar;*

    Nawarii
    Soooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrry :p
    It is long wala it is!
    Thank you!

    Noona
    Lol sorry (a)
    I just posted ;)
    love u too;**

    Mudmin Rwaished
    Na3am :p Allah ysalmik, I just posted enshallah ene ma 6awalt ? :p
    Thank you ;)

    Love drunk
    Read part 10 and you'll know ;)
    Enshallah :p

    Anon Heaven
    Lol eee!! I love it too!
    maaaaaadri ;p

    Prince charming
    weeh
    Thank you!
    Kint msafra :(
    I just posted ;)
    love u too;*

    Anon
    I just posted ;)
    Thank you!


    Anon N
    Mn 6awal el '3aybat yab el '3anayim haa? :p sh.hal ash3ar el 9a3ba hathe?!
    Allah yaslmch o 9a7 elsanich na6reeeeeen ash3arich o 7ikamich bil postat el yayah!

    Anon
    I just posted!
    Good luck with ur exams ;)

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  23. i was first bas 5ara tibin i couldnt comment! tara your blog SO amazing your an amazing writer one of my top 3 ;**
    WAITING FOR ANOTHER POST
    -BLAH

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