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"Hi Fay"
Fay: hi
Fay stretched her hands to Lama, Lama stared at her.
Fay: 3aib a7ad ymid eda o ma tsalmen
Lama: lu t3arfen el 3aib chan ma tamaitay t7osen wara rayal mitzawij
Fay was shocked and Lama noticed that.
Lama: 3ayaz o ohwa ygolch wakhray o ya7girch o ham yayita el maktab?!
Fay: 7ayati.. ana o Barak n7ib ba3ath min akthar min sabi3 sneen 3abalich btyeen shahar wala shahrain o btnaseena?
Lama had no idea what to reply, Fay was right.
"Lama, Shoug? Baba sh3indkom hne?"
Lama turned around and found Barak's father standing.
Shoug: yuba yet akhith minik el awrag o Lama yat wiyay!
Father: shakhbarich Lama?
Lama smiled: bkhair 3ami
Shoug and her father walked to his office, Lama turned back to Fay.
She saw Barak walk towards her, he held her hand: 3an ethnch Fay
Barak walks with Lama to his office and closes the door, she quickly lets go of his hand.
Lama: laish yaraitne? Laish ma khalaitne abard chabdi feha? Khayif 3ala masha3irha?
Barak: yanaitaay?!! Lama tabene akhaleekom tit'hawshon eb ni9 el sharika!! Wain ga3deeen?
Lama: ma kina intahawash! o 9outi kan wa6e bil yalla yinsimi3!
Barak: shofaay Lama ana giltlich ine bas male shghil feha wintay kil shway shayla gashich o ray7a 3ind yaditich fa-
Lama wanted to speak but Barak didn’t allow her.
Barak: sim3ene bil awal! Mo 7ala! Youm t3algene fech o youm 9ada 3ane!
Lama: 3ayal ana 7ala ele 3ayshat'ha? Youm lee o youm laha?
Barak: cham mara giltich mali 3alaqa feeha!! Wala adre 3anha!!
Lama: 3ayal laish kil ma amsik mobilek ashof isimha!?? O wain ma arou7 wiyak algaha!?
Barak: kil shay ga3id y9er 9idfa lama!! Shbede??
Lama: bedik inik twagif'ha 3ind 7adha!
Barak took a deep breath and sat down.
Lama: el kil mla7ith shkithkir a7bik Barak
Barak looked at Lama, he was really shocked.
Lama: wana ala7ith wayed ashya2 3anik winta ma tadre
Barak: Lama-
Lama smiled: ala7ith inik awal ma tgoum itim sakit sa3a kamla o ala7ith lama ma ya3jibik el akil ele a6bakha witmathil ina 3ajbik witrou7 el ma6bakh tsawelik sandwich wana eb dari
Barak smiled.
Lama: ala7ith inik tshof masra7iyat lain tdokh witnaam, ala7ith el silent moment ele t7oshfik 3gub ma ta36is
Lama giggled: lamaa itim mghamith 3ainik shway
Barak smiled and nodded.
Lama: ala7ith inik tit7amalne lama a7i6lik aghane Adele o lama ni6la3 o ma tdil bas
ma tirtha inshaghil el navigator wala
tirtha adaleek!
Lama wiped a tear away: bas inta ma tla7ith shay Barak, ma tla7ith ina kil ele ga3da asawe la2ane-
Lama's phone rang and interrupted them.
Lama picked it: Hala Shoug.. okay kani yaya
Barak: la tro7een.. ana aridch el bait
Lama: kisart kha6rik?
Barak looked away.
Lama: mabe aksir kha6rik Barak.. abeek t7ibne! Abe galbik y3awrik 3alay!
Lama left Barak standing and walked to the door.
Barak sat on the first chair he found, he felt that he was boiling, he was sweating.
He opened the first buttons of his dishdasha and rested his head on his hand.
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"aridch 3ind Mama Nora?"
Lama: ee khal achayik ina Mama Nora taghadat o khathat el diwa o akhith aghrathe o sayarti warid el bait
Shoug smiled: ashwa!!!
Lama: taqreban taqreban
Shoug: ee?
Lama: ashkara gilt 7ag Barak ine
Shoug: INCH SHNO?
Lama: ohh!! If mani gayla zain!!
Shoug: Tshawgooon!!! Shgal?
Lama sighed: ma gal shay
Shoug: ayshay!
Lama: ma 3a6aita majal ytkalam! Plus entay ma ga9artay! Dagaitay 3alay kharabtay el moment!
Shoug: yal maleeeqa!! Chan 7agartene!!
Lama shrugged her shoulders: khalas ba3ad 9ar ele 9ar!
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Barak parked his car, he noticed Lama's car parked outside, he smiled.
Barak's phone rang: "hala bo Jasim.. ee ee inshallah! Galole elsa3a 5! Ee 3ayal shtabe t7in min al7een! Yalla yalla iglib wayhik"
Barak walked to the house, and walked upstairs.
He found Lama sleeping on the couch and Shoug sitting beside her watching TV.
Barak: guwa
Shoug: halaa
Barak: taghadaitaw?
Shoug: omi o oboy 6al3een o ana taghadait bas Lama china na6ritik
Barak smiled.
Shoug: Lamaaa
Barak: oshh khaleeha tnam! Ana barou7 li3ib koora fa mabe athagil! Bakil ayshay o lama arid bakil 3adil!
Lama opened her eyes and found Barak sitting beside her feet, she sat straight.
Barak smiled: 9a7 elnoom
Lama: 9a7 ibdinik!
Barak: taghadaitay?
Lama: la na6ritk
Barak smiled, he wanted to hear it from her.
Barak: taghaday ana barou7 li3ib koora ba3ad shway o mabe athagil!
Lama: el mafrouth takil gabel la til3aab! Mo trou7 3ala mi3da khalya!
Barak: kalait kharabee6 bil dawam!
Lama looked closely at Barak: shaklik wayed ta3ban! Barak lazm til3ab koora el yoom?
Barak nodded: ee mi3tamden 3alay ra7 yangi9 el fareq!
Lama: shoug
Shoug: hmm
Lama: shofaay bara6ma! Lonhom mzorig!
Shoug: min el zigaaayir!
Lama didn’t feel good about the way Barak looked.
Barak smiled, Barou7 abadil warayi7 shway gabil el li3ib
Lama: wana bayeeblik 9a7an fruits! Goul thgeel ba3ad?
Barak smiled: la la zain
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Barak was heading back home, he felt really tired and his chest felt heavy, he couldn't breathe properly.
He finally reached home, parked his car.
Barak felt weak as he walked to the door, his lips were purple and dry..everything was getting a bit blurry, and his steps were very heavy.
He was about to take a couple of steps up the stairs, when he couldn't feel his body anymore.
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