Saturday, November 13, 2010

Giving up? THE END!


Quwa;*

1. Shlonkoum?

2. Haaa mno besafir mno ga3id?

3. THIS IS THE LAST PART OF THE STORY! 5ALAAAAAA9 5ALI9AT!

4. This post mokawan mn 1,013 kilma, Unchained Melody I'll kill you etha giltay it's short :p

5. Hal post 3eediyaatkoum!! atwa8a3 ine awal wa7da a36eekoum 3ayadee mo? :p

6. This post goes to all of my readers! Silent o mo silent :p & to my 110 followers;**

7. Will bandar give up on Bibi?
Enjoy it;*

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Falainaha



Falaitooha? Oooh saloom mama bas!


Bibi: Manor falaina el 5i6ba


Munera gasped faka: Umm mno ele falha intay wala ohwa?


Bibi: ana


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Munera walked & Salom walked beside her.


Maama! Hatha weeeen?


Munera was busy thinking ofwhat to tell Bandar & how would she choose her words.


Munera: ya36eech il 3afya


Lady: allah y3afeke


Munera: Bandar mawjood?


Lady: meen bi2lo?


Munera: Munera Al flani


Munera thought about it a5af ma y3arif isimi el kamil!


Munera: wala agolch goolela murt zaid Al flani


The secretary nodded.


Maaama! Hada weeen?


Munera: hathe sharika


Salim crossed his tiny eyebrows: arika?


Munera: shar ee ka!


Salim: aa ree kaa!


Munera giggled: hatha inta dayman shali3 awal 7arfain mn el kalimat!


Munera heard a laugh she looked at her left & found Bandar.


Bandar: 7ayaallah um Salim


Munera: allah y7ayeek


When salim saw Bandar he stood up & walked towards him then waved at Bandar.


Salim: Hi


Bandar giggled & waved back: hello!


Salim giggled.


Bandar bend down & picked Salim up.


Bandar: tifathilay um salim, 7ayach el maktab


Munera walked behind Bandar while he was discussing the place with Salim


Salim: hada arika?


Bandar giggled: la sharika!


Salim: areeka?


Bandar: ee yuba ee arika!


Munera looked around the office: 9ij maktab fanan! Mraatab!


Bandar smiled: mashkora.


Bandar & Salim sat on the small couch & Munera sat on the one in front of them.


Bandar: sha5barkoum?


Munera: wala b5air el 7imdallah inta shlonik?


Bandar:b5air .. wath3e al7en a7san mn a5ir mara shftene feha


Munera nodded & smiled: la7atht.. umm shof Bandar


Bandar knew that she's here for something serious, he thought that she will tell him to back out of Bibi's life and leave her alone, but what she's about to say was the complete opposite.


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Falat el 5u6ba ele ma tisti7i! kil ele m5a6i6la… kil ele abeeh ma ra7 y9er!


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Shno shlon ya3ni? Bibi Falat el 5i6ba 3ashanik!


Bandar shook his head: la mo 3ashani


Munera: imbala 3ashanik! Way Bandar a9lan mn awal ma shaftik mara thanya 3ugb hal sintain kil shay feha ta5arba6! Bandar inta 3umrik ma 7asait ina a7ad mihtam fek o Bibi 3umrha ma 7asat ina a7ad mi7tajha, intaw tkamlon ba3ath!


Salim was staring at his mother talking to Bandar, his face was so focused & his eyebrows were crossed, Munera smiled at his expretion, he was so quite she didn’t even feel him there.


Munera: 3a6ne yah 3anik


Munera held salom in her arms and both of them kept on staring at Bandar.


Bandar: om salim intay faja2tene… kilish ma tiwa8a3t ina-


Munera: Bandar la t5alene akathir 7achi 3ashan la ata3ib 3umre wala ata3bik


She went quite for a second.


Munera: t7ibha? Tadre shitsawi, ma t7ibha ham tadre shitsawi!


Munera grabbed her purse, held Saloom's tiny hand: yalla Salomi


Salim walked out of Bandar's office & waved at him: bye.


Munera spilled out all what she had to say and left Bandar, she did it on purpose she wanted him to think about it & decide what he has to do on his own!


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Bandar sat on the couch with his pizza in his hand, he turned the tv on & found Nawal singing


Tadre ma 7abait '3airik o 3umre ma nisait 5irik!


Bandar remembered Bibi & smiled, He took a deep breath then grabbed his mobile.


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Ufff


Bibi woke up on the sound of her door opining


MNO?


Ana!


Mama '3anooma banaaaaaaaaaaaam!


Grandmother: gooomay 6al3elich shay talbseena!


Bibi: 7ag shno!!


Grandmother: biyoona 5u6ab el youm!


Bibi jumped out of her bed: 5U6AB!


Grandmother: ee 5u6ab! Shfech?


Bibi raised an eyebrow: o hal 5u6ab shdarahoum ina ana o Jasim falaina el 5u6ba?


Grandmother weeh shagoolha?!: madri wala


Bibi went closer to her grandmother something is fishy is happing & she felt it.


Grandmother: yalla yalla ro7ay '3aslay wayhich o nizlay ta7at


Her grandmother rushed out of her room.


Bibi hmm lama 7asat ine ba9eedha in7ashat?


Bibi got into the bathroom, washed her face brushed her teeth.


Buz buuuz


She grabbed her mobile, a message from Munera


9abaa7 el 5air our bride to be:*


Biyoonch 5u6ab el youm! Kish5aaaay


Bibi crossed her eyebrows: shsalfat.houm?! laish el kil mit7amis! O hal 5i6ab shdarahoum ine falait el 5u6ba ma3a Jasim?


Bibi looked at the calendar in front of her 12/11 hmm el youm el mafroth Bandar ya36ene el sample mal el i3lan!


Bibi grabbed her mobile & called Bandar


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Bandar's mobile rang


Bibi calling


Bandar smiled and picked up the phone: alo?


Alo 9aba7 el 5air Bandar


Bandar: 9aba7 el nor ya hala


Both of them went silent for a second.


Bibi: umm Bandar tadre ina el youm el mafroth tsalmne el sample?


Bandar: umm el youm thna3ash?


Bibi: ee


Bandar: ok agi6a 3alaich el bait el youm?


Bibi: la!


Bandar: laish??


Bibi: um la2ana uhh la2ana


Bandar smiled galolha!


Bandar: etha ma widich tgoolen mo lazm 5ala9 ayeblich yah bachr?


Bibi sighed: ok


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Bibi applied her eyeliner & looked at herself in the mirror one last time


She wore a simple grey beaded dress & black tights


Munera: laish jeje?


Bibi: la2ana el nafnoof g9er?


Munera: oh


Bibi was really confused laish el kil mit7amis el youm?


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Babona mama gi3day bil 9ala hathech o ba3dain ana anadeech


Bibi nodded.


She sat on the couch put her legs on the coffee table in front of her


AHHHHH!


Bibi giggled: Saloooomi! Shfek?


She heard Salim giggle.


Bibi: Saloooom ta3al!


Hi *giggle* ha? Bobo! ahahaha


Bibi haw mno bobo?


Bibi stood up & walked towards the sound of Salim's giggles, She found Bandar putting his hand on his mouth trying to keep Salim down, and Salim was putting his tiny fingers on his mouth trying to stay quite.


Bibi: Bandar?!


Bandar looked at her & smiled: na3am?


Bibi: shitsawi hne? Ana gitlik mo shar6 tyeb el sample el youm o-


Bandar walked towards Bibi: ana ma yet 3ashan a36eech el sample


Bibi's heart bet started raising:3ayal?


Bandar: ana yet 3ashan a5a6bich



34 comments:

  1. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :*

    I love thiss !!!! OMG OMG OMG 3ajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb el ending bas laish chethy ana sshdarany sh9eer ba3daaaaiin :\ HAAA ? :p

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  2. Hiiiiiiiii :***
    Lol it's an open ending kil wa7da tit5ayal their ending mithil ma tabe!!

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  3. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay i cant believe it.. your ending just made my day;p
    OMG 9aloo7ka you should see my face zain ma sara5t yom galaha yaya a56ibich chin ana ily ibya56ibny..... i LOVEEEEEEED the ending 3ajeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb...
    waaay il7een ana weya 5ayaly il wasee3 bat5ayal 3irshoom..lool..

    one last word AMAZIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING;P

    love ya mwaah;*

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  4. I glad that it did ;)
    LOL enshallah y5a6bich ele mithil Bandar o a7san mina ba3ad :p Thank youuuuuu!
    lol ta5ayilay mithil ma taben ;p

    THANK YOU!
    love u too;**

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  5. AAAH! Ubai ilpost 3AJEEEB! I was literally smiling the whole time! Perfect story and a more perfect ending! Please don't stop writing, we need another amazing story!

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  6. Thank u SOOOOOOOOO MUCH Cashmere poison:**

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  7. Ahh!!! wansa awww!
    i was smilling through the whole past!

    I love this story i dont want it to end!:(

    are u gonna write a new story?

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  8. I'm glad that it made u smile ;)
    It loves u too!
    Madri wala! shrych to write or not to write? :p

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  9. Shway short 3ala ending bas ma3thoora ;p Cyooooooooot 7aaail. O fee bddlya: jejo. la tithb7eeny :p Loved it and love you ;*

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  10. LOL way ib tinthab7aain! Thank you! lol el mafroth jeje? ana asameeh jejo ;p
    love u too;* ashwa unchained rathya 3ani el youm :p

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  11. Hahaha ur welcome !
    9ejj tgooleen jejo? 3yal mu badlyya :p my fault.

    Yeah ;p

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  12. Lol ee ana o my mother ngool jejo :p 3adalt.ha 5oofich a6la3 ana el wa7eeda ele agoolha jejo :p

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  13. aaaaaah 9allou7aaa!!!! ilyoum 7looom 3ayal 3ala ma alagi the ending!!!!:P ya 7ilwaaa meta the new story?(A) when it comes to your stories im SOOO greedy(A)

    best of luck w 3eedich mubarak muqadaman babe:****

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  14. 7adii mishta6a i didnt even write my name!!:P its anon s by the by:P

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  15. Anon S
    3araftich mn awal ma garait ur first comment! Lol sweet dreams 3ayal;* madri wala lal7en I have nothing in mind!
    Ayamch sa3eeda muqadaman;**

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  16. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    U POSTED !!!
    FINALLY ;(
    I LOVED IT :D
    IM CRYING NOW ;P LOOOL
    THEYRE SOOO CUTE
    MARA7 TAKTEBEEN EPOLUGE?


    I LOVE U AND UR AMAZING STORY
    R U WRITING A NEW STORY?

    I ASK ALOT;/
    LOVE U;*

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  17. YES I DID :)
    Lol Yes they are ;)
    La ma ra7 aktib :/

    Love u too;*
    I'm thinking about it soon enshallah ;)

    LOVE U TOO:**

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  18. alaah wanassa :D a7la shay happy ending :D nice story ;p

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  19. Alllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!
    9aloooo7a eb9ara7a yebteeha 9a7!!!
    The ending 7ada 3ajeeeeeb!! :D

    Al7een 9aloo7a ra7 te7e6 reel 3ala reel oo teg3ad ba6aliyah w ma3indaha shay '3air flan 5i6ab oo flan tizawaj!!! :p hehehehehe I'm jk!!
    R u going to start another story Willa ra7 etwagfeen wetsaween eley gelta fog tawmisa3?!? 3ad I like the way u write!! FAA hathy na8za ya3ny don't stop writing Willa ayey baitkom oo a6ib 3alaich!! :p 3ad I gained few kilos helyoumain!! ;p

    7ubi latinsain that we love u oo 3ashan lay'3ar ur blog.... We love him too!! ;D
    oo Take a good care of ur self!! :D

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  20. Thank you intay a3jaaab;**
    Hehehe goolay enshallah iyene an inspiration 3ashan aktib a new story!! lol la ya m3awda 7ayaach allah bas bidon la t6beeen 3alay :p

    Love u too;*
    U too!

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  21. Akhaaaai 3ala ilstory 7addhaaa 3ajeeeba
    o u ila3jab ili katbathaa ;***
    inshalla its not ur last story ;s
    looove u soo much ;***
    3eedch mbarak mogadaman ;**

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  22. adaaaaaaaaaa2 keeebeeeeeeeeeer ya 9aal7aa!
    e9araa7aa it was one of the best stories i've ever read! bs entay et3arfeen mudmin rwaished wayed 6amaaaa3 fa start on the new story please (A)

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  23. 9alooo7a ma9adig hatha el last part
    bss el post 3aajeeeeb i loooved it wala its the perfect ending thank you 3ala hal amazing story
    love yooou

    um flfola

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  24. caramela
    Ba3ad 3umre mashkoora;***
    Enshallah!
    love u tooo 7abebte;**
    Ayamch sa3eeda;*

    Mudmin Rwaishd
    7ayyyaallah Mudmin Rwaished!
    Tislaam!
    Thank u soo much! lol enshallah I'll start with a new one soon :)

    Um flfola
    Eee hatha el last post !
    Thank you;*
    love u too;**

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  25. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY !!!

    9ALOO7AAAAA !!!

    MISSED YOU ;*

    ANA MAGLT LCH ABE BANDAR LI <.<"!

    WAAY A5EERAN <333 !!!!

    T3lgt wayed tara bilq9a :o !!

    waiting for your new stories :D!

    - Fa6amiie ;*

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  26. Fa6amiie
    AHLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIN!
    MISS YOU MOOOORE;**
    hehehe asfa wayed 3alaih 6alab ;p
    Enshallah soon ;)

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  27. OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMGGGG ma kamalteee el ending 7aram aba a3rf sho bystwee =( bs wallah el 8a9a wayed 7elwa aw same time it's sad .. 7abait the story wayed :D - Alia

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  28. AMAAAAAAAAAZING Story *mashalla*

    I love It <3

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  29. OHHHH MYYYY GODDD!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't sleep unlit I'm done with it :') AMAZING ENDING :') waaaayyyyyy sooooooo cuteeee!!!

    It's 4 in the morning now :') I had to finish it before j sleep! It's worth spending the night reading it :')

    I'll sleep now & I'll start a new story tomorrow

    -MSG

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