Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Giving up? {32}

Quwa;**

Sha5barkoum?!!

1. ma 3indi shay agoola ;p

2. This post goes to Nawarii;**

Enjoy it;*
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The once green garden is now brown, Bibi closed her eye and saw her mother sitting on the garden's chairs, she saw her father running after her, she heard her giggles and her father's laughs, she saw her mother's smile, she saw her pink bike but when she opened her eyes non of what she saw was really there…

Tears fell from her dark brown eyes, she walked towards the door tried to open it, it was locked she tried and tried but couldn’t open it...

Bibi put her head on the door and cried "mama ana Bibi ba6looli el bab"
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Bandar called Bibi but she didn’t answer shfeeha ma trid

uff waina, Bandar was calling Bibi nonstop while looking for his father, but she never replied
When he finally found his father.

Bandar walked towards him and whispered "Yuba ana mashi"
"bili ma y7afith" his father whispered back

He sighed and left
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Bibi sat on the floor and rested her head on the door, she heard her mobile ring but she had no more energy to walk to her purse.

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Bandar drove off to meet Majid

While calling Bibi, He sent her a message

Bibi riday 3alay

Please riday

He reached the hotel and walked to the lobby and found Majid sitting

Haa ya Bandar!

Bandar: asfeeen istath

Majid: wainkoum ya Bandar?

Bandar: ista2thant mn Bibi at2a5ar 3al ijtima3

Majid: 6ayib Bibi wain?

Bandar sighed: madri… madri gimt a7ateeha adig 3alaiha ma trid!

Majid: ya3ni wain bitkoun ya Bandar ihda!

Bandar: uff shlon ahda?! Ma trid 3alay! Dagait 3alaiha fog el 3ashir marat! Ma trid!

Majid: 6ayib ma t3arif a7ad mn ahalha?!

Bandar nodded: imbala

He quickly called Zaid.

Zaid: alo?

Bandar: quwa Zaid

Zaid: allah ygawik hala Bandar

Bandar: Zayood tadri wain Bibi?!

Bandar didn’t want to freak him out and tell him that she's not picking up her phone

Zaid: la wala madri laish?

Bandar: la2ana 3indina ijtima3 ma3a Majid O ta25irat 3alaina

Zaid: aha, ana al7en adig 3ala yaditi as2alha

Bandar: ok yalla na6rik

Bandar sat and waited for Zaid to call him back

Bandar: istath Majid roo7 '3urfitik irta7 ma atwa8a3 bekoun ako meeting el youm, sami7na

Majid: mub mishkila, 6amini 3ala Bibi

Bandar: enshallah

Majid walked to the elevator & Bandar walked to his car, his mobile rang…he closed his eyes and hoped that it would be bibi

Zaid calling

Bandar: alo ha Zaid

Zaid: omi '3aneema tgool inha gabil la ti6la3 galatlha ina 3indha meeting

Bandar: Zaid, Bibi ma yat el meeting O mo ga3id trid 3alay

Zaid: huh! Wain ra7at hathi? i9bir 5al ajarib adig 3alaiha

Bandar: 3ayazt wana adig ma trid 3alay

Zaid: inzain 5al ajarib sh5asraneen!

Bandar: ok yalla na6rik!

Zaid called bibi but she didn’t answer, he sent Bandar a message.

Ma radat 3alay, bashof etha kanat bil bait 3ind murti

Bandar took a deep breath and called Bibi ya rab trid.

6OO6

6oo6

6ooo6

Please riday please

6oo6

Alo?

Bandar's heart sunk when he heard her voice, He heard her sniffing and he knew that she was crying.

Bandar: Bibi wainich?

Bibi sniffed: bil sura

Bandar quickly changed his direction to Sura

Bibi: Bandar *sniff*

Bandar: shush al7en yayich al7en

Bibi: *gasp* Bandar

Bandar: shush ihday al7en akon 3indich

Bibi: Bandar la t9ika

Bandar: mani 9aka

Bandar stayed with bibi, he heard her cry she sniffed every now and then, she gave him the address.. he reached the house, it was dark he saw his car and rushed inside.

He saw her sitting on the floor and resting her head on the wall.

Bandar

Her voice and body was shaking

Bibi

Bibi: Bandar hatha baitna.. hatha baitna ana O omi O oboy *sniff*

Bandar: Bibi-

Bibi: ma dashait el sura mn awal ma *gasp* mataw

Bandar walked closer and saw her face clearly her eyes were red and puffy, he knew that she was crying for a long time, he cupped her face

Bandar: shush

Bibi: Bandar *sniff* Bandar

He wiped her tears away: shush ihday

Bibi put her head on his chest and whispered: ta3abt

Bandar felt his heart breaking, he couldn’t bare seeing her tears! He never saw her this weak, she was always the funny full of life Bibi, but know she was weak and she needed him...

He slowly wrapped his arms around her: shush

22 comments:

  1. Omg I cried :(
    So sad.

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  2. 7raaaaam :'( post soon mo et6awleen plzz :(

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  3. greaaaat post ekht 9al7aaa!

    neeexxxxt oneee pleeaaasee!! :D

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  4. 7araaaaam SAD post
    allah y3eenha bibi :( :(
    i wanted a longer post :( bss ma3laih lazm et3awtheena by a long one ;)
    bandar 7aram eli ga3ed ysaweeh feeh ubooh :@ ynarfzzzz ;@
    xoxoxo
    love drunk

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  5. Waaaay 7araam 3awarat galbi ;**
    3uni ghorgat ;'(
    bas bkha6ri ilcuppcakes ;p

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  6. E
    Very :(

    Anon
    I'm sorry!
    Yes it is...

    Habahebo
    7ada :( enshallah I'll post soon :)

    RwaishedAddict
    Thank you!
    Very soon enshalllah :)

    Love drunk
    Next post will be longer enshallah :)
    7ada!

    Anon
    :*

    Caramela
    Salamat galbich;**
    lol 7ata ana b5a6ri cupcakes ;p

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  7. 7araaaaaam ga6a3t galbii bibi!!!
    9alooo7a i have a qestion!! laish bandar's father may7iba oo yad3i 3ala ya3ni its his son!

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  8. THEY ARE CUUUTE , i hate bandars father staghfiralla alla la yableenna . Bandaar 3ajeeb oo intay a3jab

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  9. yaaaaaaaaa 7yaaaaaatiiiii :'( 7raaaaaaam maskina bibi ! eh2 eh2 eh2 :'( wlaa tbaaacheeeee !!! ,,,,, Wooooii bandaaaaar yeshawiiiig a7iiiiiiibaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh ;$ !!
    THnxxx 7iatii for posting ;**

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  10. AWALAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK MILLION MARA 3ALA EL DEDICATION.....AMOOOOOOOOOOOOOT FEEECH....U MADE MY DAY :*

    THANEYAAAAAAAAAAAAAN I CRIED LIKE HELL 3ALA HAL POST....7ARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM

    LAKEN THALETAN WAHOWA ALAHAM INA ELEBTISAMAAAAAAAA SHAGA WAYHI 3OGB MAGERAIT ENAH BANDARANIIIIII LAM BABOOONA

    I WAS LIKE AYWA AYWA AYWA...3ASHAAAAAAW

    BEDA EL7UB YET'3AL'3AL FI 3RJOOOOHUM

    EHDA2 LEHUM AGHLA 7UB MEN UR PREVIOUS POST

    9ALOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO7TI AMOOOOOOOOOOOOT FEEEEEEEEEECH....SERIOUSLY
    A7IBICHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....3ASAAAAL INTAI ...7BOOOOOOOOOOOOOBA MN GALB

    MWA7 MWA7 MWA7

    MASHKOOORA MARA THANYA.....

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  11. awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww maskeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeena!!! waaaaaaaaayy finally ! 9araw shwaya closer ;p i was waiting !!!! :) yallah please next post 7ady i love your story :D
    loveyou;;*

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  12. w ba3deeeeen sh9aaaaaaar 7ababa

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  13. I just read ALL your posts! I have to wake up at 7:30 tomorrow, and i kept telling myself, "just one more!"
    Amazing story!

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  14. I cried like a baby !!!=( loved it !
    -N~
    (Charmbracelet )

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  15. 9AL7AAAAAAAAAAA!!!
    a7la post min kel il blog sara7a madree laish 3isht ma3ahum elwath3 7asait feehumm!!
    matga9reen;**
    -eco

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  16. YOUR KIDDDDINNNG!! WALLAH I WAS CRYING!!!!!! HE ACTED LIKE SUCH A MAN!!!!!! OMG!!! AM SPEECHLESSS! I LOVE BANDAR!

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  17. Munirah
    Salamat galbich ;p
    He never wanted to have kids & they had Bandar!! O mn ohwa 9'3eer O ohwa ma y3amla zain! btw that father is a real character

    L
    Mashkoura;**

    Faroufa
    7abitich el 3afya ;p
    Thanks for reading;*

    Nawarii

    UR MOST WELCOME:** WANA BA3AD AMOOT FEEEEECH;*

    OH IM SORRY :(

    LOL ASHWA!!

    NA3AM NA3AM!

    WAAAAANAAA BA3AAAAAAD A7BICH NAWARTII :*

    Madliar
    Yes ;p
    Enshallah I'll post soon :)
    love u too;*

    Saron28
    Lol next post ib tadren :p

    Anon
    THANK YOU! I'm glad that u liked it;*
    Thank you:*

    Charmbracelet
    I'm sorry :( Thank u:*


    Eco
    Na3aaaaaam ;p
    Mashkoooooora;**

    Heaven
    IM SORRY!! YES HE DID!! He loves u too ;p

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  18. hiiii;p graaait both ur stories in 2 days! their amazing o i love the waay u wright;D

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  19. http://www.wazeenah.blogspot.com/

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  20. Shahad
    Hello ;* mashallah 3alaich ;p! Thank u so much ;)

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  21. Waaaayyy :'( 7arrraaaaaaaam!! U made me cry :'( Bibi really needs Bandar in her life! so does he!

    -MSG!

    P.S: still reading it! Can't stop! Even though it's 1 in the morning & I have to wake up every early tomorrow /: allaaah y3eeen bas I'm loving the story waaayy toooo much!! Sorry bas I had to post! :p lol a7s ma fee 7ad ygra what I'm writing bas u have to know that ur Talented mashallah 3alaich! ;D <3

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