Saturday, February 27, 2010

Dreaming with a broken Heart [31]

Shlounkoum ya 7ilweeeeeeeeen?! :*
wow a7is faj2a 9irna ib part 31 ;p!?

1.Wana aktib hal posts ta3abt ma3a my characters! misaken y3awroon el galb! :/

2.ele yaboun yims7on Dana mn el 8i9a, shraykoum nsawi 3i9aba O nid5al el 8i9a O nithba7ha?! shtabon nsami el 3i9aba? ;p

3.el i'3niya ele m3alga ib rasi hiya! *drum roll*
el 3eed bachr ... gilt el 3eed mabeeh ... el 3eed mo lele mfarig zmaanah! tikfoon 7ali la tgoolon wishfeeeh..

4.EL POST IS LONG! :p la7a'6taw ina last 3 posts are long? O ham hatha long! ni3ma ni3ma!


5.Next post el mafro'6 fe shay EXTRA EXTRA 8awi bas mitradida feeh ;p so ill think about it 3adil ;p

Enjoy it!
this post is dedicated to all of u ;**
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6aiba was on her way to her grandmother's house.

3awaditini kil youm asma3 ana 9ootik… 3awaditini lay '6ag 9adri ma ti5alini… wala O '3yabik 6aaal madri wish asbaba…. Sa3ad el fahad sang through the radio.

Tears formed in 6aiba's eyes when she heard the song! She felt that the song is talking about her situation with 3umar.

La ma ra7 abchi!

She wiped her tears away.

9fi6at sayarat.ha and she checked the cars.

Sayarat 5alod, 3athbo, 3ami, 7amani.
3amor lal7en ma ya!

She took a deep breath & walked in.

6aiba: el salam 3alaikoum

3athba: ahlaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaain

3athba jumped from her place & hugged 6aiba

6aiba: ooh ahlan… 3athba…3athbo… magdar…atnafas.

Everyone laughed.

3athba: hehehe sorry.

She looked around & didn’t find 3umar… salimat O g3adat.

Sara: SO! Shlounch al7en?

6aiba: tamam!! A7san ib wayed el 7imdallah

"Shaklich kilish mo a7san" Sara whispered in 6aiba's ears.

6aiba stock her tongue out.

Um 3umar entered the room, 6aiba gamat bitsalim.

Um 3umar: hala 7abebte! 5alich ga3da ya galbi lal7en ta3bana wala 9irtay a7san?

6aiba: hehe shda3wa 3amiti! 7asastooni ini kint ib '3aybooba O tawni gayma hehehe kiliha sa3tain O 6ala3t

Um 3umar: hehehe 7abebete intay smila 3alaich, ba3ad 5ifna 3alaich!

6aiba smiled , She sat down then The boys came from outside

5alid: Roooooooo7 zaaaaaaain…ele ygool ga3deen nadris 6ib! Kilha business tara!

7amani: 6ib wala business mo hamni el mohim ina o5oy el jameel wil sha6ir ib yit5araj galbik!

The girls laughed

7amani: ohhh hathi 6ab6ab!

6aiba nodded

7amani: sha5barich el 7ub! Sam7ene ma yeetich el mistashfa, 9ij ma 3indi 3ithir bas ham sam7ene

6aiba: hehehe masmoo7, shlounk?

7amani: tamam

7amani sat beside 6aiba

7amani: 6ayouba 9ayra sh7alatich

6aiba: *gasp* 7amani! ista7 3ala wayhik la t'3azilni jidamhoum in6rhoum yroo7on!

Everyone laughed.

Um 3umar: ka sh7alatik tgool kalam ma3sool laish ma nzawijk O tgool hal 7achi 7ag mirtik?!

3athba: waaaaaaaaaay ma at5ayal!

7amani: la7'6a 3athbo arid 3alaich ba3ad shway, shno yuma? Shbagool 7ag murti? kalam ma3sool?!

Um 3umar nodded

7amani: dam bagoolha "kalam ma3sool!" aked ib ta6lib el 6alag mn thani youm

Everyone laughed

7amani: ee '6i7kaw! ma5thene mas5ara!

6aiba: a9lan ya ba5at murtik fek!

7amani blow her a kiss

6aiba: gitlik mo jidamhoum!

& Again everyone laughed

3umar entered the house, He was talking on the phone

Ee inshallah … mashkour o5oy.

*click*

5alid: 7ay Allah 3amor!

3umar: *smile* y7ayeek 7abebe

He saw 6aiba & froze in his place, Sara saw that & she wanted to save the moment so she ran towards him, 3athba winked at Sara & ran out of the living room.

Sara: abaih 3amor laykoun ta3awart?

3umar gave her a "huh" look.

3umar: umm la ma ta3awart

She hugged him & whispered in his ears

"la y7son!"

3umar: *sigh* ba7awail

Um 3umar: Yuma 3amor laish mita3wir?!

3umar Salam wi9al lay 6aiba... she didnt stand up, she didnt even look at him.

3umar: uh 6aiba shlounch?

6aiba: tamam inta shlounk?

Um 3umar: 3amor ma giltle shile 3awirik?!

3umar: mako shay bas wana wagif bil eshara da3amni wa7id mn wara O kasar el light mal el sayara

7amani: OOB! KASAR LIGHT EL RANGE!

3umar: hehehe ee!

5alid: O shsawait?!

3umar: 5athait ra8ma O itifa8na ina y9al7ha 3ala 7saba la2ana ohwa el '3al6an O mala da3i shir6a

Um 5alid: ee zain tsawi yuma

3athba came into the room

6AYOOOOOOOOOOOOOB!

6aiba fazat mn mukanha!

6aiba: haaa?!

3athba: bsir3a bsir3a ta3alay!

6aiba: ok ok!

6aiba walked towards 3athba & 3umar's eyes followed her.

6aiba: shfeech?!

3athba took her to the kitchen

6aiba: haw shfeech?!

3athba: mafene shay!

6aiba raised an eyebrow.

3athba: shno?!

6aiba sat on the kitchen counter.
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-In the living room-

Sara sat beside 3umar

Sara: 3amor!

3umar: haa?

Sara: mama badriya tabeek bil ma6ba5

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-In the kitchen-

3athba: wait mo china a7ad nadani?

6aiba: la ma sima3t shay

3athba: imbala omi badriya nadatni

6aiba: yalla imshay

3athba: laaaaa! 5alich! *nervous laugh* Baroo7 ashof shtabe O ayeech! Bagoolich salfa 5a6eera!

6aiba: ok?

3athba walked out of the kitchen & found 3umar

3umar: omi badriya da5il?

3athba: ee *wide smile*

3umar entered the kitchen & found 6aiba sitting on the kitchen counter, her eyes on the floor.

shakilha ta3bana… wain omi badriya? *sigh* shakilha wa7da mn 7arakat 3athba O Sara.

When 3umar was about to leave 6aiba lifted her head & saw him.

Her eyes teared up when she saw him.

3umar uff ya lait.ha mo raf3a ras.ha, ta7t 3younha aswad O 3younha 7umr shakilha nafs 7alti mo ga3d tnam 3adil... he cleared his throat: omi badriya mo hne?

6aiba shook her head.

3umar turned around to leave the room.

6aiba: shda3wa 3amor, 7ata ma sa2altni shlouni?

3umar turned around & faced her.

31 comments:

  1. 7alat'hm 9a3baa yksroon bl 5aaa6r </3

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  2. 2nd comment !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    cowii's friiend ;**

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  3. 3rd ifffffff lail7een ma 9irt first ifff ;(
    i'll read it now ;p

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  4. alah yaster mn al post :s 3sa ma y9dm

    oo tra ely gably cowii;**

    awrad

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  5. omg....7da waaaay lish chthi :( ambi 7da msakin..

    7althom tksr al5a6r :'(

    tslam edch 7yati ;**

    awrad

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  6. waaaay zoqaaaa, cowii galatlii 3an qe9etich oo kint agraha min il post 11, bas ma kint a3aleq bas al7een 7asait ena lazem a3aleq oo wallah sara oo 3athba 7arakat.houm 7ada '9a7ekouni waiting 4 your next post;*
    LOVE U

    NEDO;*
    >Cousin Cowii;* oo Awrad;*

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  7. hi shlonich... ana new hni 7ada shawigoni "cawi.award.nedoo" :P achoofhom esolfon 24 sa3a b3adin glat lazim agraha bs sorry ana tawni garyat'ha bs enshallah ra7 agraha klha w awa9likom enshallah 3shan akoon m3akom mo bro7i :S w7ada thnx 3la el post oo el 89a 7adha 7adha 3ajeeba wtslimin ......


    F6amii
    *cuzin nedo cuzin cowii oo Awrad;** :P:P

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  8. Waaay hal post 3ajeeeeb;*
    oo il 3e9aba khansamehaa "NO SILLY DANA" ;p
    Guess what we're bil mazra3aa oo metyam3een 3al laptop oo ana ga3da agralehoum il post walla 7ada meshta6een, oo all of us are commeting min one laptop oo ga3deen entahawash mino awal :P
    kal 3ada agoulich qe9atich yanenatnaaaaaaaaa :Pp
    Oo LOVE U 7adaaaaaaaaaa;***

    Cowii;**

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  9. waaaaaaaaay yakseroon il5a6er !!!!
    wallah law agdar adesh ilstory w a9ale7hum ana chan dasheat !!!
    w eee nabe hathe il3e9aba 3jebatny w ee esm il3e9aba ely galeta cowii ;D "no silly dana"!!
    yalla waiting 4 the next post!!
    love ur story w love u 7addddddddddddddddi ;**

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  10. laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa222
    wallla 6ayouuub ooo 3amooour maystahlooon:'(
    babchhiii...wallla babchii 3ala 7alt'houmm:'(!!
    9allloo7a ba3ad akoo post a8wa min chithii
    latg63een gloobna zyada law sam7tayy!!;p
    waaaaayyy....manii gadra a3br...shagool oo sha5alii...
    post sooon;***
    -M10

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  11. il comment elly foog ana
    cowii's friend "3K;*"

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  12. 9al7a 9alo7a 9la7la7 :D

    tra 7di an6r your comment :D

    adri 7adi 7ana looooooooool ;p,,,

    shraych bgrobna,,,?

    3geb 9a7 ;p

    LOVE U 9al7oo ;**

    Awrad ;**

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  13. SuziQ
    7adhoum :(

    Cowii's friend
    7ayallah el 2nd ;*

    Cowii.
    Next post inshallah ;p

    Awrad
    Kint rada 3alaiha anon youm garait cowwi 3adalt.ha ;p

    Rawan
    Next post tadren :p

    Awrad;*
    7ada :(
    Ysalmich 7abebete ;*

    NEDO;*
    Ahaaalin 7ayach ib my blog love ;*
    Love u too ;*

    F6amii;*
    Ahlain ;* im fine u shlounch?
    waaaaaaaay ba3ad 3oumari ihabloun ;*
    I hope u like the story ;)

    Cowii;*
    WAAAAAAAAAAY A7IBKOUM! U GUYS MADE MY DAY!
    Have fun bil mazra3a O baskoum nijra ;p
    Love u too 7aaaaaada ;*

    Anon.
    LOL ya7ilwich;p taben ada5ilich? el ba6ala anon ;p LOL 5ala9 ill just check cham member yabi ysajil ;p
    Love u too ;*

    M10;*
    la la wili ysalmch la tabcheen :(
    lol off next post 7ADA a8wa hatha wala shay 3ala next post!
    will do inshallah ;*

    3k;*
    hala O '3ala ;*

    Awrad;**
    awrad awrada awradrad ;p
    kani 7a6ait comment ;p
    7anich 3aasal 3ala galbi ;*
    a7la group bil dinya ! u made my day wala ;*
    Love u too ;**

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  14. waaaaaaaaaaaaay 9al7aaaa entay 3ajeeeeba !!!
    wallah love u 7addddddddddddddddddddddi ;**
    cowii's friend [3K;*]

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  15. the story is getting better & better!!!
    i do like 3umar..i really do..bas lo ana mukan 6aiba a7gera!! shino hatha chinha ga3da et6er minna!! el 7egran ega63 el me9ran!! bas 5al ta7gera cham yom o ohwa eyeelaha laih 3ind eryoolha:p
    thx again;*
    A

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  16. 9al7a tara ana cowii's friiend elly dayman i comment bas 7a6eatly nick name >> 3K ;**

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  17. 3K;*
    thank you, intay a3jab ;*
    Love u too hun. ;*

    Anon. A
    wainich i5tifaitay?! ;p
    Thank you ;*
    I agree! maybe ib ta7gira! or maybe she wont! u never know ;p
    intay ele thanks ;*

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  18. 3k;*
    Ahha ok ok 3araftich ;p
    Hala O '3ala ;*

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  19. Akrah.3amoor.period :)
    -Anon N

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  20. uffffff a7iiiiib 3amooor wayed bsss a7isa waaaai3 3'aaaabai maynoooon ma yefham 5abal laish chithi uff uff :@ plzzzzzzzzzz post soooon plz plz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz love you o shino el post el 8awi eli yay o laish metradida is it something baaad ??? yala poost soon
    um flfola

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  21. Im so hooked !! wallah 3ajeebaa ur story mashallah
    walla a7es i live with it
    7adhaa realistic!!
    im loving it
    cnttt wait for the next post
    xoxo;**
    May-yay;p

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  22. Anon N;*
    Hala ib Anon sha3iratna ;*
    yabela shi3ir yloog ib 7alat.houm al7en ha? ;p
    u'll hate him akthar bil next post (A)

    um flfola
    LOOOOL masken ma 5alaitay saba ma sabaiteeh ;p
    inshallah i'll post very very soon !
    I wont say if its bad or good (6)

    Exposed insanity
    A new reader? :p 7ayaach ib my blog :)
    THANK YOU thank you thank you ;*
    will post soon inshallah :)

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  23. maaa 6ilaaabtyyyyyy shayyyyy 9aloo7a;* afa 3laich bas cham 9al7a 3indna i7na??!:P
    hal shi3r lajl 3younch!
    طاوعك قلبك تغيب وتهجـر أحبابـك تنسـى غلاهـم وتتركهـم وتنساهـم
    حرام تترك خفـوق يشكـي غيابـك وأنته بقلبي اعـز النـاس واغلاهـم
    ناديت والصوت لا شـدك ولا يابـك يا سيدي يا عديـل الـروح يـا فاهـم
    وانت بوجه اشتياقـي تغلـق ابوابـك وانا اقرب الناس من قلبك و أوفاهـم
    نسيت حتى تقول اشفيك وش صابـك يوم الألم عـذب عروقـي واشقاهـم
    بديت ناس علـى ناسـك واصحابـك ما اتعبـت نفسـك تدورهـم وتلقاهـم
    نامت عيونـك ونـام الليـل باهدابـك والي شكوا غيبتك ذالنـوم مـا ياهـم
    زادوا على جرحهم كم جرح باسبابـك وان اقبل الليل صوت الجرح صحاهم
    أرسل لك عتاب قلبي و أحسب حسابك وأبياتي البيض دايـم باسمـك ابداهـم
    يجبرني الشوق يجبرني على عتابـك واتمنى تقرا وتعـزف قبـل تقراهـم
    لمت الخفوق الي اذا قابلك هـلا بـك يا اطيب الناس في عينـي وأغلاهـم
    طاوعك قلبك تغيب وتهجـر أحبابـك تنسـى غلاهـم وتتركهـم وتنساهـم
    w salamatkum;*
    -Anon *i7m* il sha3era;P N

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  24. Ba3ad 3oumri N;* Mashkorra ;**

    نامت عيونـك ونـام الليـل باهدابـك والي شكوا غيبتك ذالنـوم مـا ياهـم

    a5aaaih :/ 3awartay galbi ib hal ga9eeda ya N ;*
    9a7 elsanich ;*

    3ashat sha3iratna !! *sharbika* ;p

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  25. il 3afooooo 7abeebty masawaina shy;** tstahlain akthaar o smila 3la galbch!tara ildinya ma tswaa '97ky wl dinya ti'97klch;)btw tdreen iny ga3d a3eed 8i9tch mara thanya KILHA mn kthr ma ana 7ady 7abat.ha!!!!! ;p ako part 7ada '9a7akni nsait which post bass its when 3athba has her yam3a w itdz msgs 7ag il shabab it5aberhom ina ako yam3a fe bait il shamiya fa la yoon iydar3imoon 3laihom o 5alid o 3amoor's replies were so funny!:P haha waay 3laiha 5ibla bas twanes!:p lat6awleen pweez(A)
    -Anon N aka il sha3era ;p haha tara wayed 5atht 3l wath3 o gmt amooog 9alo7a agolich mn al7een tara ana mo wayh madee7 kilish! o ma an36y wayh بتاتاً! tarany 7athartch!;P heheh 7ilwa hathy bataatn mo?;)

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  26. gabil la arid 3alaich bas bagolich ina

    Thba7atni

    thba7atni

    بتاتاً

    O la ma3a el tnaween ba3ad? *standing ovation*

    lol ba3ad 3oumri 7abitich el 3afya;* ee 3athba t'6a7ik mo 9a7ya ;p!
    mani m6awla inshallah :)

    moogay yuba moogay ma 3indina ila N wa7da ra'6een tmoogen 3alaina :p! bas haa mo tmoogen wayed ham ana a7athrich! ;p

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  27. 3AWAR GALBBBBBBBBBBBBBB 9ALOOO7A LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAISH???

    yalla pls let them kiss and make up :P

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  28. Nawarii
    Shasawi ba3ad (A)

    Maaafeeesh kissing ib my story ya 7ayati ;p!
    btshofen next post shbe9er just wait! ;p

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  29. hahhaha inshallaaahhh intay t2amreen 2mr !! ma bat3adaa 7dooodi:P bamoog 3ad ha 3l 5afeef hehe;p y7glii walla y7gli agra 8i9tch o blogch il mitwath3 shlooon ma amoog inty 3almeeni bas ibthimtch shloon agraa ure blog o ma amooooog;*?! yalla na6ra ure posts 3la a7mr mn il jamer!!
    -Anon N

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