Tuesday, April 6, 2010

Giving up? {6}

Quwa;*

1. ma 3indi siwalif ;p

2. EXTRA EXTRA LONG post!

3. enjoy it;*

6awfaw badliyat I didn't check ;p

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He closed his eyes tight

Shasawi

Shasawi

Shasawi

An6ira ydig?!

La 5al adig ana

He search for his father's number, clicked on the green button with his shaky fingers… put the mobile near his ears with fear… ta5ayal oboh wagif jidama, his shoulders fell, he rested his body on the wall behind him & took a deep breath.
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IFFF banzil! Mo ma38ola kil hatha iyeb mobileah aked 9ar fe shay!

She walked towards the elevator & clicked on P.
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6ooo6

6oooo6

6oooo6

INTA WAINIK?! CHAM MARRA LAZM ADIG 3ALAIK 3ASHAN TRID!

He closed his eyes.

Bandar: asif yuba, nisait mobiley bil sayara

Father: 6AB3AN WA7ID M5ADAY MITHLIK AKED BE9ER MA3AH CHITHI!

Bandar stayed silent

Father: 5ala9 yalla roo7 ithlif! Nisait shkint abe minik!

*click* his father closed the phone.

He closed his eyes & covered his face with his hands.

She got out of the elevator; saw him resting on the wall with his hand on his face.

She just stood in her place watching him.

He looked at his mobile, and then he put it in his pocket, took a deep breath & turned to his left.

He found her standing there staring at him.

Shfeh?! Laish wayha chithi a9far?! 3youna 7azena? *sigh* dayman 3youna 7azena!

Both of them stared at each other until he got closer, all the way to her his eyes were on the floor.

Madri laish ma yirfa3 rasa lama y7ache ay a7ad!

Bandar: istatha…ana … asif 6awalt

He rubbed his forehead.

Bibi: 6awalt wayed!

Bandar cleared his throat: dag 3alay el walid o tawni m9akir el telephone mina

Bibi: aha

She was looking at him but his eyes were on the floor

Bandar: taben shay istatha?

Bibi: Bandar ta3ban? Fek shay? Wayhik a9far wayed

Bandar *sigh* ee ta3ban ta3ban wayed!

Bandar shock his head

Bibi: ok 3ayal tifa'6al 3ala maktibik

She stood in her place.

He was a secret to her! A man full of mystery.

Mani 9a3da al7en! Fashla lazm aro7 el sayara wa5mi6li shay chine nazla 7ag el sayara mo 7aga!

She went to her car & then laughed at herself

Waaay '3aba2! Mifta7i foog! Hehehe

She walked back to the elevator & found her grandfather leaving

Bibi: Ahlaaain

Grandfather: haaala 7abebete

Bibi: mashi?

Grandfather: ee wala, omich '3aneema 6ab5atlina el '3ada bedha el youm O rayi7lha el bait mn al7en!

Bibi laughed: 5ala9 3ayal 7ata ana mani mit2a5ra inshallah

Grandfather: hehehe ok 7abebte

She entered the elevator & clicked on level 4, quickly went to her office.

Bibi opened the door & found Bandar in her face.

AHHHHHHHH!

She gasped

Bandar: asif wala asif 5ara3tich?!

Bibi put her hand on her heart.

Bibi: shda3wa Bandar! Mala da3i i3titharat!!

He kept his eyes on the floor ana laish sima3t kalam sawsan?! Law na6irha lama ti93ad O 3gob yay abrak!

Bibi shda3wa yi3tithir! Uff! Wala 3umra 6ala3ni O ohwa y7achene! Shesawi ib maktibi?

Bibi: Bandar?

Bandar: na3am?

Bibi: shitsawi hne?!

Bandar: sawsan… galatli inch tabene ib maw'6o3?

Bibi: ee 9a7! Tifa'6al istree7

They sat on the couch, Bibi sat on the couch facing Bandar.

Bibi: isma3ni 3adil Bandar O rakiz ma3ay

Bandar befanshoni!

Bibi ma midani ta7achait ila sara7!

Bibi: BANDAR!

He froze in his face whine she screamed, He remembered his father's screams and shouts; it wasn’t her voice that scared him it was the thought of his father.

Bibi: Bandar?! Fek shay?

Bandar: la sorry bas sara7t shwaya

Bibi: ok, abda? O bidon la tisra7 please!

Bandar: ok

Bibi: bil fatra el yaya babda asafir wayed, Tadri oboy s3od yabi 3ala8at bara el deera O yabe el sharika t9er international!

He nodded his head.

Bibi: ga3adna ma3a ba3ath thak el youm O gali ina lazm a5tar na2ib le, muwa'6af y9er mukani lama asafir, yder bala 3ala el shi'3il wil muwa'6afeen

He nodded.

Bibi: fakart mno mumkin yamsik el 8isim ib '3eyabe O ma atwa8a3 ako a7san minik!

Bandar stood up with his eyes wide open.

Bandar: ana?! Ana… amsik el 8isim?

Bibi: bas lama ana asafir

Bibi noticed how shocked he was.

Bibi: Bandar! Ibyinzad ma3ashik!

Bandar: mo hamni el ma3ash! Istatha Bibi ana…

He took a deep breath & sat down

Bandar: i3fene! Tikfain i3fene!

Bibi: Laish?!

His shoulder fell, his voice got lower and he sunk in his set

Her heart sunk for him

Bibi: Bandar…jawibni! laish?!

His silence killed her! laish ma yrid?!

She stood up.

Bibi: laish?! Ako a7ad yarfi'6 ina y9er na2ib ra2ees el 8isim?!

Bandar nodded.

Bibi: *sigh* inzain laish?

Bandar: istatha… ana… ana ma a3rif at3amal… ma a3rf at3amal ma3a el nass!

For the first time in his life he makes that confession.

Bibi: bas la2anik hadi mo ma3nata ma t3irf tit3amal ma3a el nass!

Bandar: ana hadi O ma a3rif at3amal!

Bibi sighed, she was disappointed! Ma widha t5ali 3i9am her vise president.

He felt her disappointment.

Bandar whispered to himself: mo awal mara

She heard him.

Bibi: mo awal mara shno?!

Bandar: ha?!

Bibi: mo awal marra shno?!

Bandar: mo awal mara a5thil a7ad

Bibi felt like hugging him

Bibi: Bandar la tgool chithi! Inta ma 5athaltne inta bas…

*Knock knock*

The knock on the door interrupted Bibi

Baboooooooooooooooooon

Bibi: ahlain Zayood

Zaid entered the office

Zaid: hala, oh Bandar? Shlounik?

Zaid shook hands with Bandar

Bandar: b5air el 7imdallah inta shlounik?!

Zaid: tamam tamam!

Bandar cleared his throat: ana a5alekoum

Before Bandar leaves the office Bibi called him

Bandar?

He turned around

Bandar: Na3am?

Bibi: fakir bili gilta

Bandar: istatha… el salfa ma yabeelha tafker… *sigh* 3a6aitich jawabi

He left the room.

Zaid looked at Bibi but she was in another world

Zaid: Bibio? Aloo? Heeey!

He waved his hand in her face.

Bibi: haaa?!

Zaid: shile 9ar tawa?

Bibi: tawa8i3ik kan 9a7

Zaid: ma ri'6a?

Bibi shook her head.

Bibi: amot wa3arif laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaish?!

Zaid: ma galich laish?

Bibi: imbala, gali ina ma y3rif yit3amal ma3a el nass!

Zaid: wintay ma tshofen hal 7achi 9a7?

Bibi sighed & sat down on her chair.

Bibi: Laish?! Laish ma 3inda thi8a ib nafsa! Laish wala 3umra rifa3 rasa lay 7acha a7ad? Laish yi3tithir million mara 3ala '3al6a sa5eefa!?

Zaid didn’t have the answers for her questions; he seriously didn’t know the answers!

Zaid: Bibi tithakiray shay wa7id O mabech tinsaina!

Bibi looked at him

Zaid: fakray ib 3aglich mo galbich! ta3amilay ma3ah ka mudera! Ma yhimich laish O ma laish?! Intay yhimich ta8dem el shi'3il! Etha zain shukran O etha mo zain 7asbay! O bas!

Bibi: Zayood bas ana…

Zaid: mako bas! Wayed da5altay ib salfat Bandar tara!

Bibi: a7isa matros asrar! A7isa mahmom O yabe a7ad ysheel hama bas 5ayif! A7isa yabe yashki bas mo lage a7ad! Zayod! Y3awir galbi! 7ata rabi3 ma 3inda!

Zaid: kil hatha wana tawni gayilich fakray ib 3aglich?!

Bibi: ugh!

She took a deep breath.

Bibi: ok! Ok ba7awil

Zaid: 3afya 3al sha6ra!

She faked a smile.

Zaid: t9adgen nisait laish yeetich!

Bibi giggled

Zaid: mita ray7a Dubai?!

Bibi: 3ugub bachr

Zaid: mno bero7 ma3ach mn el marketing?

Bibi's smile grew wider.

Zaid: shfech?

Bibi: RA7 A5ITH MA3AY BANDAR!

Zaid: Bibi!

Bibi: ga3d afakir ib 3agli! El walad ash6ar wa7id bil 8isim shil mani3 ine a5tha?!

Zaid: mako mani3!

Bibi: ok 3ayal ba5tha ma3ay!

Zaid: i5theeh!

18 comments:

  1. aywaaa first !!! 3ad awal marrah i comment..bass sheft 0 comments fa shta6ait:$!

    M

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  2. 7ayllaaaah M! ;*
    Ahlan wasahlan ;p
    lol awal marra u comment O first ;p!

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  3. heheheh eeh sheftay shloun ;p..allaah e7ayeeech ;**..waay ur storyy 3ajeeeeeebaaaa..mashallaah it's amaaaizing..ya36eech el 3afyaa ;** w ma awa9eech bel youm postain ok? ;$

    M

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  4. Thank you;* Allah y3afech;*
    lol postain bil youm wayed 7aram 3alaich ;p

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  5. Waaaay ya hal bandar almaskin :(....

    Etaskrny bwa7da ma3ai bl class,,,

    oo 5al esafr e'3air haw ;)

    yslo ya gomar & thank 3ala al postat
    al6wela ya ba5tna 3alihom ;pP

    love u 9ala7la7

    awrad;********

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  6. ufff cant wait for the neext pooost pllllzzz post it 2daaaay pllzzzzzz :( < makesart 5a6rech :P ambaaaih 7adda kaser 5a6ree hal bandaar :'(

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  7. is this the last post for the day ?=(
    -N~

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  8. WOOOOW WANASA BTA5THA MA3AHAAAA ;D
    a7saan 3ashan i9id 3an OBOOH o hal 3I9ABAA !!!
    o ymkin tfhima o i9eon close frnds ;D~

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  9. Cant Wait for the next Post!! Pleasee post today!!
    I love ur story 7ada 3ajeeeeeb ;p

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  10. dammaa3t y3awir il galb , bas HEYYAAAA bta5tha wiyahaa =D

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  11. BANDAAAAAAAAAAAR 7abeeeeebi wala yaksir 5a6ri:**
    Obo mal arid aadba... bibi geeen3i sa3deeeeeeeeeey!
    Zaid 5al yig3ad ma3a bandar ya36eey shwaya thiqa 3ala gal..
    ''I READ THIS;)''
    p.s. post soon please:D
    -Hope:*

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  12. 9ALOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO7A IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY...SO FRESH SO UNIQUE SO ADDICTIVE...

    I

    LOVE

    IT

    LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU :*

    yallaaaaaa dubai here we come :P

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  13. wanasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :P !!!!!!!!!!! your story 3ajebaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa its one of the best :P love it o love you moore
    UM FLFOLa;**

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  14. sarli 3-4 days ADDICTED to ur blog!
    mashalla ..
    amazing stories ..
    khalast all the 6 parts ams ..
    oo bedait eb (Dreaming with a broken heart!)
    im in part 22 now! ;p so bageeli youmain w akhaless! hehe ..

    LOVED IT!
    KEEP IT UP HOOOOOONEY! ;*


    - Rainbow

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  15. MISSSS U SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCCCHHHHH!!!!!;** wallaaa sam7eeeny adry gha6ait..AGAIN! bas 3indy a family member bl mostashfaaa fa i couldnt it3arfeen il '9roof b3d! :( bss inshAllah mn bacher bt-hil 3laich il commentat o btmileeeen meni o mn commentaty:Pp bas know this! ive been readingg the whole time, it3arfeeeny im ure dedicated reader afa 3laich bas o i NEVER miss a post!:D hope this doesn't change my position in ure commenters list :$ inshalla a'9l ure fav. anon lil2abad ;p 3asa ma shar laish u ddint post ilyoum?:( c i came 2 check!:P hehe anyways post sooooon ;*
    shofay lazim aghi6 mara aw maritain b3dain ard mara thanyaa o agrag , chithi a7san mo? 3shan tolehein 3ly o 3la gargtyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy !! ;p
    -Anon N

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  16. 9al7a bint bo 9ali7 I LOVE YOUR STORIES .

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  17. Awrad:*
    7ada :(
    9arlich muda tnaddene gumar tara asti7iiii :p
    love u too wardrad

    HaBaHeBo
    laa ma kisartay 5a6ri ;p lol jk tawni ashof ur comment ;p
    I'll write the post know

    Charmbracelet
    yes :p

    Caramela
    EE!
    ee walah ;p
    kil shay mumkin! :p

    Manora:)
    I'll post tonight inshallah!
    Thanks love;*

    L
    aywaaaa ibta5thaaa ;p

    Hope:*
    7adah :(
    wow alaftay 8i9a kamla ib ur comment :p
    inshallah I'll post tonight :)

    Nawarii
    NAWARI THE STORY IS INLOVE WITH U!
    Love u too;**
    Yalllaaaa ;p

    UM FLFOLa;**
    Thank u ;**
    love u too hun. ;*

    Rainbow
    waay ya 7ilwich ;*
    Thank you!! enjoy it ;**
    Will do inshallah :)

    Anon N;***
    Ahlain O sahlain bil 7ilwen;*
    MISS U MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!
    weeh salamtkoum O ma tshofon shar,Allah ygawma/ha bil salama ;*
    amail mn commetatcih! no way!
    U'll always be my fav anon da2iman wa abadan;**
    ill post tonight inshallah :)
    waaaay ya 7ilwich O ya 7ilo gargitich ;**

    Anon
    Anon bint Anon THEY LOVE U TOO! :p
    Thank you;**


    THANKS ALL FOR UR COMMENTS!
    ILL POST TONIGHT INSHALLAH!! :)

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