Sunday, April 4, 2010

Giving up? {4}

Quwa;*
Shlounkoum?

1. Shloun ur mid terms so far?!

2. uff mali 5lg adris!

3. ele mo faham shay bil story ys2al!! :p (7asait nafsi a teacher ;p)

4. imdal3atkoum ib hal story kil el posts EXTRA LONG! la7a'6taw? :p

5. imdal3atkoum bil posts el 6wal dal3oni bil comments el wayed :p

6. Enjoy it ;**

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11:00

Guy: Ya 7abebe ana mit2akad ina ohwa! Wild yerana mn wi7na 9'3ar!

….: Obb 5osh a5bar walah! Yalla ana akalmik ba3dain

*Click*
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11:05

TALA!

Tala jumped out of her place: na3am istatha?!

Bibi: wain 3i9am?!

Tala: haa?!

Bibi: WAIN 3I9AM?

Tala: lal7en ma yah!

Bibi looked at her watch: el sa3a 11 O LAL7EN MA YAH?

Bibi walked towards her office & then heard Tala say "opps sorry"

She turned around & found Tala's water bottle spilled on Bandar's papers

He quickly picked up the papers & Tala stood looking at him

Bibi: TALA SA3DEEH!

Tala was shocked that Bibi was still in the room so she quickly moved towards Bandar's office.

"Ma yi7tay" Bandar said with a cold tone

Bibi was shocked ina bala3ha O sikat! 7ata 5aza ma 5azha

Bandar mit3awid mn el thanawiya O kutibi kanat tinbag, a'3ra'6i tit7athaf O mako daga ma sawoha fene laish? Lai2ani dayman sakit O ma a5ith 7agi mn a7ad!*sigh*

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12:15

Bibi rushed into the meeting room she was late

Grandfather: Haa Babona 7abebte kil el staff mawjod?

She looked around at the faces quickly and nodded

She walked towards 3i9am

Bibi: 5air 3i9am ta2a5art el youm?!

3i9am: ee wala el walda it3abat O makan 3indha a7ad ywadeha el mistashfa

Bibi didn’t believe him: aha, salamat

She looked at her staff: haa jahzeen?

They all nodded.

Grandfather: awalan a7ib ara7ib ib Bandar el flani *smile*

Bibi smiled at him & he gave her a slight smile

Awal mara yibtisim! Weeh shda3a 3alay wain ibtisiam his lips just moved!

She could her grandfather talking but she wasn’t with him.

Grandfather: yalla tifa'6ilaw

Her grandfather sat beside her & waited for every employer to present his or her idea

3i9am went first and presented his idea… all the staff gave their ideas, and the only one left was Bandar

Bibi: yalla Bandar

Bandar gulped and stood up.

He took a deep breath and started his presentation for his idea; he kept his eyes on his stuff the walls but never on anyone's face!

Everyone was silent when he finished

He stared at Bibi & her grandfather with his big black eyes

Grandfather smiled and stood up

Grandfather: 9ij 5itamoha misk!

Bandar sighed a sigh of relief

Grandfather: sima3taw el fikra?! Hathi el afkar el san3a wil 6ayba!

Bibi stood up.

Grandfather: Bibi yuba i3tamday fikrat Bandar O mn bachr ibdaw shi'3il 3alaiha

Bibi nodded.

3i9am was furious he stood up & left the meeting room.

Bibi was shocked of the way he reacted, her grandfather didn’t say a thing.

Grandfather: tifa'6ilaw 3ala mikatibkoum O nadoli 3i9am

Bandar was picking his stuff while the rest of the staff were leaving the room

Only Bandar, Bibi and the grandfather were in the room

Grandfather: Bandar?

Bandar turned around quickly

Bandar: na3am?

Grandfather: dayman tithakar el insan el naji7 ohwa ele dayman mo7arab mn el nass

Bandar nodded.

Grandfather: la7ad yhimik O rakiz ib shi'3lik yuba, mashallah 3alaik mubdi3!

Bandar: mashkour wayed Bo 3abdallah

Bibi smiled & left the room with Bandar

They entered the elevator together

Bibi: sh3alaik yadi 7abik

Bandar smiled.

Bibi ok hathi 9ij smile!

Bibi: malik shi'3il ib 3i9am y7ib ykoun bil mu8adima dayman

He nodded.

*Ting*

The elevator's door opened and Bibi saw 3i9am in her face

3i9am: mn 9ijkoum Bibi?! Ta5thon fikrat hatha?!

Bibi was shocked

3i9am: 6al3aaay 6al3aay 7ata ma ydafi3 3an nafsa! Mako sha59iya!

Bandar went closer to 3i9am & faced him

"Ele ma 3inda sha59iya ohwa ele yogaf ib ni9 dawama y9ari5 O mo 3adla hayba wala i3tibar ib mukana" Bandar said calmly

Bibi heard him & she was glad that he defended him self !

"Wili ma 3inda sha59iya ba3ad ohwa ele y9er 3umra 25 sina O oboh lal7en ysiba O yfashla jidam 5alg allah" 3i9am replied

Bandar was shocked! Shdarah?!

Bibi couldn’t hear what 3i9am said his voice was low but she noticed how Bandar was affected by 3i9am's words.

3i9am ignored her presence and entered the elevator.
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Tala: wai3 gi6a3! lazm in6afrah lain yist8eel!

3i9am: etha bitim mawjod bil 8isim, biy6ali3 kil el afkar el 8awiya O kilina bin6ir mn el sharika O bitim ohwa!

Mona: etha kilish kilish be9er ohwa na2ib Bibi O ma3ashah a3la mn ma3ashna O bedal3ona!

Tala: uff bas la itfawlon! El salfa Simple! Inlawi3 chabda lain y8adim isti8alta!

3i9am: ok bas shloun?

Tala: fakraw!
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He sat on his disk and stared at his computer

Shdarah?

Shdarah ?

Mo ma38ola shayar el salfa! Hatha yadri!

3ashan chithi mist5if fene O mistilimne i6naza mn awal ma tiwa'6aft, uff bas mo gadir ashit'3il

He rubbed his forehead
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Shno el shay ele gala 3i9am 7ag Bandar O i3fisa fog ta7at?!

*Knock knock*

Bibi: tifa'6al

Bibi turned her chair towards the door

Bandar: istatha?

Bibi: ahlain Bandar? Itfa'6al

Bandar *clears throat*

Bibi: Bandar wayhik a9far ta3ban?!

Bandar: la bas rasi m9adi3 O mo 3arif ashti'3il

Bibi: tabe panadol?

Bandar uff shloun bafahimha ine baro7 el bait?!

Bibi: Bandar?!

Bandar: la mashkoura, rasi y3awirni la2ani ma nimt 3adil el bar7a

Bibi: oh, ok umm tabe tro7 el bait tirta7?

Bandar uff ma ba'3aitay?!: etha mafe mani3

Bibi: la 6ab3an mafe mani3! Ma ga9art el youm

Bandar: Mashkoura

Bibi: salamat

Bandar: Allah ysalmich

Bandar left the office… picked up his stuff & left the company and drove back home.
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He got into the house

It was empty

Bandar: yumaaaa! Yuma!

"Mama is not here!" The maid told him

Bandar: inzain Mary make me coffee & bring it downstairs

Bandar nizal el sirdaab

He sniffed the smell of paint & smiled

He was an artist, it was his hobby since he was a kid, no one ever saw his paints because he never allowed anyone to

Kan y6ali3 kil ele 7as feh ib rasmatah! Kil ma kan oboh yzifa kan ya8mit.ha ib galba O yanzil el sirdaab yarsim! Kil ma kanaw y2athona bil madrisa kan yanzil el sirdaab yarsim!

9ar el sirdaab kila 7aga matroos law7at O alwan

All his paintings were dark and mysterious.

*sigh* shasawi? A8dim isti8alti?

Maid: baba Bandar?

Bandar turned around and took his cup of coffee

Bandar: shukran

He took a sip, held his brush & started painting

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Grandfather: 5ala9 3ayal bal'3eh bachr

Bibi: Ok, el 9ara7a ana ma ashof a7san mina wala ashof a7ad yistahil kithra!

Grandfather nodded
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Tala suddenly jumped out of her place & ran towards 3i9am

3i9am: shfeech?!

Tala: 3indi 5i6a!

Mona jumped from her seat to 3i9am's office

Mona: goolay!


15 comments:

  1. waiii3 7ameeeer! ifff 7a8eeeereeen! bas ifakroon 3aan il floos!
    ooh..ohh ish9ayr bil denya ana first;D i hope soo!
    nexxt posstt!:*

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  2. FIRSSST =D !!!!

    HYPER

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  3. :(
    3abali first
    yallah nxt TIme inshallah
    el post AMAZINNNNNNG
    LUv U ;**

    HYPER

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  4. bluelilies
    7adhoum!
    lol 7ada sh9ayir? :p
    Soon inshallah :)

    HYPER
    Second :p
    Thank you!!
    Love u too :*

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  5. yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay 9al7aa thank you for posting 5alech chtheee 5oosh blog ;**** oo 7aadha 7adhaa 7adhaa 3ajeeba el story oo 7adda 3ajeeb your wrighting ambaaaaaih 7addee magdar ab6er baroo7 agraaa luv uuuuuuuuuu <3 xoxo

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  6. Habahebo Thank you for commenting;**
    7adich 7adich 7adich a3jaab ;p Thank you;**
    Enjoy it !! love u tooo ;**

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  7. wooooow wanasa 3ajbhum shighlaa ;D
    waaay shhaal 3i9am o hal thntain 3i9abaa !!!!
    laa ystgeel let him be once in his life stroog !!!
    'yanin bibi's grandpaa ;**

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  8. ee! ;p
    shiftay shloun!?
    7adah 6ayib iyanin!

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  9. inarfzouuunn oo i7rouuunn oo ..etc.;p
    shinnoo hathaa?!
    7aramm 3laikum may9eer it5aloon il rayal fi 7ala?!
    kilishh ya3nii la min il shi'3il,madrisaa, baitt
    walla maystahel kil hal 3athab!
    ...min9ijii kilhum yabeelhum 6ag oo ta2deeeb!
    btw thnxx for the extra longg postss;**
    -M10

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  10. HEY MAY9EER!:P I WAS SUPPOSED TO BE 1ST!:P M hal kalam mwajhlch lil3ilm ya3ni...;p

    7araaaaaaaaaaaaaaam walllaaaaa!! laish isawoon feeh chithi?! ile feeh mkafeeeh! La 7awla wa 8uwat ilabillah!! Nass...mako i7sas mako thimeer wla thimaaa! ma yr7moon il wa7d ! o Lil2saf amthal w ashkal 3i9am il washka oho o 5amita wayd ga3d itzeed hal ayam ! :( Adri iny wayd infi3altbl post bas shasawi the post really got to me hatha la2na inty kateba mubdi3aaaa!!
    ya36eech 3afyaaa 3la hal posttt w ashkurch shukrrrrrrrr jazeeeeeeel 3ala hal post o tslmly hal anaml walla ;pP! ;*****
    -Anon N

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  11. way3aaaaaaa shino hatheel ye5ar3oon !! maskeeen bandar yakser el 5a6er o bibi 7adha 6aybaaa !!!!! el 8o9aa 3ajebaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa pllzz post sooooooon :P


    UM FLfoLA;**

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  12. I hate 3i9am :S
    he's such a bully.. sa5eef..

    w bandar is soo sweet..
    i think i love him already :)

    we want action in the story soon please :)
    post asap :)

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  13. M10
    Shofay M! bada5lich el 8i9a tkaf5enhoum! :p
    ur welcome 7abebte tistahloon ;**

    Anon N;*
    LOL baskoum imda7ar intay wiyaha ;p
    I agree 9araw matroosen lil asaf!
    Ba3ad 3oumrii mashkoouuuuuuuura;*

    UM FLfoLA;**
    7adhoum!
    Thank you;* will post soon inshAlah :)

    Shushu
    Next posts feha action inshAllah! :)

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  14. not nice att all((s5ifa))

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  15. Ur story is amazaing right now!! The first one was BEYOND AMAZING! And I'm a silent reader from Dubai but I LOVED ur way in writing! I can imagine EVERYTHING happening infornt of me! Keep it up! ;D

    -MSG

    P.S: u got the idea of Bandar painting some mysterious drawings full of dark colors from musalsal "3rs eldam"?? He was also a m3a8ad kid?? ;p

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