Friday, April 25, 2014

Scarred -10-

Hello!


*Thank you all for the feedback!!



*I re-wrote this post around 4 times so please ignore all spelling/ grammar mistakes!!! 


*its seems like most of you choose to be on Hamad's team! I haven't decided the ending yet so I'm on both teams ;p



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AlZainah: Faisaaaal wayhik a9faaaar!!




Faisal: tawni 6ali3 min elmistashfa aked bekoun a9far!




Faisal laid down on the coach, AlZainah sat beside his head.





AlZainah: inzain shgalolik?



Faisal: sawole fi7ou9aat o galaw lama ti6la3 el nitayij ndig 3alaik





AlZainah: Faisal mu mla7ith inik 9ayir wayed tamrith hal cham isbou3?





Faisal nodded: mana3te 9ayre khri6i 




AlZainah: efff enshallah khaair





Faisal smiled.





AlZainah: shfeek titbosam?





Faisal: walaaih shasawe ya3ni?





AlZainah: a777 Faisal!! sh'hal bruise?




Faisal: madre ymkin kafikh shay madre





AlZainah looked at Faisal with concerned eyes.





AlZainah: inzain ma giltlhom inik tha3aft wayed ib isbou3 bas?





Faisal: la laish agoul?





AlZainah: la2ana mu 6abe3e!!





Faisal: zayoon shfeech la twaswseen tawch tgoleen ine wayed maratht fa akeed bath3af!!





AlZainah: Faisal shlon ma awaswis!! 7arartik wsalat malyoon ams! o tha3faaan!! o madre wayed ashya2!




Faisal: mako ila el3afya la t7ateen





AlZainah gave Faisal half a smile and was busy with her thoughts.




Sara: Zayon yallah?




Faisal: wain btro7on?




Sara: el jam3a!! bn7ous 3ala eldicatra nyami3lina cham 3alama




AlZainah grabbed her purse: Faisal awal ma ygolonlik shfeek goule!!




Faisal smiled and nodded: enshallah!


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 While walking to the main door AlZainah noticed that Hamad was leaning on the wall and smoking.




"Zayoon hatha mo Hamad?" Sara whispered. 




"Osh wala kilma la t6al3eeen 9ouba!! china ma nadre ina mawjod!!"




"AlZainah?"




AlZainah turned around: Hi!!



Hamad: shakhbarich?




AlZainah: bkhaair winta?




Hamad: tamaam!!




Hamad gave Sara half a smile and a nod she smiled back.




AlZainah: zayir mnu?




Hamad: mo zayir a7ad! 77 mawjod bara o yay achayik ina kilshay tamam




AlZainah: oh 9ij!!! 




Hamad nodded: wintay sh3indch? class?




AlZainah: Eee bas ba3ad shway! barou7 achayik grade el project akhithle starbucks o arou7 elcass!




Hamad: el project ele 3ind Rashed?




AlZainah nodded.





Hamad: imshay arou7 wiyach




AlZainah smiled, she was so happy that Hamad is being sweet and thoughtful, She looked at Sara.




"ummm ana 3indi class! barou7!" Sara lied.




AlZainah and Hamad walked to Rashed's office. 




"Halaaaaaaaa!! 7ayalllaaaah Hmaaaaid"




Hamad laughed: alllah y7ayeeek!!




AlZainah smiled.




Hamad: yaay wiyaa AlZainah AlFlani binchayik grade el project




AlZainah stood behind Hamad.




Dr. Rashed: yayba was6itich wiyach?




AlZainah giggled and nodded.




Hamad sat down: shnu el grade?




Dr.Rashed: 8.5




Hamad: afa!!!




AlZainah: mashkouur dictor!




AlZainah walked out of the office.





Hamad: la7tha la7thaa



AlZainah stood in her place.




Hamad: Rashed! shda3wa 8.5!




Dr.Rashed laughed: eee 8.5 taqreeban 9!





Hamad: khalas 3ayal khal 9 tistahil AlZainah




AlZainah smiled.



Dr. Rashed: AlZainah you may leave



AlZainah smiled: ok thank you!!




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A week passed, It was AlZainah's midterm week, a week full of tutors, worksheets, calculates and exams halls.


"Waay 9arle isbou3 mo shayfa rab3e! wala mkalmt'hom 3adil!! bas ashof Hesso la2anha ma3ay ib class!" 



Her father: ee baba ro7ay shofeehom! aw khal iyonch!



AlZainah: la la ana baro7 7ag Sara o kilhom biyon hnak!



Father: wana barou7 el sharika!



AlZainah: hal 7aza?



Father: ee 3indi ijtima3 wiya Hamad o Ahmed! basa3idhom eb cham shaghla 




AlZainah: umm tsa3idhom eb shnu??



Father: Hamad eb yfta7 fir3 7ag ma63ima ib Dubai 



AlZainah: wow, zain ysawe!! bye baba!!




AlZainah walked to her car and drove off to Sara's house.


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"Shway shway mama smila 3alaik!"



Faisal: yuma tara wala lal7en agdar amshe tikfain!!



Faisal's mother took a couple of steps away from him.



Faisal: bag3ad bil 7adeeqa shway



His mother walked behind him.



Faisal: yumaa... bag3ad bro7i 



Faisal's mother took a deep breath: okay 7abebe



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AlZainah texted Sara.



Tawni dasha qurtubaa



Sara replied quickly


Nizlay elsirdaab




AlZainah parked her car beside Faisal's car, she realized she forgot to ask him about the results of the blood test and he didn't bother telling her.



She quickly walked inside, AlZainah noticed someone sitting on the bench, his head was resting on his hand.



"Faisal?"



Faisal slowly turned around to face AlZainah, he was so pale, Dark circles under his eyes, dry lips, he didn't look like the Faisal she always knew.



Faisal: hala



AlZainah quickly rushed towards him: Faisal lal7een ta3baan?!



Faisal smiled and nodded: shway



AlZainah: way Faisal!! shgalolik? shno nitayij el ta7aleel?



Faisal looked away: mako bas a7taj atghatha 3adil




AlZainah: haw Faisal! ya inik chathab aw ohma ystahblon!



AlZainah noticed that Faisal was breathing heavily, she knew that he was hiding something.



"La enshallah el laila bndakhla, nan6ir 7alta tistqir o dictora ya36eena el okay winsafir"



AlZainah overheard Faisal's father, Faisal sighed.




AlZainah: Faisal? shilsalfa? Mnu ele bedish el mistashfa? mnu ele besafir? Faisal sh9ayir!?



Faisal sighed: Zayon maku ila el 3afya la t7ateen!!




AlZainah: inta lu bas tjawib as2ilte mara7 a7ate!!!!!! Faisal please gole shilsalfa!!! please!



Faisal: akhir mara shiftich feeha




AlZainah: ee? 



Faisal: dagaw 3alay galole ina be3edon el ta7aleel ele sawole yaha o besawon cham wa7id zyada 3ashan yt2akdon min ele fene wil youm galole ele fene o shnu lazm nsaweh



AlZainah: okay?



Faisal: Zayoon



AlZainah: Faisal please ta7acha!! a7is galbi ib yougaaf!!




Faisal: smila 3alaich!!



AlZainah: Faisal!! shfeek? shgalolik? sh9ayir?



Faisal: leukemia



AlZainah: na3am?



Faisal: blood cancer



AlZainah kept staring at Faisal, she really wanted him to laugh his silly laugh and tell her that he's kidding, She wanted his tanned skin back, the dark circles around his eyes to be gone, she wanted to see his smile and the sparkle in his eyes.



She slowly stood up, she tried so hard not to cry: fa shra7 y9er?



Faisal: ga3deen yzahbon agrathe



AlZainah: 7ag el mistashfa?



Faisal nodded: o mita ma 3a6one el okay barou7 america



AlZainah felt her tears roll down her face, she quickly wiped them away and sat beside Faisal.



AlZainah: barou7 ma3ak!




Faisal: wain?



AlZainah: america!!



Faisal: ib 9ifatich mnu? 



AlZainah: Faisal tathkir mara-



Faisal: lama naqzt ine abe akha6bch?



AlZainah nodded.



Faisal gave her half a smile: o digartene?



AlZainah: wala mu qa9de!!



Faisal smiled: adre




AlZainah: inzain fa-



Faisal: zayon.. ma rithaitay fene wana 9a7e mafene shay-



AlZainah: Faisal!!-



Faisal: khalene akamil




AlZainha nodded.



Faisal: mara7 atzawijch wana mareeth, 3ayazt wana anaqizlich min sneen!!



AlZainah wiped away her tears: adre



Faisal: mara7 atzawijch la2ane kasir kha6rich wala la2anch 7asa bil thanb!




AlZainah: Faisal please-



Faisal: intay ele please.. Zayon ana lal7en mo mistaw3ib ele ga3id y9er wa7is ine ib 7ilm 



AlZainah sighed.



Faisal: mabe ashofch wala abe tzorene 



AlZainah: Faisal yanait?



Faisal: please?



AlZainah looked away with tears in her eyes, she stood up and walked to her car. She felt like crying her heart and eyes out.



The first person she thought of going to was her father, she drove off to the company.


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The elevator door opened, AlZainah rushed to her father's office.


"Yubaaaaa!!"



She rushed to her father, hugged him and cried her eyes out.



"Shfeech smila 3alaich!!"




Hamad quickly stood up, he had no idea what to do or say.



AlZainah's father pushed her away from his arms: zayon baba sh9ayir?



AlZainah: Faisal mareeeth



Father: eee adre ya yuba!! 3a6eeh cham youm ba3ad berid china el bakhat!!





AlZainah: laa baba!!! Faisal mareeth fe cancer!! mara7 y6eeeb!!




Her father sighed.




Hamad felt like he shouldn't be there, specially when Ahmed isn't so he left the room.


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Hamad stood outside the office, he was so shocked of the news and AlZainah's tears broke his heart.



"Hmaaaid! laish mu dakhil?" 



Hamad looked to his left and faced Ahmed: Zayon dakhil wiya oboha



Ahmed: ok?



Hamad: Faisal fe cancer





Ahmed: Faisal? ay Faisal?



Hamad: Faisal AlFlani



Ahmed: waaaih!! allah yshafeeh



Hamad: ameen



The office's door slowly opened and AlZainah walked out with slow steps.



"Baba zayon digay 3ala Basha iye yakhthich! la tsogeen wintay eb hal 7ala"




Hamad looked at Ahmed and whispered "ana bagi6ha winta tifham wiya 3ami.. wil awrag dakhil" 




Ahmed: yanait?



Hamad left Ahmed standing and walked towards AlZainah.



"Aridch el bait" 



AlZainah looked at Hamad with eyes full of tears and nodded, it broke his heart seeing her like that.



Hamad walked beside her, she suddenly turned around facing him: a7is mafene shada amshe.. abe aga3ad



Hamad: hal maktab mba6al ta3alay



AlZainah sat down, Hamad stood in front of her.



AlZainah: tadre shkithir kan ynaqiz 3alay ina ytzawajne o agdra? a7iba!! bas ma atkhayila y9er rayle!!



AlZainah gasped.



Hamad: Faisal mo raylich?



AlZainah looked at him: na3am?



Hamad looked so shocked: Faisal mo kha6bich min ahalich o na6rich titkharjain 3ashan tamlchon o ta3linon?



AlZainah: la shako! min galik hal 7ache?



Hamad shook his head: ana el ghabe ele 9adagt!!!



AlZainah: Hamad shilsalfa? 




Hamad grabbed a chair and sat in front of AlZainah.




Hamad: ana bagoulch kil elsalfa min awlha lay akhirha!!










52 comments:

  1. First comment still havent read it cant wait
    Silent reader -N

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  2. So i randomly decided to check up on the blogs i used to read, yours included. Glt laish maro7 achayik yamkin wa7da mnhum kaatba 8i9a ydeeda! w 7adi istanast when you did and started reading w 6ab3an endimajdt mn awal post! w ashwa 3la 7aa'6y it was a thursday so I wouldn't wait long for the next one!
    You should write a book someday, you do have the talent!
    Looking forward to the next post i sense some action coming our way! 3aad mishkilty mafeeny 9abir bas yalla nan6ir haha :p

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    1. Thank you SO MUCH!!
      Lol ymir el isbou3 bsr3a dont worry;p

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  3. Action action action
    Tra I'm team faisal mn awl ilg9a 7ta a5rrrrr ng6a
    FAISAL ALL THE 7ta lo fe leukemia.
    W hamad a5eran t'3ayaar a7s ilsalfa ily begolha t59 5a6ebta!!
    -Ai

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  4. Omg no no no xD mara7 an6r sboo3 9a7?
    Pleasse goulay 9a7��

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  5. can you try posting more throughout the week? not just on fridays

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  6. aaakh ya Hamad <33333
    Faisal maskeen yaksr elkha6ir </3 inshaallah ylga wa7da t7ibba real love mn awal ma she gets to know him mu she petty him like what Z did
    HAMAD HAMAD HAMADDDD

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  7. Ma9aadiigg walla... mn kether ma ndmajt ge3adt a9eee7 ma3a zayoon :‘)
    Magdar agool shay 3an fai9al w 7ama
    Waiting for the next post desperately!!!!
    Intaayyy 3ajeebbbaaaa <3
    Mk_05

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  8. Gilna team 7amad bs leukemia mara wa7da ? ;'(

    Still your the best blogger <3

    MHK

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  9. Please 5alee fai9al ytzwjhaa mraaa cute mgdr at5yll el 8e9a bdoon fai9l ������

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  10. LA! 9alo7a shswaaaity fena!!!
    Cancer? Maagdar walah!
    O cliff hanger!:(
    3AAAJEB ELPOST!:(

    -SR7

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  11. omg ma9dg FASIAL !!!! laish !!! :"( :"( ...
    CANT WAIT UNIT THE NEXT POST :")

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  12. NOO, everyone's team faisal������ la taksereen feena wetkhaleenha ma3a hamad we dont want him��

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  13. LAAAA222222!!!! LAAAAAA22222! 7abeeeby faisallll ! laish ma yabee eshoofha! enshallah e9eer better.... 7aram hez amazing!

    Z belongs w. Faisal, enshallah yet7asan!

    abaih 7adee endemajt! bs wallah ma yestahel faisal.

    oo hamad a7sanla eroo7 ajabel his fiancé!

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  14. Laaa please mo cancer b3d malaina lazim other guy y9er fe cancer 3ashan mayakhith'ha :/ you said this post will be longer :( khal ysawy chech up b3d b amrica

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  15. 3ady we know she will be with hamad y3ny its so obvious "scarred" manaby dead characters

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    1. That might be wrong, all of the characters are somehow "Scarred" its not only Hamad!

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  16. Faisal all the way ��

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  17. Omg!
    This is becoming unhealthy for me to read!
    You had me holding my breath throughout the entire post!
    And I didn't realize until I was done reading!
    Another great post as always =]
    Definitely worth the wait, as it is every week!
    Absolutely loved it!
    Just ease up on the cliff hangers please; my heart can't take it! I'm too anxious to know what happens next =[
    Although I kind of have an idea, but still =P
    My love for hamad grows with every post <3
    Thank youu so much <33


    - A

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    1. Thank you so much A!!
      Your comments never fail to put a smile on my face!

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  18. FAISAL KSAAR 5A6RY :( tara i'm team faisal mn albdaya ba3ad! Mdry leeh i hate hamad:( cant wait till the next post :D xx
    -Mj

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  19. OMG MESKEEEEEN FAISAAAL!!! 7abaait hamas ib hal post bas still a7is faisal is the one!

    You are so amazing wallah , men awal story you wrote. Mashallaah 3alaich allah ewafgich enshallaah! 7abaitich bedoun ma a3arfich♥♥

    -AA

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  20. Ana il wa7eeda ili team hamad? :( fasial 7aram kisar 5a6ree bs him and zaina are not meant to be cuz shes not in love with him she just pities him! He needs someone that will love him back, and zaina needs hamad ;(! Mita il next post inshallah??

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    1. Lool! la la mo elwa7eeda! Thats true!!
      I'm posting tomorrow enshallah ;D

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  21. HIIIIIII! Your blog is the most amazing thing ever! Pleaaassseee possttt alloooottt 3shani! Love you and your blog!

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    1. Hala! thanks a loooot!! enshalllah I'll be posting each Friday ;) love you too!

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  22. what time are you gonna post today?

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  23. Yaalllah we are waiting <3333.<3333

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  24. We are waiting :'((((

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  25. 9eejj you're the best ...bss please post can't wait any longer :'(

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