Friday, July 11, 2014

Scarred -Finale-

Hi!!


*This is the last part of the story! I might start a new story after Eid or maybe after that, I'm not sure yet!


*Thank you ALL for the comments, love and support!!


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"Yaaaal di3la!!! shrayich sha3ri 7ilo?"



AlZainah look through her closet "LAAA!!"



Jana giggled: sakheefa!! shda3wa shiftene!!



AlZainah: Janaaa youzaay 3ani tara mali khilg!! Mani fahma laish ma sawaitooha ib baitkom!



Jana: wala ma tist7een! Plus ga3deen yabnoon ib baitna o 3afsa!! fashla!



AlZainah pulled out a ruffled top and skinny pants: balbis hatha



Jana: la? libsay pajama a7san!



AlZainah giggled and pulled out a dress: hatha?



Jana: iyanin!!



Jana is AlZainah's cousin.



AlZainah: mnu biye?



Jana: ahala o ahalna! kil 3azayim elta3aruf chithi!



AlZainah: adre bas mnu min ahala?



Jana: atwaqa3 3amata o khalata o bait'hom



AlZainah: his cousins?



Jana shrugged her shoulder: madre



AlZainah put on her black lace dress and pearl earrings.



Jana: 7adi mitwatra!! takhyalay wa7da min 3amata wala khalata tgoula waai3 shmala kha6abt hathe?



AlZainah laughed: intay shnu mako thiqa? o 7ata lu galaw!! dam ohwa mu3jaab feech mara7 y2athir feh rayhom!



Jana nodded: 9a7


AlZainah: el3azeema bil istiqbal wala el7adeeqa? etha 7adeeqa balbis wedge!! mali khilg elka3aab yghooo9 bil zar3!!



Jana giggled: madre!! atwaqa3 bil istiqbal! 7ar bara



AlZainah nodded and put on her black heels.



Jana: mara7 tsaween sha3rich?



AlZainah looked at her wavy hair in the mirror: ma yamde! o a9lan 3ajbne!



Jana: okaay kaifch!



AlZainah grabbed her phone, it was 8:30pm, she sighed.


Bilsalama Hamad! 



She texted Hamad, She wanted him to feel guilty but he had all the right to leave for a while. Her mother was really harsh with him.



"JANAAAA!! YALLLAAA NIZLAAY!!"



Jana grabbed AlZainah's hand: yalaaaaaa!! 7adi khayfa!!



Jana was rushing downstairs and AlZainah walked after her.



AlZainah felt her mobile vibrate, it was a text from Hamad.


Allah ysalmch!
Zayon, I'm really sorry



AlZainah felt her heart sink to her belly, she put a smile on and greeted everyone.




Jana: china 6awilaw?!



AlZainah giggled: takhylay hawan?



Jana: Faaal alllah wala falich!!



Mother: Zayona please chaykay 3ala el buffet o ina kilshay mratab!



AlZainah: bil 7adeqa?



Her mother nodded.



AlZainah took of her heels and wore flip flops and walked outside.



Jana: Zayoon!! al7een iyon o tistaqblaainhom ib flip flop?



AlZainah giggled: 9arlich sa3aa tgoleen al7eeen biyon o ma yaw!! 3ala 7athe biyon wana labsa flip flops?


Jana laughed.


AlZainah walked outside to the garden, the table settings and lighting were elegant and romantic, She smiled.


She grabbed a chair and sat down as the workers were setting the food.



AlZainah closed her eyes, a lot was going through her mind, Hamad, graduation, her mother. She opened her eyes and looked at the pool.



She was so tempted to jump, AlZainah giggled.



Everything was perfect, she turned around and froze in her place. She quickly closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She opened her eyes again, nothing changed.



AlZainah: one two three



AlZainah closed her eyes with her hands, She felt someone move her hands away from her face.



AlZainah: shga3id y9er?



"Mu 3indkom 3azeema?"



AlZainah nodded.



"ta3aruf?"



AlZainah nodded.



"3ashan ahal elmi3ris yt3rfon 3ala ahal el3arous?"



AlZainah nodded.



"Ana elmi3ris wintay el3arous"



AlZainah: Hamad



Hamad smiled: 3youn Hamad



AlZainah: tara etha ga3id tista3bi6 aw titghashmar 7ada ma ytha7ik



Hamad laughed.



AlZainah: a7is galbi ib yougaaf



AlZainah let go of Hamad's hand and sat on the first chair she passed by.



Hamad grabbed a chair and sat in front of her, AlZainah pinched his hand.



Hamad laughed: a7 a777 laaaish?!



AlZainah: bat2akad ina 9ij!



Hamad laughed: tagri9eeen 3umrch ma tagr9ene ana!!!



AlZainah: gara9tik la2ana lu 9ij abeek tit3awar!!



Hamad laughed.



AlZainah: Hamad shilsalfa? shga3id y9er?



Hamad: kil ele 9ar dakhil tamtheel, adre ina Jana 9ij makh6oba bas ahal rayilha mara7 yzoronkom el yooum.. ahale ana ele bezoron



AlZainah: Hamad o omi?! Omi 3fisat el dinya ams!!!



Hamad: tamtheel



AlZainah: na3am??!!



Hamad: Zayon



AlZainah took a deep breath.



Hamad: lama om Faisal yat kalimat omch, omich wafiqat



AlZainah: bas-



Hamad: oshhh o sim3ene!



AlZainah nodded.



Hamad: dagat 3alay omch o galatli ina mwafga o ina oboch ba3ad mwafiq



AlZainah nodded.



Hamad: giltlaha tmashe 3alaich filim inha lal7en rafthatne o bas



AlZainah: bas?



Hamad smiled: message elkhi6ba zahib.. na6ren muwafaqtich o bedizona



AlZainah giggled.



Hamad: ndiza?



AlZainah shrugged her shoulders: madre



Hamad: ZAYON!! tikfaaain wala mu nagi9 kil ele 9ar kafi wizyada!!!



AlZainah: tadre ine 6oul el lail ams wana abche?



Hamad: lay hal daraja t7bene?



AlZainah blushed and stood up: waay sh'hal thiqaa!!



Hamad laughed: ib ma7alhaa wala laa?



AlZainah giggled: LA!!



AlZainah was walking to the door when she realised she was wearing flip flops: Hamad!!!!



Hamad: shfeech!!



AlZainah: shouuf!



AlZainah pointed at her feet, Hamad laughed.



Hamad: Zayoon!!!



AlZainah: waay shfeeeek!!!!!



Hamad laughed and pointed behind her: shofay



AlZainah turned around and found her heels beside the door: Aked Jana!!



Hamad opened the door, AlZainah walked behind him, They greeted everyone.



AlZainah gave her mother a hug: mashkooraa mama


AlZainah giggled when she saw her friends, they rushed towards her and gave her a group hug, The girls sat down and AlZainah sat beside them.



Latifa: 7aram shofaw Jennifer thay3a



Sara giggled: barou7 aga3ad yamha!



Hessa: intay heey shtabeen ga3da yamna?



AlZainah laughed: wain aga3ad ballah?



Latifa: gomaay irtazay yam raylich!!



AlZainah blushed: lal7en ma 9ar rayle!!



Hamad's mother smiled at her: Zayona mama ta3alay gi3day yami



AlZainah smiled and walked towards Hamad's mother, She sat beside her and Hamad.



AlZainah whispered: Hamad



Hamad: hala



AlZainah: awkwaaaard



Hamad laughed: jaaaad



AlZainah: mnu ga3id iyaabib?



AlZainah looked to her left and saw her grandmother, she giggled: tshawig!!



AlZainah looked at Hamad, He didn't take his eyes off of her.



AlZainah: Hamad bas!!



Hamad smiled: shnu ele bas!!



AlZainah: laa tkhiz!!



Hamad smiled, he couldn't believe that AlZainah was going to be his wife, She loved him even when he was cold and trying to push her away, She was his childhood friend, the only person he kept thinking about for 15 years, his motivation, his strength, the love of his life, and the girl who gave him a scar and the one that healed it.


-The End-


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39 comments:

  1. The perfect ending to the perfect story! Absolutely loved it!! Alzainah and Hamad are THE perfect couple, no matter how many ups and downs they had to go through! So sad that this story came to an end :( can't wait for your next one though! Thank you for the wonderful story!


    With love,
    A Girl (@AGirlBlogging)

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    1. Thank you so much! 7adhoooom! Exactly!
      Thank you for your wonderful comment;**

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  2. AMAZING!!! the story was perfect and the ending was even better. I really enjoyed this story and literally can't wait for the next one keep going x

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  3. AAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH ONE WORD. AMAAZZZIIIINNNNGGGG <3_<3 7amaadd is incredible, never giving up on AlZainah until she ends up as his wifee :D Pleeaasseee write an epilogue soon..!! Mashallah your writing is outstandingg!! Inlove with your blog - 3lia xx

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    1. THAAANK YOU 3LIAA!!!
      He is!! I'll be writing a new story after Eid enshallah ;D

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    2. YAAAAYYY <3 Can't waitt :D

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  4. Too cute <3 love Hamad,
    Can't wait till your next story!

    MHK

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  5. AMAAAAZZZINGGGG!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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  6. AMAZING!!!!! An incredible story with the most appropriate happy ending! Loved it !!! can't wait for the next story <3<3
    -AF

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    1. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
      Enshallah it will be worth the wait;D

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  7. MARRRRAAA 7LWAAAAAAA Bt9y7eenii tara wallaah:'(!<3 your stories mashallah kl wa7da twns akthr mn althanya!

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    1. Soo desperate for your next story!! And thaank you for such an amazing story and for being an even more amazing blogger, and a writer<3!!

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    2. MASHKOORA!!!
      Enshallah btkon 3gub el3eed! Thank you so much;**

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  8. AMAAAAAZINGG!!!!! Abe wa7ed nafs hamad:'(!!!!!!!

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    1. THANK YOU!! lama tilgaain yebele wiyach;p

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  9. 9al7a, a7taj msa3da
    -K

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    1. Hi K! sorry i just saw this, Nisait password my email I'm sorry.
      I have a kik account which is Sal7aaa
      and ask, www.ask.fm/salo7a

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  10. a7taj ur email 7DDDIIIIII !
    -K

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  11. A7TAJ UR EMAIL 7D 7D 7DDDIIII
    -K

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  12. Alaaah el ending 7ail 7ail 3ajeb ♡♡♡

    -AH

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  13. Loveddddd the endingggg❤️❤️a meaningful storyy with a great ending!! Allah ywafgichh!! Jaddd the best writer! please write up another story whenever ur free��adreey its hard work bs no rush;p thankk uu❤️❤️
    ~H

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    1. Thank you SO MUCH!! 7atheer after 3eed enshallah!
      Thanks H;**

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  14. Heyy sorry to disturb but would you mind looking at my blog? www.brokenflana.blogspot.ae Thankk Youu <3

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  15. Hey As Always AMAZING STORY!!!!
    Ive always been a big fan of yours!

    Id like it if you had the time and read my story: http://a-twisted-story.blogspot.ae

    Thanks dear xx!

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  16. Please post soon pleaase I've been checking every friday for your post to the new story wallah I really am waiting so patiently and it's taking ages..
    With love,
    A silent reader SM

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  17. Can you please post your next story !!!
    Can't wait to get excited for Friday
    T

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  18. Why no posts :( it's been a long time wallah we are all waiting for you 9al7a is everything alright?! Pleaaaaaaase post soon pleaaaase..
    -AKS

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  19. Please post today, I'm dying to read anything new you have wrote. 9 weeks without your wonderful posts arjoch ya 9al7a post soon your writing really does makes us happier living the moments in your wonderful stories and imagining them, please post soon you give my weekends some meaning having read your writing. Thank you and we are still waiting impatiently for your new story.
    -AKS

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  20. Please post !!!! ;( really miss your stories

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  21. 9AL7AAA PLEASE POST SOON PLEASE :'(

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  22. Amaaazinggg storyy! Loved it 7aail 7aail just perfect! Maku wa7d methel hamad?

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  23. 7 months have passed since you've posted. I used to wait everyday until the weekend and friday in particular just to read your smashing posts. The last time you've posted was exactly on my birthday, whats going on? Are you alive? Is everything alright with you?! :( At least let us know if your not going to post again with one short post, you don't have to explain just notify us..
    -AKS

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    1. she has a twitter ( @9al7a ) and she does tweet most of the time so she is alive!! ;p but i agree we misss you sooo much!! when will you be posting? any plans of writing another story? or is scarred the last one? and yeah if you wouldn't mind posting something explaining what's going on...

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  24. you're one of my favorite bloggers out there! you truly have a gift mashallah! please start another story sooon we miss you!

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