Friday, August 23, 2013

Empty Spaces -12-

Hello!!

*Thank you all for the supportive and lovely comments on the last post! I'll reply to them as soon as I can!!

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*Silent readers please stop being silent?  

Enjoy it!!
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Barak couldn’t sleep at all, he kept rolling in his bed.

Ifff lay mita wana atgalab khal agoum a7san

He looked at his watch and it was 6am, he pulled off the covers and got out of bed, walked to the bathroom brushed his teeth and washed his face , the cold water refreshed him a bit.

Barak opened the curtains and the sunrays filled the room, he remembered Lama.. She loves the sun, he didn’t know if he should go talk to her or leave her calm down for a couple of days.

Barak walked to the living room and opened the curtains, he looked outside and saw Lama's car.

Ma3qola nayma ta7at 3ind Shoug? Walain Shoug aked darat! shifikne min elsanha!!

Barak rushed to the elevator, he slowly walked to Shoug's room.
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Lama didn’t leave the house, it was so late and she was afraid to drive. She spent the night talking to Shoug about her situation with Barak and just like their old days Shoug always made Lama feel better.

She was waiting for the sun to rise so she could go home.

Lama opened her eyes, and looked at her mobile it read 6:15am.

Ughh ma nimt ila sa3a!

She got out of bed and walked to the bathroom.
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Barak slowly opened the door, His eyes were looking for Lama.. and he didn’t find her.

Wainha? Mo nayma 3ind Shoug o sayart'ha bara!!!

He slowly closed the door and walked downstairs to the living room.
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Lama left the bathroom, changed her clothes, grabbed her purse and walked out of Shoug's room and down the stairs.

She was walking to the door when she heard her name.

"Lama!"

Lama couldn’t believe her ears, she looked to her left and found Barak sitting on the couch.

"Na3am" She replied without looking at him.

Barak: Ma radaitay el bait!

Lama: la ma radait, kanat el sa3a thalath el fayer aked ma ra7 arid!

It was the first time Lama is that cold with him, she didn’t even look at him.

Barak: m3azma triden bait mama Noora?

Lama: ee

Barak stood in front of Lama: Lama tikfaain

Lama: Baraak inta tikfa!! Bas ir7amne!

Barak: Shoug darat?

Lama nodded.

Lama: 3an ithnik Barak

Lama left Barak and walked outside, he rushed after her.

Barak: o ahale? Shagolhom?

Lama: Barak min 9ijik? Bas hatha ele haamik?  Shtgol 7ag ahalik? Wanaa? Shbe9er 3alay? Shbe9er 3alaina?

Barak: Lama ta3awithay min iblees o riday 9i3day foug wiyaay!

Lama: mani 9a3da Barak!!

Barak: inzain khalich 3ind Shoug! Bas la t'hideen el bait o tamsheen tikfaain!

Lama: laish? 3ashan ahalik ma yis2lonik o titwahag?

Barak: la! La2ane ta3awadt inich tkoneen mawjoda 7oule! Lama ma gidart anam ams!
Lama: Baraaak mo ga3id taksir kha6ri wala mishtahya ashofik!!!  


Barak sighed.

Lama knew that Barak didn’t realize that he might lose her, she needed to make a move that will make him choose between her or Fay.
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"mintay mdawma?"

Lama: la mali khilg! O mo nayma 3adil!

Shoug: tabeen ni6la3 intaghada?

Lama: ee!! Uff 7adi mayta you3!

Shoug: o bamir elsharika !

Lama didn’t want to see Barak: la Shogo mabe!

Shoug: waay Lama la tanzleen! Aana bas bamir akhith shay min oboy!

Lama: ok khosh mani nazla!

Shoug: akhalis el class o ayech

Lama walked to her closet, she really felt like dressing up, She quickly grabbed her black dress.

Iff ana shfene kil aswad!!

She put her dress back in the closet, She grabbed her pink dress, it will look perfect with her tanned skin and a statement necklace.
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"Laaaa wala 7aaa6 3alay!! Kila shoug why were you absent! Shoug are you sleeping? WAY NA3AM!"

Lama laughed at Shoug.

Shoug: wintay heey basich absence! Hatha course takharoj rif3aay mu3adilch o jablay!

Lama nodded: 7athir

Shoug parked the car, The parking was so scary and a security guard was roaming 
around.

Lama: yumaa!! Ykhari3 el mukan!

Shoug: daloo3a!! dgeega o aye!

Lama: la la banzil wiyach!!

Lama and Shoug walked to the elevator.
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"MAYNONA? SHYAYBCH?"

"Ma trid 3alay! O mako ila ayek dawamik"

"La la rasmy istakhafitay!!!"
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The elevator door opened, Lama raised her head and saw Barak open the door of his office and point his finger out, he looked so angry.

Lama saw a woman step out, Long black hair, skinny jeans and a black top again.
It was Fay.

6aradha? Wala tahawishaw? Ma3qola 9ij mu ga3id ya36eeha wayh o ihya ele 
lazga feeh?

Fay was walking to the elevator when Lama stopped her.

"Hi Fay"   


27 comments:

  1. AHH OHH NO!! dramaa dramaa dramaa!! i am loving the way this story is going \o/

    thank you so much for posting!!
    ma shiba3t min barrak oo lama :c

    hubba hubba

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  2. yaaay awsome post!

    lulu xx

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  3. abaay abaay abaay wai3 fayo tqith maal kaffff!!
    loved it xo

    -Beeka

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  4. Akraah faaay:)!!
    Please post ASAP

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  5. laaa!!!!!!!!!!! abe a3rf sheseeeeeeerrrrr;( shal fay ely mako karama khalas tizawaj fileeehaa

    laish wagftay 3nd el hi��

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    1. 7adha!
      3ashan titshawgon 7ag el next post!
      Thank you!

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  6. Ya bint 7aram 3alaich!! 7isee feenaaa!! Al7een lazim nin6r layn next Friday :(

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  7. Awaal mrdait min il3rs jablt ilaptop 7g ilpost!

    Bamout abe a3rf hal Fay shsalft'ha filmjtm3:)

    loveuu salou7a;*

    - fa6aami.

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  8. looveee loveee loveee!!!! can't wait till next Friday!

    -js

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  9. Ok so I'm a silent reader or I guess I was :p
    awal shay I wanted to thank you for the effort u put in writing the story and posting a new part weekly ;*
    thany shay I love love love all ur stories, I have read them all w this one 7aail tshaawwg , mashallah u are so talented ♥
    can't wait for the next post ;;*
    Z

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    1. Thank you for not being silent anymore Z!!
      Thanks a lot!!!

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  10. I LOVEE THE STORY!! oo i cant wait ly friday el yaaay, mashallaaahh such a great story oo shay yedeed!! Gooddddluckkkk allaahh ewafgichh oo ur one of the greatest!!
    LOVEE YOUUU SO SO MUCHHH
    A

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  11. AMAZING!!!! AGAIN!!! i hope lama can see that barak really loves her!!! yalla next post
    -SBF

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    1. THANK YOU!!!
      The next post is on Friday enshallah ;)

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  12. Tawa elyoum galoly 3an elqi9a o garaitha kilahaa!! Its amazingg!!! Mashallah, aaand i cant wait for the next post , enjooy whatever your doing :***

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    1. Thank you so much!!! I'm glad that they told you about the story;**

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  13. Ohhh myy godd this post is sooo gwajs!!!! I know it makes no senss butt smeh.... I LOVED LOVED LOVED UR POST!!! ur cliffhangers thoughh!!!!!! Keep it uppp!!!

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  14. Where's my post!!!!
    Ehehehehe anyways no pressure take you time Baib
    I really enjoy reading your posts can't wait for the next post!!!!!!!!

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