Saturday, April 10, 2010

Giving up? {9}

Quwa;*

1. Shlounkoum?!

2.How was ur day?

3. Adri be9er 3indkoum alot of questions after this post! O adri ina el questions ele ys2alhoum Bandar at the end of the post ohma nafs.houm as2latkom! SO WAIT AND U'LL KNOW! :p

Enjoy it;*

EXTRA LONG POST

Anon N I hope ur okay fagda ur comments;*

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They entered the huge ballroom

Bibi took a deep breath

Bibi: kil ma asalim 3ala a7ad ba3arfik 3alaih! Imda7 sharikat.houm, 7ata law mo sami3 bil sharika mn gabil!

Bandar nodded.

Bibi: ako rayal isma Majid el flani! Etha ta3a8ad ma3a sharikatna WAYED ib nirba7! Fa 5al 3aynik 3alaih

Bandar: inshallah

Bibi looked for her name on the chairs & found it; Bandar's name was on the chair beside her.

Bandar put his file beside him & Bibi sat down & checked her mobile, then she suddenly stood up
7ayach Allah fe Dubai Ya Bibi!!

Bibi: Ahlain istatha Majid! Allah y7ayeek!

She shook hands with him.

Bandar quickly stood up.

Bibi: istath Majid el flani, Bandar el flani

They shook hands.

Majid: kaif 7alik?

Bandar: el 7imdallah b5air

Majid: ha Bibi sho rayich fe i3lana el yideed?!

Bibi looked at it; the ad was hanged on the wall

Majid: Bandar? Mub 3ajbik el i3lan?

Bandar was looking at the ad.

Bandar: ha?! La mo mo 3ajibni bas bas2al so2al, hathi da3aya 7ag Bank 3adil?

Majid: haih

Bandar: ma3a kil i7tirami 7ag 9a7ib el fikra bas el i3lan 7asasni ine fa8er O rayi7 ba6ir floos mn bank.koum

Bibi's eyes pooped!

Majid was silent for a moment.

He wasn’t a young business man; he was old in age & in the business field

Majid: hmmmm inta tshoof chithi?!

Bandar nodded.

A guy came to Majid and whispered something in his ear, he nodded.

Majid:3an ithinkoum

Bibi waited for Majid to leave them, then turned to Bandar.

Bibi: INT MN 9IJIK?! HATHA WANA TAWNI MWA9EETIK?!

Bandar didn’t reply.

Bibi: laish mo ga3id itdafi3 3an nafsik?! Gool ay shay!

Bandar still stayed silent!

Bibi: UGH!

She sat down, He sat beside her slowly.

He got out a notepad & pen & slowly gave it to Bibi

She grabbed it from his hand.

Bibi: *sigh* Bandar, a9er wayed 3a9abya wagt el shi'3il a7ib kil shay yamshi zain! Fa lama y9er '3ala6 sa5ef wayed atnarfaz!

Bandar nodded.

Bibi: 9a7 ham atnarfaz lama a7ad yrid 3alay wana m3a9ba bas please please dafi3 3an nafsik lama azifik!

Bandar smiled: inshallah

Bida el mu2tamar

Bibi & Bandar was silent all the time

Her body would shiver and the hair in his body stands up every time his cold hand brushes into her warm hand.

"Ayeeblich may" Bandar whispered in her ear, his whisper was so deep & calm

Bibi felt weak! She felt his face close so close!

She just smiled & nodded.
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He was sitting on one of the chairs… lost in his thoughts, suddenly he heard Bibi's voice

"Bandar wain i5tifait?!"

Bandar faz mn mukana

Bandar: kani ma i5tifait

Bibi: la wala?! 9ij ma i5tifait?! 9arli sina adwrik!! Shil fayda yay ma3ay etha ga3id sar7an?!

Bandar: asif istatha bas-

Bibi: tikfa bidon please!

Bandar sighed and sat down

Bandar mit wana agol ine mo ijtima3i

Bibi didn’t mean to be rude! She really didn’t! Kanat t7os bain el riyayeel bro7ha! Etha ma yabe yt7acha 3adi! 3al a8al ykoun wagif ma3ay!

Bibi: kalamt el sayi8?!

He shook his head.

She was SO mad at him! 7asat ina kilish mala fayda!

Bibi: lal7en ma kalamta?! Shna6ir?!!! La3at chabdi socializing!!

Before he could take his mobile out of his pocket they heard a voice calling Bibi

She turned around & froze in her place

Bibi: Jasim?!

Jasim: shlounch?

She cleared her throat.

Bibi: tamam umm inta shlounk?!

Jasim: tamam, ha yaya ma3a Zayod?!

She shook her head: yaya ma3a Bandar el flani

She looked at Bandar: Bandar hatha Jasim el flani 9a7ib el sharika el flaniya

Bandar shook hands with Jasim

Jasim: shiftay omi?!

Bibi: la wala ma shift.ha

Bandar hatha el rayal ele kan ma3ana bil 6ayara ohwa O oma!

Bibi!! 7abeeebte!! Shlounch?!

Bandar looked for the source of the voice & found a lady in her mid 50, with her short dark black hair & short skirt, and overly put make up to hide her age

Bibi: Hala 5alti, ana el 7imdallah b5air intay shlounch?!

Um Jasim: tamam!

A weird moment of silence!

Bandar looked at Bibi & he was sure that he saw her eyes water

Um jasim: kibartay mashallah!

Bibi smiled politely

Jasim: sima3t ina Majid el flani wida yit3a8ad ma3akoum!

Bibi: tawna 6aben Dubai O bidat el isha3at! Ma midahoum!

Um Jasim laughed a really loud and nosiy laugh .

Bandar wow that lady is really fake

Jasim: Bandar ana shayfik mn gabil?!

Bandar shook his head: ma a'6in, yimkin imshabih 3alay

Jasim: yimkin

Bibi cleared her throat

Bandar felt that Bibi wasn’t comfortable, he looked at his mobile

Bandar: istatha Bibi?

Bibi: na3am?

Bandar: el sayi8 bara

Bibi knew that Bandar didn’t have the time to call the driver and even if he did! The driver wouldn’t come this fast!

Bibi: 5alti, Jasim, nshofkoum 3ala 5air

Um Jasim: inshallah!

Bandar: ti9b7oun 3ala 5air

Um Jasim: winta mn ahla *wink*

H e grabbed his files & they left the ballroom, they sat in the lobby

Bandar picked up the phone & called the driver

Bandar: alo? Yes, ok thank you!

Bandar sat in front of Bibi

Bandar: 3ashir digayig wekoun hne

She nodded

Bandar: istatha--

Bibi: Mashkour Bandar

Bandar smiled

They sat silently in the lobby and after 10 minutes the driver arrived
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-In the car-

He heard Bibi sniff a few times

Ma38ola ga3d tabchi?! O laish ga3d tabchi?!

He was sitting in the front seat so he couldn’t see her…
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They got out of the car…

They eneterd the hotel

Bibi: UFF!

Bandar: shfech?!

Bibi: nisait el clutch

Bandar: haa?

Bibi: nisait shay bil sayara!

Bandar: sibgene fog wana ayeblich yah

Bibi: uf bas abe ag3ad

She wiped her eyes

He didn’t see tears but he knew that she wasn’t ok

Bandar got worried about her

Bibi: ta3aaabt

She couldn’t stand.

He held her hand and rested her head on his shoulder… he helped her reach her room

Bandar: mifta7ich ma3ach?!

Bibi: la, mifta7i bil clutch bil SAYARA!

Bandar: ok ok al7en aroo7 ayeba!

She left his hand go and sat on the floor

Bandar: 3al ar'6?!

She nodded.

Bandar: la yuba gomay gomay gi3day ib '3urfiti 3ala ma ayeb mifta7ich

Her head was facing the floor & she sniffed

Bandar: tabcheen?!

Bibi lifted her head: *sniff* Laish ana t9er ma3ay hal mawa8if?! Laish ana lama at3ab nafsiyan jisimi y9er '63ef O rele ma tshelne?!

Bandar felt sorry for her, he saw weakness in her eyes

Shofat Jasim sawat feha?

Bandar stretched out his hand for her

Bandar: gomay

She got up…

Bibi: akraha akraha insan 7a8eeeeeeeeeeeer!

Bandar: Jasim?

Bibi's eyes teared up again: EE!

He opened his room, she hesitated to enter while he was in it.

Bibi: umm 5al an6irik hne

Bandar got out of the room and held the door for her.

Bandar: mintay ga3da bil mamar, thanya O yaylech!

Bibi nodded & entered.

He left her and called the driver & went to the lobby.
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She looked at herself in the mirror.

Way! Mn kithir ma masa7t 3aini el eyeliner 9ar shadow!! Way laish shift Jasim?! Laish shifta?! I lost control bil bachi al7en shbegool 3ani Bandar?!

She looked at the small coffee table & found a lot of sketches.

TIWA8A3T INA YARSIM!

*knock knock*

Bibi: coming!

She opened the door and found Bandar swinging her clutch in the air

Bibi grabbed it from his hand: shukran!

Bandar: 3afawn!

Bibi stared at him

Bandar: um—

Bibi: na3am?! Mita nawi tro7 '3urfitik?!

He giggled: ah asif i5iti az3ajtich?

Bibi: wayed, yalla tiwakal 3ala allah! Banam!

Bandar laughed: inshallah yalla ti9b7en 3ala 5air

Bibi giggled and got out of the room.

She got her key out of her clutch .

Bandar rested his head on his door

Bibi: Bandar?!

Bandar: na3am?

Bibi: ele 9ar el youm umm a5ir part min el youm *giggle* insah! Girls drama!!!

Bandar nodded

Bibi: ti9ba7 3ala 5air

Bandar: wintay mn ahla

She smiled & entered the room.

Bandar entered his room, took his jacket off, and sat down, and started sketching

Laish bichat el youm?! O ish8i9at Jasim O oma?! El salfa bas ina 5a6abha O radita wala shay akthar?!

29 comments:

  1. laaa laaa 9al7aaa shno hatha mako action !! :O
    7saaabich 3endy later ;p

    saroona;**

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  2. LOL ana ma gilt next post fe action! ib hal story el action yi5tlif ib hal story el action ohwa ina Bandar opens up to her!
    Bil next posts bitla7'6oun :p

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  3. wallaaaiiin ya3ny lazm an6er laiih baccherr ! wallah entay gam ta3feseeeni tara ! im warning u ! :p

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  4. egray my story www.walkmewithyou.blogspot.com
    if u want like im not forcing you to ;p

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  5. 9alooo7a i admire the fact inich ga3da it7awleeen it'3ayreeen a7dath 8i9tich 3an baji il 8i9a9..ma3a i7tramii la kil il bloggers/storywriters..most of them seem to have the same events but different style of writing...8i9tich '3areeba bas in a good way, an entertaining kind of way...ya3niii bi5t9arr t3rfeen tibd3een oo titmaskain ib 3adatna ta8aleedna o hamm tithjbeen ur readers...
    i love where this is going oo keep it up;**
    postt soon;**
    -M10

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  6. Looooooooooooove it!!
    ur really creative mashallah!!!
    post asap :)

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  7. i guess I'm third! ;(
    I want to know shnu bandar yarsm!!!
    what's up with the Jassim dude?

    about Saroon - lol don't worry we know each other ;P

    ;**

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  8. Saron
    inshalah i'll read it soon!

    M10
    Tadren awal shay i5tara3t ;p 3abali bt6ay7en 7a'6 el story :p!! 9ij 9ij thank you u really made me smile!! :) 9ij 9ij istanast O ta7amast aktib post yded! need I say more?! ila ta3alay damich t3rfen Anon N! sha5barha?! salmay 3alaiha wayed!!
    goleelha 9al7a bint bo 9ali7 tsalim 3alaich :p
    Thanks M:***

    Shushu
    It loveeeees u tooo!!
    Thank you I really appreciate it ;*
    Will do inshallah :)

    Darliam
    Yes u are :)
    U'll know bas ni6ray :p
    Ham u'll know bas ni6ray ;p
    LOL ashwa :p
    ;**

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  9. I HAVE A QUESTION
    "Laish bichat el youm?! O ish8i9at Jasim O oma?! El salfa bas ina 5a6abha O radita wala shay akthar?!"
    W salamtch ;PP

    HYPER

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  10. Kani kaaaaaniii ;p waaaaaayy 7adi 9ayra "fav anon commenter" ta3eeeeesa!!:( adry walla bass Hatha ma ya3ni ina 89tch mo 3ajbatni wla shay.. ila bil3aks nafs ma galat M10 (it9eer bnt 5alty btw;p) if ure asking shlon in3arf ba3a'9;p ilmohim jst like cuzy said 8i9tch wayd interesting and NEW 9ij ive never read anything like it!! O btw walhaannaaaaaaa 3laich 7aaaaaaiiiilllll!!!! O fagda our small convos hehehe;p o 9alooooo7a tha7akteeni lamn t7ahaity emarati hahah layg wallaaa ;** o waaaai3 ma3a kl i7terami ma7b il umahat ile chithi umahat il tibirbis:p wai3 iyfashloun! 9ij y3ni lai mta inshalla btmeen itsaghreen b3omrich?! Hmmm ya turaaaa shra7 iyseer bl post al'aaty?! 7lwa hathy al'aaty ..;pP waay basi garga o mashkooooora 9aloo7a 3la inch sa2alty 3ani si2lat 3nch il 3afyaaa 7abeebty o Allah ysalmch mashkooora walla maga9arty o sam7eeny 3ala il ghaba ya a7saan o af'9al blogger!;**** tslmeen 3ala hal post o y36eech il 3afya o 3asa Allah la ya7rimna mn ydeeedch
    -Anon N
    -Anon N

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  11. hatheeeeee elrjool wela balaaaaaaaaaaash...

    A7IB BANDAR 7ATA MA3A BROOODA....i hate jassim ow uma ba3ad ish hal legafaaaaaaaaaaa...9j 3awerat galbi bibi matistahil...

    yalla 9aloooo7a walla ur blog 9ar like a drug to me ...wayed 3ajibni stylich el ydeeed...exquisite and unique mthlich mwa7 mwa7 mwa7

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  12. HYPER
    Ya sib7an allah madri wain maryen 3alay hal as2ila :p!!
    inshallah those questions will be answerd bil next posts!!

    Anon N;***
    la la la tgolen chithi smila 3alaich mn el ta3asa;* O ya7lailkoum cousins?! wanasa ;p Thank you;** 7ATA ANA WALHAAANA 3ALAICH AKTHAR!!off 7ada our small funny convos!;p lol 9ij? 3ad a7ib 7acheehoum :p
    eee bil '6ab6!! akrahoum! ya3ni 5ala9 9irtay 3ayoza lay mita btsawen 3umrch 9'3era!

    lol wayed 3jibatni al' aaty:p
    inshallah bil post al 'aaty tadren shbe9er :p
    intay ele mashkoura 3ala ur comment;**
    Ba3ad 3oumri tislmeeen :***

    Nawarrii
    eee walaaaaaaaaaaah ;p
    LOL ashwa :p
    ee maskeena :(
    ashwa its a good drug mo mu'6ir :p mashkoouuuuraa ba3ad 3oumri;**
    mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa7;**

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  13. Ba3aaaadd 3omri 9aloo7a!! ;*** waiting 4 ure nxt post 3ala a7ar mn il jamer 3ad hal mara LAZIM akoun firssstttttttt (a) ;p i miss being first ;(
    -Anon N

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  14. inshallah I'll post soon :)
    First mo first el mohim aka7il 3aini ur comment ;**

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  15. laaaaaaish bechaaat !! el 9ara7a your story 8awiyaaaaaaaa !!! i love bandar o bibi o love you mooooreee waiting for the next post 7beebty :P
    um Flfola;**

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  16. Bt3rfeeen bil next posts :p!! Mashkoooura;* lol love u too;*

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  17. aaaah ya alby =p we want more please =D

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  18. salamaat albich ya L :p soon inshallah :)

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  19. SIMPLY A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! Can't wait for the next post! Anonymously:M

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  20. THANK YOU!
    I'll post soon inshallah :)

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  21. AMAAAZZZZZZZZZZZING. i just love this story and Bandar a7isa mal tigiri9!:*
    Bibiiii:***
    -Hope:*

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  22. Hehehe, i'm waiting:p 3ad wala i wasn't gonna read Giving Up until your done writting it bas 9ara7a i couldn't wait tile it done:P your blog is addactive!
    Anonymously: guess who;p

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  23. Yalla im writing the post biga shwaya :) sawait extra long ;*
    waaay ba3ad 3oumri thank you :p
    Anonymously M! wahal ya5fa el 8amar ?;p

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  24. lool, shafty a7d edsr ou emjab blog?:p thats me. thank you widddddddd! how did you know its me?:p
    Anonymously:M:p

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  25. LOOL ;p HEYYAAA FEE POST NOW !!? XD - hehe tara itha7ik inna we dont know eachother ma7ad i3arif il thany killa afakir inna tara 3ady one day shiftich ib mokan oo ana madry innich 9al7a lool 3alam ghareeb hal blog =p

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  26. I enjoy reading your story..Its interesting and Bandar is intriguing bs law menha a9are5 waiii ma ast7mel berooooooooooda! its annoying and attractive at the same time;p a contradiction like him

    S

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  27. http://theperfectmanforgirls.blogspot.com/2011/12/love-is-crazy-thing.html read please

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