Thursday, May 13, 2010

Giving up? {25}

Quwa;*

SOOOOOOOOORRRY!

I AM SO SO BUSY! Mako wagt!!! I SO SORRY!;* Garait nitfa mn zafat Anon N baroo7 akamilha al7en ;p Thanks 7ag ele 6arisholi emails asking about me! That was really sweet;**

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A777 fe shay ga3id y8izni! Uff etha ba6alt 3anini ma ra7 arid anam!

Bibi moved o the other side, ugh lal7en y3awir!

She moved her hand to the direction of the pain shno hatha?

Bibi felt something in her pjs pocket she pulled it out, opened half an eye & then smiled, it was the bracelet that Bandar gave her , she stared at it albis.ha wala la?

She couldn’t help not to wear it! She missed the feeling of having it on her wrist, Bibi closed her eyes & smiled
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Ahhhh bismilah!

Bandar gasped after waking up from a bad dream.

A3otho bilaah! Sh.hal 7ilm el 5ayis! Ay rasi

His vision was blurry, he blinked once, twice & then everything was normal again
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Zayod 7abebe yalla goom!

Zaid: oooh manoora fikene!

Munera: goom yala ta2a5art!

Zaid looked at his alarm: baij ni9 sa3a 3ala el munabih! Sh3indich ga3da mn al7en? 7ag el iz3aj bas!

Munera: ufff Zayod 3indi salfa tgargi3 ib galbi!

He smiled & opened his eyes: golay shil salfa?

Munera: shift Bandar ams!

Zaid: ay Bandar?

Munera: Bandar el flani!

Zaid: wain shifteh?

Munera: lama 6ala3t ma3a Babon

Zaid: hathi el salfa ele tgargi3 ib galbich? Imga3datni mn el noom 3ala-

Munera: ma 5ala9t!

Zaid: 5al9ay!

Munera: Zayod titwa8a3 ina umm ina y7ibha?

Zaid: huh? Mn wain yayba hal 7achi?

Munera: way Zayod shayif shloun y6ali3ha?! Nathrita '3aaair lama y6ali3ha!

Zaid: wintay midach t3rfen nathrata?

Munera: uff Zayod! Laish mo ga3id tifhamne?

Zaid: la2anha siwalif 7arem! Bala ana shfahamni ib nathrata O nathrat.ha?

Munera: uff naaaaam bas naaaaam!
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She entered the elevator with her grandfather

Grandfather: baba Baboona thakray sawsan inha itjahiz sayi8 O sayara 7ag Majid

Bibi nodded.

Grandfather: O thakray Bandar ina el rayal yay 3gub youmain

Bibi nodded masken Bandar thiba7ta 7ana!
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-In the weekend-

Bibi ate her breakfast & sat in the living room, she picked up the news paper & noticed the date
Abaih! Majid yay bachr! Nisat athakir Bandar!

She picked up the phone & called Bandar

6ooo6 6ooo6 6oo

Alo?

Bibi: aloo hala Bandar

Bandar: *yawn* hala fech

Bibi giggled: abaih ga3adtik mn el noom?

He smiled, he loved the idea of waking up on her voice!

Bandar cleared his throat: la 3adi

Bibi: ok ashwa *giggle* weeh nisait laish dagait

He giggled.

Bibi: laish ga3id mit2a5ir?

But before Bandar could answer.

Bibi: OHHHHH tithakart! Majid el flani yay el Kuwait bachr! Ba6arishla nass el ma6ar, lazm 3al sa3a 5 nkoun 3inda bil Sheraton ok!? Mo tinsa

Bandar: enshallah

Bibi: ok 3ayal ashoofik bachr

Bandar: oob la7tha!

Bibi: please la tgool inik mash'3ol!

Bandar: la la mo mash'3ol bas el sh'3il wil afkar ele kitabnaha bil mu2tamar bil maktab

Bibi: hmmm 3indik shay al7en?

Bandar: la

Bibi: ok 3ayal ashoofik bil sharika ba3ad rubi3 sa3a
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Bandar parked his car & entered the building, he found Bibi talking to the door man

Bibi: ee wala ya mida7at 9aj yabele bodyguard * giggle*

He smiled, she looked so adorable!

Bandar cleared his throat

Bibi: oh Bandar!

Mid7at: Ahlan ya ostaz Bandar! A5barak aaih? El 7imdallah 3ala el salama

Bandar just smiled & nodded: shukran

Mid7at: 3afawan ya ostaz

Bibi & Bandar walked to the elevator

Bibi: shlounik?

Bandar: el 7imdallah b5air intay shlounch?

Bibi smiled: tamam

He wanted to ask her why she never visited him

She wanted to apologize for not visiting him

*ting* the elevator arrived, They entered

Bibi: Bandar?

Bandar: na3am?

Bibi: mid7at wayed ra7ab fek O ma radait 3ala ila ib ibtisama?

He sighed: ok?

Bibi: shno ok? 3al a8al rid 3alaih

At that moment Bandar realized that she didn’t get it! She didn’t get that he's only like this with her & he's still the cold numb Bandar to all the people around him.

*ting*

Bandar walked out of the elevator to his disk

Bibi felt guilty: Bandar laykoun za3alt?

He shook his head

Bibi: ma kint a89id shay bas-

Bandar: awrag el mu2tamar mo 3indi, ma kanaw ib maktibich?

Bibi sighed it was so typical of him! If he didn’t want to talk about something he would switch the subject!

She walked to her office & brought the papers, when she went back to Bandar she found him sitting on his disk staring at space

Bibi cleared her throat: kil ili ni7taja ma3ak?

Bandar nodded & they walked to the elevator
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Shifta bil 9idafa ams, 7ada 7abob! Yuma La ta7kmen 3alaih bidon la t3rfena

Y9er 5air
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They entered the elevator

Bandar clicked on P, the elevator didn’t move

Bibi: Bandar 6ig 3ala P!

Bandar: 6agait!

Bibi stood next to him & clicked on P, the light of the button was off!

Bibi: abaih!

She clicked on the button that opens the door & nothing happened!

Bandar tried to click on all the buttons & still the elevator didn’t move

Bibi: abaih Bandar! El a9in9air 3alag!

34 comments:

  1. ohhh m jeee!!! O.o akeed a7een kl7aad baygool she fe 5a6raah! :P

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  2. I LOVE YOU WALLAH !! ;;* <3<3<3
    brb readin'

    saroona;**

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  3. I LOVE YOU TOOOOO ;****
    Tyt enjoy it ;)

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  4. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeh LOOOL pls 5al tabchyy xD ;p hahahahhaha
    3ashan e9eer film hindy a9lly (y) :p
    post thany pweeeeeeez

    saroona;**

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  5. Loooooool ;p

    I'll post soon enshallah :)

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  6. abaaiiiiiiiiiiiiihhh 9aloooo77aaa walahhht 3laiich oo 3alla postatiich!!!
    il maw8efff ili in7a6oow feeh ;)!!
    *siiighh** hopefully something will come out of this;pp!
    ...abaiihh graiti zafat anon n?!!
    mawtatniii!!;pp 5ibla 5ibla hal bint!
    al7een ihyaa fi baityy ga3 tisba7 ri7ttt a6ag6igg 3al bab oo a9ar55 9alooooo7a postedd 9alooo7aa posted!;p..oo ihyaa from the other side it9ar55 kaniii kaniii digayg oo a5alii9!;p
    hahahaha lol mo im9adga il i5t!
    postt sooon;***
    oo glad ur back:D!
    -M10

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  7. 9ALOO7A!!! WELCOME BACK!!
    MISS YOU WAYED!
    UMBAY MIN KITHAR MA ANA MISTANSA I AM CAPTILIZING MY WORDS!!:D
    THX FOR THE POST
    NEXT POST PEWWZ BAS MO 6AWLEEN 3ALANA LIKE LAST TIME WALLAH AYIY BATICH ANA OO ANON !!
    Manoora

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  8. M10
    Ba3ad 3umri 7ata ana walhaaaat 3alaich O 3ala ur comments;**
    lol ee garait.ha ;p
    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL way mit mn el '6i7ik! ba3ad 3umri intaw ;**
    I'll post soon enshallah!
    Thank you;**

    Manoora
    MANOORA! THANK YOU!!
    MISS U TOO!!
    WANA BA3AD MY WORDS ARE CAPITALIZED MN EL WANASA!
    ENSHALLAH MANI M6WALA LOL 9ARAT 7ARB THIDI EL KIL BIYE BAITNA? ;p

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  9. we missed yaaw , umbaaaaaaih maraa 3allaag feeny bas infach =p

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  10. 7AMDILLAAAAAA 3LA SALAMATCH 9ALOOOOO7AAA;***** e7m e7m *clears throat, composes herself* oh nsait ana za3lana 3laich, i should be upset! *upset tone* 9alooooo7a laish itsaweeen feena chithi it5aleena n7ateeech! bas ana adri adri! ana a9lan chaktch mn zmaaaan ee sh3abalch, tg63eeen faj2a 3shan itshoooofeeen ANON N shbtgoooooooooool shbtsawwyyy shno btkoon radat fi3lha ,bt7ateeech wla laaaa2(a7la shay ine im talking in 3rd person) haaaal btgdaaaar t3eeeesh fe b3odaach w tista'3na 3n postatch w monawa3tch w khifat 6eentch wla laaaaaaaaaaa2? aw hal sawfa tansaaa w tg6ch ba7ar o tstmr b7ayat'ha il 5a9a ile btkoon 9aloo7a-less ...hatha il so2al ily im7ayrch w mgarg3 b galbch o m5aleech tg63een faj2a EE NA3AM ee na3am ana 3arfa!hatha il sibab w il 7ageeega ya 9aloo7a ine jawabt 3ala so2alch hatha il mo7eer ...w a3tQd A3TQID ina hatha iljawaab kaafi 3shan iy5aleech mat3deen hal 7araka mara thanya...lA2NA IN7BCH WNMOOT FEECH O URE STORY;*
    adri il comment wayd 3onfi bas 3shan a3br lch 3an mada 7izni w bo2sy
    -Anon N

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  11. welcome baaack;**
    yaaaay actioooon ishawgooon :D
    tislam eedich 3ala hal post;**
    love you:**

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  12. 9alo7aaaaaaaaa eshtignaaaaaalich waaaaaaayed welcome back 7beebty ! abaaaaaaaih el post 3ajeeeb !! abaaaaih 3ala8 el a9in9air ;0 wanasaaa action LOL wanasaaaaaaaaaa cant wait for the next post love yooooooooooou

    um flfola

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  13. waaaaaaaaaay yuma 3ad akrah shay 3endy etha el a9an9eer 3alag
    waaaaaay yuma walla 9ij flim r3b mu hndi!!
    law 9ar feny chan 9ar 9raaaa5 oo bachy!
    a5af men amakin 9'3era oo emsakera!!

    lool 5anshouf she9eer
    :**

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  14. 9alo7a honey ilqe9a bedaiteeha 9a7 kan feeha suspense o actionat il7een sh9aar 3alaich magomtay etketbeen a7daath meshaweqa imthay3a 3alaina ni9 ilpost bel *ting* malat el elevator , *6oo6 6oo6* malat eltelephone...6areshat elsayeq, ra7at et'3adat, namat 3ala wayeeha...ma9arat alla ehadach! ya3nee 3 posts mafeehom ay 7abkaa/7adath shay ...oo mo tawhaa bibyo bel mostashafa lameta o 7alatha 7ala (ma3ana makan lama3na kilish!) wel7een faj2a imsawya roo7a min7arja mina?!
    ilmafrooth 3al aqal hal post ekoon 3an il "ela9an9aid" kila...

    ....anyways goodluck with ur story ...although it cud have been more interesting!

    Fa3lat 5air;)

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  15. Omg fa3lat 5air ur so rude!

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  16. L
    Missed u too! waay ashwa el7imdallah ina wala mara 3alag fene! ;p

    Anon N
    ALLLAH YSALMICH;**
    ANON N! ANA A7IBICH WAYED OK?

    geraninium
    Thank you;*
    Allah ysalmich ;)
    love u too!

    um flfola
    Wana ba3ad ishtigtlkoum!! Thank you;**
    love u too!

    Darliam
    way ana bas lama afakir bil idea ina y3alig fene el a9in9air a7is I cant breath!
    :**

    Anon fa3lat 5air
    Wijhat natharich wa7tirimha :)


    Anon
    Its okay hun, its her point of view ;)
    Thank you;**

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  17. Miss u 9aloo7aaa ;**
    loooved the post ;*
    inshalla she wears ilswar o he sees it while ther in the eleveter ;D
    cant wait for the next post ;**

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  18. YA SALAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM

    3ASHAAAAAAAAAAAAAW AYWA AYWA AYWA
    9AFGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YALLA YEMEEEEEEEEN YESAAAAAAAAAAR FOUGGGGGGGGGG WESBAAAAAAAAA7

    i was about to sleep bas shay ib galbi gali check ur dashboard wela alagi post mn 9alooo7ti ow ya hatha el post sheno post ... fazzzzzzzzzzzzz galbi men elwanasaaaa...ALLAH EWANSICH YAL 9ALOO7A BINT 9ALI7 METHIL MA WANASTINIIII GOOLAI AMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN....GELTAAAAAAAAAAI... EEE 3ABALI BA3AD :P

    LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE U LOADS AND GLAD UR OK :*
    SIJ I MISSED U AND UR POSTS

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  19. LOOOL!
    fa3lat 5air thats rude!
    Manoora

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  20. 9alooo7a ma3laich mn il 3othaaaaaaaal......w layhizch reeeeeeee7;p o fa3lat 5air , fe a7ad ga6 galch ina kilshay b wakta 7ilo?! 9aloo7a taktb il a7dath mita ma taby w bi'3at yitzawjoon ilyoum wala bacher ibkaifha ihya katibat il 8i9a w tara la7gaaa 3ala il actionaaat hathy w il tibrbs walaw ina 9alooo7a matinazl w tktab 3an hal sowalif wl 5arabee6 like i said b4 9al7a's blog is NOT for R RATED STORIES ya jima3a ,fa itha inty hatha ile itdawreen 3laih esm7ily bas '3al6ana cos this isnt the blog ure looking for:), 9aloo7a sorry 7abeebty maknt naywa akoon rude chithi bas i just wanted to straighten some facts, w il 7ag yingaal...
    -Anon N

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  21. caramela
    Miss u too;*
    Thank you;*
    Enshallah!!
    I'll post soon enshallah ;)

    Nawarii
    YAAA SALAM 3ALAICH INTAAAY;**

    Ba3ad 3umri enshallah daymaaan mistansa;**
    AMEEEEEEEEEEN ka gilt gilt ;p

    LOVE U TOOO;*******
    Missed u too!!

    Rayom
    Missing u more;*

    Manoora
    ;**

    Anon N;*
    lol afa 3alaich bas ithin mn 6een within mn 3ayeen! ;p
    THANK YOU!! I CANT THANK YOU ENOUGH!!;****

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  22. 9alo7a sawaitlich add ib ur email ;p
    is that ok?

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  23. U mean email el blog?;p
    6ab3an its ok ;)

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  24. Excuse me, bs i want to clarify something, first of all its not "rude" when someone is being honest and giving constructive criticism. and i was criticizing the writing not the writer so its nothing personal!
    second of all ...to anon n... when i said actionat i NEVER meant rated stuff or any of that 5arabee6 wain ga3deen i7na o shako?? (i wudnt hav even read this blog if it had any hint of a rated storyline!!) and if u took time to notice i mentioned in my previous comment that even that "hug" that happened bel mostashfa makan lama3naa kilish bcoz in our Kuwaiti society its 7aram and 3aib and wudnt normally happen ela ba3d elzawaj, however, since this is fiction then its up to the writer to decide...
    and what i meant when i said action i was merely suggesting creating some suspense in the story, having a conflict that would attract readers even more since her characters sounded interesting in the beginning instead of wasting many posts on how the characters get from one place to another or what they do between scenes that are irrelevant to the plot!

    bs i guess kilman yara ilnaas ib3ain 6ab3a...

    anyways hope the writer understands my point of view and i thank her for respecting my first comment without taking it personally=)

    Remember...
    Fa3lat 5air;)

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  25. Fa3lat 5air

    I really dont want it to turn into a battel here calm down ya jima3a :)

    hmm fe blog isima my lil lala land her story is nice & their married so yimkin t3ajbich ;)

    I'm sure ina Anon N didnt mean anything bad she was just telling u her point of view :)

    O tara my story bas feha hug other stories feha worse than just a hug, Im not telling the readers to go hug anyone u know? O gilt ina its fiction ya3ni mo 9ij 9arat, think about it chinich ur reading a book or watching a movie and if u dont like were the story is going dont waste ur time on reading it! la2ana 9ij our time is precious do something u like in it ;)

    Ham arid wagool a7tirim wijhat natharich & thank you

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  26. elyom gareet el8e9a giving up 1 to 25 mashallah 3aleech 8e9a9ech tajtheb el wa7ed :)

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  27. WOOOOOOOOOOOWW!!!!

    1- a7ib ashker my friend illy '39ibatny agra il8i9a ;*

    2- U R AMAZING! and i love ur thinking! bas bas madree shagool:p killish moo nou3y asawwee comment la2inna maly 5ilg:p bas al7een iktishaft la2inny 6niga ma3arif at7acha:p anywaaays keep it up oo whens the next post?

    -Mary Poppins

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  28. Thank you!

    1. Ana ba3ad ashkur ur friend! thank her for me ;p

    2. THANK YOU SO MUCH! lool its ok ur wow was enough;*
    Hmm lal7en I asked everyone to bare with me because I just started my midterms! so bare with me;*

    Thank you Marry I'm glad that u commented ;)

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  29. omg!!!don't u just misss me!men zoman ma i commented i feel guilty!
    BANDAR ye8har he needs to speek up i lob him<3
    w elstorryy 6rrrrrrr
    yaaay!locked together a7la shay<3

    ~~heaven

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  30. 3sa ma shar 9al7a wilahna 3alich ou 3la ur storry:( inshalla tkonen b5air

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  31. Heaven
    6ab3an I do!! u've been missed :)
    Yup :)

    Anon
    Ma shar bas el finals sh'3alatni! wana ba3ad walaht 3alakoum;*

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