Sunday, February 28, 2010

Dreaming with a broken Heart [32]

Quwa:*

1.WAY 3A9ABT !!
KITABT EL POST! CHAN MADRI SHE9ER IB BLOGGER! UFF! I had to write it mara thanya! :s

2. shiftaw Ad. zain el yided? I love that kid mashallah!

3. garaitaw el shi3ir ele 7a6ita Anon. N, etha la read it ib the comments on part 31;)
9afga 7ag sha3ratna plz! *standing ovation*. N a5af tmoogen 3alaina zyaada 3gob el standing ovation ;p!

4. Cowii & her cousin 7adkoum 3AJEBEN ;*

5.LONG post ! ;p

This post is dedicated to Anon. N ;**

Enjoy it ;*

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3umar turned around to leave the room.

6aiba: shda3wa 3amor, 7ata ma sa2altni shlouni?

3umar turned around & faced her.

3umar: shlounch?!

6aiba: La wala?! WAYED 3ALAIK 3AMOR! WAYED 3ALAIK!

3umar's heart aced…6ayouba asif wala asif!

3umar: shtabene asawi?!

6aiba: 5ANGOOL MIT!? 3ADI?! 3ADI TIS2AL 3ANI!

3umar: law mitay chan wi9alni el 5abar

6aiba felt like someone punched her heart!

She put her hand on her heart… her body was numb… eyes full of tears


*slap*



6aiba gave him a slap on his face… he stood still; she leaned on the kitchen counter to give her support.

Mo gadra a9adig ina hal insan ile wagif jidami ohwa 3umar…shloun chithi barid? Shloun ma ahima?!

"3amor?" She put her hand on his heart… he lowered his head.

She wanted to feel his heart beats , she wanted to make sure that his heart still beats, she wanted to know if his heart still beats for her.

6aiba: shfeek 3amor! Shfeeh galbik! Laish faj2a gisait 3alay! Shsawait lik *sniff* shsawait! bas 3alimni shsawait!

3umar felt like holding her in his arms & taking all the pain away, kan wida ygoolha ina y7bha, kan wida ygoolha ina asif, kan wida ygoolha ina 9ij yistahil el kaf ele 3a6ita iya, kan wida ygoolha ina gaswita ele ga3da tshoofha ihya '6a3f O ina ta3ban bidonha O ina walhan 3alaiha, Kan wida ygoolha ina wida yba6il 3aina kil youm welageeha yama! Kan wida ygoolha wayed ashya2 bas ma gidar ma gidar.

She wiped away her tears… shalat eedha mn 9adra.

6aiba: shift dmoo3i hathi? Ma tistahilha! Ma tistahil wala dam3a inzalat mn 3aini 3ashanik!

3umar: 6ayouba ana…

She walked away leaving him shocked & ashamed from himself.

6aiba entered the living room & found everyone moving to the dining table

Perfect! Youm yeet ba'3ayir mokani 3ashan ma ag3ad yama el kil jahiz O ga3id! 6ool 3oumri ana awal wa7da zahba 7ag el bal3a O Kilhoum mt2a5reen!

She looked at 3athba & gave her a death stare.

3athba '3a9at bil akil

Grandmother: weeh smila 3alaich! 3a6ooha may

3athba: *cough* mafene shay *cough*

5alid 9ablaha may

5alid: shirbaaay shirbaaay la y9eer fech shay

Sara: awwwwwwwwwwww! Zoo8a t5af 3alaiha!!

3athba coughed harder & everyone laughed.

6aiba sat down

Grandmother: sha7i6lich yuma?!

6aiba: ana a7i6 7ag nafsi mama el akil greeb

Grandmother: 3ala ra7tich, ila wain 3amor ma ashofa?

Sara: aaah aro7 ashofa waina?

Um 3umar: la kaho

3umar entered the dining table

7amani: 3umrik 6iweel tawha omi badriya tgool 5al9aw el akil gabil la iye 3amor

Everyone laughed.

Grandmother: 7amani! Bt5arib 3ala8ti ma3a 7afede ashoof?!

3umar's mobile rang

His father: 3amor hid el telephone O ta3al ta'3ada

3umar: inshallah

He sat on his chair next to 6aiba.

6aiba: 7amani 7i6le sala6a please

7amani: 3amoro 7i6laha sala6a

6aiba: haw 7amani laish 3ayzan t7i6le?

7amani: mo 3ayzan bas el sala6a agrab 3ala 3amor

3umar mad eeda O 7a6laha sala6a.

3umar's mobile rang again

6aiba aked Dana!

3umar uff 3baid 7ana!

While eating his hand brushed into her's a few time, her body shivered every time it happened

They finished their food & went back to the living room

Grandmother: tabon el chay al7en wala ba3ad shway?

6aiba: ba3ad shway.

Grandmother: 3amor wain 5alod O 7amani

3umar: inzalaw el diwaniya

Grandmother: haw masra3 ma in7ashaw

3umar: hehehe

Grandmother: ti'67ak ha? A9lan law mo imnadetik chan nizalt warahoum

3athba: hahahaha 9adoooooooooooh!

3umar laughed.

Um 3umar & um 5alid entered the room.

Um 3umar: eee ya 7iloha t.habil!

Um 5alid: yalla 3ad 5al y5ali9na 3amor, nabe nzawijoum wara ba3a'6!

Um 3umar: 3ayazt wana agola!

They sat down & 6aiba was busy with her mobile.

Um 3umar: 3amor yuma tathkir Badriya el flani?

3umar: la

Um 3umar: haw! Rifejat el banat!

3umar: ma 3afat.ha laish?

Um 3umar: 6ayouba ma 3indich 9orat.ha?!

6aiba imbala 3indi 9orat.ha!: Badoora? La ma 3indi 9ort.ha

Um 3umar: 3ayal mno mn el banat 9awirat ma3aha thak el youm

6aiba ana! : ma athkir

Um 3umar: way 3amor shloun ma tathkirha ams kanat 3indina!

3umar: yuma ya3ni ba6il ib wayh kil el banat ele biyoun baitna? Laish shfeha!?

Grandmother: way ya7iloha isimha badriya?! T9eer murt 3umar simete?!

3umar: murt 3umar?!

Grandmother: ee murtik! El bnaya 7ilwa O refeejat el banat o 5osh bnaya O galat omik ina etha 3jibtik in5a6iblik iyaha!

6aiba sunk into the couch , 3athba looked at her with wide eyes.

6aiba aked begool la ta56booli yaha!




3umar: kaifkoum 5i6booli ele tabonha

30 comments:

  1. FIIIIIRSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT 5al aroo7 agra now:D:D:D:D
    -Anon N

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  2. MA9ADIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

    OMG 9ALOOO7A ANA MA93OOOQA 3YOONI 6LI3AW MN MOKANHUM...LAAAAAAAAAAAAAISH YA 3AMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR....

    BACHYAAAAITINI YA 9AL7A.....kil dam3a nezlat men 3ain 6ayooba nezlat mn 3yooni

    3awar galb

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  3. a7777 ouch laish che !!!!
    ybu6 elchabd !!! :'(
    mo looooong hatha nabi ba3ad 6ama3een e7na !!
    thanx ;*** love ittttt !!

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  4. 9arly sena facha il lap oo ga3da an6er oo ham mo first ;( waaaaaay 7a'9ii khayess :( ..
    am gonna read now;*
    oo U a3jaaab ;** :P

    Cowii;*

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  5. AKRAAAAH AKRAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 3OMARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!! LAISH LAISH TSAWI CHITHI YA 3OMAR LAISH ;( tadreen awal ma garait il dedication 7adyyy shgait il 7alj:P o b3ain lamn grait il post kila 3amoro 3akar mazaji:@ zain chithi ya 3omro!
    mashkoooooooooooooraaaaaa 3la il dedication ;*******

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  6. o nesait la aktb ismy ..Anon N ure favourite;)hehe

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  7. OMG.. la 7adaaaaa mo 9ij 3amouur yaqheeeeeeeeeeeeer ;@ laish chii sawa waaaay ;(
    la walla hal post yi'9ayig il khilg bas ely i was shocked mena oo ma stw3abta ena she slaped him :| :s..
    oo 7ayatii ksarat kha6rii lama she put her hand on his heart </3 ;(
    ambaai 7adii mabii afaker shino be9eer 7ada waiting your next post 3ALA A7AR MIN IL JAMER ;P
    LOVE U;**

    Cowii;*

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  8. hathi kalemat i'3nya, il kalimat wayd tloog 3la il post o 7alat 6ayouba o 3amoor !
    كانك صدق تحبني وايد رد قبل يفوتك أوانك لا تخلي البعد يتزايد تبتعد و يطول نسيانك

    sima3t ya 3amooor.. rddddddddd rd la 6ayoba itha int 9ij t7ibha gabl la yfoot il awan o t'9ee3 mn eedk 6ayouba bala hal brood i97a shwy!! ;P
    -Anon N

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  9. 3umar a'3ba insaan fl dnya klha! He loves 6aiba fa whyyy is he doing this? 7araam 6aiba, t7azeen a7bhaa :(
    Intenseee post!! AS USUAL I LOVEEEED IT :* ANOTHER POST TODAAY?? PLSSS (A) xxxxxxx

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  10. wl ga9eeda ily t3abr 3an post ilayla hya kal2ati:
    *i7m i7m* tzahebay ya 9aloo7a 3ad hathi il ga9eeda 9ij 9ij t3awer il galb ;/

    خلاص يعني كل شَيّ انتهى وراح خلاص يعني مـا بقينـا حبايـب
    يعني وعودك كلها كانـت مْـزاح والاّ انت ما لك في المحبّه رغايب
    وين العهود ووين لحظات الافراح يعني تلاشت مع هبـوب الهبايـب
    القلب بعدك من له اليـوم يرتـاح من بعد ما هو في محبّتْـك ذايـب
    ياما على شانك تحمّلت الاجـراح وياما جروحي من صدودك عطايب
    سرقتني عن جملة الناس يا صـاح والفكـر عنـدك ماخذنّـه نهايـب
    خِلّك يحبّك يا بَعَـدْ سِيْـد المْـلاح إن رحت عنّه راودنّـه مصايـب
    خَلّك معه دام الهوى حيل نضّـاح والواش رِدّه يا هوى البال خايـب
    w salamtkom wt3eeshoon ;*
    -Anon N
    Ps sorry itha ma9a5t,ha bl comments o il ash3ar bass 7sait ina this poem 7adha t3aber 3an ily ga3d iy9eer bl 8i9a!

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  11. OMG OMG 7MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
    WALLAH LU JIDAAAAMI 3AMOOOR IZIFT CHAN THIBA7TA 7ASAFAAA BAS 3A6ITA KAAAAAF;@;@
    plssssssssss pooooooooooooooooooooooooooost todaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay


    Saroona:)

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  12. Ambiiiii mai9er 9aira a3al8 mta5r ;@,,,

    loooooooove u oo tslam edch ya l'3alya 3la hal
    post ya 7yati ;**

    b3ad shwai aktb comment 3la alpost b3ad sheai ;p

    awrad

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  13. OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!
    shfee 3umar yan?!!
    6aiba maskeena :'( wallah she deserves better...bas im a bit confused laish 3umar faj2a 9ar galba gasy chithy & he doesnt want to confess his love 7ag 6aiba?!
    great post...great story... from a great blogger ;p
    luv u ;**
    A

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  14. 9aaaaaaaaaaaaal7a ambi lish chti :'(

    Azamtiny lush chethi lish...!?

    7a6amtiny waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay,,,,

    lish lish lish!

    Lish e9ir feho chthi,,a9ab3i ta3gaz 3an alta3bi :o

    "omg". "omg". 7a6amtay a39abi ya 9al7a


    Awrad. With a big shocked :0

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  15. SHIT SHIT SHIT 5ARAAA FEK 3AMOOOR 7MAR WALA INIK 7MAAAAAAAAAAR MO 9A7I AKEED MAYNOOOON WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI3 I HATE YOU 3UMAr AKRIHIK WAI3 WAI3 7MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR OFFF OFFF SHINO HAL ENSAN MAKO 8ALB MA Y7ES 8ABI MAYNOOOOOON WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAI3

    um flfola

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  16. كنت اقرب من حياتي كنت لجروحي دواه صرت تسمعني
    انادي يا حبيبي و ماتجيب
    hathi 7ag 6iba

    كذبت وقلت ماحبك عشان ابعدك عن دنياي ولابي اوقف بدربك
    ولابي اظلمك وياي

    this 4 3amoor

    hal'3netin tshra7 7al kl wa7d mnhom....

    Awrad

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  17. plllllllllllz post nooooooooooow plz ma ra7 agdar anam elyoooom :( :( :( plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllz tokfa plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 9aloo7a pooost one now plz

    um flfola

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  18. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post today again cant wait tara this is the first time i comment on your bolg mashalla il story is amazing cant wait till the rest

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  19. :O :O I hate 3umar he's unbelievable!! X.x

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  20. NA3AM!!! 3amor min9ija china yabeela kaf thanee y3adil tafkeera

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  21. 3omar ENARFEZ;@ MAAAL KAF HUFFFFF !!!!!
    Laish i3aned!!
    hes not winning anything b3nada;@

    xoxo;*

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  22. Im usually a silent reader..
    bas 9ij ma gidart asket now!
    Ay shaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
    3amor shfee??! maynoooooooooon?!
    walla yistahal il s6ar!
    6aiba maskeena 7adha :(

    Im loving the story!
    and sorry ina I dont comment that much!
    bas iM a dedicated reader :)
    Keep up the good work!
    and Post ASAP Pleaaaase! :)

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  23. abiiiiiiii 7aaaad 9dma 7da moo wkta 3mour ,bs walla 6yooba bd3at fi b3ad mag9rat:s ,abii 7da matw8a3 min 9ja waaay pleeeez laykoon 9j:s
    7di an6r il post eli wara waay 7da kll mara atshwg akthar {alla ystr }love u
    nedo:*

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  24. laaaaaaaaaaa2!!!
    pleease 5alay 30mar egool no to badriya!!!

    3omar + 6aiba = love

    pleasssseeeeeeeee!!!
    oo thanks 3ela il post!!;**


    PinkWorld ~S.S~

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  25. laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa2 9al7aaaa musta7iiiil !!!!
    shfee 3omaaar la wallah mthaye3 !!!!!
    shareb shay !!!! shfeee omba hathe 7ABEEEBAT GALBAA 6AYOOOOOOUB !!!! liish chethee 9al7aa wallah knt 3ala washak eny abche w ana ga3da agra ilpost !!!! 9al7aaa 7aram wallah 7araam !!
    knt 7addddi a7b 3amoour bas now 7e8adt 3liiih !!
    wallah mn 9iiiije !!!!
    9al7aaa amana lazm eyred 7ag 6ayooub b2ay 6aree8a !! ;( ;(
    w ba3daiiiin om 3omar shfeeha testahbel !!!
    tadree ena 3OMOOUR Y7EB 6AYOOOUB W ENA 6AYOOUB T7EBA !!!!
    ya3nee etha ohwa ma yabe yetzawaj now mu ya3ne ma yabe yetawaj 6AYOOUB !!!
    5al tfaker 3addddl shfeeha !!!
    w ba3daiin mu 7aram etgool chethee jedam 6ayooub !! ya3nee shnoo tabee et7erha wala tabe takser galbhaaa !!!!

    waaaaaaaay 6ayooub 7ayatiii la tez3eleen wallah 3amoour yayatla 7ala nafseya bas shway w inshallah ra7 eyred liich cuzz ohwa ymoooot feech !!!

    ilpost 7addddddda 8awiiiiiiii w moo 9iiij amana nabe ilpost elly waraa bserr3aaa !!!
    ga3daaa 3ala a39abeee !!!!!!!!

    with all my love 2 9al7a ;*
    cowii's friiend ;*
    3K ;**

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  26. KARRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHTTTTTTTTTTT
    3OOOMAAAAAARRRRR!!!!
    ISH'HAAALLLLL BIRROOOODDD
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY I7IIIIIIRRRRR
    WAAALLLLAAA WAAALLLAAAAA...7ilaft yaa 9aloo7aaa
    IN TIZAWAJ '3AIR 6AYBAAAA ITHB7AAA!!!
    min chithiiii irtf3 '9a86 6ayooba oo il siba ohoo!!!
    ....laken i have this huge feeling ina biroo7oon oo byt8admoon 7ag badriya oo ba3dain he'll go meet her and everything ooo bitwaf8 oo 6ayouba maskeena bit9eed'ha 7ala nafsiyya laken lain 9ar il9ij biytsw3eb ina ohoo athwal ooo 7mmaarrr ooo ..(ili tabeeena;p) oo biyrja3 7ag 6ayoubaaa!!!
    oo he'll admit to her that he was this stupid jerk and she could slap him again if she wants to:D! shee'll be glad to take him back but not before smacking him;p!
    sorrryyy my imagination sometimes runs wild...adrii gargt wayeddd;p
    sam7eeene 9aloo7aa
    bass hal post...8AWIIIII!! ma gdrmt amsk nfsii kint lazzm abard chabdi;p!
    post soooon tara kilina na6reeen 3laa a7r min il jamr;p;p!!!
    -M10

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  27. I CAN'T BELIEVE HIM!!! UGH!!

    YA3NEEE AFTER ALL THIS THE ONLY REASON HE BACKED AWAY WAS BECAUSE HE THOUGHT HE AND 6AYOOB WERE NOT READY FOR MARRIAGE BUT TO SAY THAT!!! :O :O :O ;O

    oh i think this is probably the first time i comment but I LOVE UR STORY!!

    but i want to smack 3moor's head!! ya3nee yista3bi6?!

    I'M LOVING EVERY LITTLE BIT...omg when he said "kaifkoum 5i6booli ele tabonha" i felt PAIN!! way 7abeebty 6ayooob!!! hahaaahhaha
    can't wait for the next post :D :D i seriously can't wait :P

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  28. N;*
    7ayallah el first ;*

    Nawarii
    Waaaay smila 3ala 3younch ;p!
    la la ma a9adig?!! la t7asisene bil thanb ya nawarii! ;p
    7adah :/

    Anon.
    7adah :(
    Ola hatha mo long 7aram 3alaich ;p
    Thank you! ;*

    Cowii;*
    wala mara first maskeena ;p! may5alif inshallah next post! ;p

    Anon N;*
    shdarach inch my fav.? LOL ya7ilwich ;*
    ee walah Laish ya 3amoor!
    el 3afoo 7abebete ;***

    Charmbracelet
    Madri 3ana! ;p

    Cowii;*
    7ada yaqhir!
    ee maskena taksir el 5a6ir :"(
    Yalla I posted go read ;p
    love u too ;*

    Anon N;*
    a5aaaaih :/
    ee wala sima3t ya 3amor! isma3 mn N tara 5osh bnaya ;p!

    Anon.
    mo a'3ba mn sayi8na ;p lol la jk!
    Thank you !! :*
    I posted now ;p! Enjoy it ;*

    Anon N
    Ok ni6ray batzahab..... *tizahabt* Ok yalla bagra..
    وين العهود ووين لحظات الافراح يعني تلاشت مع هبـوب الهبايـب
    a5aaaaaaaih :/
    9a7 elsanich ;*
    weeh ba3ad 3omri kilish ma ma9a5teeha el blog blogich :* 7adha t3abir 3an 7alat.houm :(

    Anon sarona
    7adah ;p
    I just posted :p
    enjoy it ;*

    Award
    Allah ysalmch 7abebete ;*
    LOL ok ;p

    Anon A.
    madri 3ana! ;p
    Oma galatla Yah t5a6ibha ya twa5ir 3anha! Fa 8arar ina y9er gasi ma3aha 3ashan tikraha witwa5ir 3ana get it now?
    Thank you hun. intay el great walah ;**
    Love u too ;)

    Award
    SORRY :(
    ma agdar agool ila sorry :p


    um flfola
    Wow um flfola 9ij karahtay 3umar ;p

    Award
    Off 7adha t3abir !

    um flfola
    I just posted ;p

    Anon.
    Thank you ;*
    I just posted :)

    SuziQ
    Me2!;p

    Rawan
    I agree!

    Exposed Insanity
    I agree!

    Shushu
    Bakathir mn hal posts 3ashan ma t9eren a silent reader (6)
    Thank you ;**
    I just posted enjoy it ;*

    Nedo
    imbala lil asaf 9ij shloun mo 9ij ;p!
    Thank you;*

    PinkWorld
    y9eer 5air ;p!
    Thank you:*

    3K ;**
    waaaaaaay intay 7aram 3alaich 7asastene bil thanb :(
    kilman 7a8ad 3alaih ;p
    inshalah y9er 5air!
    MADRI 3ANHA TISTAHBIL YIMKIN;p!
    7adha maskena 6ayouba :(
    Thank you ;*
    I posted yalla go read!! ;p

    M10
    M10 hadaaaaaaaay! taben ana wiyach nroo7 nithba7a? yalla imshay! ;p
    ee shiftay shloun rifa3 '6a'36ha!
    wow alaftay 8i9a kamla ;p!
    lol thank you ;**

    licious;***
    7ayallah licious! New reader?;p
    OFF ME2!
    Thank you ;*
    madri 3ana malee8! ;p
    THANK YOU! ee 7aram taksir el 5a6ir :(
    LOL thank you ba3ad 3oumri,I just posted ;*

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  29. ABAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIH LA2 LA2 3UMAR IB QIMMAT IL MALAQA YA RABBE LO ANA CHAN THEBA7TA SHAL BUROOOOODA!!! MIN 2 AM W ANA GA3DA AGRA YOUR BLOG TAWNE MIKTASHFETA!! IM ADDICTED TO YOUR STORY 7ADHA 3AJEEBA! KHALED W 3ATHBA ESHAWGOOOOON<3 WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT POST;*!!

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