Saturday, April 3, 2010

Giving up? {3}

Quwa;*

1.IM REALLY BUSY!

2. shlounkoum?!

3. Hal part ham fe 7achi, mako action bil 8i9a lal7en la2ana abekoum tit3arfoun 3ala el characters!

4. what do u think about the story so far?!

5. I didn't recheck the post so 6awfaw badliyat :p

6. EXTRA LONG POST

7. Anon N? WAINICH YA BNAYA?!

ENJOY IT ;*

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The door opened slowly & a tall figure entered.

She lifted her head & saw him… the pale guy with the sad eyes Bandar!

She smiled, he didn’t return her smile.

Bibi: 7ayak allah Bandar, tifa'6al!

Bandar sat down: Allah y7ayech

Bibi: thak el youm 3goob ma mishait 6ala3t el i3lanat ele msaweehoum, Mashallah shi'3il imratab O afkar 7ilwa.

At that moment Bandar remembered telling his father that the company called him again "la tistanis wayed, shaybon ib muwa'6af nafsik" that was his father's reply & it broke him from the inside.

Bibi: Bandar? Ma3ay?

Bandar: ha? Ee ee ma3ach

Bibi: ok 3ayal tibda shi'3il bachr?

Bandar uff ma sima3t wala kilma!

Bibi shakla ma sima3 wala kilma!

Bandar: uhh... inshallah

*Knock Knock*

Bibi: tifa'6aaal

Zaid: Baboooooooon, yadi yabena fog!

Zaid saw a man sitting

Zaid: oh asif az3ajtkoum

Bibi stood up.

Bibi: mashkour Bandar, nshofik bachr inshallah

Bibi Amid Ede wala la2? Uff a5af amidha ma yrid ysalim 3alay! Insan '3areeb!

Bandar: inshallah

He turned around & faced Zaid

Zaid: Bandar?! Baaaaaaaaaaaih inta mn waaain 6ala3t?!

Bandar stared at Zaid with his dark sad eyes, Zaid el flani akthar wa7id ma7bob bil thanawiya! '3areeba yathkirni !

Bandar shook hands with him

Bandar: Ahlaaain Zaid sha5barik?

Zaid: b5aair el 7imdallah! Wainik ya5i ma tbayin!

Bandar Shfe ya7achene chini kint wayed abayin wana bil thanawiya!

Bandar looked really confused, Zaid pressed on Bandar's hand.

Bandar Shfee hatha?!

Zaid: Baboon yalla ana basbigich maktab yadi!

Bibi: ok!

Zaid & Bandar left the room together

While they were waiting for the elevator

Zaid: Bandar… adri ina ma kan lik 7is bil thanawiya! Shloun tabe tisht'3il ib 8isim el taswee8 winta lal7en hadi O ma tit7acha?

Bandar: *sigh*

Zaid: 3umoman sima3t ina yadi wayed mistanis 3ala taw'6eefik 3indina fa shid 7alik

Bandar: inshallah

Zaid: yalla 7abebe nshofik

Bandar left the company and went back home

Shloun a'3ayir sha59ete 3gob kil hal 3umir?! Zaid mn 3oumra Ohwa ijtma3i! 3inda rabi3 wayed, ma y5ali diwaniya ila 6abha, wana!
Ana 7ata lama ri7t America ma gidart akawin 9ada8at wala sha59ete el '63eefa ti8wa!
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-The next day-

His alarm rang earlier today… He went to the bathroom & stood in front of his closet with his blank face expression.

He blinked once.

Twice.

Took out his cloths wore them & went downstairs.

He found his mother eating her breakfast

Mother: ta3al ig3ad 7abebe

He sat down silently.

Mother: la t7ate 7abebe inshallah tirta7 ib hal sharika el yideeda

He just nodded…

YA FA6MA! WAIN '3ITRITI!

His mother jumped out of her seat & ran towards his father

His blank face expression didn’t change

YALLA 5AL9ENE

His father grabbed a chair & sat down & started eating.

Awal ma oboh bida yakil Bandar wagaf akil.

Father: sh3indik ga3id mn el 9ib7?

Bandar: el youm awal youm dawam

Father: wa'6ifook?! Inshallah ma tafshil wefanshonik!

Bandar stayed silent

He wiped his mouth & stood up.

Bandar cleared his throat: ana mashi

His father didn’t say anything, he grabbed his mobile, wallet & file and left the house
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She stood in front of her closet!

Uff shalbis el youm?!

She wore a grey dress with a white blazer, pulled her hair into a pony tale
Took her bag & wore her black Tory Burch flats & she was ready to go!

She skipped down the stairs

SHWAAAAY SHWAAAAAAAAAAY LA T6E7EN!

Bibi giggled at her grandmother: inshallah!

Grandmother: Bas sha6ra inshallah O inshallah O wala marra 9ij sima3tay el kalam!

She went to her grandmother & gave her a hug

Bibi: Yalla mama ana mashya!

Grandmother: tarayagtay?

Bibi: ee kalait ma3a baba s3ood!

Bibi looked at herself in the mirror once again.

Hmmm nagi9ni 8alb!

She ran upstairs to her room

GILNA SHWAAAAY SHWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

She grabbed her silver tiffany key necklace & ran downstairs

BIIIIIIIIIIIIIBBBBBBBBBBBBBBI!

She laughed: a5ir mara ariki'6 bil daray wa3ad!

Grandmother: kil youm wa3ad!

She grabbed her bag & file & ran to her car
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*Ting*

Bandar entered the elevator… he closed his eyes & took a deep breath & then he heard…

Wagfaaaaw el elevator please!

He clicked on the button that opens the door.

She entered the elevator.

How can she always have that smile on her face? He thought.

Bibi: mashkour!

She lifted her head & saw Bandar.

Bibi: oh Bandar! 9aba7 el 5air

Bandar: 9aba7 el nor istatha

*Ting*

Sawsan ran towards Bibi at once, took her files & bag.

Bibi: Sawsan jahaztaw maktab Bandar?

She nodded & pointed to the office that is in front of Tala's

Bibi: *smile* wayed zain!

Bibi turned and found Bandar looking around, so she turned to her staff

Bibi: 9ABAAA7 EL 5AIR!

All: 9aba7 el nor

Bibi: mno lal7en ma yah?

3e9am: Tala 3indha maw3id 6abeb galat bita2a5ar shwaya

Bibi: ee Bali'3atni ams, Ok Ya jima3a! Hatha Bandar el flani

She pointed at Bandar; he just stared at them with no reaction

Bibi: mashallah 3alaih 3inda afkar mubdi3a O besa3idna bil fatra el yaya!

No one said anything they all just stared at each other.

Bibi 3arifta 3ala baij el 8isim

Bibi: mno ib ya5tha ib tour?

They all sat on their disks & didn’t even look at him

Bibi: 3e9am?!

He looked at her with his eyes wide open, she gave him a cold stare

Bibi: Bandar roo7 shof el mukan ma3a 3e9am O 3gob ta3ali el maktab

Bandar nodded.

3e9am got up & Went to Bandar

3e9am: Tara el sharika mo mn kubrha! Kil 6abi8 feh 8isim! 6abi8na ma feh ila mikatibna kahi jidamik O '3urfat ijtma3at O '3urftain 7ag el photocopying O -----

Bandar nodded & sat on his disk

After a while Sawsan came & stood in front of him, he raised his head

Bandar: na3am?

Sawsan gave him a paper

Bandar: shno hathi?

Sawsan: password el computer taba3ak!O emailik! Ma7ada ib ya3rfo '3airik inta O el iztaize Bibi

He nodded: shukran

Sawsan: 3afawn
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*Knock knock*

Bibi: tifa'6aaaal

The door slowly opened & Bandar entered the room

Bibi: Ahlain *smile*

Bandar: hala fech

Bibi: ha shrayik bil sharika?!

Bandar didn’t tell her that 3e9am didn’t even take a step with him

Bibi: tifa'6al istree7

He sat down

Bibi: Bandar el 8isim lil asaf '63eef! O mashallah 3gob ma shift afkarik wayed istanast

She cleared her throat

Bibi: fa ana mit2amla minik 5air, 9ar 3indik email taba3 el sharika 7alik 7al baij el miwa'6afen 3a6itik yah Sawsan?

He nodded

Bibi: ok 3ayal ana 6arashtlik 5i6at hal shahar, abe fikra jahza ba3ad 3 ayam

Bandar: ok

Bibi: 3indik as2ila?

He shook his head.

Bibi: Bandar tara el shabab bil 8isim 5osh shabab O inshallah ib tirta7 ma3ana

Bandar just nodded

Bibi hatha shfe ma yta7acha?

Bandar hathi shfeha ma taskit!

Bibi: ok, ya36ek el 3afya

Bandar: Allah y3afech

He stood up & left the office
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Bandar sat on his disk & opened his computer

He started reading the email that Bibi sent him; he lifted his head & found all his colleges gathered on 3e9am's office giving him dirty stares

He put his eyes back on the computer's screen & took a deep breath

3adi ele ygool mo mit3awid!

He felt someone standing on his left, he lifted his head & found Tala

Tala: an9i7ik it8adim isti8altik mn al7en

Bandar ignored her & put his eyes back on the computer

Tala: way insan '3areb!

The hours for work were over & the employers where leaving

Bandar was working on something zyada 3ala chithi wida yit2a5ar bil dawam 3ashan sa3at ga3dita bil bait it8il!

"Ya3ni ana ele shad 7aaili bil shi'3il?!" Said 3e9am before leaving

Bandar ignored him & continued working

After a while Bibi left her office & found Bandar still on his disk

Bibi: Bandar?!

Bandar: na3am?

Bibi: ma ri7t el bait lal7en?! Laish?

Bandar: ga3id ashti'3il 3ala el fikra ele gitlich 3anha

Bibi: ok, 5ala9 bachr kamilha 3ind 3 ayam

Bandar: ma biga shay wa5ali9

Bibi ya 7lailah shad 7aila bil sh'3il!

Bibi: ok 3ayal an6irik lama t5ali9

Bandar: la mala da3i tit2a5irain

Bibi turned around to leave then she looked at Bandar

Bibi: Bandar?

Bandar lifted his head & just looked at her

Bibi: inshallah t3araft 3ala shabab el 8isim O irti7t ma3ahoum?

Bandar sighed and nodded

Bibi smiled: ok 3ayal ashoofik bachr inshallah, ya36eek el 3afya

Bibi left the company

After half an hour Bandar left, hoping that tomorrow will be a better day

Laish Kilhoum 9araw '6idi O yaboni asti8eel? O el kil ib 9ob O hal 3e9am ib 9ob *sigh* ana wain ma a6igha 3oya!

16 comments:

  1. AGULICH IYAHA, 3AJEEEEEEEEEEEEEB! Im serious! 7adha 7ilwa elqi9a tawni garait all 3 parts!
    -D77:*

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  2. D77:*
    INTAY A3JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAB!
    Thank you :)

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  3. nice i like bandar is weird but unique ;)
    a7la shy when 'hathy shfeeha ma tasket o hatha shfeeh saket ' :p
    carry on posting i adore the story its different :D

    saroona;**

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  4. LOL ee :p
    will do inshallah :) Thank you ;**

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  5. maskeeeeen yaksir il 5a6ir 7aram laish chithee il kil yikraha :"( waay 5al i7iboon , 5al his dad yitghayar wiya oo i9eer 3inda sha59ya , luv it

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  6. 7ada :(
    Maybe they will maybe they wont :p
    Thank you;*

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  7. Wooow amazng post ma3ana mafe actions !!
    Ilstory 3ajeeeeba (Y)

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  8. Kaaaaaaaaani kaaaani!:P knt ga3da at'3ala ..hmmm looks like it worked like a charm;P hehehe La walla ive been busy sam7eeeny i know ive been a terrible reader "fav. anon" 6al ibwayhy ;\ 5al aroo7 agra now and il comment, thankssss 4 askinggg;***
    -Anon N

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  9. Caramela
    Thank you!! :*
    intay a3jab ;)

    ANON N;*****
    ma3thoora ma3thora 5ala9 sama7tich ;*
    la la mo 6all ib wayhich 6ool 3umrich my fav anon ;**
    Thanks 4 reading :**

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  10. Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay yaa khif 6eeentch walla ya 9alloo7aa;p ...im LOVING wer the story is going keep it up! W 9ij ina bandar '3areeb il a6awar bas ham he is unqie ily t7iseena he's mysterious o u wana get to know his real character it3arfeen?!:P he seems interesting & lost! ykser il 5a6er :( Allah iyaserla amra inshAllah:P ya36eeech alffffffff 3afya 3la hal post il 7ilo;** ila ta3aly sha5bar mi3areesna?china mnzman 3anhom? ma9art shahr 3asal hathi.. wilaht 3laihom !!w 3ala 5ALOUD W 3ATHBA !:P *hints tht u should write an epilogue;)*
    -Anon N ure FAV ANON da2eman w abadaan

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  11. miskeeeeennn banadarrr!!
    abi afham laishhh mara wa7da gilbaww 3laih?!
    ishsawa lihom?!...he didnt do anything fa laish kil hal 7i8d?!...iff oo hatha oboo fi 9ob thanii!!..tara kilish fikrat ina hatha obo 9ijy mo dasha ib balii! i cant imagine it!!
    bass hammm bandar barrridd!!
    5al yit7ark 3laa 3omrah shwayy;p
    9ara7tann il 8i99a shklhaa 3ajeeeeba..o hathi lai7een il bidaya faa i cant wait for wats coming next:P
    post sooon;**
    -M10

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  12. in LOVING the story so far w foog el loving ba3ad :P ;**

    HYPER

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  13. ya ba3ad galbi bandar!
    7aram!ye'3me'6!
    i love him w ye8har 3e9am!woodi a'6reba!
    w his father 9ig 7a8eer!ma a7iba!
    w don't even let me start with tala!
    bs i love the post and i can't get enough!

    ~~heaven

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  14. Anon N
    lol ba3ad 3oumri mashkoura;*
    ee ee a3arif! u'll know him bil next posts!!
    7adah :( Allah y3afeeeeech;** mi3risna b5aaaaaair ;p hint lay bachr im not writing an epilogue :p

    -M10
    7adah :(
    Bil next post tadren
    golay el 7imdallah 3ala oboch! He is real!! y5ari3 mo?
    Thank you ;**
    will do inshallah :)

    HYPER
    THANK YOU ;***********

    heaven
    7ayallah ahal el emirate! :p
    yalla ana wiyach nroo7 ni'6iriba :p
    u'll hate them more in the next posts trust me! :p
    Thank you ;*

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