Sunday, April 25, 2010

Giving up? {19}

Quwa;*

1. Sha5barkoum?!

2.This post goes to Nawarii;*

3. Sarona (Madliar) THIS POST IS LONG! O mo tgolen la ;p!

4. THIS IS MY 101 POST! I love this number!

5. Enjoy it:*

(6awfaw badliyat I didnt check)

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She got into her car & drove off, 7awilat itrakiz bil 6irej

Ay 9ob kan bait.houm?! El 8i63a ele 3gub bait Layla?! Uff lama adish el man6aga badil!

Dashat el man6aga, 7asat feha lain ligat el bait…

She parked in front of the house.

Kahi sayarta!

Bibi tried to gather up some energy to put her feet out of the car & go ring the bell, she stayed in the car for 5 minutes then she decided to get out of the car & ring the bell!

Ma yabela shay! Anzil! A6ig el jaras wagool wain Bandar?! Bas! Wayed simple!

She pulled her car keys, got out of the car & stood in front of the door; she took a deep breath & rang the bell

"Meeenooooo?!"

The maid spoke out of the speaker.

Bibi: Bandar mawjood?!

"Lahza!"

She heard footsteps get closers.

Ma38ola ohwa?! Yayne 3ind el bab ib kil basa6a O 9arla 3 ayam mo mdawim?!

The door opened.

Bibi lifted her head and saw….




The maid

Uff!

Maid: na2am?!

Bibi: baba Bandar waina?!

The maid gave her a suspicious look

Maid: lahza

Bibi: ufff el shamis i7misatni O hal '3abiya kil sa3 lahza O lahza!

She gave her back to the door & looked at her car

"Na3am?!"

She heard a voice behind her; she turned around & found a tall large man! In his mid 50's, he looked really scary

His hair was white! His eyes were big and black; he looked at her with his eyebrows crossed

She lost all words when she saw him

Yuma mno hatha y5ari3!

"NA3AM?!"

Bibi: umm 3ami Bandar mawjod?!

Obo Bandar: wintay sh3indich ts2len 3ana?! Intay mno a9lan?

Bibi hatha shfe y7achene chithi!: ana Bibi el flani! Muderta bil dawam!

Obo Bandar: hmm…O na3am shba'3itay?!

Bibi was shocked hatha mn 9ija y7achene chithi?!

Bibi: ba'3ait a3arif wain Bandar?!

Obo Bandar: thalaf bili ma y7af'6a!

Bibi's jaw dropped la la hatha aked mo oboh! Musta7el ykoun oboh!

Bibi: wain*clears throat* wain ra7?

Obo Bandar: ra7 el mistashfa!

Bibi: *gasp* MISTASHFA?!

Obo Bandar: ee!

Bibi: ay mistashfa O laish?!

Obo Bandar: el mistashfa el flani

Bibi: inzain laish?! Sh9ar?!

Obo Bandar: mo shi'3lich O na3am intay yaya t7a8i8een ma3ay?!

He slammed the door in her face.

She froze in her place.

Sh.hal insan hatha?! Ma38oola ykoun obo Bandar?!

She ran to her car, got in & drove to the hospital.
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-At the hospital-

She ran to the reception.

Bandar el flani?!

Guy: hmmm Bandar?

She nodded.

Guy: level 2 room 145.

She waited for the elevator,

Entered

Clicked on level 2

She walked through the white cold hallways, she checked every room number until she found it 145.

She took a deep breath & knocked on the door.

Bibi entered the room, walked a few steps & looked at her left and found him

Bandar …. The pale guy with the sad eyes

Bandar…. The guy that opened up to her

Bandar….. The first person that she opened up to about her parent's death

Her eyes teared up when she saw him…

His head was rapped with a white bandage, a dark shade of purple under his eyes and he was surrounded by a lot of machines…

She got closer to him & put her hands on his & whispered

"Bandar?!"

He didn't open his eyes.

Bibi: Bandar?

She held his hand tighter

Bibi: Bandar?!

She shook him gently but he didn’t respond

Nothing… he didn’t open his eyes, he didn’t even move.

A single tear feel out of her eye

"Bandar?" She called him again with her shaky voice.

Bibi: Bandar! Laish ma trid 3alay!?

"La2ana ib '3ayboba"

Bibi gasped & turned around & found his mother standing, the poor woman looked pale & tired.

Bibi: 5alti?

Salimat 3alaiha then they sat down

Bibi: shloun? Shloun dash ib '3ayboba?!

His mother started crying

Bibi: 5alti goolele!

Um Bandar: oboh *sniff*

Bibi: shno?!

Um Bandar: tahawash ma3a oboh O kan wagif 3ala awal el daray, gam oboh-

His mother cried harder she couldn’t continue her sentence.

Bibi: gam oboh shsawa?!

Um Bandar: 6aga 6rag O ta3athirat ryooli O 6a7 mn el daray

Bibi gasped.

Um Bandar: 9arla 4 ayam ib '3ayboba el doctor gal ina 6abe3e yid5al ib '3ayboba

Bibi: O mn mita el '3ayboba shay 6abe3e!!

Mother: rasa riga3 bil ar'6 7ail lama 6a7, nizaf dam wayed *sniff*

Bibi was silent…she didn’t know what to say... she didn’t know if all of this was real or one of her weird dreams, she closed her eyes & took a deep breath.

Bibi stood up & went closer to Bandar's bed; she sat down on the chair beside him

Um Bandar wiped her tears then stood up & walked towards the door

Bibi: wain ray7a 5alti?

Um Bandar: a5alech ma3ah shway

Bibi held his hand

Bibi: Bandar? Ana Bibi

She looked at his face, his lips were dry, and the purple bruise under his eyes was mixed with blue lines, His white bandied had small drops of blood

Bibi couldn’t hold her tears anymore

Shloun oboh ysawi feh chithi?! Ako obo bil dinya ysawi ib wilda chithi?!

Bibi: Bandar *sniff* yalla 3ad goom bas kafi 4 ayam kafi!

She heard a soft knock on the door.

"Yes I'll check after finishing with this patent" she heard the doctor say, she couldn’t see his face clearly the tears blurred her vision, Bibi wiped her tears away

Bibi?

She lifted her head

Mansour?

Doc.: Baaaaaaaaaih Bibi el flani?

She stood up and nodded her head

Bibi: sha5barik Mansour?

Mansour: b5air el 7imdallah! Intay shlounch?

Bibi: b5air, shloun mirtik O 3yalik?

Mansour: el 7imdallah wala kilina tamam

Mansour's family were Bibi's neighbors in her parent's house, after her parents death Bibi left the house to live with her grandparents.

Mansour: t3rfena?

Bibi nodded: muwa'6af 3indi

Mansour: aha

He went through the papers he had in his hand, took a look on the machines that were around Bandar, wrote something on his papers.

Bibi: shlouna?

Mansour: 9arla 4 ayam 3ala 7ala mako la ta6awir wala taraju3!

Bibi sighed.

Mansour: la t7aten inshallah be9er a7san

Bibi nodded

The doctor left the room

She went back to her chair

Bibi: sima3t el doctor?! Ygool ina lazm tit7san!
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Two days passed

For the past two days Bibi wakes up & rushes to the hospital & then goes home at night

Her grandparents were not happy with it but they couldn’t stop her.

23 comments:

  1. Hii 9aloo77aa:D!
    shloonich?!
    sha5barich?!..inshalla kilshay tamam?!
    were good too;p!
    bas ba'3ait agoolich ina sooryy for the sudden dissappearance..sam7eena:)!
    bas AnonN ga3da itmer fi shwayet '9roof oo im helping her out..inshalla kilshay yirja3 mithil ma kan 5ilal hal chamn yom oo she'll comment regularleyy oo itgoolich sam7eeeenii ya a7la 9aloo77a;**
    thnxx for asking 7abeebty;*
    -M10

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  2. ibachii hal post:'(
    kfaya 3lyy il mana7a ili ana feeha;(
    ..nass la thima wela thameer!
    thnx for the long post;*
    -M10

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  3. Weeh ba3ad 3umri salmay 3alaiha wayed O tell her ine waaayed walhana 3alaiha! Allah y3eenha inshallah;*

    :(
    Im sorry!
    ee walah!
    Thank you 4 ur comment!;*
    O 6amnini 3ala Anon N!

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  4. ya ba3ad chabdii ya bandar :(!!! 7araam shal obooo ! waai3 akrahaaa AKRAHAAAA

    Meejo

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  5. 7aaddyy 7asaaait inaa obo ily kafkhaa !!!! a9laan ana 7asaa inaa mu oboo shal obo ily ma3endaa galb !! @@
    maskeeen ghaybobaa mara wa7daa 7araam 3alich ;'((

    LighT

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  6. AY SHAY ... slamat bandar .. WAAAY SHAL OBOO shsalfita laish may7iiba ba3arrrrrrrrrf ... ba6 CHABDII hal oboo .. mayir7aam :@


    anon bnt anon

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  7. kithir ma agooliich i love this story i dont knw where to begin waiid 7ilwa i never commented bas 7asaiit ina this post deserved one 9iij u found a new way to write an amazing story! keep it up
    - H

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  8. baaaaaaaaaabchiiiiiii :( bandar 7araaaaaaaaaaaaam obo wa7ed 7maaaaaaaaaaaar !! yaalaa 5al ygoooooom min il coma la y6awel 3alaina plzzzzzzzz bandaaar gooooooom :( 9alo7aaaaa loove the post yala post soooooooooooooooooooooooooon love yoooou

    um flfola

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  9. Lulu
    :)

    Meejo
    7aada! Kilina nikraha! :(

    Light
    ee lil asaf oboh :(
    Shinsawi ba3ad lazm shwayat drama :p!!

    Anon bint Anon
    Allah ysalmich :p 7ada 7adah!!!

    Anon H
    7abebte mashkoura;**
    Thank you so much ;** will do inshallah ;)

    Um flfola
    La la la tabchen :(
    love u too!! I'll post very soon inshallah ;)

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  10. 7ABEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEBI:o:o
    waay eboo ziiiiifft ako a7ad esawi ib wilda chthe;@

    Saroona:)

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  11. 3afya galb 3ala hal obo ;@@
    wila 3assa shagool shlon chithy isawe fee !!!
    7ayaty babon ga3da it7aty o shakilha she fell in love with him !!
    Inshala he wakes up o ubo iswe 7adth o imoot o ifkna mn shara !!
    Loool wayd ta'thrt mn ilpost ;p

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  12. back to 7araaaaaaaaaaaaaam:'(

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  13. oooooooooh *tears* maskeeen bandar kesar kha6rii

    bibi haam maskenaa maga9art ga3da ma3aah

    enshallaa egom bsalammaaaaaaaaaaa

    o e9er zeein o neftak mn obooooh ilmaleeeeeq elgassiii ;(

    shakelhaaaa she fell 4 him
    lolitta

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  14. waaaaay shal ubo il 7imdilla illy 3afana yarab la tableena , maskeen bnaider ;"(

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  15. awalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU 3ala a7la dedications ...inti bas law itshooofni shakli wana agraaaaaa mthel elcartoons lain they have a goofy smile ana exactly chithi heheheh.......

    thaneeeeeeeeeyan....i knew it I KNEW ITTTTTT....LAISH YA 9ALOOOO7A? TADREEEEEEEEEN INAH BACHAITINI MN GALBBBBBBBBBB YA LAITNI KENT '3AL6ANA.... 7ARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM MSKEEEEN WALLAH MA YESTAHIL

    ESH'HAL OBO HATHAAA ISAMI ROO7A OBO HATHA ISAMOON MUJRIM ...7UTHALAAAAAAAAAAA...ZEBALAAAAAAAAAAA MU OBO

    9aloooooooooooooooooooo7a ashkurich mara thanya 3ala el dedication bas 3indi 6alaaaaaaaaaaab...5al yet7asaaaaaaaan mu shar6 bl next post ili ba3da....la e6awil bil mustashfa

    a7ibichhhh 9alooo7ti...mwa7 mwa7

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  16. laa 9alooo7aa tgoolin htha long mu long post 18 was longer ;S
    maskeeeen bandaaar :'( ya3ny lazm tbachin elwa7ed :( a7eb bandar lat5alin bad stuff t9eeer 7aagaaaa x(

    saroona;**

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  17. WOW!! ibaachi!! waaay galbi 3awarnii 3ala bandar!! ;**

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  18. 9alooo7a 3asa mashar ?? laykoon connection-kom khtarab mara thanya ?:S
    plz lat6awlen 3alaina magdar 3ala 6ai7at bandar lazim egoom ib nxt post

    nabi POST

    anon bnt anon

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  19. 9alooooooooooooooooooooooooo7tna mukanich imbayen el laila
    no post today?:(

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  20. 9al7aaaaaaaaaa!!!:D
    awal mara i post a comment.. 9ara7a widiii afathfithlich... lamaa agraa.. a3eesh il mawa8if oo abchyy ma3ahum watkhyal bait-hum oo kelshay wayed t3lagt beshakh9eyat mashAlla 3alaich;D oo madree laish a7ess a3rfiiich it9adgeen?
    3umooomaan... please '9ilaay kitbaaay ebshakel mustamer OO SAREEEEEEEEEEEEE3;p adree e7na maner7am bas ya3niee maanenlaam;p
    oo atmanaa tathkereenee lanaa daymaaan babdaa a3lee8;p

    -Eco.

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  21. 7ABYBE INTAW!;* SOOOOORRRRY!
    I'll post now then reply on ur comments ;)

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  22. Saroona
    eee walah :(

    Caramela
    ee wala!
    Maybe she did ;p
    lol 7adith marra wa7da?:p
    loool wayed!!

    geraninium
    :(

    lolitta
    7ada :(
    Yup!
    inshallah !
    Maybe she did & maybe she didnt ;p

    L
    7ada intay mit5ayla ina hal obo 9iji O mo ta2lefe?! 7ada :(

    Nawarii
    Awalan waaaaaaaaay ya 7ilwich ya nawarii;** ur most welcome;*

    Thaniyan YES U DID!

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  23. Nawarii
    eee wala ylawi3 el chabd!
    el 3afo 7abebte, ee afa 3alaich read part 20 7asantlich yaa! ;p ma3ani kint nawya asaweha drama bas hawant ;p!
    wana akthar;**

    Sarona
    waaay saron la t8arnen!
    7ada :( asfa :( inshallah 3amiti ;p!

    Anon
    Thank you:* salamat galbich;*

    Anon bint anon
    ma shaar!! lol la la ma i5tarab bas kint mash'3ola shway!
    I POSTED! :)

    Nawarii
    Ba3ad 3umri mashkoura;*
    Sorry ta2a5art 3alaikoum ;*

    Eco
    Ahlan wasahlan! 7ayyallah eco!
    Yup la7a'6t ;) fathfithaay 3ala ra7tich;* waaay mashkoura!! 7asastene ina 8i9a9i wow;p!
    9ij? yimkin t3rfene!
    Inshaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllah!
    tistahloon;*
    akeed bathkirich;**

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