Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Dreaming with a broken Heart [39]

Quwa;*

Shlounkoum 7abaybe?!

1. Baitna BARD!

2.I'll read ur comments know and reply on them;*

3. I think u'll enjoy this post :p

4. Some of ele tiwa8i3aw shloun shakli 9ayir, tiwa8i3oh 9a7 lay darajat ine i5tara3 minhoum :p!

5. Remind me to tell u a secret about this story when it ends ok?!

6. ALWAYS REMEMBER!
In my story expect what's not expectable.

7. A really really really really LONG LONG LONG post!

8. My silent readers please comment (A)

ENJOY IT:**

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Uhh rasi ib yinfijir!

6aiba tired to open her eyes but didn’t feel like it so she kept her eyes closed…

She put her cold hand on her forehead… ahhhh rasi 7ar O ede mthalja!

Ok 6ayouba intay al7en nayma… keep Ur eyes closed O riday namay!
Insay ele 9ar el youm O namay…


3athba: YALLA BA6LAY 3YOUNCH ADRI INCH GA3DA!

6aiba rfa3at ras.ha.

6aiba: AHHHHHHHHHHHH RASI!

She rested her head on the pillow & closed her eyes.

6aiba: 3athbo please goolele ina kil ele 9ar ma 9ar?! Please goolele ine kint a7lim!

3athba: fakart shra7 talbsen bachr!

6aiba grabbed a pillow & threw it at 3athba.

6aiba: INTAY MAKO I7SAS! ANA BAMOOT O INTAY GA3DA TFAKREN SHALBIS BACHR?!

3athba: ee

3athba took the pillow & threw it back at 6ayouba.

3athba: libsay a5yas nafnof! OOOOH! Libsay nafnof mn nifaneeef komari! 7i6ay zait re7ta 5aaaaaaaaaysa ib sha3irch! Hmmmm la tfarsheen '6roosich lay bachr!

6aiba giggled: waaaaaaai3!

3athba: Libsay 3adsat 7UMIR! OHH! La la banafsijiya!

6aiba: *giggle* a9lan ako 3adsat banafsijiya?!

3athba: madri bas 3ajabni el loon!

6aiba laughed but then remembered what might happen tomorrow, tears formed in her eyes again.

3athba sighed & went & sat beside her…

3athba: 6ayouba… la t7aten! Bad3e ina ma ta3jbena! Ma3ani ashik ina ma ta3jbena ur too cute!

6aiba: 3athbo ele ba6 chabdi 3amor! *sniff* wala Hama! Wala chine ban5i6ib bachr! Wil mishkila ine majboora awafiq!

3athba: umm yimkin ga3id yfakir ib 7al?!

6aiba: inshallah

3athba smiled

6aiba: *sigh* lazm arid el bait! Mn el 9ib7 ma shift a7ad

3athba: ee ro7ay irta7ay wana ayeech bil lail etha taben

6aiba: ok

6aiba left 3athba's house & drove off to her house.
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6aiba sifi6at sayarat.ha O nzalat

Ufff, way shfene ma agool ila ufff el youm!

She was texting 3athba & her eyes were on her mobile, she lifted her head & found 3umar standing…

3umar: 6ayouba shfeech? Wayhich a9far we3younch 7amra! Aked bachya lain shab3a...

6aiba was just about to speak then 5alid appeared …

5alid: yalla bu 3amir Mishaina!

3umar was looking at 6aiba waiting for an answer…

5alid: Oh 6ayouba?! Wainich! Mn el 9aib7 wana adig 3alaich ma trden! Omi t7ateech! Shfeeha 3younch 7amra?! Shfeech?!

6aiba closed her eyes & tried so hard not to cry.

3araftaw el moment ele tkounon 8amten el bachya O lama a7ad ygoolkoum shfeekoum tabchon 3ala 6ool?!

6aiba cleared her throat: mafene shay, kint 3ind 3athbo…. Umm ga3adt el 9ib7 ma kan ako a7ad bil bait

5alid: inzain yalla dishay tara 5alti da5il

6aiba: uff mali 5lg!

5alid: huh?! Laish malich 5lg, el banat da5il

6aiba 3adilat sha3arha, took a deep breath!

6aiba: uhh! Mali 5lg!

3umar: 6ayouba?

6aiba gave him a death stare & walked to her car

5alid: waaain ray7a ba3ad?!

6aiba: madri! Lama Aktishif badizlik message!

5alid: Heeey!

6aiba: ha?

5alid: aked mafech shay?!

6aiba nodded.

5alid: uff ok 3ala ra7tich, la t9akren jihazich O goolele wain btro7en

6aiba nodded.

3umar gave her a questioning look

6aiba ya3ni Msawi nafsa bare2? Ma yadri ine ban5i6ib bachr?!

6aiba went back to 3athba's house… until the aunt went to her house

6aiba loves her family & she loves spending time with them! But she wasn’t in the mood! She went to sleep praying that saqer won't like her!
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-The next day-

RISE AND SHINE!

6aiba: ufff laaaaaaa!! 9ar bachr!?

3athba: ee 9ar bachr!

6aiba hugged her pillow.

6aiba: mani gayma!

3athba: uh 6ayouba

6aiba: mabe mabe mabe

3athba: ok 3ayal 5al nan6ir lama iye O 5alich bil frash nda5la hne!

6aiba: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

She jumped out of bed.

6aiba: WAI3 3ATHBO YAAAAAAL mailto:*%5E$#@#$^&*(*&^%$#@!

3athba laughed and ran to the living room & 6aiba ran behind her, while running she bumped into 5alid.

5alid: AAAAAAA7! '3arbal allah iblisich!

3athba: 5alooooooood il7ag 3alay!

5alid: shfeech!

3athba hid behind 5alid

5alid saw 6aiba running towards him with her hair all over the place!

5alid: WOW! La7'6a bas 9ora law sama7tay

6aiba: NA3AM?!

5alid: mo ma taben ta3jibena?

6aiba nodded.

5alid: 5ala9 3ayal! A9awrich O lama iye agoola hatha shakilha kil youm el 9ib7, in ma in7aash mn el bait ma a6la3 5alid wild bo 5alid

3athba giggled

6aiba: MN5ASHA WARAK?! EE EE IN5ASHAY WARA 7ABEB EL GALB! ANA MALI A7AD AN5ASH WARAH!

3athba blushed like crazy kalba 6ayouba ana a3almich!

5alid: tadren wain el mishkila?! El mishkila ihya ina ana ma agdar an5ash waraha fa 3ashan chithi 3ala8atna momkin ma tinja7

3athba hit his back

5alid: a7 hehehe

6aiba smiled 3al a8al a7ad ib hal 3ayla bitkoun 3inda happy ending.

She smiled & went back to her room, leaving the love birds alone.

They sat in the living room for a while & then they ate lunch & 6aiba went back to her room….

-El 3a9ir-

She sat on her bed…. Shalbis?! Mabe shay gi9eer!

*knock knock*

6aiba: tifa'6aaaal

Her mother opened the door…

6aiba: na3am yuma?!

Mother: shlounch 7abebte?

6aiba tadri ina omha 7awilat togaf '6id oboha O magdarat.

She just smiled

Mother: tadren shra7 talbsen?

6aiba shock her head.

Mother: ok, mintay ray7a el 9alon?!

6aiba: la

Mother: *sigh* mama 6ayouba hathi 5i6ba mo 3aza!

6aiba: mama! 5al yshofni natural! Sha3ri barfa3a O simple make up!

Mother: ok 3ala ra7tich

Her mother left the room…

6AAAAAAAAA5!
3athba slammed the door

6aiba: HEEY YAL DIFASHA!

3athba: ha 8arartay shra7 talbsen?! YALA! Tara ma biga shay O a5af ma yamdena nroo7 el 9aloon!

6aiba: mn galich ine baro7 el 9aloon?

3athba: 6ayouba!

6aiba: 3athbo! Dawray ma3ay shay albisa!

3athba: shkithir hdoomich O lal7en ma ligaitay shay?!

6aiba: UGH!

After one minute

3athba: PERFECT!

6aiba: NO WAY! WAYED GI9ER!

3athba: YAL '3ABIYA BIYEN 3ALAICH!

6aiba: CHINA GABIL SA3A OUR POINT KANAT INA YKRAHNE?

3athba: *nervous laugh* ee 9a7.

6aiba: hatha ele perfect!

6aiba took out her Marc Jacobs Damisi Skirt!

3athba: TSHAWIG! O fogha?!

6aiba: el 3ada albis fogha 7afir bas 7ami'6 3ala boza yshofni ib 7afir!

3athba: inzain, dishay tsabi7ay O ana ajahiz ur accessories

6aiba: ok

6aiba went to get her shower O 3athba ran out of 6aiba's room…

6aiba took a hot shower to relax, she got out of the shower…

6aiba: 3ATHBO!

3athba enterd the room

3athba: kani!! hehe Shbtsawen ib sha3irich?!

6aiba: madri! shikntay tsaween bara daree?

3athba: haa *nervous laugh* ri7t ashrab may

6aiba took her mobile to check if she got anything from 3umar… Nothing

She was so mad at him…

3athba: na6ra shay?!

6aiba: ha? La

She put her mobile down.

6aiba: abadil O asawi sha3ri wala asawi sha3ri O abadil?

3athba: badlay O 3goob nsawi sha3irch O ur make up

6aiba: ok

6aiba wore her Marc Jacobs Damisi Skirt & tucked in her navy boyfriend t-shirt…

3athba: waaaaaaay 6ayouba tshawig hdoomich!

6aiba smiled.

3athba: yalla gi3day 5al al3ab ib sha3irch!

6aiba sat down & let 3athba do whatever she wants! She didn’t care!

3amor ma dazli message wala 3abarni! Laish ga3id ysawi chithi! Iff mo fahmita!

3athba: BUN! O INAZIL MINHA UR CUTE CURLS!

6aiba nodded: kaifich

3athba did 6aiba's hair…

3athba: MAKE UP!

6aiba: ana asaweeha!

3athba: LAAAAAAAAA! 5ALENE 3AYSHA EL DOOR!

6aiba: la la ana basawi!! Ro7ay dawrele jooti albisa!

3athba: ok

6aiba simple make up! Simple!

She applied her pink natural gloss, eyeliner, mascara & she was ready

3athba was holding two heels! wa7id g9er O wa7id 3ali

3athba: abaih ma sa2alna etha 6iweel wala gi9er! A5af talbsen ka3ab 3ali t9eren a6wal mina hehehe

6aiba: AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

3athba: hehehe

6aiba: 6al3ay el Valentino el abya'6

3athba: ay wa7id?

6aiba: ele 3alaih fyonka!

3athba: oh kaho

6aiba wore her Valentino Couture Bow heels & she was ready.

3athba: 6ayouba wain el make up ele 7a6aiteeh?

6aiba: 3ATHBO! LA TIBDAIN 7ANA! Bas kafi!

3athba: ufff kaifich….

Ma midaha 3athba tkamil zafat.ha chan yism3oon 9oot el jaras!

6aiba: AHH YAW!

3athba: Ana banzil ta7at a6il etha 7ilow wala la

6aiba sat on her bed & closed her eyes so tight hoping that he would just LEAVE!

She waited for 15 minutes & then she heard a knock on the door…

3athba: AAAAAAAAAAAH 6AYOUBA!! YALLA EL MI3RISICH TA7AT! YABONICH TANZLEN!

6aiba: awalan mo mi3iri! Thaniyan Mani nazla!

3athba: SHNO?!

6aiba: Mani nazla!

3athba: O laish balah?

6aiba: bas kaifi!

3athba: ok! Ana a3almich in ma 5alaitaaah iyeech foog!

6aiba: ma tsaweeeeeeeenha!

3athba stormed out of the room…

After 10 minutes 6aiba heard a soft knock on the door….

La aked hathi 3athbo ga3da tista3bi6 3alay! 3athbo ma tsaweeha! A9lan shloun ib tanzil 3ind el rayal! A9lan shako yi93ad foog! Aked 5alood yabi ya8ni3ni anzil!

She heard the door knock again.

6aiba held her breath & kept her eyes on the floor… abaih mn 9iji mi5tar3a?! Hatha aked 5alod! Shfene?!

*knock knock*

6aiba: tifa'6al!

6aiba felt the door opening … she closed her eyes & took a deep breath

I7im….

She sniffed…abaih a3arif hal re7a! Ma38ola ohwa?! La aked gimt a5arbi6! Bas shloun hathi re7ta!?!

Her heart was beating fast …. La ana rasmi galbi ib yogaf

She lifted her head and




Saw him


Yes him!!















3umar….




Her 3umar.





6aiba: *gasp* 3amor?! Shitsawi hne?!


41 comments:

  1. hehe im a silent reader bss wanaasa awal marra ashoof 0 comments gelt a9eeer first im in love with your story 7adhaa 3ajeeeba keep it up oo post daily ;******

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  2. laa anaaaaaaa :((( may9eeer habooon 8ashaaashaaa ma7ebiiiichh 5aysaa !! btw laish matredon 3al bayt !! o ye6la3ly busyy :@:@

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  3. Habahebo
    Thank you ;******

    Madliar
    way i5tara3t 3abali t7achene :p

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  4. WAAAAAAAAAAYYYY ENSHALLA OHWA ELY BEKHA6IBHA!!!
    wayyy a7is'ha 7adha cuuuute weddy ashoufha!:P

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  5. im a slient reader LOOOOOOOOVEEEEE ITT!!! walla ta3gbeenii -AHN

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  6. Anon.
    INSHALLAH! :p
    LOL yeah 7adha cute! :p

    Anon AHN
    THANK U;*

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  7. aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh i love 3umar:)

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  8. LOOOL la 7aram ana weyach are so innocent !! plus haboon 7maraaa !! :O ba6egha on thurs. !!! ;@@

    we all love 3amooorii ! bs maaa7eeebbbb his name :'((
    love you plz post again :( today el fayer ?! allah e5aleeech wallah im begginggg you :(((

    saroona;** (one and only ) !!

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  9. 3ad atmana ena ana wa7da mnhom
    ;p
    love u
    awrad

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  10. Sarona
    off 7adna inyanin! :p taben ayeech wiyach n6igha?:p

    Laish ma t7been his name 7ada 7ilow :p
    I cant post today! :/ Im working on a project bachr or 3ogba!

    Awrad
    LOL mani gayla :p
    Love u too;*

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  11. LOOOOL saroona your jealos tara adree ;P
    laa wallaaah 9al7aa 9afaitaay m3aaha ashoof 5alaa9 ana je3alt i'm not reading anymore heheh a9laan magdaaaar ;***

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  12. HE BETTER BE ELM3RIS!!!!!!!!!!!

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  13. aaaaaahhh!! wallah 7asait ina hatha ely kan b9eer min bedat 3athba teth7ak nervously!!
    9al7a ya 9al7a...madry shagool..all i can say inich 3AJEEEEEBAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    A

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  14. Wooooooooooow wanasa 3omar eli bia56ob
    6aioba .....walah hal 3omar zooooooooo8a;**
    Oo 9al7a yla golai adri eny 9a7...;p

    love u 9alo7ti;****************************

    awrad

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  15. OMG MA A9DGGGGG!!:D
    ITS HIM OMAAAAAAAAAAAAR ILLE BYAKH6IBHA...
    wila laykoon bya8ni3ha tanzila???:O:O
    la 3amoooor musta7eel ysaweeeeha (INSHALLAH)
    AMAAAAZING POST luv ya

    Saroona:)

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  16. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
    WALLA I looooooooooooove you 3ala this post!!
    Wallaaaaaaaaa 3ajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb!! :D
    I love you I love you I love you!!
    Umbeeeeee, 9ij unexpected..
    I was about to cry bas 3ajeeeeeeeb il post
    THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!
    w POST ASAAPP Plllllllllllllleaaaaaaaase!!
    :)
    :)

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  17. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    9aaaaaalllooo7aa..plzz goulylyy ina 3amourr ohoo ili 5a6eb 6aiiibaaa?!?!
    wayyyyyyyy lo itshoofeen wayhiii il ibtsimmaa shaga il wayhhh!!!!
    inshallla ya rabbb yi6la33 3amour oo yin5a6bounn oo the finallly get a happily ever afterr!!:D:D
    waaaaaaayyyy plzz plzz post sooon;*****
    oo mashkoora wayed inich u found the time to write a post for us:)..we all knw ur super busyy!!xx
    -M10

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  18. kil two minutes im refreshing ilpage an6rich tnazleen new post! POST PLEEEEEEEAAAAAASE:'* 7adna na6reen naby n3arf shbe9eeeer

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  19. WooooooW,, il post 7adaaaa 3ajeeee waaay ely 9ar mo 9iiiiij kil mara et7asesena ena khala9 9ar shay 7ada mo zain oo ena they'll broke up wela they'll end their relationship bas3dain faj2a somehow yired everything oo yi9er more than perfect >> walla la3abtay ba39abnaa ;p .. bas wanassa cuz yikhalena kil mara nan6er shino be9eer cuz as u said we should expect the unexpected oo hatha ely ga3ed yi9er.. waaay 3amour oo 6ayoubaaaa 7ebhouuum 7adiii oo 3athba ba3ad walla 3ajeeebaaa;** ..

    I have 2 ques.
    1. Bagii wayed wela shway 3ala il end?!
    2. Are you going to write another sorty after Dreaming with a broken Heart ?!

    LOVE u;**

    Cowii

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  20. 9ALOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO7AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!ma wilahtyy 3lyyyyyyyyyy?;Pla2? la2na ana walhanaaaaa 3laichhhhhh 7aaaaaaaaaaaaaaillllllllll !! o btw tara i know the answer to #5;))) a5arb wla la2?:P the secret is................ITS URE STORY?!!??!?!:D:D oo aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ma9adiggggg the last part was SO UNEXPECTED! waaay a7ib 3amooorrr w inshalla oho il mi3rs a9lan '3a9ban 3laih! wela walla thom walla afil3a b n3alty:) la2na 5ala9 ma 3ad feeni 9aber ati7amal brooooda ily zayd 3n il lizooom lazm yt7arak 3la 3umra shway bas 3ad ma9art w m9i5at il salfa il9ara7a!! o 6ayouba shklha iyshaweg 7tan malabis.ha 3asssshaaat il stylist 9alooo7a ;***
    love u;*
    -Anon N

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  21. waaaaaaaaaaaay LUV LUV LUV IT !!! cant wait thnx =*

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  22. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wanaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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  23. ABAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! GASH3AREEEEEEEEEEEEEEERAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA RAAAAB 3OMAAAAAR ELII IBYA56EBHAAA!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WANAAAAAAAAAAASAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WALA W ANA AGRA A5ER JOMLA DMOO3I ARBA3 ARBA3 MN IL FAR7AAA!!

    9AL7AAAAAAAAAAA I LOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEE U;*******

    -R

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  24. waaaaaaaay 7abeebeee 3amoooor!!

    ok i think he's the one who's proposing :D :D :D

    inshalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that is :D :D

    emmm ma7abait ina she got pretty and all...if i was in her shoes! ohhhhhhh 7adeeee i would dress casually and be maleeeeeeeeeqa!!! my make up (kilish almost none) my hair hmm 3adee...

    other words i wouldn't try to impress anyone!
    wayid indimajt bilstory!! hahahahha

    I love ur posts and i love how unpredictable they are ;P

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  25. Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay ay shy abi la abi al7en ohwa elm3rs walla yay y8n3ha tnzll;s waay tkfen enshalla ohwa elm3rs (knt bbchi) walla zoooqa 7di an6r elpost eli wara tkfeen shy zian way ana 7asa mara7 yskt 7da 7ada y7bha ;**

    Nedoo;*;p love u

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  26. 3amooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooout i love him akeed ohwa el me3res 3shan chithi 3athba dayman metwatra wanasaaaaaaaaa !! 9alo7a post soooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i cant wait pllllz elyoom post

    um flfola

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  27. aaaaaaaah 3ajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb
    amazing i want more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:D
    loved this post simply amazing;* :D
    G*

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  28. umbbaaaaaaaaaaayyyyhhh gumt a6aaamir min il wanasaaa!!

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  29. wanasa!!
    ur really a good writier!

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  30. 3amour ohwa ily kha6ibha?!!;D
    goolaay eeeh!!
    laish il cliffhanger?!!
    next possst pleaseee:*

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  31. 9loooooooo7a n3ad glbi,,,,where is your next post
    plz,,7ta law g9er bs nabi shai fgdnach;****

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  32. Ee tra ana awrad ;p nsit la aktb esme

    awrad

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  33. waiiiiiinich?!!!!

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  34. Walla inch wa7shatni ya 9alooo7a;(
    yalla 3ad rdy lna ya m3awda basch wnty t'3lain;p ;*
    -Anon N

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  35. 9al7a....where r u??

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  36. 9alo7aaaa wainich we miss you :(

    um flfola

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  37. I heard about ur blog and how awesome it is so I decided to start reading it, and I did. I think ur story is amaaaaazziiinnng! You have a great gift young lady! Your writing is fascinating! Keep it up, ou let me say, 3omar EYANIN! Yallah waiting for the next post;*
    -Zee(;

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  38. Mashallah 3leich I love ur stories *___*!!!

    Silent reader Maryam

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