Friday, April 4, 2014

Scarred -7-

Hello!!

1. I really can't thank you guys enough for the support and AMAZING feedback on the story!!



2. I know some of you have found grammar/ spelling mistakes! I know, But I really write the posts in a rush and I forget to recheck! So please bare with me ;p



3. This post goes to LNS and FRS;**



Enjoy it!!


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AlZainah sat beside her mother while she was making a lot of phone calls.



AlZainah: mama shilsalfa?




Mother: basawe 3azeema youm el yim3a! bta9dif 3eed meelad oboch o ham ni7tifil eb iftita7 fir3 el sharika ib Dubai!!




AlZainah: ohhh 9a7!! btsaween shay khaba wala 3azeema ma7fouufa?




Her mother giggled: aked khaba! ba3zim kil rab3na o ahlna! wi3yalhom 3ashan intay tistansain!



AlZainah: aha





Mother: o basawe nafs movie g9eer 3an injazat oboch ib hal 5o sina min 3umra




AlZainah: alllaaaah khosh fikra!!!




Mother: ee ba3ad shway bag3ad wiya elmukhrij ele basaweh!!




AlZainah: surprise wala byadre?




Mother: la surprise!! 




AlZainah: awnas!! inzain taben asa3dch? tara 7adi fathya!




Mother: ee please chaykay 3ala listat el ma3azeem akhaf nisait a7ad!





AlZainah walking to the coffee table and grabbed the paper and started reading through it.



AlZainah was a bit hesitant but she wanted to take a risk: mama?




Mother: hala




AlZainah: isim Hamad o Ahmed AlFlani o omhom mo bil list!




Mother: aked mo bil list, ma a7taaj khidam 




AlZainah's eyes popped out she was so shocked: o min gal bnyeebhom yakhdmoun?




Mother: 3ayal laish iyon?




AlZainah: iyon thyouf!!




Her mother gave her a death stare: 7amith 3ala bozhom, akhir 3umri a3zim el khidam




AlZainah put the paper back on the table and walked away, she couldn't believe how heartless her mother can be.




Mother: wain ray7a?




AlZainah: dari




Mother: za3altay? 3ashan ma 3azamt el khidam?




AlZainah: yuma!! Shako khidam? 3indhom asame!! o bashar 7alhom 7alna! o a9lan 3umrhom ma 9araw khadam 3indina!



Mother: o obohom?




AlZainah: kan ywa9lna!





Mother: kan SAYIQ!



AlZainah sighed: allah yir7ima




AlZainah left her mother and walked to her room.


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AlZainah laid down while her friends were looking through her closet.




AlZainah: lal7een mi7tara!!




Sara: khalas zayoun! bas kaifha omch khal tsawe ele tabeeh




AlZainah: bas 7aram!! laish ma na3zmhom? 




Latifa: umm ymkin la2ana omch lal7en tshofhom khadam?




AlZainah: BAS OHMA MA KANAW KHADAAM!! bas obohom!!




Latifa: ele ohwa! omch tshouf elmawtho3 ina ohma
 ba3ad khadam



Hessa: allah zayoun hal tanoura tshawig




AlZainah: way Hesso!! rakzay bil salfa




Hessa giggled: ana agoul 3izmehom min waraha




AlZainah: Na3aam?




Hessa: wala! Ya3ni shbtsawe? ta6ridhom?




AlZainah: akeed la




Hessa: 3ayal bas 




AlZainah: bas 3adi tithba7ne ana!!




Hessa giggled: fight for what you want




Latifa: ya intaaa ya duraaaaar




The girls laughed, Hessa had no idea that she actually just planted an idea in AlZainah's mind.




AlZainah grabbed her mobile and called Ahmed, He didn't pick up then she decided to text him instead of calling again.



Hi Ahmed!! 3indina 3azema eb baitna on Friday, Baba's birthday o celebration 7ag fir3 Dubai! la tkhalon ;D



AlZainah: dazait 7ag Ahmed message!



Sara: YANITAAY?



Latifa: ya wailich min omch!!



Hessa: gomay goleelaha inch 3azamteehom!



Hala! Sorry I'm in a meeting I can't pick up, enshallah we'll try to pass by!! 


AlZainah read Ahmed's reply to the girls.



Latifa: gomay goulay 7ag omch!!



AlZainah: ok kani bagoum bas etha sima3toha t9arikh wala tzif ta3alaw 3ashan taskit



AlZainah left the girls and walked to the living room.



AlZainah: mama?



Mother: hala



AlZainah:  umm Ahmed dag 3alay ysoulif o zal elsane o bil ghala6 giltla 3an youm el yim3a



Mother: ay Ahmed?



AlZainah: Ahmed Al Flani



Mother: okay



AlZainah: okay?



Mother: ee



AlZainah: ya3ni fe i7timal ina iyoon! 



Her mother faced her: ee okay



AlZainah was shocked, it was like she was talking to someone else; someone that is not even close to her mother.

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"Yaaah yaaah yaah sh'hal kashkha?"



AlZainah was wearing her black high waist skirt, tucked in shirt. 


She was wearing slippers and her heels were in her car.



AlZainah: ba6la3 ma3ak akeed bakshakh!



AlZainah and her mother had a plan to surprise her father.



AlZainah and her father walked to the car.



Father: sh'hal 3umal?



AlZainah: akeed omi 6alba shay! yalla baba!!



Father: ya yuba lu ng3ad bil bait nishrab gahwa mu a7san?



AlZainah: la la la lazm tjarib gahwat illy!!



AlZainah and her father arrived at 360, While her mother was waiting for the guests to arrive.

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"La t7in!! giltlik mani rayi7!!"



Ahmed: Hamad la t9eer yahil!!



Hamad: fikne!



Mother: 7abebe Hamad wala fashla!! elbint dagat 3zimatna may9er ma nwajibhom!



Hamad: yuma tara mo 3irs wala 3aza 3ashan ma y9er ma nrou7!




Mother: maykhalif bas yistahil Bo Zaid nwajba



Hamad: yumaaa!! btyaninone!! shinwajba? tara 3azeemat 3eed melaada el 50!!



Mother: khalas Hamad kaifik



Hamad: waaaaih! yuma shda3wa la tz3leen! ma tiswa elsalfa!



Mother: dam ma tiswa elsalfa ta3al!



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AlZainah got a text from her mother telling her that everything is ready, all guests arrived and she was on the way back home with her father.



Father: maskeena omch lu 6al3a ma3ana



AlZainah smiled.



Father: ola sh'hal za7ma 3indina?



AlZainah giggled.



Father: laish aku vallet?



AlZainah: hmmm madre



Father: zayoun baba sh9ayir?



AlZainah giggled: madre



AlZainah parked her car.




AlZainah: yubba yalla!!



Her father smiled: wala madre shimsaween!!



AlZainah quickly grabbed her heels from the back seat and threw her flats in the car, her father laughed.



AlZainah and her father walked through the candled pathway that leads to the garden.



Father: allaah shay shay



AlZainah smiled.



"Halaaa!!"



AlZainah's father had a wide smile on his face when he saw everyone.



"Happy birthday 3ami!!!"




AlZainah's friends walked to her father.




Father: hala baba hala 7abaybe



AlZainah quickly scanned everyone, she saw a lot of faces but not the face that she wanted to see the most, Her father started greeting everyone. 



"Ma shiftay hamad?" AlZainah whispered to Sara.



Sara: laa!! ma yah!



When everyone settled down,  AlZainah started walking around and quickly greeted everyone.




AlZainah: halaa hallaa!!



Faisal: ahlaaan



AlZainah: shakhbarik?



Faisal: tamaam wintay?



AlZainah sat on the chair beside Faisal: shoof ki7le 7ilo?



AlZainah closed her eyes.



Faisal laughed: ee 7ilo



AlZainah looked around.



Faisal: mnu tdawreen?



AlZainah: ma7ad!



Faisal nodded.



Faisal's mobile rang, AlZainah looked at the screen at it had the letter "H"



AlZainah: mnu H?



Faisal: wain?



AlZainah: H daga 3alaik!! mnu hathe?



Faisal laughed: shtabeen ya3ni? 



AlZainah: way Faisal mnu hathe?!!



Faisal: laish mit2akda inha wa7da? ymkin wa7id!



AlZainah: laish btsame rfejik H?



Faisal laughed.



AlZainah: Faisaaal jawibne yal sakheef!



H calling


AlZainah: kahe dagat mara thanya! lazgaa!!



Faisal laughed again: riday



AlZainah: 9ij?



Faisal: ee riday



AlZainah quickly picked up: alo? na3am? mn 7athritich? ana mnu?! intay mnu!! 



AlZainah suddenly bursted into laughter: HESSO? SH3INDCH? Kaho yame ta3alaw



AlZainah: laish msameeha H?



Faisal grabbed his mobile and went through his contacts quickly: shifaty? kilkom bas awal 7arf



AlZainah: laish?



Faisal: akhaf wa7da feekom tdig wana wiyay elshabab



AlZainah: fa yshofon 7arf wala yshofon isim?



Faisal: aywaaa 3alaich nouur



AlZainah: cuteee



Faisal: adre



AlZainah: sakheeeeeef



Faisal smiled.



The girls rushed towards AlZainah and sat around her.



AlZainah: shfekom?



Latifa whispered  something in AlZainah's ear, She quickly stood up and looked to her back.



Faisal looked to the back and saw Hamad and his family, he sighed and looked back.



AlZainah walked toward Ahmed: Halaaaa!! 7ayakom allah!!



Ahmed: hala zayon!! Yumaaa



His mother turned around.



AlZainah: ahlaaaan khalti!!! 



Mother: hala 7abeebte mashalllaaah!! kibartaay allah y7afthich



AlZainah smiled and walked towards her, Hamad's mother gave her a warm teddy bear hug.



AlZainah: Hi jen!! 



Jennifer: hello!! wow the garden is so beautiful!! 



AlZainah smiled and looked at Hamad: Hi



Hamad nodded.



AlZainah: 7ayakom allah tfathilaw!



Ahmed: 3ami bo Zaid waina?



AlZainah walked towards her father and they walked behind her.



AlZainah: baba? 



AlZainah's father and mother turned around.



Father: halaaaa!!!! 7ayaakoum alllaaah!!



AlZainah's mother didn't move, She just started at them and looked away.



Ahmed: khalti shlonch?



AlZainah's mother didn't even turn around look at them.



AlZainah: hehehe umm shakilha ma sma3at min el iz3aj! 7ayakom tfathilaw! 



AlZainah walked them to their table and sat beside Jenifer. 



The movie started, it had a lot of photos of AlZainah's father in many occasions, short clips of his close friends and family members talking about him.


The movie ended, Hamad stood up and walked out of the garden, and AlZainah knew exactly why.


AlZainah looked at Ahmed and his mother both gave her half smiles.


Masadig omi!!



AlZainah rushed behind Hamad.



AlZainah: Hamaad in6ir!!




Hamad continued walking to his car.



AlZainah: Hamad please in6ir



Hamad stood in his place without turning to AlZainah.



AlZainah: Hamad wala el3atheem ma kint adre



Hamad: 3azmeena 3ashan t'thilona?



AlZainah: wala el 3atheeem wala ma kint adre wala shift el video ila tawni!!



Hamad: khlisaw el 9iwar? Ma in7a6at ila aghlab el 9iwar ele oboy wagif yam el sayara aw wagif wara china 9ibi?!



AlZainah: wala ma kint adre Hamad!! 



Hamad: gilthom la inye! ma 6a3oune!! Yayeen ninthaal o namshe!!!



AlZainah sighed, it was like Hamad wasn't listening to her: wala ma kint adre



Hamad: ma tafrig tadren wala la! 



AlZainah: shlon ma tafrig? ana 3azamtkom! 



Hamad: AlZainah min 6ala3na min baitkom wana mqarir ina ma aridla



AlZainah sighed.



Hamad: o mqarir ansa kilshay lah 3alaqa ib hal bait o kil shakh9 fa bas la ti7ineeen 3ala rasi o la ti6l3ele ib kil mukan!!



Hamad continued walking to his car.



AlZainah: Hamad ma khalast kalame



Hamad: ana khalast kalame



AlZainah: Hamad please! wala ma astahil t3amilne chithi!



Hamad: khalas 3ayal! la at3amal ma3ach khair shar!! la tklamene wala akalmch! 



AlZainah's eyes were filled with tears.



Hamad left AlZainah standing in the middle of the street and walked to his car.



AlZainah's tears started rolling down her cheeks: qaleel eladab!!



Hamad turned around and faced AlZainah: walaaih!! Y9er ma tabchen!



AlZainah: LAA MAY9ER! Sh'hamik a9lan bichait wala la? 



AlZainah left Hamad in shock and walked back to the garden.














29 comments:

  1. Wayy :( please post 2 wallah ma shba3na nabe thany ��

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  2. Cuute faisaal!! Waay gareet elpos marteenn 7abeet hamad eb hal post ksarat kha6re zaina:( omha lesh tsawe chthe 7aram:( please post soon

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  3. oh my god!!!! the post is amazing but its a short post :( me want more ;((((

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    1. Thank you!! Its really not short ;p
      On Friday enshallah!!

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  4. OMG!!! plz can you post sooner than every friday?? and longer postss plz!! thanks so much

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  5. Faisal>hamad alzainaa khblaa
    Il post too short:(
    This is my first time leaving a comment:p

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    1. Thank you for commenting!
      lol It's not a short one;p

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  6. Loved it!!! Can't wait for the next one!
    Faisal > Hamad :P

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  7. 9al7a ur posts are indescribable I Iove them! And the readers think ur long post is short coz the really enjoyed it and didn't think of how long it was, please try to post on any other free day other than Friday if possible. I think of ur stories everyday and I really understand that you have other things to do. Can you please still try?
    -AKS

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    1. Hi A!!
      Thank you so much!!!!
      enshallah I'll try my best bas no promises!

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  8. Kamly elstory wely y3afeech omg la t3algene :'( KAMLEEHA YUBA KAMLEEHA :'( LOVING UR STORIES SO FAR estameri :)

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  9. Thank youu!
    Loved ittt <33
    Can't wait till fridayyy!

    - A

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  10. Make the posts longer please :(( -SA

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  11. I absolutely loved every post of the story so far*-* can't wait for the next post!!!
    You are truly talented mashallah<3

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  12. ALLAAYYY! Omg walla tawny adree you posted a new post w el7mdilla tawny agree la2na shakla 7 weeks passed w 7 posts were made! Wallaa Faisal 7da cute w a6in eno haw e7ib Alzainah bas elmjnoona ma t7is ib 7uba! Inshallaa tkamln the story w inchoof the events coming up! We're back to the blogging days!
    -Your fan S

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  13. Mashallah kl story a7la mn althanya! You're so talented!
    - your new reader MJ

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  14. yalla please post I'm waiting :c
    and make it longer pahhh-leasssee?

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  15. 7araaam takser el5a6er :'(
    wallah maskena
    khal y7es feeha :(

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