Friday, May 2, 2014

Scarred -11-

Hi!! 


*Guys!! the story isn't over yet, A lot of comments are predicting the ending!! 



*Just because the story is called scarred doesn't mean that AlZainah will end up with Hamad, All of my characters are somehow scarred. (and it doesn't mean that she won't) 



This post goes to A because your comments never fail to make me smile;**


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Hamad grabbed a chair and sat in front of AlZainah.




Hamad: bagoulich kil elsalfa, min awalha lay akhirha!




AlZainah wiped her tears away and kept staring at Hamad.




Hamad: lama hadaina baitkom o 6ala3na umm awal shay 6ala3na la2ana omch 6ridatna




AlZainah: 6ridatkom?




Hamad nodded: 6ala3na o radaina 7ag ahal omi.. magdar agolch ila ina bidat 7ayatna 9ij lama safarna america! darasna o takharjna o Ahmed tizawaj o shilna 3umrna 9a7 o ma gimna nkhale omi tit3ab eb shay





AlZainah smiled.



Hamad: o oboch ma ga9ar wiyana




AlZainah: bas oboy gale ina ikhtifaitaw 3ana faj2a?!




Hamad: ee 9ij, safarna bidon la ngoula




AlZainah nodded.




Hamad half smiled: awal ma bidat habat el kuwatiyeen ib facebook, dawartich ib kil isim tiwaqa3tch tistakhdmaainah! 




AlZainah: o ma ligatine?




Hamad: ma ligait




AlZainah smiled: ma kan 3indi




Hamad: o lama 9arat habat twitter dawartich... wayed! o ligaitch! 9ij la3waztene ib salfat kil shway private 




AlZainah giggled.




Hamad: bas 3al aqal kint ashouf 9iwarch! 




Hamad took his phone out of his pocket, unlocked the screen.




AlZainah: shtsawe?




Hamad: ni6ray





Hamad went through his photos, He started sliding through his photos, AlZainah's avatars.




AlZainah: olaa!!! hathe 7adha qadeema!! lama kan sha3re g9er!!





Hamad smiled: eee





AlZainah: bas Hamad-





Hamad: khalene akamil tikfain!!




AlZainah nodded.




Hamad: 6oul 3umri wana adre 3ashan agdar atris 3ainch lazm akoun shay mohim, lazm astahlich! lazm 7ata lu fakart atqadamlich a3ayshich 3eesha tistahlaainha!




AlZainah felt butterflies in her belly.




Hamad: radaina el kuwait, o Ahmed mo miqtini3 eb fikrat ene bashofch o bag3ad wiyach! lama khalasna min loyaat el ma63am o garab el iftitaa7 marait baitkom




AlZainah: okay?




Hamad: kint bahid el da3wat 3al bab o amshe.. bas omch kanat tawha nazla min sayarat'ha o shafatne




AlZainah nodded.




Hamad: salamt 3alaiha o 6ab3an ma radat 3alay




Hamad went silent for a moment.



AlZainah: Hamad kamil!




Hamad stood up: bikht9aar lama sa2alt 3anch galatle inch makh6ouba wina na6reen titkharjain 3ashan ysawon el 3irs wil loya! 





AlZainah: wala ine mo makh6ouba!!!





Hamad: wana shdarane!? Ma yeetay wiyahom el iftitaa7





AlZainah: la2ane ma adre ine ma3zouma!!!





Hamad: o faj2a ashofch wiya ib Dubai!!





AlZainah: winta? wele kint wiyaha ib Dubai? wele lazga feek bil ma63am? Mo kha6ibha?





Hamad: imbala





AlZainah: bas 3ayal Hamad!!





Hamad: kha6abt'ha min el 7ara wala!!! 





AlZainah: min el 7ara trou7 takh6ib? el nass min el 7ara yt'hawshon.. ysibon! winta takh6ib?





Hamad: bas 3ashan aware omch ina 3adi yrthon feena!! 6oul 3umrha t3amilna witkalmna china 3abeed 3indaha! Zayon tikfain fihmay mawqifi!!





AlZainah looked away.




Hamad: tathkren lama yetay elma63am o giltlich imshay ng3ad dakhil?




AlZainah nodded.




Hamad: ga3adna dakhil la2ana fe shabab bil6awla ele mjablitich kanaw ykhizonch





AlZainah was so shocked.




Hamad: o lama ga6aitay Jen o kint agolch tridenha gabil el 9! kint khayif trideen mit2akhir we2athonch el hailaag.. sayartich youmha lay el bait




AlZainah: ma la7atht!




Hamad smiled: o samait el ma63am 77, la2ana akhir mara shiftich feeha kan 3umrch sabi3 sneen 





AlZainah's heart sunk.





Hamad: o athkir lama 9ar 3indi scar ib wayhe! athkir ine kint a3almch tsougeen gare 





AlZainah giggled.





Hamad: o ib kil thiqa insida7t 3al zar3 ma wa3ait ila intay wil gare foug





AlZainah laughed.





Hamad: please la takhtheen qarar wintay 7asa bil thanb.. fakray ib 3aglich mo ib galbch!!




AlZainah was so confused and tired, she felt like the weight of the world was on her chest. 



She loves Faisal but she's not in love with him, She wants to give Hamad a chance but what if he disappoints her? And what about his fiance? 




AlZainah: abe arid el bait




Hamad quickly stood up: yalla!




AlZainah walked with slow steps, she wanted to sleep and wake up to find everything perfect.





Hamad felt that AlZainah was confused and that she had no idea what to do, he didn't want her to marry Faisal just because he's sick.





Hamad: ra7 agai6ch elbait o ra7 arou7 Rawan





AlZainah didn't say a word all the way back home.




Hamad parked his car beside AlZainah's car. 




AlZainah: mashkoor





Hamad: zayon shqarartay?





AlZainah shrugged her shoulders: wala shay.. abe anam





Hamad felt so sorry for AlZainah, it broke his heart seeing her so weak.





AlZainah walked with slow steps, she felt her heart beat in her eye from crying, Faisal has cancer and Hamad turned out to be so sweet and caring.




She had no idea what to do, what to say and who to talk to or choose, AlZainah wanted to give Hamad a chance, but her heart broke for Faisal she wanted to be there for him and make him feel better.




She threw herself on the first couch she came across, what if Faisal dies? she'll feel guilty for the rest of her life and what if she doesnt? willl she be able to live with him as his wife for the rest of their lives?




AlZainah closed her burning eyes and tried to sleep.











27 comments:

  1. This was more than amazing mashAllah wallah i loved it;* 3ndi i8tira7.. Ina you post a veeeeery long post every friday lana ma nshb3 mn muhratch��

    -dk5

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    1. Thank you so much;** Thank you for the suggestion I'll try my best enshallah!

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  2. Ambaaay nw im lost madry akouun team hamad or faisal both eyanenouuun!!
    Anyways areed oo a3eed you are i great la amazing writer allah ewafgich enshallah!
    Keep up the good work♥♥

    -AA

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    1. LOOOL everyone is I guess!!
      Thank you so much AA ;D

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  3. This is AMAZING!!!! Jed your soo talented! Hamad iyshawigg! Please post soon!
    -F

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  4. Wonderful post as always! <3 Can you please give it a happy ending I read your blog coz its one of my best escapes from reality I’m not saying that divulging one’s self in a fantasy world is the best way to deal with all of our problems, but sometimes it’s ok to just forget about sad days in order to be happy and your blog always made my days.. The thing is I have lost some precious people through cancer and I just hope this story ends up better than I except like everyone would find something better and live happily.. Thank you for sharing your extraordinary thoughts and stories with us, they really get to me where some would make me smile, laugh or cry. I really appreciate the effort you place in your writing.
    Best wishes,
    AKS

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    1. Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, and I'm sorry for your loss!
      I didn't decide the ending yet but lets hope it will be a happy one!!
      Thank YOU for reading and commenting on my posts;**

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  5. I LOVE HAMAAAAD <3 HE IS SO CUTE & SWEET
    AGAIN LOVE THE STORY, YOU NEVER DISAPPOINT US!

    MHK

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  6. Samme im lost madry faisal or hamad:( i loved the post!
    -MJ

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  7. one word AMAZING <3<3<3
    IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT !!!!
    mashallah your so talented :*, can't wait until the next post *_*
    - AF

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  8. Omgg!
    Ahhhhhhh!
    Thank youuuuu <33
    This is officially my favourite post!
    And not just because it goes out to me, that part just makes it a whole lot better <3
    This time, I was smiling throughout the entire post!
    See what you do to me?
    You got me smiling like a fool.. Not that I mind =P
    You made my day [=
    This was by far the cutest post yettt!
    Just imagine that you've been given the tightest hug yet =P

    I knew hamad was a mush deep down!
    I had a feeling he felt something towards Z, but I definitely didn't expect this!
    Ahhh, now everything is so messy =/
    Poor Z; a situation I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy =/
    You never fail to amaze me with your writing mashallah [=
    Always unpredictable!
    Always worth reading, and worth the wait!
    Thank you so much cutie <3
    Looking forward to your next masterpiece!

    - A

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    1. A!! Your comments are always one of my favorites!!
      I can't thank you enough;**

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  9. I loved it! Soo anxious to know what will happen next!

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  10. please let her choose faisal!!!!! He's so sweet and charming let him live:)))) their so cute together

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  11. Inshaallah F ylga 7ub 7ayata o elbint ely tstahla min galb cause he deserves it <3
    Z and H , mthl ma yguloun true love can never be concealed .. 7ubhum mafthooou7 <3
    ely jad taksr el kha6r Hamad's Fiancee :s
    Good Job!!! Lovvve xx

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  12. Simply... YOU ARE ON FIIRREEE!!!!!!
    Mk_05

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  13. You are recreating an old classic and thats what truly captivated my attention, I can tell you that only true writers do that, 6areeqtich thakaratni b a French classic that was recreated by a famous old egyptian author and recently by a Turkish author but never by a khaleeji one, Its something so beautiful and unexpected, jur2itich b6ar7 mawathee3 mthl chy is something! tast7qeen ina nftkhr feech o fmawhibthch, what I'm talking about is damj el6abaqat o the process of reducing el6abaqiya fl mujtama3 by the beautiful love between Zaina and Hamad.. I can see your story going viral I can already imagine it on screens.. keep up the good work o ra7 nstamir fmutaba3tich. Good Luck in what you're doing Allah ywafqich 7abeebty

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    1. WOW.
      THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
      You really left me speechless!!
      Thank you, ameen ajm3een;**

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  14. Kel ma agra blog feh 2 guys the girl ends up with the guy that i hate;( 7athe khayes 9jj..Madre laaish a7es'ha bt9er ma3a hamad!! Maaaabe abee faisaal::((

    Elmuhem.. Garait all your stories at once walllaaaaah EBDAAA33 3esht eljaw 9jj 9jj w kel el endings nafs ele abehom enshallah eb hal story y9er 7athe 7elu w el ending ele eb bale \o/

    Sorryyy 3al 6walaa bel 7ache:$$
    Love youuuuuu<<33

    AN

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