Friday, March 8, 2013

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Aziz came out of his car, he looked at his sister with a concerned look.

"LAMA?! Sh9aar?"

Lama: WALAA MALI SHGHIL! Ohwa ele da3amne!

Aziz: feeech shaaay?

Lama: laaa el7imdalllah!! 

Lama looked at the driver: YOU!!! come come!! Tell him what happened!

Lama sighed: maadre shqi9aaat sayarti ele kil youm wil thani mad3ouma!! Ele ygool Bentley!! Ag9ahaa range! Iffff! 

Aziz tried to hide his smile, Lama will always be his baby sister, he always felt that she needed to be taken care of no matter how old she became.

Aziz: ikhthay sayarte o rou7ay Qurtuba wana at9araf

Lama got in her brother's land cruiser and drove off to Qurtuba.
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"SHOUUUG? WAINICH?!"
"bil sirdaaaab! Yebay el aghrath ele bil ma6baakh"

Lama lost her parents in her junior year of high school, Shoug is her best friend and Shoug's family treated Lama as a part of it.

With them, she never felt like an outsider.

Aziz was Lama's only sibling, he got married a year ago and he's expecting his first baby soon.

Lama walked to the kitchen, she found a bag of junk food, baking tray cookies and Starbucks.

"ALLLLAAAAH!!!!"

Lama tried to carry everything together and kept repeating in her head ra7 y6ee7oun el drinks.. ra7 y6e7oun el drinks.

Lama: AHHHHHHHH 6AAA7AW!!!

She laughed at herself: ifff ifff gha9iiib asheel kilshay mara wa7da!!  JOLIE?!!! Iff hathe wainha?

Lama walked to the phone, dialed the maids room: alo? Jolie come clean up in the 9ala! Ok thank you!!

She walked to the bag of junk and cookies, Lama felt that someone was staring, she looked up and a guy stood on the stairs staring at her, with no face expressions.

He had pitch black hair, Sharp almond eyes, defined jaw line and a dirty face, He was the ultimate mysterious kind of guy…He's the type that when he looked at you.. He'll see right through you.

Mnu hatha?

Lama knew all of Shoug's family, and that guys face wasn’t familiar at all!

Akhaf rfeej rashoud! Bas shbe9a3da foug?

"Lama  what happen haa? "

Lama: the drinks fell!! clean it please!

She looked up again and he was gone!!
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She had short wavy black hair, big eyes, her skin was tanned and her brown eyes was the first thing anyone could notice in her face.

She was the bubbly and happy person, but she had sadness in her eyes.. and he sensed that.

Lama? mnu hathe? Wayed makhtha 3al bait! Wayed hyper o muz3ijaa…
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She walked down the stairs to the basement.

"SHOGO STARBUCKS INKAAT!"

Shoug: ayshay?

Lama: wala!

Shoug: Inzain TA3ALAAAAY!!! Shlon inda3amtay?

Lama: LOOYAA!! Sayiq ghabee!! Ma misak brake o ohwa nazil min el jisir o da3amne!

Shoug: ta3awirat sayartich?

Lama: min theegat el khilg ma 6ala3t sh9ar feha 7ata!

Shoug giggled: inzain ni6ray ayeeb natharti mashouf! Intay btsougeen?

Lama: laaa!! Yaya ib land 3azez! Intay sogay

Shoug: ok 3ayal bayeeb mifta7e ba3ad

Lama wanted to ask Shoug about the mysterious guy but Shoug rushed upstairs.
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Lama walked outside and waited for her, she saw the mysterious guy leave the house.

She grabbed her mobile and went through Intagram just to avoid awkward eye contact.

"Law sama7tay?"

Lama's heart skipped a beat, she looked up, straight into his eyes.

He pointed behind Lama.

"Sayarti"

Lama: na3am?

"Mitsanda 3ala sayarti"

Lama felt the blood flow in her body, she was so embarrassed.

Lama: oh sorry!!

She wanted to smile, but again..his face had no expressions.

Lama quickly moved and he walked to the driver's door.

"KHAAALI BARRRAAK!!"

Lama saw Shoug's nephew run towards the mysterious guy.

Khali Barak? No way!!! Hatha okho Shoug? Bas shlon ma a3arfa o wala mara shifta!!!

Lama looked at Wahab, the mysterious guy was giving him a hug, and for the first time she saw him smiling.

Barak? Okho Shoug? Wain kan? o laish ma a3arfa o awal mara ashoufa!!! O shfeeh chithi 6eenta thgeela!!  la la ako shay ghala6 bil mawthou3!!

Lama had a lot of questions in mind, and no one can answer them but Shoug.


33 comments:

  1. Great post! Awal ma I refreshed the paged willa I saw "9al7a bint bo 9ali7" post. Kint a7asib at5ayal b3dain stw3abt. La t6awleen 3alain, nabe post thani, hatha wayed g9er xx

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  2. W 9a7! Nsait aktb, i7na b3d we missed you SO much! Much love xx

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  3. WELCOMEEEEEEE BACK YA 7ELWAAA WE MISSED YOU SO MUCH WALLAH TAW MA NAWAR LBLOG WORLD I LOVE YOU OU I LOVED THE STORY SO FAAAAR YALA YALA NEXT POST ASAP MAGDAR AN6666666IR 7ADEEE MISHT66A WALLLAH A77777IBICH:*** (zaina)

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  4. Welcome back salo7a! i like baraak hes different!

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  5. LOVED ITT!!!!! a7laa blogger wallahh:")!!! Post ASAP PLEASE!! Loveyouu<33

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  6. welcome backk dear! thanks for posting x

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  7. LOVE LOVE!
    finally you're back <3 i'm so glad wallahhh
    can't wait for the next post!!

    -A

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  8. GREAT STAAAAART LOVED IIIIITTTTT <333333333

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  9. Welcome back! We love the new post, we can't wait for more!

    Lots of Love
    Xxxxx

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  10. Welcome baaack!!
    So far im loving this story! and lama is just too cute hahaha!:p
    Okay the guy is kinda creepy and rude to be honest:p
    Love this!
    -F

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  11. YSHAWGGGG AAHHH 3AJEEB WALLAH! Cant wait for the next post!

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  12. LOVEEEEEEEEEEE ITTTTT
    7addddddha 3ajeeeba
    i wanna know about this barakk
    can't wait

    -A

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  13. ughhhhh u r toooooooo goooooooooddd :)

    -W

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  14. I have the same questions too LOOOL:$ .. AMAZINGGG START SALO7AAA!! Keeeep goinggg ou a7laaa shay enna esemha LAMA<3! Adry enech mu qasdat'ha bs ham thankyouuuh:$ loved the story so far fa post soon allah y3afech;*

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  15. i love the mysterious side of your blog makes me addicted post soon i love your blog

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  16. Please post !!!! I love the story

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  17. when's the next post? :( -SSSS

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  18. Wooooow amazing jad amazing! You never disappoint your readers expectations jad great starting. Post as soon as you can ;**

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  19. Please kamli tra we're waiting :(

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  20. Amazing post mashalla ur so talented -faith

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  21. Shd3wa 3lech 6wltay wayd!!

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  22. when are you posting the second chapter, I already forgot the story yalla 3ad its been 3weeks! -SD

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  23. Nice post thanks ;* loved it can't wait till the next love u ;* <3

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  24. Please post 9al7a :(
    We're waiting ..

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  25. welcome back ! great post cant wait for the next one ~

    http://hershadowindubai.blogspot.ae/

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  26. We're waiting for your second post !!
    Please post soon :D

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  27. I'm still waiting for the second chapter please post soon

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  28. Hey there! I'm a new reader of yours, and I'm starting to be one of your big fans! I really really enjoyed reading your stories! I finished reading all of your stories in five days!! Could you believe this?:o Lol. Well I hope you don't give up on writing because your way of writing is hard to find, because it's one of the most interesting and awesome stories I've ever read!! Hope you post soon! And keep up your awesome ideas and perfect writing. Yeah I'm a saudi fan of yours! So you're probably famous in the gulf:p right? Anyways, I loved you and your stories! So don't be late, we're waiting impatiently!

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  29. I just read the story before this one! Madry shloon 6afatny! I've read all your stories and i always end up in tears either of happiness or sorrow :(
    I really lovee your blogg please keep posting <3
    Love youu 9alooo7a xoxo

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  30. Heeellllooo...WE MISS U!!!! U havent posted from a reeeeeaaaallly long tiime!! I looved the begining of this story sooo pleeeeaaase keep gooing!!

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  31. great post please post
    -SBF

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