Monday, July 19, 2010

Giving up? {33}

Quwa;*

1. 85 Followers!! A7IBKOUM THANK YOU :* Ma biga shay 3al 90! :D

2. umm madri shlon agolkoum bas my family is going through a rough time, mako inspiration and I'm really not feeling ok, fa bare with me please! Yimkin a6awil 3alaikoum bil posts, I dont even like this post bas I'll post it!! :/

Enjoy it;*

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Bibi buried her head into his chest and cried…

"Shuush" Bandar kept repeating into her ears.

Bandar didn’t know what it felt like to have lost someone, he realized that he wouldn’t really understand what she's going through… so he just held her in his arms waiting for her to calm down.

Bibi was slowly calming down, her breathing was so soft he could hardly hear it, he even held his own just to make sure that the rise and fall of her chest wasn't just an illusion, that she was really there in his arms, that she really needed him and he was there for her.

Bibi wiped her tears away and rested her head on Bandar's shoulder for a while..

Bibi

Hmm

Shlonch?

She sniffed and lifted her face to face him.

He looked at her closely, her eyes were tired, her nose was red, he brushed his hand on her cheek, She gave him a weak smile.

Bibi: Bandar?

Bandar: na3am?

Bandar's ringing tone interrupted them.

Bandar: umm hatha Zaid

Bibi nodded, Bandar picked it up and she slowly let go of his hand and walked to her purse

Bandar: Alo hala Zaid…la bil Sura.. la t7aton kahi ma3ay.. al7en radha qurtuba.. ok.. ma3a el salama

Bandar turned around and found Bibi standing, she was looking at the house, it was as if she's giving it one of those goodbye looks, she closed her eyes took a deep breath, turned around and walked towards Bandar.

He smiled and held her hand and they walked to his car.

Bibi: sayarti

Bandar shook his head: ana baridich O bachr 6awrshaw el sayi8 ya5ith.ha

And for the first time Bibi just nodded, she didn’t argue and she wasn’t stubborn as always, maybe because she was tired? and maybe because she felt safe with him and she didn’t want him to leave

They got into the car and Bandar drove off… Bibi held Bandar's hand with both her hands and rested her head on the window.

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They reached the house, Bibi looked out the window and found her grandfather and Zaid sitting on a bench in the garden.

He saw Zaid and her grandfather walking towards them, Bandar tried to pull his hand away but she held it tighter.

He sighed and pulled his hand away with a bigger force, Bibi looked at him with tears in her eyes it was just like she was asking him why?

Bandar: Bibi… ana lazm aro7 *sigh* ahalich y7atoonich

Bibi felt the door open from behind her.

"Baboona 7abebte!"

Bibi kept her eyes on Bandar, she wiped her tears away then turned to face her grandfather.

Bibi got out of the car & her grandfather hugged her.

Grandfather: smila 3alaich 7abebte! gimna n7ateech!

Zaid walked towards Bandar and shook hands with him.

Zaid: mashkor

Bandar: el 3afo ma sawait shay

Bibi's grandfather smiled at Bandar and helped Bibi enter the house, she looked at him one more time and gave him a weak smile, Bandar smiled back.

Zaid: awal mara y9er ma3aha chithi

Bandar looked at Zaid.

Zaid: mn 3ugb ma tiwafa 3ami O murta hadat el bait O yat t3eesh 3ind yadi O ma 6abat el Sura

Bandar sighed: allah y3enha

Zaid: agol Bandar

Bandar: na3am?

Zaid: Babon 3zimtik 3ala el yam3a ele msaweeha yadi 7ag staff el sharika?

Bandar nodded.

Zaid: O enshallah btye?

Bandar mu china fashla agola la?!

Bandar: ee enshallah

Zaid: zain ya m3awid bro7i ma awa6in wala a7ad bil sharika!

Bandar smiled: ele ygol ana awa6inhoum!

"Sh7aga wagfen bara?! Bandar 7abebe 7ayak!!" Said Bibi's grandfather

Bandar: tislam bo 3abdallah bas lazm amshi!

"3ala ra7tik yuba, mashkor O ma ga9art"

Bandar smiled: el 3afo ma sawaina ila el wajib

Bandar: yala 3ayal Zayood nshoofik enshallah

Zaid: 3ala 5air 7ayak allah

17 comments:

  1. I MISS YOU!:*
    ooo I MISSED THIS STORYY!!
    hope everything is well with ur familyy... oo lat7ateen ur readers!....we're always here for u love!...inshalla mako ila kil 5air;**
    -M10

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  2. M10!!
    I MISS U SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!! SHA5BARICH?! 7ADA MN ZMAAN 3ANICH!!
    enshallah!! Mashkora wayed;**

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  3. ADRII ADRII!!
    7ADII '3BARR MO?!!
    hahahha bass ba3d shinsawii insha'3ltt...oo 7ada loyaa shayy wara shayy!!!
    AAHHHH iim jst glad its over..kidaa;p
    wallaa ana zaiinaa..mashii 7aliii...intyy sha5barichh?!
    M10

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  4. ilpoosst 3ajeeeeeeeeeeb ;D
    9ij 7azen bs 7iloo ;p

    loove u 9aloo7a o miss u ;**

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  5. M10
    7ADICH 7ADICH '3BAAAAR! ;p
    zaain iftakatay ;p!
    3asa enshallah! ana el 7imdalah b5air ;)

    Caramela
    Thank you;*
    love u and miss u too!!;*

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  6. laish u didnt feel like posting it! tadrin we're dieing here for a post :( ayshy u write publish dont save as draft take that off your mind :)
    love you keep posting be a good blogger like how im a good reader :)

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  7. alllaa nice bebe ga3da trawee ina she luvz him ashkaraa ;p

    L

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  8. Madliar
    la2ana I dont like it :(

    Anon L
    Thank you ;) Ee ;p

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  9. 3adii 3adii take ur time elmohem ena you feel good :**

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  10. Walah fgd aktblch comment bs al story 7adha 3agebah ;)

    Oo tslman galbi ;*****

    Awrad

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  11. AWALAAAAAN IM SOOOOOOOOOO SORRY TO HEAR THAT YOUR FAMILY IS GOING THROUGH A ROUGH TIME ENSHALLAH RABI ESAHIL 3ALAIKM OW EYASIR 2OMORKUM....

    THANEYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN ELPOST EHABIL OW MAFI SHAY NAGI9....BL 3AKS KAL 3ADAAAAAAAA YAJTHIBNI OW KEEPS ME ON MY TOES....

    I LOVE YOU 9ALOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO7A....

    9ALOO7A IF U EVER WANNA TALK PLS EMAIL ME
    el_3yoon@hotmail.com

    tc

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  12. Awrad
    Wana figadt ur comments!!

    Allah ysalmch:*

    Nawarii

    Awalan Thank u :** ameen

    Thaniyan MASHKOOOOOOOOOORA WAYED!! MWAAAH!

    I LOVE U TOO!! :**

    Will do, thanks on the support nawarii;*

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  13. I just love Bandar! okay, he's a HUNK! The story is amazing and this post was emotional-though short. But I loved it

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  14. BANDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR 7ABEEEBYYY!!!:*
    aDREE I'm a bad follower ma aktb b kel post comment:( But I Always read :D
    Bibi tnrfeznie :@ bas a7bha ba3d bas bandar akthar:p hahahahaahh ;*****
    Loving thiS!!!!! Keep it up xx

    tima Q

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  15. Heaven
    He loves u too ;p Thank you;**


    Tima Q
    Its okay;*
    lol laish 7aram 3alaich ;p 7abitich el 3afya:*
    Thank you!! will do enshallah ;)

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  16. Silent reader :$!!
    i simply adore your story 7adha ghareeba 3an kil il bloggers!!
    i love it walla its so unique and your skills mashalla are spectacular
    keep on posting please tokfain :( na6reen 3ala nar

    NO

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