Friday, March 28, 2014

Scarred -6-

Hello!!

*I would like to comment on something I've been asked to do a lot lately! A lot of my readers are asking me to post more than once a week, Thank you all for the suggestions it really shows me how much your addicted to the story! But I'm sorry, I will continue posting on Friday's ONLY :( 



*This post goes to all of the my silent readers that stopped being silent! Maha, AKS, A, MHK and 8!



*Thank you ALL for the love and support you're giving me! Reading your feedback is always a pleasure!!



Enjoy it ;D


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"Wala fathya!! wagta?" 




AlZainah: ee wagta!!




Hessa: ta2akhar el wagt!!! wala Faisal ythba7na in 6ala3na al7een!




AlZainah: iff shda3wa tawha t9er 3ashir!!





AlZainah grabbed her mobile.



Z: Faisaaaaaal



F: ??



Z: wainik?



F: shfeech?



Z: abe chocolate min Godiva



F: bachr



Z: aro7 Dubai mall ashtrele bsr3a?



F: LA.



Z: Faisaaal!!!



F: el thalaja feeha chocolate




Z: abe Godiva!!



F: gilnaa baachr



Z: Faisal please?



F: zayoun akhaf 3alaikom ti6l3on hal 7aza!!



Z: shda3waa



F: inzain shfeech?



Z: mafene



F: mara7 t7ineen 3ala kakaw ila feech shay



Z: mafene



F: la ti6l3on now, bachr y9er khair




AlZainah: ohhh




Latifa: shfeech?




AlZainah sat on the floor.




Hessa laughed: walaaaaih




AlZainah: masadig Hamad kha6ib!!!




Hessa and Latifa looked at each other and quickly rushed to AlZainah.




Hessa: laish mthaygich el mawtho3?




AlZainah: mo mthaygne 




Latifa: AHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA




AlZainah giggled: t3arfon sh3our lama ma tshofon a7ad min zmaan o faj2a tshofona?




Hessa: okay?




AlZainah: o titwaq3oun ina ma taghayar? 




Latifa: ee?




AlZainah: o ina bitimon nafs ma kintaw?




Hessa and Latifa nodded.




AlZainah: bas kilshay y9er bil 3ax? Ykon kil shay ghair!!




Hessa: hmmm thi3t madre shtgoleen




AlZainah smiled: wala ana madre shagol




Latifa: Hesso naday Sara bsr3aa




Hessa rushed to the bathroom door: SARAA MA9ARAT SHOWER YALLAAAA




AlZainah smiled, they knew that Sara would understand her even when she didn't understand herself.




Hessa: al7een tye Sara win7il el mishkilaa!!




Latifa: Zayon? ma a7is inch t7ibeen Hamad! Ma a7is 9a7 inch t7ibeena a9lan!




AlZainah looked at Latifa.




Latifa: ma midaach!! ele tathkireena ohwa yahil kan yil3ab ma3ach! bas kilmaan ytghayar! ma tadreen shno 9ar al7een!




AlZainah: adre! 




Latifa: bas 3ayal!! Rakzaay 3ala ele 3indch!




AlZainah: ele 3indi?




Latifa smiled and nodded.




Sara: shfeeekom?




Latifa: khalas mafeena shay!




Hessa: waaay ana dayman chithi ma mini fayda




The girls laughed.




Hessa: a7ad ghairi sima3 a7ad y6ig elbab?




AlZainah: gomaay ba6laay




"Ba6laaaaw elbaaaab"




Sara: hatha 9out Faisal! 




Hessa: FAISAAAAAL?




Faisal: eee 




The girls stared at AlZainah.




AlZainah: shfeekom?




Latifa: gomay shofay shyabe!




AlZainah: ya salam? wana shako? ikhta tba6ila!!




Sara: umm ana banashif sha3ri




The girls heard Faisal mumble outside.




AlZainah giggled: 7aram maskeen!!




AlZainah opened the door and found Faisal standing with a Godiva bag.




Faisal: madre ay nou3 t7ibeen fa yibt kil shay




AlZainah: waaay Faisaaal




Faisal: ee ba3ad 3adi itimeen tit7al6maain 6oul elsafra la2ane ma khalaitch tshtreen!




AlZainah laughed: shda3waaa!!!




Faisal: ni6ray khal arou7 ayeeb chees jan6itich!





AlZainah: khal aye ma3ak!



Faisal: wain tyeen? barou7 el ghurfa foug! 




AlZainah: eee an6irik t6al3le el chees




Faisal: la wala? o rab3i?




AlZainah: rab3ik by6al3oun el chees wiyaak? 




Faisal: yalla 3ad yalla maku 9a3daa




AlZainah mumbled to herself: iff maleeq




Faisal: ni6rene hne




AlZainah: umm Faisaaal khalne aye wiyak!!




Faisal: o ba3dain ma3a el 7anaa?



AlZainah: inzain bas2ilik so2aal




Faisal: si2lene hne!




AlZainah: okay okaaay!!



AlZainah closed the door and took a step towards Faisal, he took a couple of steps back.




Faisal: Zayoun shfeech?




AlZainah: Faisal shlon t3arif Rawan AlFlani?




Faisal smiled: kanat ma3ay bil madrisa




AlZainah:  7adi in9idaamt ina Hamad kha6ibha!




Faisal's smile faded: aha




AlZainah: shlon 3rifaw ba3ath?




Faisal: madre




AlZainah: way Faisal is2alha ba3arif!!




Faisal: 3an ithnich ba93ad anam o a36eech elchees bachr




AlZainah: taw elnass 3al nouma!




Faisal gave AlZainah half a smile and walked away.





way shda3wa 3alaih!!


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Faisal sat down, he kept staring at his whatsApp chat with AlZainah, He really wanted to know why is she so curious about Hamad.


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The week passed by quick and the girls were back home.




"BSR3AAA SAJLAAAW!!!"




The girls laughed at Hessa.




AlZainah: abe easy elective!! 




Latifa: ikhthay 3ind Rashed AlFlani!! iyanin 7ada ya36e wayh




Hessa: classa dayman full




Latifa: Zayoon khal ya36eech exception!! 




Hessa: ma ya36e exceptions!




AlZainah: way Hesso i7baa6 shtbaeen!!




Latifa: a3arif wa7da okhoha rifeej Dr.Rahed o kalima chan ya36eeha exception! 




AlZainah: way wain algalaa was6aa hatha ba3ad!!




Sara: kalmay Faisal! 6agaat 3umra ymkin y3arfa!



 
AlZainah: Sara intay kalmeeh! Min Dubai o ohwa mnafis 3alay madre shfeh!



Sara called Faisal: hala..t3arif eldictor Rashed AlFlani? eee... madre.. laa? waaih 7asafa okaay... bye!




AlZainah: ma y3arfaa




Latifa: Zayoon gomay




AlZainah: wain?




Latifa: 77!




AlZainah: ma63am Hamad? NO WAY!




Latifa: tikfaaaain!! 7adi mishtahya el truffles malot'hom!!




AlZainah: aro7 ma3ach bas mani nazla




Latifa: okay!



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Latifa parked in front of the restaurant. 




Latifa: mara7 tanzleen?




AlZainah: la




Latifa: kaifch




Latifa got out of the car and walked to the restaurant.




AlZainah raised the volume of the radio and rested her head on the window, her mobile vibrated.




Zayoon BSR3A NIZLAAAY!!! You wont regret it wala!!! 




AlZainah took a deep breath, shut off the car locked it and walked to the restaurant.




AlZainah: shfeech?




Latifa: shofay ele ga3id ma3a Hamad bsr3a!!!




AlZainah slowly turned her head to the left: ee shfeeeh?




Latifa: HATHA DR.RASHED!!




AlZainah: la tgoleeen!!




Latifa: bsr3a ro7ay irtazaay salmaay 3ala Hamad jidama!!




AlZainah: maynoonaaa??




Latifa: bsr3aa gaam shakla ib yamshe!!!!!




AlZainah: mani ray7a wala basalim 3ala Hamad! khalsene Latof!




Latifa: ni6ray ma yabaw el truffles!! 




AlZainah noticed that Rashed left and Hamad was walking towards the cashier. 




Latifa smiled at him, he smiled back while AlZainah kept her eyes on her mobile. 




"etha mintay mitkalma ana batkalam" Latifa whispered. 




AlZainah: athbi7ich!!




Latifa: Hi! umm law sama7t ele tawa 6ala3 el dictor Rashed?




Hamad: eee




Latifa: Zayoon!! hatha el dictor ele tabeen exception 3inda!! 




AlZainah felt like killing Latifa.




AlZainah: eeh! 




AlZainah didn't even look Hamad.




Latifa: tgdar tkalma 7ag zayon?




Hamad: la sorry!




Latifa: oh 7asafaa



AlZainah looked at him, he quickly looked away.




The girls grabbed the truffles and walked out.




AlZainah: latoof!! sh'hal ligafa ele inzalat 3alaich?




Latifa: y3arfich o t3arfeena o 6alabna ysa3dich wain el ligafa?




AlZainah: ligafa o qilaat adab ba3ad! elmohim kan y6ali3ne wintay tkalmena?




Latifa giggled: ee




AlZainah: bas ham ma sa3ad!!!! bachr awal ma agom baro7 el jam3a akalim el dictor Rashed! 




Latifa: eee zain tsaween




AlZainah had mixed feelings about Hamad, she really wished that they could sit and catch up and at the same time she wanted to kill him for his arrogance!!


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AlZainah walked through the hallway and kept repeating Rashed AlFlani.. Rashed AlFlani.. waina wainaa .. OH KAHOO!!



AlZainah knocked the door: i7im




"Tfathilay"




AlZainah: 9aba7 el khair dictor!! 




Dr. Rashed: hala 9aba7 el noor




AlZainah: dictor baghait as2al etha ta36e exception la2ana-




Dr. Rashed cut her off: ur name?





AlZainah: AlZainah AlFlani



Dr. Rashed looked through his papers, he grabbed a stick note, Her name was written on it.



Ghareeba




Dr. Rashed: ok ya zaina, khalas you may leave now 




AlZainah: wil exception?




Dr. Rashed: check elsystem tonight 




AlZainah: umm okay thank you!




AlZainah left Dr. Rashed's office with thousand questions going through her head, she quickly called Sara.




"MAYNOONA!! RIDAY AL7EEN SHOFAY EL STICKNOTE 3ADEL!! AKED HAMAD MWA9EEH!! WAY CUTEEE!! Saway nafsich ib tis2leena ay so2al ghabee o 6ilay 3al note 3adil!!"




AlZainah walked back to the professor's office.




"Eee yatne gabil shway.. la ma yabat 6are.. la twa9e 7aree9..7abeeb Hmaaid.. ma3a el salama"



AlZainah overheard Rashed talking.



She couldn't believe that he was talking to Hamad, Why did Hamad tell her that he couldn't help but eventually called Rashed? He always make her feel that he hates her and that hes not the same person anymore? Yet he tried to help her.














39 comments:

  1. jaad ashta6 3ala youm elyem3a w elsebba elpost!
    mabbe y9er shay weya 7amad ma7baita
    abbe faisal cuuttee w eshaaweeg!!
    TEAM FAISAL!!!!!!!
    zaina rakzay eb faisal please:)!

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  2. The highlight of my Friday are your posts <3 LOVE THEM.
    Mashallah 3laich fanana!
    Love the storyyyyy! :( <3

    MHK

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  3. Ahhh now im confuseddd! mabe a7ib hamad!! faisal is so much better!! :( and thanks for the dedication!!
    greaat post!

    - 8

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  4. Ugh i dont know on team who i should be? Faisal or hamad? :(

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  5. Im so torn between those two!!

    Loved the post;*


    -O

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  6. AMAAAAAZIIINNGGGGG !!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEE POST FASTER AND MAKE THE POSTS LONGER <3 <3 !!!!!!!!!

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  7. 9aloooo7aaa tkfain post thani 3ashan 5a6ryy *crying whatsapp face*
    Pleaaase pleassse arjoooch (awal mara i type this word)

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  8. WAY LA2! Please Faisal stop being so ADORABLE, nabee 7amad!
    Cant wait till friday! *cries*

    -87S

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  9. faisal is very familiar to myself... we'll always finish last =/

    -AHM

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    1. Good things comes to those who wait!

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    2. it might in stories or possibly over the long run when you look back to see it was a blessing in disguise, but in the present sometimes its just too difficult to keep that kind of faith strong within oneself

      -AHM

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  10. I can't stop thinking of what's going to happen next.. I reallly want to know, and thank you for this AMAZING post and for ur mention 9al7a. Keep up your innovative work sweetie!
    -AKS

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  11. I read all of your stories in less than two days and i told all of my friends to read them also i skipped school today because i wanted to read!lol i'm from saudi btw keep going your talented mashalla❤️❤️

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    1. Ya bakhti!!! 7ayallah ahal els3oudiyaa;**
      Thanks a lot!!

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  12. The story is amazing, im gonna have to say im with team hamad, i like how cold he is its hot, so keep it up lovely

    -Unforgiven

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  13. Team 7amad all the way! bs Faisal y3awr el galb :(

    Can't wait for the next post
    - a reader from dubai

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  14. Ahhh!
    I'm in loveee <3
    Hamad is a puzzle to mee though!
    I feel like he's sorta got a thing for z, but his pride is getting in the way.. Cuz obviously he's ashamed of his past, and it seems like its just something he wanted to forget..
    Or maybe had forgotten, and z just keeps reminding him of the person he used to be.. Anywayyy! Its just pure genius! I'm absolutely in love with all of ur stories! And its great to witttnesss how u've grown as a writer.. Its like an amazing melody.. The more u listen and the deeper u get into it, the sweeter it gets!
    Mashallah [=

    - A <3

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    1. Thank you SO MUCH A!!!
      I really enjoyed reading your comment, thank you so much it really means A LOT!!

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  15. Team faisaaaaaalll.

    Plz make z notice faisal. 7arammm hez so good to her.

    Hamad ma yen3a6a wayh.

    HF

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  16. Ahhhhhh!
    Team Faisal...<3
    Amazing as usual, Love your work so much~
    Mashallah you are an amazing & Talented writer, keep going sweetie ;*
    & SORRY! for the late comment tawni ashof El-Post I was busy with studying!!!!! LOVE YOU~...

    ~FAITH~

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  17. Heyy 9alo7a how are you? ��
    I know 7dy qdema �� ( ftra ma gmt agra blogs madry laish ��) and yeah i've re-read your blog as always ;p never get bored of it
    I'm loving the new story ! Hamad is weird , Fasiall yshwwg a7sa y7bha

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    1. Halaaa!! I'm good!! wintay shakhbarich?! its been a while!!
      Thank you;**

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  18. TODAAY IS FRIDAAAY POST :D

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