Wednesday, March 31, 2010

Giving up? {2}

Quwa;*

1. Shlounkoum?!

2. Bandar's father is A REAL PERSON!

3. la ta7kmon 3ala el characters mn al7en! wait wait wait!

4. fe wayed kalam 3ashan tifhmoon 7ayat Bandar :) fa ta7amilaw O read.

5. EXTRA EXTRA EXTRA EXTRA LONG POST!

Enjoy it ;**

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He left the company & went to the sea!

The only thing that ever listens to him.

His secrets keeper.

His only friend.

Haaaih ya ba7ar, ma7ad sima3ni kithrik.

His mobile rang.

Oboy calling

He gulped and picked it up.

Bandar: alo?

Father: INT WAINIK?!

Bandar: ana… ana kint….

Father: SO2ALI 9A3IB?! 5AAAALI9NI JAWIB WAIN KINT?

Bandar: kint a8adim 3ala wa'6eefa

Father: wishgaloolik ya fali7?!

Bandar: galaw… beridooli… beridooli 5abar 3goob cham youm.

Father: 6AB3AN! WA7ID MITHLIK 6AYI7 7A'6 MA MINA FAYDA SHYABOON FEH!?

*click*

His father closed the phone.

Bandar closed his eyes tight… Yes! that was his father, His real father!! And yes! that was a normal conversation between him & his son.

Bandar kibar wohwa yisma3 hal 7achi mn oboh.
Kibar O oboh kil youm ygoola "inta ma minik fayda","7alik 7al el 6oofa bil bait", "a'3ba minik mako" ,"mo fali7 ib shay"!

He grew up with 0% of self confidents, had zero friends.

He worked really hard in school just to prove to his father that he's not a failure!

His father never attended his graduation & her forbidden his mother to go "ish.hal 5arabeee6! O mn 7alat widlich ray7atla ta5aruja!" he heard his father say those words to his mother, so he decided that he shouldn’t attend his high school graduation…

He applied to a university out of Kuwait just to run away from home, run away from his cruel father… run away from a father who treated him like a prisoner….

When the day came & he had to leave home, his mother begged him to stay she cried & cried, Bandar loved his mother, and she loved him!

He was her first & only son, He knew that she couldn’t stop his father, but he couldn’t stay, 18 years of his life in torture were more than enough!

He didn’t say goodbye to his father & he left! He didn’t come home on any vacation; he stayed there until his graduation… The day came and he had to come back home… he wasn’t a teenager anymore he was a man now!

He thought his father would understand that & treat him like a man! He thought, But he thought wrong; his father was the same cruel heartless man.

*sigh* shasawi al7en? Wain aro7?!

He got up & drove back home….
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Akthar 8isim imdala3 bil sharika intaw! O a'63af 8isim intaw! Mo ma38oola! A6ir minkoum i3lan feh 5air?!

3e9am: laish ma nit3a8ad ma3a sharika ajnabiya tsawelina el i3lanat?!

Bibi: La walah?!! 5ala9 3ayal ana afanishkoum kilikoum wayeebli sharika ajnabiya!

3e9am: la, istatha ma 8a9adt chithi!

Bibi: 8a9adt wala ma 8a9adt mo mishkilti! Bachr hal 7aza ako meeting ma3a majlis el idara! O bit8admon afkarkoum jidamhoum!

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DAAAA5 DAAAAAAA5 DAAAA5

Bandar faz mn nooma

: Ako a7ad ynaaaam hal 7aza naaamaaat 3alaik 6ooofa!

Bandar *sigh*

BA6IL EL BAB O YAHAD!

Bandar: imba6al yuba imba6al

Bandar opened the door…

He saw his mother running up stairs.

Mother: 9al 3ala el nibi bo Bandar!

Father: CHAM MARRA GAYLICH LA TNADENE BO BANDAR?!

Bandar looked at his mother, he never understood why his father is doing this to him, why is her treating him this way…

He kept his eyes on the floor.

Father: 8amadt 3ala ay sharika ya fali7?!

Bandar: sharikat el flani

Father: hmm... ee 5osh sharika sima3t 3anha, 3ad inshallah ya8bilonik!

Bandar nodded.

He never looked at his father when he talked to him; his eyes were always on the floor, he never put his eyes into his father's
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Her grandfather was sitting on the couch in her office…

Bibi was on her disk, she hit a file by mistakes and some papers fell out of it.

Bibi: uff!

Bibi bent to pick the papers & she was amazed!

Bibi: wow!

Grandfather: sh3indich?!

Bibi: abaih yuba 6ali3 hal i3lanat

She handed her father's the ads.

Grandfather: shi'3il 3adil wala

Bibi nodded.

He checked out the signature.

Grandfather: mno hatha? Bandar el flani, awal marra asma3 feh?!

Bibi: hatha wa7id kan yayne el 9ib7 yabi ytiwa'6af 3indina

Grandfather: 3ayanteeh?

Bibi shock her head

Grandfather: wishna6ra?!

Bibi looked at the ads again.

Bibi: ra7 a5ale sawsan tit9il 3alaih O tbal'3a iyene bachr.
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-The next day-

Bibi left the meeting & found sawsan in her face

Bibi: sawsan kalmtay Bandar?!

Sawsan: meeen Bandar?!

Bibi: uff ya sawsan! Cham marra a3eed nafs el salfa?!

Sawsan: yeeeeeeeeeee!! Kef inset!

Sawsan ran back to the elevator to go back to her office.

Their building was huge! Every department had it own floor.


Haaa Bibio shlounch?

Bibi turned around & found Zaid her favorite cousin.

Bibi: uff Zayood! Allah la ywareek el marketing fog! Ma2saaat! A7is nafsi Na'6rat rawtha!

Zaid laughed: olla la hal daraja?!

Bibi: ee walah!! A'3la6 tafha! Afkar a8al mn 3adiya! Mn awal ma yeet hal sharika wana a36eehoum afkar O ohma yishta'3lon 3alaiha! Wain 9arat hathi?!

Zaid's phone rang.

Zaid: hala Manoora

Bibi wiggled her eyebrows & he hit her slightly on her shoulder.

Munera was Zaid's wife, and he loved her to death!

Bibi pulled his mobile from his hand.

Bibi: Manoooooooooooooor!

Munera giggled: ahlaaain Baboon

Bibi: shraych ni6la3 inta3asha el youm ana wiyach O Romeo?!

Munera: hehehe mwaf8a! Way babon! Mita y9er 3indich Romeo O yi6la3 ma3ana!

Bibi: *fake giggle* y9er 5air! Etha ib ti6l3on moroni 8ur6iba mali 5lg asog.

Munera: ok 7abebte!

*Click*

Zaid: laish 9akaiteeh?

Bibi: way Zayood! Ithgiil!

Zaid: MURTI!

Bibi: 7ata law! el thigil zaaain!

Zaid: uff fikeena bas! Wain tabon it3ashoon?

Bibi: madri, badna nakool 3ala zaw2aaaak ya roo7i!!

Zaid laughed: mashi, adig 3alaich gabil la inmirich.

Bibi: maaaaaashi!

Bibi got into the elevator clicked on level 4.

She went to her office.

*Knock knock*

Bibi: tifa'6aaaaaal

Sawsan: ansa Bibi

Bibi: na3am?!

Sawsan: ita9alt 3alaih mn rubi3 sa3a! O a2ale ino jay.

Bibi: ok

Bibi remembered how his eyes were sad, his shoulders were down, and eyes always on the floor… ma38ola ykoun 7azen?! Bas mn shno?! Waaih! Ana shfene kil el dinya kasra 5a6ri?!

*Knock knock*

Bibi: uff! Tifa'6aal!

The door opened slowly & a tall figure entered.

She lifted her head & saw him… the pale guy with the sad eyes Bandar!

14 comments:

  1. First again;p?!
    -M10

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  2. uuu5 ! i seriously cannot wait for the next post !=O
    Charmbracelet...N~

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  3. Hahah it7seen mako sh'3il!;p i'9aher 7athi Zain Hal chamn youm;p
    laa il9ara7a abd3tayy ya 9aloo7a!!
    Ilpostttt mo bass 3ajeeebb ilaa ibda3!!
    Laken ana na6raa il action ili yay fil 6ireej:p
    tislemlii ideech 3ala Hal post il 6weeel il 5aafeef il la6eef;p
    -M10

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  4. waaaaay ya ba3ad 3omry ya bandar ashik ina hatha obo wila shloun yswee fe chithee

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  5. LAAA2 laish u stopped !!!!
    Waaaaaaaay 7alaila Bandar '3ema'6ni maskeeeen
    w fee uboo bl dnya che ysaw f wlda el wa7eeed =S

    HYPER

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  6. Waaaaaaaaaay 7aiaty bandar masken :(
    3awar galbi waaaay sh'hal obo ely galba gasi
    3la his one san OMG ,,,

    shalk lstory 9g 8awya ;D

    love u from all my heart 9al7a ;**** <3 ;333

    awrad ;***

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  7. obooo 7maaaaaaaar zayood shaklaa 5oosh wa7ed bss 3ala 8oltich la ta7kemoon so basket bss el 9ara7a el 8o9a shakilha 8awiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!! post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 9alooo7a

    UM FlFola;**

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  8. a7is he isnt his real dad madri laish and if he is his real father than he seriously has problems that need to be resolved:P

    9aloooooooooooooooooooooooooooo7a a7ibich
    ow a7ib ibda3atich tuf tuf tuf

    mash2allah hai elstyle wayed 7ilo 7abaitaa....

    bibi 7adha spoiled brat a7is bas ma aloomha laish inah strict la2na 9j aku nas bardeeen a39ab ow ma esawoon shi'3ilhum...

    i LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEE zayood....iwanisssssssss....wainkum yal shabab ta3alaw te3alimaw mn zayoooood shaikh el romancyeeeen wallah hehehe.....

    go team bandaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar :D
    u can do it!!! yalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa hehehe

    fi9alt :$ sorry hehhe

    mwa7 mwa7 mwa7

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  9. wooooow cant wait for the next post to know whats gana happen to these two ;D

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  10. OMG!I LOVE BANDAR!YE3WAR GALBI!
    even though he's broken i WANT him!ma7jooz!
    love the new story!!

    ~~heaven

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  11. maskeeeen bandadr yakseer il kha6err:(
    il obo 7a8eeeer! whatever his reason is for treating him like that i think its not good enough! hatha his only son!
    nextt postt please;;*

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  12. I love the story beginning; I really got into it.
    I hope you put the next post soon ;**

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  13. 9aloooooooooooo7a b3ad galbi where is your
    next post sweety ;**

    miss u

    awrad;***

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  14. maskeen bandar & love the new story

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