Friday, July 26, 2013

Empty Spaces -8-

Hello!!

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*This post goes to SAA!! THANK YOU for motivating me and giving me push forward!

Enjoy it!
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Barak walked to the shalaih “guwa”


“OHHH mi3risna!! 7ayak 7ayak ib nil3ab kout!”


Barak: li3baw li3baw mali khilg!


Barak grabbed a water bottle and walked to the porch, Saleh looked at his
 friend, he knew that something was wrong.


“Shfeek?”


Barak: mafene


Saleh: tgi9 3alay? Tawni a3arfik ana? Ikhli9 sh9yair?


Barak: Fay dagat


Saleh was really shocked: o radait?


Barak nodded.


Saleh: TISTA3BI6? Barak 7abebe tizawajt tara!! Mita ib tistaw3ib? atmana inik giltlaha inik mitzawij?


Barak didn’t reply.


Saleh: MA GILTLAHA INIK TIZAWAJT? La la inta yanait rasmi!!!


Barak: tidodaaht lama sima3t 9out’ha!! Tara baina sneen mu youm wala youmain!!


Saleh: mo 3ithir!!!  murtik el maskeena shthanbha wehya ma tadre 3an shay?


Barak: o min galik ma tadre 3an shay?


Saleh froze in his place, he knew Fay very well and he was shocked that she didn’t know that Barak got married, Her stalking skills made her know everything about everyone.


Saleh: ta3al imsh niftar bil sayara o goule kil shay

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Lama sat with the cookie jar on her lap.


Shoug: shfeech?


Lama: mafene shay laish?


Shoug: madre sakta min el 3a9ir o 7a6a el cookies eb 7ithnich!


Lama: bas2ilich so2al


Shoug: si2alay


Lama: kintay tadren ina Barak kan y7ib wa7da?


Shoug froze in her place: Lama sh9ayir?


Lama: jawbay so2ale o agoulch!


Shoug: kint adre ina y7ib wa7da o galina ina bas haad America o hadha!!


Lama: laish ma tizawajha?


Shoug: omi ma rithat sum3at’ha mu thak el zood


Lama: o laish ma giltele Shoug? Laish ma giltay?


Lama felt so chocked up.


Shoug: Lama walaaa galina ina khalas hadha!!! O misa7 arqamha!! O mala ay 3alaqa feha!!


Lama: dagat 3alaih el yoom 3gub el ghada


Shoug gasped.


Lama: o giltla ykhtar baini o bainha o ma raad 3alay


Shoug sat beside Lama, she couldn’t believe that Barak didn’t pick Lama over Fay.


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Saleh: Barak inta eb nafsik ga3id tgoul ina Lama khosh wa7da o ma ga9arat wiyak eb shay hatha wiyha tadre ina fe wa7da ghairha!


Barak sighed.


Saleh: ana agoul dig 3ala Fay al7en o goulaha inik tizawajt o bas la tdig 3alaik windagat btshof shay ma ysirha!


Barak grabbed the phone and called Fay.


“Alooo!”


Barak: hala Fay


Fay: ahlaaain!!!


Barak: Fay ana dag 3ashan agoulch shay wasida


Fay: goul!!


Barak: ana tizawajt  o magdar bas akamil wiyach magdar athlimha!


Fay was silent for a moment: t7ibha?


Barak was silent, he really liked Lama but he wasn’t sure if he was in love with her, and with Fay it was perfect and he missed it.


Fay: Barak?


Barak really missed Fay, but didn’t want to be unfair with Lama.


Barak: Fay please qadray mawqifi
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Lama sat on the cold sand, she felt it with her hand,  her ipod was on shuffle and she enjoyed the peaceful moment she was in.


Show me that you don’t care and I’ll stay here if you prefer, yes I’ll leave you..without a word.


Birdy’s soft voice went through Lama’s ears, the song really said what she’s feeling.

She suddenly felt a hand on her shoulder.


Lama: shoug shfeech?


Shoug: Lama bagoulch shay


Lama: goulay!! Sh9yir?


Shoug: Mama Noura bil mistashfa!


Lama: NA3AAM? Shoug al7een n7dir!! AL7EEEN


Shoug: okay okay!! Mobilech ma3ay imshay!!


Lama rushed to Shoug’s car.

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Barak felt like texting Lama, just to check on her but he knew that she won’t reply.

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Lama walked through the white halls of the hospital, the smell of hospitals made her feel sick, she always tried to avoid hospitals as much as she could.


Lama: 3azziiiz!! Sh9aaar?!!


Aziz: mafeeha ela el3afya!!


Lama: i7lif!!!


Aziz: wala!! 9arlaha cham youm mu makhtha 7bob el thagh6 fa irtifa3 wayed!


Lama: waaay!! Laish tsawe chithi ib 3umrha!! Wainha?


Aziz: dakhil wel dictor wiyaha ni6ray shway!


Lama sighed and sat down.


Shoug: el 7imdallah mafeha shay!!


Lama nodded and whispered “el7imdallah”


Shoug grabbed her mobile and sent Barak a text:
Mama Noura bil mistashfa, ana o Lama 3indaha.


Ay mistashfa?


Shoug sent Barak the details.

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“Mama!! Laish tsaween chithi ib 3umrich!!”


Grandmother: bas ya Yuma malait min hal adwiya!!


Lama: maykhalif ta7amilay wala y9er fech chithi mara thanya!!


“el salam 3alaikom”


Lama knew the voice she just heard, she knew it too well.


Grandmother: hala Baraak!! Hala 7abebe!!


Barak: salamaat!! Ma tshofeen shar yal ghalya!


Lama avoided eye contact with Barak, he beside Aziz, he can directly see Lama but she can’t.


The doctor came into the room and informed them that Mama Noura had to sleep for the night.


Shoug: ahale 7daraw o yayeen!


Grandmother: laa Yuma! Ma tiswa elsa3a garibat t9er tisi3! La yta3bon 3umrhom!


Lama: Shoug emshay khal ayeeb hdoum!!


Shoug: btnamen?


Shoug looked at Barak.


Aziz: la Lama intay ro7ay wana anam!


Lama: la 3aziz 7aram!! Murtik bro7ha bil bait!


Barak: ee 9a7 kalam Lama, 3aziz rid baitik wi7na mawjoden


Lama waited for Aziz to leave then looked at Barak: ana mawjoda.. ana bro7i  banam hne!


Barak sighed and nodded: adre imshay inyeeb jan6itich


Lama: baro7 wiya Shoug


Barak: Shoug lazm trid el bait bas t2akhar el wagt!!


Shoug was afraid that Mama Noura would notice the tension between Lama and Barak.


Shoug: imshaw intifaham bara!


They walked outside.


Shoug: khalas Barak khal Lama trid wiyay!


Barak: Shoug tiwakilay o ana aridha el bait o ayebha hne mara thanya!


Lama: mani ray7a wala mukan wiyak!!


Barak: min gaal ina ib kaifich?


Lama looked at Shoug, Shoug smiled and winked.
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“Wain ray7en? Hatha mu 6reej baitna!!”


Barak: baking tray bakhtlich a sandwich o ba3dain nro7 el bait!


Lama: o min galik ine yo3ana?


Barak: Lama basich 3nad wala ma ra7 yfedch ib shay!


Lama was silent all the way, Barak parked in front of baking tray: ni6rene shway o yay!


Barak walked inside, Lama saw his wallet, he forgot it!


Lama: iff! Al7en begoul mayta 3alay nazla waray!


Lama grabbed the wallet, locked the car and walked inside, she saw Barak checking his pockets.


Lama: nisaita!


Barak smiled: mashkoura


Lama didn’t smile back, they stood in front of the cashier waiting for their order.


Barak: Lama.. lay mita?


Lama: lain ana aqarir shbnsawe!!


Barak: kaifich


Lama: adri!


Barak smiled.


Barak: tara ma 3indhom soft drinks fa 6alabtlich-


“BARAK?”


Lama couldn’t believe her ears, it was a woman’s voice that just called Barak, Lama looked at Barak and he was shocked and she knew it.


She turned around and saw a lady standing, with her skinny jeans, heels, dark lips and black long hair.



“Fay?”

42 comments:

  1. OMG!!! Kmli pleaseee������

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  2. another post please !!!

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  3. omg please nabe post el yoom
    Your blog is the best seriously mafe a7la mnah actually it's perfect ❤❤❤❤

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    1. I'll post on Friday enshallah ;)
      Thank you so much!!!

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  4. Mara g9eeeerrrr el post and you had a week to wright it el7een lazim nstana ela next Friday ? Ma y9eer wala it's too short for a week

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    1. I don't spend my whole week writing posts, I have a life and I get busy, Thank you!

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  5. Fay akrihich akrihich akrihich AKRIHIIIICCCCHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
    iffffffff lmaaa qsam bellah maskeeinaa wallah matistahil
    Barrak lazm yt9arff jad
    w fay bsich tlizig galich mitzawj wey3 akrihich mal el3e6yy ely yaklich zaaain!!!! El3e6yy ya3nyy eltheib:: klmaa bdwyaa:(::::
    LOOL chinyy wayd shta6eit?:::
    Y7leelyy wallah:$::
    inzein laish ma you post twice a week? Khoush fekra jad;p
    Ana kent silent reader bs now ill comment dayman enshallah -mf xo

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    1. Thank you for not being silent!! I really enjoyed reading ur comment ;D

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  6. You left us in a cliffhanger and it was a really short post, totally unfair!
    Paah lease post before friday.

    Sincerely,
    A desperate silent reader

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  7. Damn guurrll, lol please post the next chapter :(

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  8. Waaaaaayyy 7ddiii msht'hyy Hal Fay il'3tha!! Uuuff.
    Loved the post 7abeeebtyy S xx

    ~ Fa6aamii;*

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  9. I just stopped reading half way through the post; I really didn't want it to end. I know the deal was to write a post every Friday, but that was too short. I know it's Rm'6an<3 and everyone's busy. I wouldn't like to pressure you, and so please try posting sooner than Friday. I could keep on reading this story over and over again. Tara ma 3ndi man3 a7f'6ha b3ad, yes I'm that desperate. I love you and don't forget to post another LONG part soon.
    - With all my love from the UAE, SJZ

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  10. Amazing. Simply amazing. Your talent is endless. Each story is better than the last! Bas laysh el cliffhanger :( yalla friday hurry up! we want the next post!! oo ya36eech el 3afya 3la this one!

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  11. Waaaay la yalaaa magdar a9birrr!!:"(


    Elqi9a 3ajeeeba! Ghair 3n kel elqi9a9 ele before, keep goingg:******


    -S78

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  12. OH MY GOOOOD 9ALOO7A the last 2 posts were amazin lama is so cute♡ the ba7ar scene I bet it happened all of the readers!? Aba achtil barak 3adee O:) !!! GOD 9ALOO7A YOU ARE SIMPLY UNDESCRIBEABLE if thats even a word o:) you stick to your beauriful promises mayi7tay you post intee 5alhoom iwaloon ilee yiboon poooost yitrayooooooon be good girls ILY ;****************** I PRESENT THE BEST BLOGGER AWARD TO 9ALOO7A because everyone left :"""""c I miss "love lust and life"and 7awoory's blog :c bye bye saloohaaaa post when youuu pooooost :* - MRS ARHUN KAPOOOOOOOOR

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    1. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I really enjoy reading ur comments!!

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  13. Too short ya 5ara

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  14. Who ever said ( too short ya 5ara ) 9ara7tn mu mtrbya
    9al7a amazing post as always loved it mashalah and lama Mara tnr7m !!
    Please post before Friday the post is short for a week

    T

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  15. TARA MA NERTHAAA 3ALAAA 9alooo7aa!!!! 3an qilat el adaab:):):)!!!!!

    7adna mishta6een 3la next post bas take your timmmeee:******

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  16. PPPPPPPPPOOOOOOOSSSSSSSTTTTTTT PLLLLEEEAAASEEE

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  17. Post the next chapter please :'( !!!!!!

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  18. I'm speechless AMAZING STORY <3<3<3

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  19. OMG OMG OMG il story is more than freakin awesome I loved it !! You are truly an amazing writer

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  20. I LOVE YOUR BLOG!! I read all your stories in less then 3 days <3

    Post soon, don't leave us hanging!

    -A R

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  21. La la la la la chee waayeedd 3lenaa magdar at7amall
    Lazem we figure Something out 7g salfat one post every Friday:"( shrayech two posts a week? Elposts wayeed 3jeebeenn w qaweyeennn ma at7amal bamout

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  22. AMAAAAAAZZZZIIIINNNNGGGGGG

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