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Barak walked
to the shalaih “guwa”
“OHHH
mi3risna!! 7ayak 7ayak ib nil3ab kout!”
Barak:
li3baw li3baw mali khilg!
Barak
grabbed a water bottle and walked to the porch, Saleh looked at his
friend, he
knew that something was wrong.
“Shfeek?”
Barak: mafene
Saleh: tgi9
3alay? Tawni a3arfik ana? Ikhli9 sh9yair?
Barak: Fay
dagat
Saleh was
really shocked: o radait?
Barak
nodded.
Saleh:
TISTA3BI6? Barak 7abebe tizawajt tara!! Mita ib tistaw3ib? atmana inik giltlaha
inik mitzawij?
Barak didn’t
reply.
Saleh: MA
GILTLAHA INIK TIZAWAJT? La la inta yanait rasmi!!!
Barak:
tidodaaht lama sima3t 9out’ha!! Tara baina sneen mu youm wala youmain!!
Saleh: mo
3ithir!!! murtik el maskeena shthanbha
wehya ma tadre 3an shay?
Barak: o min
galik ma tadre 3an shay?
Saleh froze
in his place, he knew Fay very well and he was shocked that she didn’t know
that Barak got married, Her stalking skills made her know everything about
everyone.
Saleh: ta3al
imsh niftar bil sayara o goule kil shay
.
.
.
Lama sat
with the cookie jar on her lap.
Shoug:
shfeech?
Lama: mafene
shay laish?
Shoug: madre
sakta min el 3a9ir o 7a6a el cookies eb 7ithnich!
Lama:
bas2ilich so2al
Shoug:
si2alay
Lama: kintay
tadren ina Barak kan y7ib wa7da?
Shoug froze
in her place: Lama sh9ayir?
Lama: jawbay
so2ale o agoulch!
Shoug: kint
adre ina y7ib wa7da o galina ina bas haad America o hadha!!
Lama: laish
ma tizawajha?
Shoug: omi
ma rithat sum3at’ha mu thak el zood
Lama: o
laish ma giltele Shoug? Laish ma giltay?
Lama felt so
chocked up.
Shoug: Lama
walaaa galina ina khalas hadha!!! O misa7 arqamha!! O mala ay 3alaqa feha!!
Lama: dagat
3alaih el yoom 3gub el ghada
Shoug
gasped.
Lama: o
giltla ykhtar baini o bainha o ma raad 3alay
Shoug sat
beside Lama, she couldn’t believe that Barak didn’t pick Lama over Fay.
.
.
.
Saleh: Barak
inta eb nafsik ga3id tgoul ina Lama khosh wa7da o ma ga9arat wiyak eb shay
hatha wiyha tadre ina fe wa7da ghairha!
Barak
sighed.
Saleh: ana
agoul dig 3ala Fay al7en o goulaha inik tizawajt o bas la tdig 3alaik windagat
btshof shay ma ysirha!
Barak
grabbed the phone and called Fay.
“Alooo!”
Barak: hala
Fay
Fay:
ahlaaain!!!
Barak: Fay
ana dag 3ashan agoulch shay wasida
Fay: goul!!
Barak: ana
tizawajt o magdar bas akamil wiyach
magdar athlimha!
Fay was
silent for a moment: t7ibha?
Barak was
silent, he really liked Lama but he wasn’t sure if he was in love with her, and
with Fay it was perfect and he missed it.
Fay: Barak?
Barak really
missed Fay, but didn’t want to be unfair with Lama.
Barak: Fay
please qadray mawqifi
.
.
.
Lama sat on
the cold sand, she felt it with her hand,
her ipod was on shuffle and she enjoyed the peaceful moment she was in.
Show me
that you don’t care and I’ll stay here if you prefer, yes I’ll leave you..without
a word.
Birdy’s soft
voice went through Lama’s ears, the song really said what she’s feeling.
She suddenly
felt a hand on her shoulder.
Lama: shoug
shfeech?
Shoug: Lama
bagoulch shay
Lama:
goulay!! Sh9yir?
Shoug: Mama
Noura bil mistashfa!
Lama:
NA3AAM? Shoug al7een n7dir!! AL7EEEN
Shoug: okay
okay!! Mobilech ma3ay imshay!!
Lama rushed
to Shoug’s car.
.
.
.
Barak felt
like texting Lama, just to check on her but he knew that she won’t reply.
.
.
.
Lama walked
through the white halls of the hospital, the smell of hospitals made her feel
sick, she always tried to avoid hospitals as much as she could.
Lama:
3azziiiz!! Sh9aaar?!!
Aziz:
mafeeha ela el3afya!!
Lama:
i7lif!!!
Aziz: wala!!
9arlaha cham youm mu makhtha 7bob el thagh6 fa irtifa3 wayed!
Lama:
waaay!! Laish tsawe chithi ib 3umrha!! Wainha?
Aziz: dakhil
wel dictor wiyaha ni6ray shway!
Lama sighed
and sat down.
Shoug: el
7imdallah mafeha shay!!
Lama nodded
and whispered “el7imdallah”
Shoug
grabbed her mobile and sent Barak a text:
Mama
Noura bil mistashfa, ana o Lama 3indaha.
Ay
mistashfa?
Shoug sent
Barak the details.
.
.
.
“Mama!!
Laish tsaween chithi ib 3umrich!!”
Grandmother:
bas ya Yuma malait min hal adwiya!!
Lama:
maykhalif ta7amilay wala y9er fech chithi mara thanya!!
“el salam
3alaikom”
Lama knew
the voice she just heard, she knew it too well.
Grandmother:
hala Baraak!! Hala 7abebe!!
Barak:
salamaat!! Ma tshofeen shar yal ghalya!
Lama avoided
eye contact with Barak, he beside Aziz, he can directly see Lama but she can’t.
The doctor
came into the room and informed them that Mama Noura had to sleep for the
night.
Shoug: ahale
7daraw o yayeen!
Grandmother:
laa Yuma! Ma tiswa elsa3a garibat t9er tisi3! La yta3bon 3umrhom!
Lama: Shoug
emshay khal ayeeb hdoum!!
Shoug:
btnamen?
Shoug looked
at Barak.
Aziz: la Lama
intay ro7ay wana anam!
Lama: la
3aziz 7aram!! Murtik bro7ha bil bait!
Barak: ee
9a7 kalam Lama, 3aziz rid baitik wi7na mawjoden
Lama waited
for Aziz to leave then looked at Barak: ana mawjoda.. ana bro7i banam hne!
Barak sighed
and nodded: adre imshay inyeeb jan6itich
Lama: baro7
wiya Shoug
Barak: Shoug
lazm trid el bait bas t2akhar el wagt!!
Shoug was
afraid that Mama Noura would notice the tension between Lama and Barak.
Shoug: imshaw
intifaham bara!
They walked
outside.
Shoug:
khalas Barak khal Lama trid wiyay!
Barak: Shoug
tiwakilay o ana aridha el bait o ayebha hne mara thanya!
Lama: mani
ray7a wala mukan wiyak!!
Barak: min
gaal ina ib kaifich?
Lama looked
at Shoug, Shoug smiled and winked.
.
.
.
“Wain
ray7en? Hatha mu 6reej baitna!!”
Barak:
baking tray bakhtlich a sandwich o ba3dain nro7 el bait!
Lama: o min
galik ine yo3ana?
Barak: Lama
basich 3nad wala ma ra7 yfedch ib shay!
Lama was
silent all the way, Barak parked in front of baking tray: ni6rene shway o yay!
Barak walked
inside, Lama saw his wallet, he forgot it!
Lama: iff!
Al7en begoul mayta 3alay nazla waray!
Lama grabbed
the wallet, locked the car and walked inside, she saw Barak checking his
pockets.
Lama:
nisaita!
Barak
smiled: mashkoura
Lama didn’t
smile back, they stood in front of the cashier waiting for their order.
Barak:
Lama.. lay mita?
Lama: lain
ana aqarir shbnsawe!!
Barak:
kaifich
Lama: adri!
Barak
smiled.
Barak: tara
ma 3indhom soft drinks fa 6alabtlich-
“BARAK?”
Lama
couldn’t believe her ears, it was a woman’s voice that just called Barak, Lama
looked at Barak and he was shocked and she knew it.
She turned
around and saw a lady standing, with her skinny jeans, heels, dark lips and
black long hair.
“Fay?”
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inzein laish ma you post twice a week? Khoush fekra jad;p
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I just stopped reading half way through the post; I really didn't want it to end. I know the deal was to write a post every Friday, but that was too short. I know it's Rm'6an<3 and everyone's busy. I wouldn't like to pressure you, and so please try posting sooner than Friday. I could keep on reading this story over and over again. Tara ma 3ndi man3 a7f'6ha b3ad, yes I'm that desperate. I love you and don't forget to post another LONG part soon.
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Please post before Friday the post is short for a week
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