Saturday, May 8, 2010

Giving up? {24}

Quwa;* shlounkoum?

ATWA8A3 ITS THE LONGEST POST I WROTE IN THIS STORY! :p

Enjoy it;**

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Bandar entered the house & headed up stairs, he found his mother in the living room

Um Bandar: ha yuma inshallah ma ta3ibik el mishwar?

Bandar: shda3wa sawait shay, ma 3a6ooni sh'3l bas ijtma3na O galaw saw el sh'3il bil bait

Um Bandar: ee a7sanlik yuma

Bandar nodded: ra7 abda el sh'3l 9ij el isbo3 el yay

Um Bandar: enshallah, agool Bandar?

Bandar: na3am?

Um Bandar: ma shift Bibi?

He nodded: imbala

Um Bandar smiled: ya 7iloha, thak el youm lama yatik el mistashfa 6awilat 3indik wala mishat bsir3a?

Bandar: huh? Mita yatni el mistashfa?

Um Bandar: haw shfeek nisait! Gabil la ti6la3 ib youmain kanat 3indik!

Bandar: la yuma '3al6ana

Um Bandar: shno '3al6ana! Shift.ha wana 6al3a mn '3urfitik! O gitlha ine ray7a el bait 7ag obok O rada

Bandar: yuma ana mit2akid inha ma yatni!

Um Bandar: wana mit2akda inha yat!

Bandar shakilha el walda kbarat O 5arifat!
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Wala i7tirt ma3akoum! Ma taboni a7ache la2ana 3abdalkoum ine a7ba witgoom t7i6ni ma3ah ib hal project?!

Grandfather: awalan Majid el flani 6alibkoum bil isim! Ya3ni ma agdar agoola la! Thaniyan ana ma gilt la t7achena! Hathi yaditich t5arbi6 sa3at!

Bibi giggled.

Grandfather: Bas aham shay inha la tadri inch ga3da tishta'3lain ma3ah O bas

Bibi sighed & nodded.
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Yalla yuma ana mashi

Um Bandar: wain?

Bandar: 3indi maw3id ma3a el doctor Mansour

Um Bandar: ok
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Bibi got into her car & drove off
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Mashallah mashallah ta7asun kbeer!

Bandar smiled: el 7imdallah

The doctor stared writing things on the paper in front of him

Bandar: agol doctor?

Doctor: na3am?

Bandar: bas2ilik so2al bas mabeek tifham '3ala6

Mansour smiled, he felt like her knew what Bandar was going to talk to him about: is2al

Bandar: lama *clears his throat* gimt mn el '3aybooba

Mansour: ee?

Bandar: Bibi umm maratni?

Mansour: ma athkir ine shift.ha ila gabil ma ti6la3 ib cham youm

Bandar: huh! Nafs 7achi omi!

Mansour: wishfeeha?

Bandar: mafeha shay! Bas ana mit2akid inha ma yatni!

Mansour crossed his eyebrows: ham ana mit2akid ine shift.ha! 7ata s2alatni 3an 9i7tk O mita bin6al3ik!

Bandar sighed a sigh of relief; he was now sure that she cares, bas laish ma yatni? Laish m d5alat el '3urfa?!
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She sat down with her milk in her hand.

Opps!

Bibi wiped the milk that spilled on the table

Buz Buz

She stretched her hand to grab her mobile

1 Message from Zaid

Babon thakray Bandar 3aala el sh'3il O tarteb afkara tara ma biga shay O Majid yo9al.

Bibi sighed: shi'3il shi'3il shi'3il shi'3iiiiiiil!

She heard a laugh.

Grandfather: sh3indich tit7al6main 3ala el sh'3il!?

She giggled: ma ta7al6amt!

Her grandfather smiled & sat beside her, He opened the TV & started watching the news

Bibi picked up her mobile & stared writing Bandar a message

Quwa Bandar
Ma biga shay 3ala yayat Majid el flani, enshallah afkarik jahza.
Bibi Al flani


Ugh wayed formal!

She clicked on send & the message was gone, she lifted her head & stared at the TV.

Bibi hmm shayfa hal rayal mn gabil?

Bibi: yuba hathi shno?


Grandfather: a5bar

Bibi: aha, inzain hatha mno?

Grandfather: hatha hmm hatha Sami el flani

The camera zoomed on his face.

Bibi gasped abaih hatha mo china obo Bandar?

Grandfather: shfech?

Bibi: ha mafene shay

Grandfather: shifta fe mu2tamarat O ijtma3at wayed, rayal 5abeeth O mitsali6

Bibi was quite she wanted to hear more about him

Grandfather: ygoolon 3inda walad bas mo imaska wala shay ib sharikata!

Bibi: aha

Grandfather: Bandar ham wild el flani 9a7?

Bibi nodded.

Grandfather: ma y9erla?

Bibi lied: madri
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Bibi opened her eyes & stared at the selling

Bandar Bandar Bandar Bandar!

Buzz Buzz her mobile buzzed

9aba7 el 5air istatha
Enshallah kil shay jahiz.
Bandar


She read the message over & over again laish ma a9er normal ma3ah??! Ya3ni ra7 asht'3il ma3ah for the next month, ma agdar a9er wayed formal! Law kan 3i9am chan 7adi 9irt rasmiya ma3ah wala hamni! Bas Bandar?! Magdar! Ufff laish ma agdar?! Shmi3na Bandar?
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HATHA WILDICH 5AMID? 5AMADH ALLAH DINYA O A5RA! LAL7EN MA RA7 EL DAWAM?!

Mother: La lal7en ta3ban ma36ena ijaza

Father: AY TA3BAN AY BA6EE5! FANISHOOH O IMASHEEHA 3ALAICH YAL '3ABIYA?!

Bandar closed his eyes tight while he heard the conversation between his mother & father

Uff bidal ma y7is bil thanb 3ala ele sawah

He got out of his bed & got it the bathroom
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Bandar sat in his room with all the papers around him

Beep beep.

1 message from Bibi
9aba7 el nor Bandar!
The sun is really bright today! El jaw iyanin law mo ma'39ooba chan ma ri7t el maktab ;p I suggest u work on ur ideas outdoors! Outdoor ideas are always better than indoor ideas ;)


He smiled & wrote a reply

Any suggestions?

Beep beep

FREE ZONE!

He stood up collected his papers, grabbed his car keys & walked downstairs.
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RASI IB YINBA6!

Zaid: i5thay break O tiwa3iday ma3a Manoora

Bibi: hmm akthar shay ya3jibni fek ohwa thaka2ik!

Zaid: shukran!

Bibi: 3afwan!
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

Bibi ran towards the water.

Munera: YAL 5IBLA NI6RENE

Bibi: A7IIIB EL BA7AR!

Bibi stood on the shore; she wouldn’t dare and put her feet into the water

Munera: abaih yal 5ibla fashaltena!

Bibi: MAKO A7AD!

Munera: imbala ako! O la rayal ba3ad

Bibi gasped then laughed.

Bibi whispered: wainha?

Munera moved her eye balls to the left; Bibi slowly moved her head & saw a guy in a grey sweat pant & maroon t-shirt he was busy with some papers.

Bibi wiggled her eyebrows at Munera: cute!

Munera laughed & sat down on the sand.

Bibi stared at the water shra7 y9er etha 7a6ait rele bil may??!

She took a few steps towards the water then hurried back to where she was standing

Munera: haw shfech? El may barid?

Bibi: ha? Ee barid wayed

She lied, No one knew that she fears the water now, she fears it because it reminds her of her father, no one knows… except for Bandar.

Bibi: taben barid?

Munera looked around her: mn wain?

Bibi: ka ako rayal ybee3 bil 3arabana

Munera: oh ok al7en aroo7 ayeb

Bibi: la 5alich ga3da ana bayib

Bibi grabbed her wallet from her purse & walked to the ice cream cart; while she was walking back to where Munera's sitting she saw a paper fly in the air & the man that was sitting hurry after it

Bibi abaih masken

The paper hit Bibi's face; she giggled & took it off her face & found Bandar standing in front of her

Bibi: AH!

Bandar giggled: shitsawen hne?

She gave him his paper: inta ele shitsawe hne?

Bandar: wa7da a3arfha galatli ina outdoors ideas a7san mn el indoor ideas

She smiled: O hal wa7da galatlik roo7 café bil free zone

Bandar: hmm arta7 3al ba7ar akthar

Bibi: aha!

She handed him the paper & he noticed that the bracelet wasn’t in her hand, his smiled disappeared from his face

Bibi shfeh?

Bandar yimkin nisat talbis.ha

Bandar took the paper from her hand: mashkoura

Then they heard a voice

"Ummm baboon?"

Bandar turned around.

Bibi: Oh Manor hatha Bandar el flani, Bandar hathi Munera el flani murt Zaid

Bandar smiled politely: fur9a sa3eda

Munera: ana as3ad!

Munera stared at Bandar, Bibi gave her a look

Bibi: Manoora ma3ach jna6na?

Munera: 6ab3an! Ya3ni ba5alehoum 3al ba7ar?

Bibi giggled: yalla?

Munera: yalla!

Munera gave Bibi her purse & walked to the car

Bibi turned to Bandar: ashoofik ba3ad cham youm?

Bandar smiled & nodded.

33 comments:

  1. 7alaat bandaar wayeed teksr 5a6ryaah </3 lazm him nd bibi hookup :D

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  2. wanasa ishawgoon a7is mneera wants them together madree laish;P see no 7aram:P

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  3. 9aloo7a welcome bk! M10 ila asawe comment gablch;p
    -Anon N

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  4. waaayyy la22 la22
    i3awrounn il galbb...romeo and juiet kuwaitii edition!!;p
    efttt laish ya3nii may9eroun wiya ba3a'9?!
    why does society have to play a role in love?
    9aloo7a words wont do justice to ur storyy..jadd jad 8i9tichh '3airrrr!
    and thankyou for the loonng post tslmeeenn:*
    -M10
    ps keep in mind i told anon N u posted!...i alwayss do!:P oo lo moo ana ya anonn chan intayy mo daraya 3an hawa darichh!;p

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  5. post malee8 mafeeh action ;p
    gam a9eer 9aree7aaa ;D ;p
    heheh lalalaa walla jk ;p kilish walla postaat 9alooo7aa bint bu 9aloo7 ! ;D
    ILYILY 7ada ur post ya eb wagta tawny rada mn shalaihh :*

    saroona;**

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  6. A555 :\ Bandar iy3awer il galb! Bib 5alha ta36eeny il sweira ana albis.ha ma3ndy manni3 ana;p hehehe JK 3ashan latgoleen 3an galby rhayef;p 9alooooo7aaaa laish a7s mnzman 3anich?;p o hmmm...watelse? ee, ma3indi shay agoola ghair ena i miss u!:\
    OH OH OH OH !! al7eeen thikart shaayy abi agooola ! M 10@ basch wnty itchathbeeeeen! a9laaaan a9laaaaan!! i knew abt it b4 u do;) la2na allah ysalmly galbch ana o 9aloo7a right here have a telepothy thing going on here a3arf wenever she posts o doesnt o a3arf 7ttan 3an shtfaker fee!! shraykom feeni bas;p
    -Anon N

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  7. Suzi Q
    lol enshallah soon ;)

    geraninium
    lol tha7aktene! yes finally no 7aram ;p!

    Anon N;*
    Thannk you;*

    M10
    lol oooh mn gadhoum ;p! romeo & juliet by 9al7a bint bo 9ali7 ;p!
    wise question!
    Ba3ad 3umri mashkoura;**
    Ps ba3aaad 3umri wala 5ala9 3ayal 3yooni btshoof ur comments gabil her comments ;p!

    Madliar
    lol china 9ara7tich zayda 3an el lzoom? ;p
    lol good ;) Hope u had fun :)

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  8. Anon N;**
    shift ur commet after I replied ;p
    LOOOOOOOL afa 3alaich al7een agolha itdiza baitkoum ;p!! waaih galbich rhayiif mn zmaan chakitich tara ;p 7ada mn zman ma gimna nsoolif bil comments!! :( I miss u more ;**
    LOL eee M10 sim3eeha shtgool! a9lan we have each others numbers 9a7 Anon N? :p
    BTW! MN ZMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN MA KITABTELINA 8A9EEDA!

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  9. FIRST
    3AJEEEEEB

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  10. LOL ur not first my love ;p!
    THANK YOOOOOOOOOU!!

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  11. Lazim Lazim Lazim bibi and bander hook up they are meant to be B&B!
    maskoora 9aloo7a 3ala il long post
    Love u!
    Manoora

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  12. Falichhhhhhhhhh 6ayebbbbbbbbb ya a7la 9alooo7a;**
    afa 3laich bas ma 6ilabty shay;)

    صحيح القدر فرقنا وتاهت بيننا الأعذار القلب ياخلي أبد ما نامت أشواقه

    لا تسأل دموعي عن أوجاع الأيام اسأل عيوني من تمنى تشوفه


    ما قصدت بيوم ازعلك و باتصالي أزعجك و بتصرفاتي أجرحك أنا ببعد و أريحك

    من عرفتك لين يومك ما أبد شفت الخطا كيف تخطي والخطا ما هوب دربك


    ما راح تحس فيني إلى أن توقف عند قبري و تقول هذه كانت بالأمس تموت فيني

    ما عاد لي باقي من الناس غيرك أنت و يا حسرتي لو كان عني تـخليت


    الـمـستحيل إني أجافيك و أبعد و إن جافيتني عشت لأجلك وحيده

    لو قسي كل هالعالم أدري بقلبك حنون بـس لو قسي قلبك وين بكل هالعالم أكون


    كيف أتصل بك وأنت برساله ماتذكرني مادري هل هذا بخل؟ ولا قلبك صار ينكرني

    قال اليوم وداع لاعاد الحب يذكرك كله كان مكر وخداع والقلب عالحب مايجبرك


    أعاتبك لأنك قسيت على قلب بعمره يفداك وان مره وفيت بيحطك فعيونه ويغلاك

    man8oooool ppl its not me 3shan b3dain mo itgoolon HHHH hathy i6l3t chathaba o madri shino;p

    w a5eeeran w laysa 25eran....atmana an tanal al 89eeda 3ala i3jabkom wa ri'9akom kama 7azat 3ala e3jaaby:)

    hahhaa:P adry its veryyyy sad o heartbreaking bas hathi meezat il sh3r;p w LOV U 9alooo7a;*
    -Anon N

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  13. waaaaaay bandar a7ibaaaa hal walad !! bss maskeeen ! lool manoor shfeha tane7at eb bandar ! love the post 9alo7aa ! yala post sooooooon 7bebty love yooou

    um flfola

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  14. Anon N
    YAAAAAA SALAAAAAAAAAAAM 9a7 na8lich wala ;p! ma 3ash mn ygool 3an annonty chathaba;*

    wayed 7azat masha3irnia 9ara7a ;p
    love u too!!:**

    Um flfola
    7ata ohwa y7ibich ;p lol madri yimkin she had a plan? yimkin she hates him? wayed yimkinat ;p
    love u too;*

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  15. Baaandat yakser el 5aa6ir !! i loved the post ;**
    wanasa shaklaa akoo alot of stuff thats going to happen .. ubu bandar .. bandar.. bibi .. wanasaaa ;D keep it up ;*
    love yaaa ;*
    P.S> bibi and bandar have to be an item and bandar's dad needs to get lost ;p i dont like him ;p

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  16. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah galbi....walla walla walla ana law sheno bagool ma ra7 awafi....MUBDI3AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA bas wa5ri ur face ishwai 9aloo7a TUF TUF TUFFFFFFFFFFFF...lol

    im out of words seriously...law geltich 7elo el post bakoon wayed emga9ra ...i need to think of a word to describe it hehehe.....

    sa3at ma agra kel elblogs im following but urs MASHALLAH ADDICTIVE...agoolech ur my drug lol

    mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa7 ...a7bech 9aloooo7ti

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  17. Oh my gad the post was amasing oo fe waid no8a6 t5ali chthy mthalan :

    1- entay katbta
    2- ena baboona 7abibty oo bandar 7iiil 3agebin
    3- ena babona grandfathar he is sooo cute;$
    4- obo bandar waid msawe actionat ;p
    5- ena the post so so so so so long & i thank u about this
    6- 7adi mstansa ench waid 3asal ;****
    7- eslobch mashalah waid eshd alwa7d + e5alich et3ishen ma3ahon l story oo e3aishch a7dath oo tafa9el all most every thing

    oo law baktb mn alyom li bachr mara7 a5al9;*********

    Ee 9alo7a bas bagol shay 7ag anon n wa9lilaha kalamy thank 3ala hal kalam al 3ageb ely kl mara taktba ;D

    oo mashkara mn bitna li a5r aldenya ma ra7 awafech ;*********

    love u 7ayati mn

    awrad ;************

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  18. Dalol
    7ada! Thank you;*
    YES ALOT IS GOING TO HAPPEN JUST WAIT FOR IT!
    love u too;*
    lol maybe I should kill the father ;p!

    Nawarii;**
    Salaaaamt galbich;*
    Ba3ad 3umri Nawaaari u made my daaaaaaaaaay;****
    I really dont know what to say!! 7adi speechless!
    lol ba3ad 3umri ashwa ina my blog is not a harm drug ;p
    Wana akthaaaaar;**


    Awrad
    Thank you;*
    Tistahlain boosa 3ala kil points especially #1 ;p

    Mashkoura 7abebteee ;**

    Enshallah Anon N tigra wana agolich el 3afo bil niyaba 3anha ;)

    Wana ham agoolch mashkoura mn baitna laay a5ir el dinyaa ;**
    love u too;**

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  19. 9aloooo7aaa wainchh 7abeeebty? wlaht 3laich youmain lahya 3anna w nasyatna! "thalaath ayam yal gaasyyy lahy 3any o nassy" (8) olaa shda3wa 3ly;p i kno u said ure busy w lazim we bare with u , afhmch bl 2a5er alzam ma 3laich 7ayatch il 5a9a w shi'3lch , no pressure at all bas 7abait as2al 3anch;**

    W Awrad , mashkoora 3ala kalamch il 7ilo.. hatha mn thogch ! ;)
    -Anon N

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  20. 9aloooooooo7a wainiiich 3anaaa 9arlch youmain lahya 3anna
    o nasyatna! ;( "thaalaaaath ayaaam yal gaaasy lahy 3any
    w nassy (8)" Olaaa shda3wa 3ly;p bad adry gilty inch 7ail mash'3oola hal ayam
    w ana fahmtch w m8adra '9roofch bl2a5eer alzam ma 3laich shighlch o 7ayatch il 5a9a...bass ana 7abait as2l 3nch 9aloo7a o 6amneena as soon as u get a
    chance 2 tarach ghalya 3ala globna ;**

    Awrad, mashkooora 3La kalamch il7ilo ..hatha mn thougch;)
    -Anon N

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  21. wainichhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :( u didnt post
    i miss u
    3asa ma shar?

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  22. Ambaaih 9aloo7a madri shfe my comment 5araf;p it posted twice, sorry! Wainch:(
    -Anon N

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  23. i miss u :'(
    3asa ma shar, u ok?
    Wanich:(
    Manoora

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  24. 9aloo7aaaaaaa miss you wainich

    um flfola

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  25. Ela mu chena elaa akeeed ;p
    Hehehee eeeee I had fun and I'm tanned !!!;D

    Saroona;**

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  26. 7ayaty anon n alzen ystahl almad7

    9alo7a galby ween al post we miss u

    awrad

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  27. ya3ainy ya laaaily ya bandaaaar:P
    wayyy a7ibah hal walad

    -dee.

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  28. 9al7a bint bo 9ali7!
    shlon ya3ni?!
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    inty mako fayda m3achh! y3ni lazim biltahdeeed?
    Ok, mashy! y3ni lazim agolch itha ma ra7 taktbeen post baz3al o ba7amg o ba5ser ma3rftch?!
    9al7a, la7'9ay ine samaitch 9al7a o mo 9aloo7a, to emphasize how angry i am at u, inzain 9al7aa...tara haaa deerribalch ana adl baitkom tara walla ayeech 3ind baitkom w ABAI'9A! ya wailch mny!

    on a lighter note, I MISSSSS UUUUUUUU;******
    -Anon N

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  29. something is missing i'm used to reading ur posts daily wainich i hope everythings alright and Anon N funny threat;p
    i miss you;**

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  30. 9al7a is everything alright u used to post every night and now u dont are u ok???!
    Manoora

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  31. yeaah 9al7a wainich im starting to worry now ;(
    are u ok or what :S??

    saroona;** (one and onlyy !!)

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  32. Anon N
    Kani kani !! Ee walah 7adi lahya sam7ooni!
    Yes I am very busy! Ba3ad 3umrii mashkoura;** sa2alat 3anich el 3afya;*

    Nawarii
    Mashaar bas shwaya busy!
    I miss u too;**
    I just posted :)

    Anon N
    Lol la7atht ;p Its okay;* kaani kanii !!


    Manoora
    Miss u too!!
    Im fine 7abebte im just busy! :s

    Um flfola
    Kani kani, miss u too;*

    Madliar
    Alllah wanasa!!

    Awrad
    I just posted! sorry ta2a5art!

    Dee
    aywaaaaa ;p
    lol ee wala yin7aaaaab ;p

    Anon N

    laaaaaaa 3ad ila za3al Anon N!!
    lol shinsawi sa3at ma namshi ila bil zaaf ;p! laaa btyeene baitna? 9ibray 5al azahib my water gun! ;p

    I MISS U TOO;*****

    Geraninium
    Thank you;** Im fine el 7imdalllah
    Lol ee her threat wayed y5airr3 ;p
    Miss u too;*

    Manoora
    Im fine bas busy shwaya!

    Madliar
    Im fine 7abebeteee ;** Bas busy shwaya!!

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