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2. I'll remind you guys, this story is made of 4 posts only, the next post will be posted on Thursday enshallah ;)
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-Thursday-
"Btro7 elshalaih?"
Faris: Ee!! Shbega3idne bl deera ib weekend!
Zaina sighed, she hated it when Faris went to the chalet, it takes him away from her, He doesn’t talk to her a lot when he's there, he rarely replies to her texts and if he does it takes him up to 50 minutes to write a reply of one or two words.
Zaina: khosh
Faris: shfech?
Faris felt the disappointment in her voice but he can't help it!
Zaina: mafene shay
Faris: Zaina wala mo bede!!
Zaina: adre Faris.. dayman mo bedik
Faris: Zaina..
Zaina: 3ade Faris!! Ag9aah weekend o btrid tifthale 9a7?
Faris: 9a7!!
Zaina smiled with a heavy heart: have fun!
Faris: out
Zaina smiled and rushed to her window, and there he was standing with his shalaih bag, smiling at her, his smile made her happy... he made her happy.
Faris: za3lana 3alay?
Zaina sighed and nodded.
Faris: Zayoooon! Wala ba7awil afthalich!! o ba7awil arid 3alaich!
Zaina give him half a smile.
Faris: yaaah!! Sh'hal ebtisama? Zaina!! Ebtasmay!!
Zaina smiled.
Faris: ibtasmay 3adil bashouf throusich!!
Zaina giggled, smiled and crossed her eyes: CHITHI ZAAAIN?
Faris laughed, he really wanted to tell her that he loves her.. something inside him was telling him to say it..
Faris: Zaina?
Zaina: hala?
Faris went quiet for a couple of minutes: ummm ashofch elsabt!
Zaina smiled: enshallah, deerbalik bl 6reeej!!
Faris: 7athir mama Zaina
Zaina giggled and waved at him: bye Faris
Faris waved back: bye Zaina
Zaina kept watching him until his car left their street..
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Faris reached the shalaih and he was busy just like he is every time he sets a foot in Bnaider.
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Zaina checked her mobile, she sent him a text 40 minutes ago, still no reply, she was really sleepy.
Goodnight Faris..
She put her mobile on the charger and went to sleep.
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-Friday-
Zaina opened her eyes, stretched her hands to her mobile.
Two missed calls from Faris.
Zaina nimtay? sorry wala tawne aftha!!!
Shaklich nimtay, Goodnight zayoon ;)
Zaina sighed efff Faris sh3ugba?
Good morning Faris
Zaina stayed in bed, it was Friday and she was allowed to be lazy.
She decided to leave bed an hour before their family gathering starts!
- Half an hour-
"ZAYOONA YALLA GOMAY BADLAY 3ASHAN NRO7 BAIT YADICH!"
Zaina: OKAAAY!!!
Zaina checked whatsapp.
Good morning zayouuuun!!! Ba6ib ba7ar I may not reply, enjoy the family gathering!!
Zaina: you may not reply? La 3ad 7adek ur replying 3ashan tafrig wiyay!
Zaina sighed.
Faris!!! Deerbalik!
Zaina always worried about Faris when he's in bnadier, she hated all water sports that he enjoyed doing.
Dont worry!!
She smiled, put her mobile on the table and left her bed.
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Faris looked at her reply, Zaina was disappointed of him, she wasn’t herself, she's usually hyper he could feel it through the texts!! He could see her smiles, but he wasn’t there, he wasn’t around her for a whole day yesterday and he felt guilty.
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Zaina spent her afternoon with her family, she missed Faris, she really did…she walked out to the garden and dialed his number.
It rang..
Rang..
And rang..
He didn’t reply.
Faris I miss you.
Zaina sat on a bench in the garden, hoping that he'd see the missed call and call her back..
She waited for 15 minutes.
Zayon :( ana bl sayara weya rab3e I can't pick up!!
Zaina sighed.
I'll call you awal ma o9al elshalaih!!!
Zaina walked inside.
Faris, I'm sick of this, I'm sick of you being so away.
Faris was so busy with his friends.
Zaina, bare with it!! Bas 3 days in a week!!!
Zaina sighed.
Take care.
Faris really felt guilty, she really didn’t deserve this!! She deserved a lot more attention from him.
I'll call you awal ma o9al elshalaih!
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-Two hours passed-
Zaina picked her purse and walked to the door: yalla ya jima3a ma3a elsalama!!
Zaina called Faris while walking to her car... he didnt pick up.
Lal7en ma wi9alt elshalaih? Faris I'm having a LONG day I want to tell you about it and I really miss you!!! Please :(
She got in her car and drove off to starbucks, she picked up her drink, checked her mobile..nothing from Faris.
She called him one last time.. he didn’t pick up, She texted him again.
Zaina felt like crying, she closed her eyes tight, she just needed him.. she needed to talk to him but he's not there for her.
Zaina put her mobile in her purse and drove off…
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