Monday, March 1, 2010

Dreaming with a broken Heart [33]

Quwa;* shlounkoum?
adri mirtifi3 '6a'36kouum 3goob last post ;p

1. hadaw a39abkoum! ;p

2. ham hadaw a39abkoum!

3. HADAW A39ABKOUM!

Next post ham 8awi ;p! Don't ask if its bad or good just wait & u'll see :p

Enjoy it ;*

I LOVE U ALL!;*

This post is dedicated to all how felt 6aiba's pain! :/

EXTRA LONG POST
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3umar: kaifkoum 5i6booli ele tabonha

6aiba felt like someone just gave her a strong slap on the face, tamat it6ali3 3umar O 3youna kanat 3ala el ar'6, he looked weak, she was shocked, she was beyond shocked!

3athba: NA3AM! Mn 9ijik inta! O 6a…

3umar ga6a3ha: 3ATHBA!

Grandmother: 3athba?!

3athba was giving 3umar death stares, he kept his head down.

Grandmother: mumkin a3arif ish9ayir?

6aiba tried to save the situation

6aiba: mo 9ayir shay yuma! 3athba t5arbi6

3athba: la ma a5arbi6! 3amor y7ib …. wa7da! O 3ashan chithi mo ra'6i yitzawaj lal7en!

6aiba closed her eyes and sunk in the couch again.

Um 3umar was shocked! 3athba tadri?!

Grandmother: haw y7ib?! inzain t3rfenha?

3athba: haa? La ma a3rfha bas adri ina y7ib fa 7aram ma yitzawajha 9a7?!

Grandmother: ee 9a7!

3umar lifted his head & saw 6aiba with her eyes closed he felt her pain… her really did, he knew that what he just said killed her on the inside.

3umar ran his hand through his short hair

3umar: y9er n9akir el maw'6o3?!

Um 5alid felt sorry for him, la7i'6at ina 6aiba tyabisat ib mukanha.

Um 5alid: 7abebe 3amor… goolina mno ele tabeeha wi7na n5a6ibha lik! Witha ma tabe titzawaj al7en may5alif 3al a8al n7i6 3aina 3alaiha 3ashan ma troo7 3alaik!

3umar: 5alti intaw mo fahmen! ….. El bnaya ma tabene…..Ma tabene!

3athba stood up: athbi7ik ana?! La 5al athbi7ik tikfa 5al athbi7ik!

6aiba looked at 3umar in the eyes! He put his head down & sighed deeply.

6aiba pulled 3athba from her hand & sat her down, 6aiba kept her eyes on 3umar, she just wanted him to look her in the eyes & say it again, she knew that he won't be able to say it!
La2ana yadri inha t7iba mithil ma ohwa y7ibha!

Sara: *whisper* hatha mn 9ija! Mn 9ija? 5ibil wala 5ibil!

Um 3umar was shocked Ma38ola 6aiba ma tabe 3umar? laish?

3umar: *sigh* mumkin hal maw'6o3 yitsakar O ma nifta7a mara thanya?

He got up & left the room, leaving everyone shocked.
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The boys were downstairs bil sirdaab.

7amani: il3ab il3ab yal fashil!

5alid: ana fashil! In ma gawalt 3alaik 3 agwal mani 5alid!

3umar was resting on the couch staring at the sealing.

A7ibha a7ibha a7ibha a7ibha was the only word running through his mind.

5alid: GOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL!

3umar faz mn mokana!

7amani: hehehehe shfeek yal athwal!

3umar laughed & rubbed his neck.

5alid: 7mayin yal fashil

7amani: roo7 zain! Baina golain 7abebe!

3umar's mobile rang it was 3abdallah…

3umar: hala el 3ubid

3abdallah: haaala 3amor shlounk?

3umar: b5air int shlounk?

3abdallah: tamam tamam, wainik?

3umar: ib bait yadii, 7ayak el shabab mityam3een bil diwaniya

5alid shouted

TA3AAAL 3BAID 5AL AMAS5IRIK TA3AL

3abdallah: hehehe yalla yay ma3ay 7amodo

3umar: 7ayakoum
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Sara & 3athba noticed that 6aiba was with them but not really with them u know? Lama tig3doon ma3a a7ad wakoun mawjod ma3akoum ib jisma bas 3agla b3ed? B3eeed wayeeed!? Yeah that was it!

Sara: umm tro7on el jam3iya?!!

3athba: 5osh fikra! Ha 6ayouba?

6aiba: ha?

3athba: jam3iya?!

6aiba: ma a7ib jam3yat.houm

3athba: gomay gomay el mohim jam3iya feha akil

Sara: gomay!

6aiba stood up & went with them.

3athba: Yuma! I7na bnroo7 el jam3iya O radeen!

Grandmother: mo it6awloon

3athba & Sara: inshallah

The girls left the house.

Ra7aw el jam3iya sharaw all the junk food they liked, & went back to their grandmother's house.
3athba sfi6at el sayara O inzalaw el Banat

Sara: shda3wa chithi ma'3rora, ya3ni shno ihya el wa7eeda ele allah ma36eeha jamal!!? Waaai3 allah wjamalha 3ad!

Sara was walking backwards O mo shayfa waraha.

Sara: a8ath insana bil 3alam!!

3athba was giving Sara a "shut up" look

Sara: shfeech it6al3ene chithi?

Doooob!

Sara id3amat ib a strong body

A777!

She turned around and found m7amad

Sara: *gasp*

M7amad laughed, then turned his face expration into a serious one

M7amad: 3awartene

3athba & 6aiba were shocked

Sara: int ele 3awartne.

3athba's & 6aiba's jaws dropped & they looked at each other

M7amad: intay ele da3ma fene.

Sara: int ele wagif ib ni9 el 7adee8a!!

M7amad: intay ele mashya O mo shayfa 6ireejich!

3athba grabbed Sara from her arm

3athba: hehehe asfen o5oy, Saro 7ada 5aday!

Sara: ana 5adaywala ohwa ele wagif ib ni9 el 7adeega!

6aiba: Saroon! *stare* Yalla imshaw da5il!

Sara: *whispered* hatha m7amad!

3athba: ooh m7amad Fayrooz?

He pretended as if he didn’t hear them.

M7amad Fayrooz? Hehehe imsolfa 3ani?!

The girls walked into the house… he kept his eyes on Sara until they closed the door.

3umar came out

3umar: 7amodo Kil hatha telephone?! Ma 9arat!

M7amad: hehehe omi O mu7a'6arat.ha el 6iweela

3umar: yalla imsh nil3ab game

M7amad: yalla

M7amad looked at the door one more time

3umar: 7amodo mu3jab ib babna?

M7amad: hehehe .... la7'6a la7'6a! tithakaaaaaaart!

3umar: shfeek?!

M7amad: int ele shfeek? Mo 3ajibni el youm! Ma fizt ib wala game O el booz mada shibrain

3umar: hehehe ana mad el booz shibrain? 7aram 3alaik

M7amad: 3amoro!

3umar: *sigh* 7amodo la t.thakirni tikfa

M7amad: ob ob ob !! la athakrik ba3ad?

3umar nodded

M7amad: sh9ayir! shimsawi min waray!

3umar: heheheh tikfa la t7asisni inik murti mo rifeje

M7amad laughed: 5aaaali9 ta7acha!

3umar told him what happened

M7amad: winta mn 9ijik ma 3indik mani3 y5a6boolik Bidor?

3umar: badriya!

M7amad raised an eyebrow.

M7amad: la tin7ash mn el jawab

3umar: 6ab3an mo mn 9iji! Int mn 9ijik ts2al?! ana zain ma 9ar fene shay el youm! *sigh* 9ayir agi6 el 7achi wana mo mfakir feh!

M7amad: inzain a5af el fikra 3jibat omik O btzajik Badra

3umar: BADRIYA

M7amad laughed

M7amad: ham ma jawabt!

3umar: madri! Lazm akalimha wagoolha ina mo mn 9iji

M7amad: O bint 3amik?

3umar: *sigh* madri … madri shasawi ma3aha

M7amad was quite, he didn’t know how to help his friend, sh3or gasi ina agrab el nass lina y7tajon musa3adana bas ma nadri shloun nsa3id! Ma nadri ib shno nsa3id!

3umar: goom goom 5anroo7 7ag el shabab la ya5thoun doorna

M7amad: hehehe imsh
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3athba: CUTE!

Sara: wai3!

6aiba: hehehe wai3 haa?! Shiftay wayhich youm da3amteeh?!

Sara: *gasp* I hate him!

3athba: yeah yeah yeah

6aiba looked at 3athba: abaih m7amad I love u!

3athba trying to sound like a man: O ana ba3ad a7ibich ya gooomar

6aiba: asti7eeeeeeee!

6aiba fell in 3athba's arms & 3athba fell on the couch.

The girls laughed.

3athba: ee '3ayray jaw! Bidal el drama ele intay feha!

Just like that 6aiba remember 3umar… it's not like she forgot him, But she tried to have fun & forget what happened.

Her smiley face turned into a sad one.

Sara: ops

3athba: way abi6 el chabd!

6aiba: hehehe heeeeeey shfeekoum,Mafene shay…

3athba: umm imshaw 5al nig3ad 3ind omi badriya

6aiba: ana ba6la3 bara shwaya

Sara: 6ayoub!

6aiba: mafene shay! Bas bag3ad broo7ii shwaya!

6aiba left them O 6la3at Bara… g3adat 3ala el swing

Shasawi??! Ansa O 5ala9? China ma 9ar shay O a3amla as a cousin O bas? Ma38ola ba9er el cousin ele 7abat wild 3amat.ha O a5ir shay yitzawaj wa7da thanya O tshofa bil yam3a O galbha ytiga6a3 3alaiha?! Ugh!

She covered her face with her hand & took a deep breath.

3umar: 3baaaid shda3wa ig3ad shway ba3ad

3abdallah: sabochoo ithba7atni 7ana!

She heard their footsteps coming closer…

3umar: ya 3ami 3a6ne yaha azifha O taskit

3abdallah: la 7aram! Imwa3idha mn zmaan awadeeha cinema

3umar: kaifik int ele 5asran bitga3idni ma3a el 5bool 7amod O 5alod

3abdallah: hehehe inta a5bal minhoum 7abebe

3umar: hehehe yalla iglib wayhik

3abdallah got into his car & drove off…

He turned around & found 6aiba sitting on a swing.

He went & sat beside her

6aiba stood up & wanted to leave but her grabbed her hand.

3umar: la tro7en…

21 comments:

  1. FFFIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSSSST!!!!!!!;P:*****
    5232:*

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  2. ANOTHER POST ANOTHER POST PLEAEEAASSEEEEE oo bas cliffhangers !!:P oo 5alid A7IBAAA:**** oo 3umaar yabeelaa 6aag:\ oo 6ayouubaaa takser il5aaa6uur oo sara oo m7ammad eshaawgooon !! oo 3athbaaaa t'6a7ikny oo 9al7aaaaa tyaanin:*****;p oo thaank uu:** oo allah e5aleech naby post thany ilyoum 7eta law short bs abii a3arif she9eer plz post:***
    5232:*

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  3. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay oo ham mo first :@ :@...
    am goning to read now :'(

    Cowii;**

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  4. Aghh 3umaar I'll kill him!! Y8haarnii broodah! 7lailhaa 6aiba <\3

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  5. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay 3amooour ey7er ey7er ey7errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr !!!!!
    laaaa2 mooo 6abiii3ie 3amooour akeed fee shay !!!!!!!
    liiiish cheethe hatheee 6ayoub elly ymoooot feeha !!!!!
    shlooon chethee eysaweee feeha !!?!?!
    ya rabeeeee wallah 3amoour kaaan 6ayeb w zooo8a 7addda liiish che 9aaar now !!!!?
    YAAAAAAAAAAA RAAAAAB YGPPLAHA ENAAA OHWA Y7EBHAAAA W YET2ASAAF MNHA W YGOLAHA ANA BATZAWEJIIICH !!!!

    9al7aaa amana la e6awleeeeeeeen bl next pooost !!!
    amana wallah a39abnaaaa madre shnoo 9aaar feeha ;( !!!!

    with all my love ;**
    3k ;**

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  6. OHHHHHHHH U POSTEDD WANASAA THANKYOUU il7een barou7 agraa;p



    Saroona:)

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  7. Ya rabiiiiiiiii Nehayat your posts TAQTELNIIII.. 7ada I want to know what's going to happen next. Walla hal post 7ada mo 9ij oo hal 3athba ETBARED il chaaaaabd;** :P. Please we want another post today madrii meta bas todaay.. Tadreen maybe wayed enass hated 3oumar after your previous post bas ana lail7een a7eba madrii laish 7uba 7ag 6ayouba yi3awer il galb .. INSHALLA e9er shay zaaain bil next post..
    WIATING 7ag NEXT POST ;D
    LOVE U YA BEST STORY WRITER;***********

    Cowii;*

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  8. waaaaaaaay sara and mohammed are so so cute <3

    i love those two and i miss 5aled and 3thbaa's drama hahahahahaa

    but i seriously can't wait for the next post (A) one more?? (A) i know i'm pushing it but i love where everything is going in this story ;P

    i Hope 3omaar get back to his senses but before that i want him to truely feel like he lost her 3ashan may3eedha hahhahaha
    love ya waiting on the next post :D :D tonight?? (a)

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  9. aaaaaahhhhhhhh yalla make up willii y3afeekum bas ana ta3abt:P

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  10. EYANIIIN IL POST!!! OO U TOO;*** OO INSHALLA INSHALLA ITNAZLEEN ILYOOM(A) oo 9ij Basich cliffhanger! manigdar chithi binmoot:'( oo 3mar badaa3:@ shnw balla 6aiba mako masha3ir ?! 7isballa bs ohwa ily 3indaaa;@ oo i love m7ammed 7ada 5oosh friend;D ya7laylaaaaaa;** oo 3thba etbareed il galib!

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  11. btw ana H;*;D nisaait aktiba min kithir ma eshta6ait;S

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  12. pooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooost pllllllllllllllllllllz plz post now plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 6aiba 7araaaaaaaaaaaaaam :( 3umar min 9ija ma yadri ina 6ayouba t7iba ya3ni shal 8ba2 el zayed bss ham ohwa 7araam o a7iba plz 9aloo7a post one more elyoom plz

    um flfola

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  13. 9al7a entay kla chthy t3lgena :s

    Bs atmna ena erdon 7ag b3a'6 lanhom soooooo cute ;D

    oo sara & m7amad shklhom eshawg m3a b3'6 ;**

    wala twa8a3t ena 3mor makan bwa3ia yom gal 56biha

    rya7tiny alah erai7ch.

    3ad abi now post asra3 mn albarg ;p

    oo tslmen 7yati 3la hal postat elzo8a mthlch ;**


    6b3an 6b3an ana awrad ;D

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  14. umbaaaaai il postaat 3ajebeen ibachooon ... Cant wait

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  15. i hate cliff-hangers!!!!!!!!!
    NEXT POST PLS!!
    ta3abt ana ma3a 3umar o 6aiba!! so heartbreaking :(
    we want more sara+m7amad & 3athba+5alid action plsss!
    loving the story!
    P.S.: thanks for the clarification ;p
    A

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  16. i caaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnntt waaiitttt
    inshhaaallla inshaallla iratheeeha ooo it9ar7aa oo itgoooalaa A7IBIK 3AMOUUURRRRR:D!!!
    oo they finaally live happily ever afteeerrrr;p!
    bass ill possstttt
    .......shagoool oo sha5aalii?!?!?
    it was simplyy A M A Z I N G
    basss a7la part...m7md ooo saraa
    7adhommm zouqaaaaaaaaaaaaa...seriously their cute oo 7adhom laygeeen 3la ba3ath;p!
    -M10

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  17. ahhhhhhhh 3ajeeeeeb elpost 7ad omma 8awi !
    ya36eech el3afya ;***

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  18. sara tenage3 '67ik!
    w elboys mayanneeen!
    i love this story!!!
    secret confession:.........I LOVE M7MD!!!!!
    w a7s shay 5a6eeeer danger zonish is coming up,bs shakla happieesh!

    lob it<3

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  19. Woooow, awal mara ma3ndy shay agoola ib9ara7a ana i7trt wiya 3amoor (3ishtaw 7ade 3ysha il door;p)
    -luv always Anon N

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  20. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai 3athab akthar hal post 9alooo7a....ish3igba ya 3amoor itgool 7ag 6ayooba la tro7eeen ish3igbaaaaaaaaaa....ga63aat galibna ow bachaytna...

    WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO SAY 3AMOOOOOR?

    ehda2 3athab el3ashegeeen ...

    9alooooo7a bardeee gloobna tekfaaaaaaaaaaain....mwaaaa7 a7ibich

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  21. Anon. 5232:*
    LOL I just posted! O ill try my best 3ala part el cliff hanger but I dont promise !;p
    intay tyanineen akthaar ;** O I just posted! O mashkoura waaaaaaaaaayed ;*

    Cowii;*
    Malich 7a'6 bil first ;p!

    SuziQ
    Off 7adah! ee maskeena 6ayouba :/

    3k ;**
    Madri sh9aaaar feh madri;p!
    Ollla kil hathail marra wa7da ;p!
    Wala ma 6awalt! I just posted ;)
    weeeeeeeeeh smila 3ala a39abich!

    Saroona:)
    LOL intay ele thank you for reading ;*

    Cowii;*
    LOL smila 3alaich ;p
    Ashwa baridat chabich ;p! WAY COWII T.HABLEEN! I agree y3awir el galb masken!
    Inshallah ;p
    LOVE U YA BEST READER ;**

    licious;***
    I agree!
    lol we all miss them ;p
    I just posted (A)
    inshallah he will ;p!

    Rawan
    LOOOOOOOOOOL kilina ta3abna 9adgene! ;p

    Anon.H
    smila 3alaikoum mn el mooot! la t7awleen taksreen 5a6ri! madri 3ana ;p!
    ee 7ada iyanin!
    LOL 7ayaach Allah ya H ;*

    um flfola
    I just posted ;*

    Awrad
    7aram 3alaich mo dayman a3aligkoum ! ;p awal mara!!
    LOL nzalt post tawni, asra3 aw ab6a2 mn el barg madri 3aaad :p
    intay azwaaa8 mashkoura ;**

    L
    Thank you ;**

    A
    we all hate them (6)
    Ur welcome ;**
    Thank you !

    M10
    LOL inshallah! u never know! ;p
    Offf 7adhoum!

    Anon.
    Allah y3afeech mashkoura ;**

    Heaven
    ee 7adha ;p
    Dont we all love him? (A)
    maybe & maybe not!
    Thank you ;*

    Nawarii
    waaaaay sorry ;p!
    ee wala sh3gba! :(
    ull see ib next part !;p
    inshallah ba7awil !;p

    wana akthaar ;**

    THANK YOU ALL !! ;*

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