Hello!
*I’m
currently out of Kuwait but I made time to write this post and publish it.
*This
post goes to BT;*
*This does
not go to all of you; If you don’t like the length of the post, you don’t have
to comment negatively, use impolite words or even read the story!! I have a
life, I
don’t spend the whole week writing the post.
*To
make things clear; I write the post on Friday or on Thursday night so I post
whenever I finish. I have a posting schedule and I intend to stick with it (a
post each Friday) I won’t post on any other day unless it’s the finale.
I’m sorry if I might sound rude to some of you,
but I’m fed up with the rude comments.
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"Lama?"
:bil daar!!
Barak:
olaaa!! Sh'hal 7ousa!!!
Lama:
bnro7 3irs el yoom!! shfek nisait!
Barak:
ohh 9a7!
Lama:
madri shalbis!
Barak
sat on the bed.
Lama:
6weel wala g9er?
Barak
thought for a second: 6weel
Lama:
hatha?
Barak:
china wayed mfa9akh?
Lama:
la! Mgha6a min jidam! Bas thahre ele ybayin!
Barak:
hmm kaifch!
Lama:
haw Barak shfek? Mo 7ilo?
Barak:
mako ghaira?
Lama:
fe!!
Barak:
tadre shlon?
Lama:
shlon?
Barak:
libseehom o warene wana akthar!
Lama:
okay!
Barak
kept sitting on the bed.
Lama:
m6awil?
Barak:
wain aro7?
Lama:
bara? Babadil?
Barak:
la 3adi 3ajbatne elga3da
Lama
blushed and giggled: kaifik! Khalik! Baro7 el 7amam abadil!
Barak
laughed: khalas ba6la3!
Lama:
wala tadre shlon?
Barak:
shlon?
Lama:
ana bakhtar el nafnof! O bas!
Barak:
3an el malaqa yalla!
Lama
wanted Barak to be surprised!
.
.
.
Shoug:
laaa!! Ana balbis hal tarchiya!!
Lama:
KHAAALTII!!!
Shoug:
LAMO YAL YAHIL!
Lama: ANA MIN AMS GILT ABE HAL TARCHIYAA!!
Shoug:
yal sakheefa kafe nafnoofich a7la min nafnoofi!!
Lama:
laaaa? Wana shthanbe etha thouqi a7la?
Shoug:
3ISHTAAAAW!!!!
“Lama?”
Lama
was busy wearing her earrings she didn’t notice Barak.
Barak
stood in his place looking at Lama, She look so pretty in her long black on
sleeveless dress, simple dress and ruby earrings.
He
couldn’t take her eyes off of her.
Shoug:
Baraaak shfeek wagif chithi?
Barak:
ha?
Shoug
laughed and whispered: tyanin 9a7?
Barak
nodded while looking at Lama.
Shoug
giggled: bakhaleekom!
Lama:
Shouuuug labsene!!
Lama
turned around and found Barak standing.
Lama:
Barak? Min mita winta hne?
Lama
couldn’t help but blush, she wanted to wrap a scarf around her, but he’s her
husband.
Barak:
min lama kintaw tit’hawshon 3al tarchiya!
Lama
giggled.
Barak
noticed that Lama was still holding the necklace in her hand.
Barak:
albsich?
Lama
blushed: la 3adi an6ir shoug!
Barak
walked towards Lama.
Lama:
haw Barak? Gitlik Shoug tlabisne!!
Barak:
wetha ana balabis murti qalbha?
Lama:
wetha murtik btmoot min el 7aya?
Barak
laughed: kaifha 3ad mu shighle!
Barak
took the necklace from Lama’s hand.
Lama pulled
her hair up with her hand, she felt Barak’s hand on her back, she couldn’t
breathe.
Barak:
iffff
Lama:
Barak yallla!!!
Barak:
madri mani gadir a9ika!
Barak
smiled, he could feel that Lama was so shy she could faint.
Barak:
o bas!
Lama
moved away: mashkoor!!!
“Lama
yuma khalastyaa?”
Lama:
ee khalti!!
Mother:weeeh
Barak inta hne? Ya 7ilokom! Akhaleekom shway!
Lama:
LAA! Khalti kani yaya!
Barak
laughed: shda3wa mkhaletech wiya yine?
Lama
giggled: Barak youz!!!
Lama
walked aand grabbed her heels: daan shway!
Barak:
laish?
Lama:
batsanad 3al stand warak! Balbis joutiye!
Barak:
afaaa 3alaich!! A9eerlich staaand!!
Lama:
Baraaaak!
Barak
stretched his hand to Lama, Lama leaned on Barak and wore her heels.
Shoug:
Lamaa yalla!!
Shoug
took a quick picture of them: WAAAY TSHAWGOOON!
Lama:
waaay wagta ta9weer?
Barak:
7abebte?
Lama
looked at Barak, she felt her heart beat in every part of her body.
Barak
smiled: labsa diblitich?
Lama
couldn’t even breathe: ee!
“Yalaaaa
ya banaat!! Ta2akharna”
Shoug:
tshawgoon!! 9awartkom malyoon 9oraaa!!
Lama
wanted to move when she realized that Barak was still holding her hand, she
slowly let go.
Barak:
ana 6ali3 now ba3ad!
Lama:
okay! Derbalik o goule awal ma tou9al!
Barak:
7athir
Barak
was invited to their class reunion.
.
.
.
Lama
had fun in the wedding, but she couldn’t forget what she felt when she was with
Barak earlier.
.
.
.
Barak
texted Lama.
Ha
sh9ar 3alaikom? Mita tkhalson?
Lama replied.
Yabeelina
sa3a ba3ad!!
.
.
.
Lama
entered the apartment.
“Barak?”
Lama
was wearing her flip flops and had her heels and clutch in her hand, she threw
them on the couch and walked to Barak’s room.
He was
taking a shower so she walked back to the living room.
Iff
male khilg abadil!! Wala amsa7 el makeup! Wala at7arak min mukaani!
She
heard Barak’s mobile ring beside her.
Waay
moz3ij!
She
stood up to set it on silent and she was shocked to see the caller’s name.
Fay
Lama
took a deep and sat back on the couch, her eyes were full of tears.
Shaklik
nimt, it was nice seeing you today.
Lama
felt tears rolling down her cheeks, she stood up.
“Ohh
Lama! Mita raditaw!”
Lama
looked at him without saying a word.
Barak:
LAMA SHFEEECH? Laish tabcheen??
Lama:
Fay dagat
Barak
didn’t know what to say.
Lama:
baro7 abadil warid bait Mama Noura
Barak:
Lamaa sim3ene!!!
Lama
walked to her room.
Barak:
qasamaan billa shift’ha elyoum bil 3azeema!! Shaswe ya3ni? Laish 7asastene ina
ana ele 3azimha!!
Lama:
LU 9IJ T7BNE CHAN MA RI7T BARAK!!!! CHAN 7ASHAMT MURTIK! O GILT DAM FAY HNAAK
MA AROU7!!
Barak
was shocked, it was the first time Lama raised her voice.
Lama:
3abalik ine ma a7is? Ma 3indi karama?? Mitzawja wa7id IB KIL WAQA7AAA gali ina
y7ib wa7da thanya!! Ya3ni tizawajne 3ashan ysakit ahala!
Lama
took a breath.
Lama:
o ba3dain min ghaba2e bidait a7ibik o ham ma gidart t’hidha Barak! 3umri ma
ga9art eb shay Barak!! Mo lazm intim sina
Barak:
Lama tikfain!!!!
Lama:
mabe asma3 9outik Barak!! Wala abe ashoofik!!! Bas!! Kafe chithb!!! Ana barou7
3ind omi noora! Winta t3arif shnu lazm tsawe!
Barak:
ma ra7 a6algich Lama.. mithil ma bidaitay t7bene 7ata ana bidait-
Lama:
BAS BARAK BASIK CHITHB!! O hathe ele mu gadir t’hidhaa?
Lama
sat on bed and cried.
Lama:
mint gadir tikhtaar!!! Sahil inik t6ali3ha min 7ayatik lu tabe!! BAS INTA ELE
MA TABE!!
Barak
was silent, he didn’t know what to tell her.
Lama:
shift? 7ata min gadir trid 3alay! Rou7 Barak! Tahana wiyaha!!
Lama
grabbed her car keys and purse and walked out of the room.
Thankyou for the dedication, loveee u beautiful! amazing post wallah w ya36eech alf alf 3afyaaaaa:** enjoy;) and cant wait for the next post ... layhemech ely yaktbon hate wla shay rude:p
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your welcome!! love u too;** Thank you so much walllah y3afeech!!
DeleteLoved loved it mashallah!!! Simply Amazing
ReplyDeleteH
Thank you so much H ;)
DeleteOh em gee!!!! This is so heartbreaking:'(!!!! I loved your way of writing:')!!! W ma 3laik mn the rude people!!! 3wathel w ana e5tk:p! Anyways keep going w we'll support you to the very last minute wallah!!!!! N7bbkkk w n7b your adorable story*.* w btw tra whenever I'm bored I open up your old stories!! 9dg 9dgg I never get bored reading. Mashallah allah y7f'9k w ys5rlk mala2ikat elsma w jnod elar'9!!! Love you:**
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!!!! Your support and lovely comments keep me going thank you so much!! Ameeen ajma3een ya zeena min du3aa2, love u too;**
DeleteBaaaaabchyyyyy baaabchyyyyy:'(((!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWaay!!!! Ambaih lama ou barrak wayd elugun 3la b3a'6 jadd!!!
Elmshkilaa barrak mu gader eti9arraf!!
Lazm eshufla 7al
Lanaa lama msechena wallah!
Zain swat lama chthy et7ida ena eswy shay ta3jibny 7dhaa
Ou bs 9j uhma cuute laygen 3la b3a'6 eshawgun:(❤
Ou shismaa have fun whereever you were ou etrdren belslamah muqdamn xx
Best wishes, mf xoxo
I'm sorry :(
DeleteI loved your comment!!!
Thanks a lot o Alllah ysalmch;**
I keep falling inlove with them every post, can't wait to see what happens.. If anyone is intrested in reading a new blog, i just started one telling my story, it would mean the world to me if you all checked it out. www.love-in-reality.blogspot.com if you do end up reading it, don't be shy, comment!
ReplyDeleteThat made me so happy thank you! and good luck love xo
DeleteOMG </3 :(
ReplyDeletemy eyes were tearing up :'(
-Dka
I'm sorry about that :(
DeleteThe post is great and the story is amazing! Thank you for making a sceduled day for posting anf sticking to it even when u don't have time! You're an amazing blogger ... Good luck <3
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Thank you SO MUUUCH!!!!!
DeleteI like your posts , especially this post!!��
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!
Deletelallaaaa 9al7aa 7araaaam 3alich ma feeny an6ir lai next friday elpost e3awer elgalb;'((
ReplyDeleteRH
It will be worth the wait enshalllah ;)
DeleteAmbaaaaayy a7ibhommm wallaaaahhh!! Their so so cute together!! And i loveeee youuu and ur amazing storyy gooodluckkk wish you the best♥♥♥♥
ReplyDeletelove u too and thanks a lot;*
DeleteI LOOOV ITT MOBDE3AA MARA MASHALLLAH ❤❤
ReplyDeleteCANNNT WAIT FOOR THE NEXT POST !!!
-Anoud
THANK YOU;**
DeleteBarak 9ayr shwya yghar:) ya5i laish kitha? Laish ma yra'9eha bsr3a-.- yghrnii!!! Wallah marra 7maass your story*.* w it's not fake at all, y3ni when you read it t7sen hathi 7yat 7gegya mu kthb w t7msk mara mashallah! You're so talented mashallah! Uff mashallah mashallah 7baitk!!! W la yhmonk elly ytklmon feek wla ysbon!! You have your fans;) and every successful person must have their haters!!! YOU'RE A SUCCESSFUL GIRLLLL!!!!! YOU MUST WRITE YOUR OWN BOOK!!!!! YOU REALLY SHOULD WRITE ONE!!!!! We'll all support you wallah! And I can see that you have readers from several countries, and that's fantastic! Because you'll be so so so famous one day, believe me!
ReplyDeleteAnd yes before I forget, mashallah a5lagk marra mu7trma w enty a7sn mn halnas elly tje w tsb, la yhmonk 3golhum 9'3era! I ADORE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Keep going*thumbs up*
Best wishes. Xx
Ya zeeen lahjitich o yazeen el s3oudiya o ahalha!!!
DeleteTHANK YOU SO MUCH ON THE COMMENT, it really made me smile!!
Thankyouuuuu wayyeeed 3ala halpost el3ajeeeb nafsiiich,ya36eech alf 3afya;*
ReplyDeleteOu take ur time mta ma taben post ou ma 3alaich min hathoula elfathyen khal ywaloun:D
Ou 7addee mtshawga shnu b9er:(
Post soon pleassee<3
-SM.
Allah y3afeech;*
DeleteThank you so much!!!!
Friday enshallah;)
Thank you for an amazing post 9alou7a! Way lama takser elkha6er:( fay mal kaf yesane3ha w barak brouda ynarfez!!! Can't wait for the next post;*
ReplyDeleteUm flfola
Thank you for reading it!
DeleteNext Friday enshallah ;)
FAAAY ET8ETH SHTABEEEEEN YAKHY ERAYAAAL METZAWEJ!!!
ReplyDeleteLOL 7adha!!
DeleteLematha :'( fay zbala shinu hatha!! oo ohwa shaku msayev ra8amha??! lama matestahel hal shay!! na6ra next post 3ala naarrr -21
ReplyDeleteShiftay shlon :(
DeleteEnshalllah its worth the wait!
7abeeeeebti lama :(
ReplyDelete:(
DeleteThis is seriously the best blog ever! I finished all the stories within a week haha!
ReplyDeleteWaiting impatiently for your next post!! (Oh and this is the first time I ever comment on a blog)
Ya bakhti! Thank you so much!!!
DeleteThat's a honor! I hope to see your comments on each post ;)