Monday, October 15, 2012

Cold Nostalgia FINALE

HELLO!!!

1. I know it took me so long, but here's the finale!! I'm not sure if im going to write a story after this but let's home that I do.

2. This story goes to you, my biggest supporter, my joy, my best friend and my everything!!!

ENJOY IT!

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Reem looked at Ali, she was completely speechless, she didn’t know what to say and she didn’t know what he wanted to tell her.

Ali: please gi3day?

Reem kept looking at him.

Ali: please?

Reem sighed and sat down.

Ali: eb tism3ene lay el akhir

Reem kept staring at him: shasma3 3ali? shbtgol akthar min ele gilta!!

Ali: bas ana ma gilt shay!

Reem: CHAN ZAIN MA GILT SHAAY!! CHAN ZAIN SAKIT WALA INIK TGOLE MABROOK!!! 3aali ana 3indi ma tkalmne ahwan min inik tkalmne eb broud!

Reem felt all choked up, she was so close to crying..she took a deep breath and closed her eyes..she didn’t want to cry.

Ali's heart sunk, it was the first time he ever feels that way, he felt how sad she was, he felt how whatever he says matters a lot  to her…he matters a lot.



Ali: asif

Reem sighed.

Ali: walhan 3alaich!!

Reem's eyes were full of tears, she missed him too, she missed him so much.

Ali: Reeem 3araft qeemtich lama 7asait ini khasartich!! o bas ma ra7 yin3ad ele 9ar!!! Ma ra7 akhasrich mara thanya!

Reem didn’t want to blink so the tears would fall from her eyes.

Reem: 3ali please bas

Reem didn’t want to make a scene and cry, she didn’t want to believe Ali and set her hopes high then she'll get disappointed.

Reem stood up.

Ali: ba3awthich Reem.. 9adgene ra7 a3awthich

Reem wiped her tears away.

Reem: 7arik sayartik please

Ali sighed: Faisal feeha

Reem looked at Ali one last time and walked out.
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Ali walked out of starbucks with heavy steps, He found Faisal parking his car, Faisal quickly got out of the car.

Faisal: 3LAAAIWI!! SH9AAR? CHINA REEM KANAT TABCHE?

Ali sighed.

Faisal: ayshay? Tikfaaaa!!! Shbnsawe? Ma kan 3indina ila hal fikra!!!

Ali smiled: imsh wiyay

Faisal: wain?

Ali: irkaaab elsayara o ba3dain agoolik!!
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Reem parked her car in front of the house, She looked at her reflection in the mirror, she didn’t want her mother to notice her red eyes and nose, she cried all the way back home, she loved Ali, she didn’t want to lose him, but he hurt her.

She saw Asma's car parking behind her, Reem didn’t move from her car until Asma came and knocked on her window.

"6IL3AAAAY!!"

Reem blinked, her eyes burned her when she closed them. She slowly got out of the car.

Asma: Faisal gale sh9aar!! Malich shighil feeh!! Let's eat junk food o have fun!

Reem gave Asma half a smile.
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"Mashkoor ma ga9art!! O asif dagait 7azat el 7aza!! 7abeeb tislam"

Faisal: HAAA SHGAAL?

Ali smiled: biyeee
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Reem was in bed, Asma was texting the whole time.

Reem: wain ele galat lets have fun?

Asma suddenly jumped from her place: KHAL NIL3AB MAKE OVER!

Reem: ha?

Asma: KHAL A7I6LICH MAKE UP WASAWE SHA3RICH!

Reem: faj2a?

Asma: eeee!!! 9adgene bitaghayar nafseetch!

Asma walked to Reem and pulled the covers: GOMAAAAAY
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"Jahiz?"

Ali took a deep breath: ee bas khal nmir starbucks gabilha

Faisal laughed: yallaaa imsh!! Ana asog!
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"Tshaaawgeeeeen"

Reem smiled: khala9na? arid frashe?

Asma: LAAA!! TRIDEN FRASHICH WANA MSAWYA SHA3RICH O 7A6ATLICH MAKEUP?

Reem nodded.

Asma: imshaaaay khal ni6la3!!! Libsay yalla

Reem: asom wala mali khilg

Asma held Reem's hand: imshay khal ni6la3 3ashan tghayren jaw!

Reem: Asoom!!

Asma looked through Reem's closet: Allllaaaaah hal dress yshawig!!! Min zman ma libasteeeh!

Reem: 7ada khabaa 3ala 6al3a!!

Asma: WE WANT TO CHANGE THE MOOD REMEMBER?

Reem: la 3ad asom mu lay hal daraja!! Shda3wa!? 

Asma: enzain bas we cruise!! La nanzil mukaaan!

Reem: hmmm ok! Ana asooog!!!

Asma: ok!

Asma applied simple makeup and put her hair in a neat bun, she got in a simple black dress that she found in Reem's closet.

Asma: KHALASTAAAAY?!

Reem: waaay 7ade a7is 3umre mikhtaba!! Bas 3ala goltich taghyeer bil nafsiya

Asma giggled: ee eee el libs wil makeup AND HEELS DOES MAGIC!!

Reem: la la 3ad mu lay darajat heels!! Plus ma a3arf asog fehom! Emshay bas emshay!

Asma: ok yalla ana basbigch ta7at o asta2thin min omch!

Reem: ok

Reem wore her flip flops, grabbed her mobile and started looking for her car key, waina? Kan bede lama radait!! 7a6aita 3al 6awla mit2akda!!  Ifff eldar 3afsa!!! Ohhh akhaf Asom khathita!!

Reem left her room and walked to the living room: ASOOOM!! YUMMMA!!?

Haw wainhom?

Reem: ASOOOM!!!!

Asma: ana ta7aaat!!

Reem: mifta7e 3indch?!!

Asma: ee ee ta3alay!!

Reem walked down the stairs with her eyes on her mobile, even if she was let down by him she wished that she'd find a text from Ali, she reached the last step raised her head and saw Him.

She saw Ali standing in front of her, wearing his dishdasha and ghitra.

She couldn’t breathe, a lot of ideas were going through her head, one of them is that he's not real, that Ali isn’t really standing in front of her, IN HER HOUSE.

Reem: Ali?

Ali: hala?

Reem: shitsawe? Umm laish? Ughh laish 3indina?

Ali: mako wala fe cham wriga oboch kan el mafrouth ywaqi3ha o nisa yakhith'ha min elsharika

Reem sighed, she was kind of depressed and let down again.

Reem: oh ok 3ayal

Reem turned around: ASOOM!!

Ali: tara lazm tshofen elawrag

Reem turned back at Ali: laish?

Ali: la2ana 3gub ma titkharjain entay eb tamskeen elqisim 3ugbe o ana barid London

Reem's heart sunk.

Ali: ya3ni lazm twaq3een elwriga, btkonen na2eb ra2ees 7age

Reem nodded: ok

Reem turned back again: Asoom!!

She said it with a low tone this time, she was so close to cry,

Ali: Reem

Reem turned around and for the last time she just wished that Ali wouldn’t let her down and say something.

Reem: na3am?

Ali: lazm twaq3een elwriga al7een etha ma 3alaich kalafa

Reem's eyes were full of tears, and she was let down for the fourth time in the same day by the same person.

Reem: wain elwriga?

Ali pointed: bil 9ala hnak

Reem: bil estiqbal?

Ali nodded.

Reem walked to the living room, she opened the door and saw something that she wasn’t expecting, her family, Asma, Faisal and Ali's family and a face that she didn’t know.

She felt her heart beat in her ears, her chest was going up and down, she couldn’t breathe.

Reem took a step back and pointed at the man that she didn’t know: mno hatha?

Reem felt Ali's hand on her back, he pushed her closer to him..






"Hatha el malach 7abebte"  


24 comments:

  1. thats so short!!, you cant enda story like that ://

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  2. a very cute ending :') i loved it!!!

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  3. Tawny agra Dreaming with a Broken Heart for the millionth time ^-*
    Wlla achof Cold Nostalgia FINALE
    Aaaaaahahhhhhhh been waiting so long for this post a5ern tzawijaaw \☺/
    LOVED IT mashalllllah wayed 7lwww T_T
    I really realllly *mn kl galby* do hope that you don't stop
    Best of luck
    -Ai

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  4. amazing story but the ending isn't very realistic , if he proposed as an ending it would be better but over all amazing story thank you !

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  5. OMG why did it have to end :( i loveddddddddddddddd the story <3 please start a new storryyyy :D

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  6. 9AAAAAL7AAAA AAAAAAAH!!
    THAT WAS AMAZING!!
    6ool il post il ibtesamaa shagaa 7aljiii!!!
    I'm gonna miss this so so so so much :c your blog, stories + 3ali oo reem :c
    Ahhhh I loved every single part of itttt!!!

    Hubba Hubba

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  7. 9al7aaaaa Finallyy u Postedd !! Love it ♥.♥ nby b3ad ! If u can write some EPILOGUES ! About them even asma w fi9al !! And I agree with hubba hubba we 're gonna miss every thing :( I realy Love ur blog Pleas Don't Stop !!

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  8. THE CUTEST FINALE IN THE HISTORY OF FINALES!

    AND TO ALL THOSE HATERS DIE DIE DIE!

    WE LOVE SALO7A :**********

    -Joury

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  9. Cuteeeeee!!! ♥♥♥
    3AJEBAA WALLAH!

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  10. ALI AND REEEEEM❤❤❤

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  11. dont stop writing please :(

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  12. Umbay thank youu! Mashkoora Wayed oo I love your stories so much! 3abalyy Ina this story ma fee happy ending 7addy 5tara3t!
    - D :)

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  13. OMAAAGAAAAAD. la. aby a3rf akthar:( bs i have to admit.. I LOVED IT.

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  14. Why do you have to be SOOO perfect?? Mashaalla...
    Bravoooo !! Ur ending 5ayyaaaal!! Don't care about what they say believe me they are jealous ... 1 question: u'll wright another story?? Guess what. I just found out that u wrote previous stories... I know I'm stupid bas shasawi ya5ii kasooola aana... Bas mashallah I found out in time. I was about to sucide from boredom .. Chinni 6awalt?? Ohh 3ayal byeee see you later( if there was any later) and 3eidechh mbarak ya 7lwa <3
    Mwaaaaah ;****

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  15. We love love love every single story. Please start a new one.

    xxx

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  16. AMAZING !!!!!! I LOVED THE STORY!!!!!! <3 THANKS SOOO MUCH !!! and sorry for not commenting this fatra i was a bit busy .. anyways its AMAZING !!!!!!!

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  17. read it for the 3rd time, cried like it was the first :(

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  18. OMG THIS IS PERFECT I LOVE IT OMG :') THIS STORY <3 the way you write your stories is interesting. I really enjoyed reading them so far. O b9ara7a wayed 7abait ena it's romantic but always with happy endings :D <3

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  19. ALLLLLLAAAAAAYYYY 7ddhhh cuuuttte 3lliiii :(
    7rkat w fn alt56e6, 6b3n kila bf9'lsh l2nsh alkatba almbd3a al56eerraa :p<3<3<3!!!

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