Shlonkoum?!
IT IS TIME TO VOTE YA JIMA3A! Everyone has only ONE vote!
o la la ma 7alaw el majlis :p I want you guys to vote 3ala which story you want me to start writing :p
1. Story number one { Come back when you can..}: I wasn't planning inha t9er a story until today.
She sat down on the brown couch staring at the beige wall in front of her.
"Basma?" Hearing his voice made her feel better she wanted to hug him & cry on his shoulder, but she couldn't! She can't!
He's a part of her past now & she needs to get used to it "I'm not okay" she said "I'm not okay at all"
He sat beside her "Talk to me"...
She talked & talked she was going to fast & half of what she said didn't make sense but she knew he'll try to figure it out, he knew her more then she knew herself, she poured her heart out she screamed she cried & she laughed! She was sick! She was sick of herself, she was sick of her mood swings! "Mazajete thab7atni!" "I'm stressed out!"
He listened he listened to every word, wiped every tear & smiled at every laugh, but he couldn’t help her.
He couldn’t help her because he's not a part of her life anymore… and when ur not a part of someone's life anymore its hard, it's hard to help them, it's hard to show sympathy, it's hard to share a laugh, it's just hard!
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2.Story two, M is for miserable Mona:
"aloo, Nono shlonch?"
"Ahlain Hessa! B5air entay shlonch?"
"b5aaair b5aair, Agool Nono btyen ma3ana el ma6ar el youm?"
"ma6ar? Sh7aga?"
"Mona btsafir"
I sighed, I never thought that she would take that way out, Mona? Ma 3araftkoum 3ala Mona!
Mona was one of my friends she lost her husband a month ago, she was one of the strongest people I ever knew… but she's not that strong anymore, I can feel that there is something missing in her features, something missing in her voice, something missing in her eyes. The happiness that I once felt in Mona was gone, her smile wasn’t wide anymore, her eyes didn’t sparkle anymore and her face lost its glow.
"Tro7en witrdeen bil salama"
"Baroo7 bas mane rada ya Nora"
"ra7 iye youm witrdeen, ra7 iye youm o tinsain"
Her eyes teard up.
"Ma atawa8a3 bansa, ma atwa8a3 biye youm o ansa!"
I choked up with my words
"Ma ra7 tinsain bas ra7 titnasain, ra7 iye el youm ele btg9en feh 3ala 3umrich witgoolen nisait"
Mona threw herself in my arms and cried, she cried her eyes out, Life is crewel! It broke her it broke the strong and tuff Mona!
"Nooooro yal maleeeqa bachaiteeena!"
I smiled.
"Tadreeeeeeen shlon?! Ma ra7 trdeeen la2anich ib tinsain, ra7 trdeeen la2anch ib toolheeen 3aala hal 5bool!"
She giggled.
"Weeeeeh ma atwa8a3 ib toolah! Mn yroo7 London we3eeesh feeha ma yadre wain el Kuwait a9lan!"
"Yalla 3ad! Mako mithil el Kuwait!"
"Uffff bas la tibda wa6aniyat Noooro siktay 3anha"
Mona giggled.
"Group hug!"
We all gave Mona a group hug even Nada, she was too far away but she stuck her arm between our arms to reach Mona.
She pulled away and looked at each one of us
"hadaitlkoum notes! Awal ma trdoon el bait ib tilgoonhoum ma3a omahatkoum"
A tear escaped her eye
"ra7 olah 3alaikoum wayed"
Mona picked up her purse and walked away from us, for the first time in 20 years we realizes that our 5 girls group will be with 4 girls.
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So shrykoum? Vote 1 or 2 ;)
O shofaw afkar el stories mo 100% wath7en ib mu5e I may need time 3ashan abda ;)
Wa Shukran;*
I love both of them... Walla 9ij Story lines 3ajebeen:'(!
ReplyDeleteBut I'm more curious about the second one than I am the first one! :$
Bas whatever you chose will make us happy;*
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ReplyDelete1!!!
ReplyDeleteTo be honest its hard to choose, both stories seem great
ReplyDeletehmmmmm....but if i had to choose ...ba5taarr story #2
i find it original;)
story # 1 magdr a7km oo agool cus it was a bit vague...i got confused a bit bs yumkin l2na gafl mu5i;p!
ilmohemm kilshayy iyii minich 7iloo ya 9aloo7a i wont mind reading both;)!
ما يصير
ReplyDeleteأمتنع عن التصويت .. و بشدة !
لول ، ناطرتج تقررين
؛*
hmmm i don't thentainhom 7elween!
ReplyDeletelmn greet el first one i was like i'm gonna vote for this ... bas i read the second one, i was like wait, i like this one too!!
hmm i'm gonna go with .... 2!
either way, ketabta hathy wela hathy ... i'm gonna read it anyway!
i love your blog!
3adee a5tar both :$ ?
ReplyDeleteif not both then
i vote for story #1 :P
Oh and i'm a silent reader (a);*
*A*
wala ya ekhty 9aaaal7a 7a6atna eb mawqef mu7reeej! bs e7na mu nagesna nekaad w za3aaal! fa i'll go with the first one :D
ReplyDeletewaiting for u to write a story 7eta lu u make a new story just start wrtitng! :p
- Rwaished Addict (aka Mudmin Rwaished ;D)
I love both bs i'd have to say Number two .. Take all the time you need, I'm pretty sure its worth the wait .. Madam your writing it <3
ReplyDeleteLove You
XoXo
QB*
9alooo7a....!!!
ReplyDeleteEl7emdellah enich te3awathtay men eblees oo u r going to write another story!!! ;p
tabeen el9ara7a.. I liked both of them oo both of them were good..!!!
Bas I think I will choose the first one cuz elmaw8if eshwaya shadni oo ba'3ait a3arif eshra7 e9er next!!
So u r the one who's going to write oo u r the one who will be thinking while writing....!!!
Oo keep in mind.. Whatever u choose is great!! ;D
Oo tc.!!! :D
Both are amazing bas 2!
ReplyDeleteHii
ReplyDeleteSorry i know i didnt comment for a long time kila mn al3lmi ;(
Even though i dont comment that much but i read everything u write ;)
Anyways i think u should write story number 1 (Y)
Peace&&Love
Zee ;*
it's the first time i comment!!
ReplyDelete9aloo7a abeech taktbeenhom thnainat.hom
kil wa7ed a7la min il thani
kitbai wa7ed oo lmn it5al9een kitbai il thani ok?!
and now im curious!!
ee oo btw i fell in luv towards bandar <3!!!
2!;D
ReplyDeleteHey 9alooo7aaaa :D
ReplyDeleteMiisssiiich long 6ime :O
Ana Shumziiii hal el emaraaat :p
Walla ya e5tii el 3azeeza w el kareema a7ss story 1 7lwaa wlaa agool thntaynhn 7lwaaat w abaach tktbeenom thntaynhn :@ esloob amr !!!
Bsss sho rayh we start b story 2 :p
Luv u ;**
Shumzii
The Despirate Dreamer
ReplyDeleteMashkooora 7abebte;*
So ur vote is 2?
Thanks hun;*
Anon
Thanks on the vote!
Anon
Thanks on the vooooooote!!
Anon
Thank u;*
Mashkooora ba3ad galbi;*
Reema
Afaa2! laaish ya Reema rayich mohim kteer kteer kteer;*
Darliam
Mashkoora it means a lot;*
It loves u too!
Anon A
7ayallah my ex silent reader :p
laa mo 3adi :p
Thanks on ur vote;*
Mudmin Rwaished
9aj wana i5tik!
lol enshallah I'll start writing very soon!
Mashkoor :)
Queen bee*
Ba3ad 3umri thank you so much:**
love u too;*
GWTPA
Haaaala!
hehehe shiftaay shlon! :p
Thanks hun;*
Anon
Thanks ;)
Anon
ok ok ok ok ok ok ok Thanks on the vote!
Anon Zee
Hello
Its okay ma3thoora!
Thanks on the vote ;)
Munirah
I noticed!! 7ayaach allah ;)
Ok enshallah!
lol everyone did!
Rawan
Thanks on the vote ;)
Shumzii
Ya mar7aba el saa3!
miss u too;*
enshallah! Thanks on the vote!
love u too;**
Hmm 50% #1 oo 70% #2 ya3ny mafe farg bainhum both 7lween bss kaifech elly ya3jbech ktbeeh el mohem a story mn 9al7a;p
ReplyDelete1 is so heartbreaking! I vote one!
ReplyDeleteHmm it's REALLY hard to choose! Suggestion: Try writing them both? ;D
ReplyDeleteIf that isn't possible then I choose story 1, it grabbed my interest more.
Hey <3
ReplyDeleteI've been a fan of yours since .. *tries to remember * .. oh well god knows when .. anyhoooowwww i really loved ur story .. Really touching
and if you ask me to vote i would say the first one .. though the 2nd is good also but i prefer the 1st ;D .. ur an amazing writer , So i'm sure whatever you write will be A.M.A.Z.I.N.G
Goodluck all the way from Qatar
xxx
ana agool 1!!(Y)
ReplyDeleteshakilha bit9eer wayid 7ilwa!!
i agree with cashmere poison...it grabbed my attetion.
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أنا أقول القصة 1...لأنه حسيتها واقعية أكثر
ReplyDeleteساره
ana im voting for 2 o inshallah nfoooz :p LOOOL yallah add up our votes o meta t9ek beeeban el ta9weeet :p ?
ReplyDeleteHey 9al7a!
ReplyDeleteI've been a silent reader for like, forever:p!
Wallah mara fkart I comment or anything, bas now bagoulech ena I really appreciate your stories, ou mashalla you're very talented!
I vote 1! Bas wedy tkamleen 'giving up' cuz masheba3na menha:p!
Your blog will always be on the top of my favorites list;*
-JayZee
NUMBER 1 !!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteaNa aGooL iL Qi9a NuMBeR 1!
ReplyDeleteWaYiD 7iLWa iL BiDaYa...oo THaKaRaTNi iB Wa7Da a3aRiFHa..Fa WiDi a3aRiF SH9eeR;P
KeeP uP THe GooD WoRK;D
LuV Ya;**
RWaiN;**
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ReplyDeletelove u:*
I say the first. But the second is good too.
ReplyDeleteSheftay shloun i comment mu bas lamma u write EXTREMELY SHORT posts? ;p
Number#2
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the post *:*
Miss u 9aloo7aa ;***
ReplyDeleteboth 7azeenen ;s
bs i vote for 1 ;*
2!!
ReplyDeleteBtw im a silent reader and i luv ur blog..
U should reaally think of writing a book with all ur short stories!
Amazing wala
Luvich and ur blog!
"T"
1 a7laaa!
ReplyDelete-S;*
9aloo7ka il i5tiyarat sa3ba i want both but im going to have to stick with #2 ;D
ReplyDeletelove you;*
I vote for 2!!
ReplyDelete-Washy*
I jst finished ur others stories
ReplyDeleteIsloobch raw3a so it duznt matter whats the story
Bs id vote 1
-L
9allou7aaa!!!! hatha mabdaa2 tabii t7ayra khayraah?:P anyways kil shay minnich 7ilu!! bas damma voting ill vote for 1, w did you put this entry min gabel? chinna marr 3alai"qasdi number 1" and out of no where i felt that know you! LOL i know fajaa bas i had the feeling for some reason!!!
ReplyDeletesorry 6awalt 3alaich:(
love you and gl;*
-Anon S
Thanks ALL for ur votes!! I'll count them & the result will be out very soon
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU ALL SO MUCH:**
9alouuuuuuuu7a ;*
ReplyDeleteWaaay :'O Maay9eeer abeehm thntaainaat'hm (A)
Bas el 9j el 9j , abe 1 ='(
Its how my life is going now =p
GdLuck <3!
- Fa6amiie ;*
it dosent matter cause all your stories are way on top if the moon .. Love you
ReplyDeleteVOTE: 2
-Bnt a7med
Hmmm... BOTH ! ;D
ReplyDeleteBut if I have to vote I'm gonna go with 1 !!!! ;D
Either way I just want a story from you... Your an amaziiiing writer mashallah ;*
I'm a silent reader btw (A)
Love ya ;*
GUYS! THE RESULT IS 23 X 14.
ReplyDeleteSTORY ONE HAD 23 VOTES
STORY TWO 14 VOTES!
I'll start writing it very soon enshallah ;)