Monday, February 15, 2010

Dreaming with a broken Heart [23]

Shlounkoooum? ;)
Ma 3indi shay agoola :p mafene garga el youm.
6awfaw badliyat I didnt check.
LONG POST
Enjoy it O ma giltooli shraykoum bil story so far?
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3umar: 6aiba jawbene mn kintay t7achen?!

6aiba: 3amor ihda bagoolik kil shay!

3umar took a deep breath.

6aiba: hatha wa7id 9arla mooda ydizle messages maktob feha kalemat a'3ani, gilt yimkin wa7id mn hal shabab ile ma 3indhoum salfa! Bas tawa dazli message 7asasni ina y3rifni! 7asait ina yadri 3an ile 9ar baini O bainik!

3umar looked at her with questioning eyes.

6aiba: katibli 6ala3tay mn Galba?! Shdarah!!

3umar: SHNO ILE SHARAH?! INTAY MN GALICH INCH 6AL3TAY MN GALBI! *sigh* Intay kintay bil galb O 6ool 3oumrch bitimeen feh...

6aiba lowered her head…her eyes were full with tears, he made her feel guilty about what she told him, she looked around… they were standing in the same place… in the same place where they talked for the last time, she sighed deeply.

He felt it, 7as bile ga3id ydoor ib ras.ha, He could read her like an open book.

3umar: kina wagfeen hne lama giltele inch ma tabene akthar mn cousin.

3umar… laish sawaitay fena chithi?! walhan 3alaich 6ayouba

She wiped her tears away.

3umar iff maskeena ihya wain wana wain chini '6ayag 5ilgha.

3umar: umm 6ayouba 3a6ene el ra8am.

6aiba: la 3amor mala da3i mishakil.

3umar: t3arfene mo ra3i mishakil, bas bawagfa 3ind 7ada.

6aiba gave him the number.

3umar dialed the number … his face turned pale & his eyes widened

6aiba: 3amor shfeek?

A name appeared on 3umar's screen

3umar la la mo ma38oola

6aiba: 3amor shfeek?

3umar left 6aiba standing & went to his car.

6aiba: 3amor rid 3alay shfeek!

3umar: ma fene shay! Baroo7 mishwar O raji3!

6aiba: bas…

3umar closed his car door & drove away.

6aiba rushed inside!!

Abaih Agool 7ag mno?! A5af agool 7ag 5alod ygoli laish ma giltele mn zmaan! Ufff ya rabi!

Um 6aiba: 6ayouuuba mama!

6aiba: na3am?

3athba:sh3alaaaaaaaaaaaaich yayeenich 5i6aaab!

6aiba:SHNO?

Um 6aiba: tathkreen ya3goob el flani?

6aiba: ile Kan ma3ay bil madrisa?

Um 6aiba: eee!

6aiba: ya3goob ele mn kithir ma ohwa mteeen kan …

Um 6aiba: haw 6aiba sh.hal 7achi! Law tshoofena al7en mintay gayla hal 7achi!

6aiba: mabe ashoofa! O goolelhoum asfeen ma nabeekoum!

Um 6aiba: la wala?! O laish inshallah?!!

6aiba: BAS! Mako sibab!

Um 6aiba: 6aiba!

6aiba: YUMA! PLZ KILISH MO WAGTA!

Um 6aiba was shocked mo 3awayid 6aiba faj2a t39ib
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3umar grabbed him from his t-shirt.

3umar: O raaaabi O rabii ya 3baid in dazaitlha message marra thanya thiba7tik!

3abdallah: hoob hoob a39abik 3amor! Yayen baitna O bitahawash! Mno hathi ele badizlha message shit5arbi6 int!

3umar: 3baid la tista3bi6 3alay! Isma3ni zain O wa9il kalami 7ag Dana in garabtaw mn 6aiba aw athaitooha ib shay matlomon ila nafskoum! Li3nibo darik ana wild 5alik tsawi fene chithi?

3aballah: 7abebe ana ma sawaitlik shay int shako bil salfa kilha?!

3umar: ile y2athi 6aiba ya2athene ya 3abdallah O wala WALA! In gitlha shay wa7id 3an ile tawa 9ar matloom ila nafsik

3umar let him go and left the house.

Yimkin for all of us what just happened is normal , 6abe3e ina 3umar ydafi3 3an 6aiba… Bas for 3abdallah it was shocking la2ana 3umar 6ool 3oumra insan hadii mo ra3i mishakil, bas ele 9ar el youm 9dima.

After 3umar left, 3abdallah called her...

3abdallah: Dana intay mn 9ijch? Agoolich zaarni mn bloozti O gam y9ari5 mn gomat rassa! 3amor mn mita y9ari5 mn gomat rassa?!

Dana: NO WAY ! 3amor ma ysaweeha!

3abdallah: 3youna yiti6ayar minha shar! Shakla el walad y7ibha ya Dana O el salfa mo li3ib

Dana: La?! Al7en ull give up?

3abdallah: Dana ana sawait kil hatha 3ashanich! Sawait kil hatha 3ashanich *sigh* Dana, 3amor ma yadri 3anich O balah ma3a hal 6aiba, btdoor fech el dinya O btridele ana la2ana ma7ad y7ibich '3airi

Dana: uff 3abadallah!

3abdallah: *sigh* tara 3umar yadri ina ur in this with me O 9ara7a mani 5asir my cousin 3ashanich… dabray 3umrch

*click*

Masken 3abdallah…Y7ib Dana, 3ala gaswat galba O 5ibth.ha bas y7ibha, yimkin kan yshoof feha ashya2 ile 7awalainha ma yshofonha…

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3umar uff mo gadir a9adig! Shloun ysaweeha fene 3abdallah?! La3ba feh li3ib Dana! Ma38ooola? Ba'3ait ayin youm shift isma 3ala shashat mobiley!

6aiba called 3umar but his mobile was switched off.

Uff Allah yastir hatha wain raaa7? Wayed 6awal!

The door of the living room opened & she heard his voice.

3umar: isalaam 3alaikoum

6aiba way ashwa ina yaah!

He looked at her and winked

Um 6aiba: 3amooor 7abebe ta3aaal

3umar: amray 5alti

Um 6aiba: t3arif ya3goob el flani?

3umar: ee a3rfa

Um 6aiba: shrayik feh?

3umar: 5oosh walad

Um 6aiba talking to 6aiba: haaa sima3tay! 3amoor ygoolich ina 5oosh walad!

6aiba rolled her eyes & 3umar laughed

3umar: laish ts2leen 5alti?

Um 6aiba: la2ana 5a6aab 6ayouba!

3umar: Shno?!

18 comments:

  1. fiiiiiiiiiiirst im going to read :P lool
    um flfola

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  2. ambaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay shraa7 yesawi 3amoor ;o ..a7saaaaaaan zain sawa eb 3abdullah o el mafrooth yroo7 7a8 danoo el 5ara o yesafel feha :P o ur story so faaar 3ajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeebaaa abaay ya3ni ana admaaant eb ur blog i cant stop cheking iff ur posting wala laa2 so plz post soon o if u can post noow pllllz plz plz
    um flfola

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  3. waaaay 3ala hal dana mita ibniftak minha....oo zain sawa ya3goub 5a6ab 6aiba 3ashan i7s 3amor bil wa'93 oo eti9araf

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  4. LAAAAAAAAAA22222222222! LAISH IL CLIFF HANGER LAISH ...laishh itl3been b2a39bna chithi laish ;( shlon galbch iy6aw3ch ..tr'9ain, tr'9ain chithi?! :P hahah bas 3ad cheni wayddddd ma9a5t'ha haha ..ok abt the story ana 3n nafsii wayddddddddd a7b il 8i9aaaaaaaa fa pls continue
    -Anon N

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  5. Wuuuh it's too much for 3mour in one day!!=O
    Abebi 3mour =* =p
    LOL
    -N~

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  6. waaaay hal dana mal zan6a ;p ur story 3ajeeba mashalla thab6a il adwar oo laman agra adish feeha chinny wiyahom love it ! Bas il postat wayid g9ar

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  7. waaiii3 hathy el zag loo te6la3 bara el 8e9a wayed a7san ;p
    liked it bs gabel cham week ur postts kanaw a6wal mn chethy (a)
    il mohim post sooon pweeez !! love yaa <3
    the story is amazing keep up the good work;)

    saroona;**

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  8. No no plz dont stop here!!! may9eer ;'( next post plllllzzzzz ;****
    Mooney

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  9. iffff danaa ityeeeb il 3ilaa mal kaff!!
    it7iirr;P
    ya3ni may9eer it5aleen 3amour oo 6ayoub fi 7alhoum? lazm titda5al?!
    as for the storyyy ityaaaninn mithil il katbtha;****
    dont ever think that ur story isnt good l2na its beyond amazingg;)
    -M10

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  10. abaaaaaaaaaaih 7abeeebii 3abdullah!! 3awwaar qalbii:( w dana kalba as always .. w 3omar beyeen w ebyeste5eef the nxt post:P

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  11. omg!! i luved ur post plz plz poooosst soooooon cant wait :p

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  12. I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!
    thanx 3al post..it was awesome ;p
    next post pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    cant wait
    A

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  13. plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllz post plz i cant wait aany longer :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:( yemkin i cheked ur blog malioon mara bss u didnt post
    um flfola

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  14. hatha 3indich long?! please nabee longerr!! you know ma nigdar nishba3 min your posts!
    wai wai 3oumar:*
    next post please!

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  15. um flfola
    LOL ta5ayilay law rayi7 6ag Dana? lol chan 9ar 9ij action :p
    I just posted, enjoy it ;*

    Rawan
    Ufff '3atha madri mita ib niftak minha :p
    I agree :)

    Anon N
    waay waaay shsawaitay fene?;p lay hal daraja ma t7ben el cliff hangers?:p

    Charmbracelet
    I agree
    oooh irtaf3at as.houm 3amor 3indich haa?;p

    Anon H
    Thank you;*

    L
    Mashkoura wayded ;* ur comment made me really happy ;) Inshallah the coming post will be longer.

    Saroona;**
    maskena hal Dana kilman yabeeha bara el 8i9a :p
    Thanks alot,love u too hun. ;*

    Mooney
    I just posted it :)

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  16. Anon M10
    Shiftay shloun? 3illa 3illa!
    Ba3ad 3oumri mashkoura waaayed ;**

    Anon
    intay el wa7eeda ele inkisar 5a6irha 3ala 3abdallah :p lol ee masken 3umar :p

    M.M.D
    Thank you ;) I just posted, Enjoy it ;)

    Anon A
    Every one hates them :p
    I just posted enjoy it ;*

    um flfola again :p
    I POSTED :D enjoy it ;**

    bluelilies
    Ok a3tirif its not long :p
    Just posted :D

    Reem ;*
    intay a3jaab

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