Thursday, August 30, 2012

Cold Nostalgia -30-

Guwa!!

1. Shlonkom?

2. Did you guys notice that I'm not taking a long time to post? 3asa allah ytamim :p

3. ITS A LONG POST!

Enjoy it!!

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Reem skipped down the stairs with a smile on her face, she could hear Ali's laugh in her ears.

"Ya 3aal dayman hal ebtisama 3ala wayhich!"

Reem smiled: 9aba7 elkhair mama

Mother: 9aba7 elnoor

Reem sat beside her mother and looked at the TV: waaih mama tikfaain laish akhbaar min 9iba7 allah khair!

Reem grabbed the remote control and changed the channel, she noticed that her mother is too quiet.

Reem: yuma? shfech?

Mother: mafene shay

Reem: yumaaa?

Mother: khaltich tawha dagat 3alay

Reem: ay khala?

Mother: om 3abdilra7man

Reem: ok?

Mother: kh6iboch mini

Reem froze in her place: 7ag?

Mother: ya3ni 7ag mno mathalan?!

Reem: 7AG 7AMANI?

Her mother nodded.
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Ali: agoolik madre sh7ayshne tith7ak?

Faisal: walaain mako shay 7ayshek! Akhal9iiik?

Ali nodded.

Faisal: t7ibha!

Ali took a deep breath.

Faisal: goool la?

Ali gave him half a smile: magdar

Faisal: bas 3ayal goolha!

Ali didn’t reply.

Faisal: 3aaali etha bitim sakit o barid weyaha bitmil!! Mako shay yajbrha ta9ber!

Ali didn’t say a word.

Faisal: ee 3ade 3laiwi la trid 3alay

Ali laughed.

Faisal: goom e3zimne 3al ghada eb hal munasaba

Ali laughed: baaas tdawir ma9la7at ba6nik? Ay munasaba 3alaiha 3azemat akil?

Faisal: goooom bas goom yalla!!

Ali: eglib wayhik bamir bait khalti o lama arid n6la3
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"YAAAAN HATHA?!"

Reem: madre Asoum madre!!

Asma: KALMEEEH!!

Reem: shagoola? Entay t3arfene lay 3a9abt ma athamin kalame!

Asma: GAL3ITA!

Reem sighed.

Asma: MIN 9IJCH EB TITZAWJAIN WA7ID TNADENA 7AMAAAANI MIN WINTAW YAHAL?

Reem: Asom!! Basich 9raakh! Hatha wana daga 3alaich tsa3dene t9arkhen chithi?!

Asma: Reem wala mo mini!! Min ghabaa2aa!

Reem: babche!

Asma: la la la ma ra7 tabchen!!! Kani yayitch
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Asma stormed down the stairs

"Ohhh lay hal daraja mistansa ench btshofene!"

Asma stood in her place and looked to her right, it was Ali sitting with her parents, she ignored Ali.

Asma: yuma baro7 3ind Reem

Mother:  haw Asoma shfech mama? Gi3day ma3ana shway o ba3dain ro7ay 3ind Reem

Asma: la yuma magdar Reem ti7tajne!! Al7een!!

Mother: smila 3alaiha shfeha?!

Asma looked at her mother with a blank face.

Mother: ok ok yalla ro7ay 

Ali froze in his place, Asma ignored him, Reem is not ok. He needed to know what's wrong.

Ali: 3an ethinkom shway

Ali walked out after Asma.

Ali: ASOOOM!

Asma stood in front of her car: NA3AM?

Ali: SH9AYIR?

Asma: mo 9ayir shay!

Ali: tista3b6aain 3alay intay?

Asma: ufff Ali!

Ali: TA7ACHAY!

Asma: Reem enkha6bat

Ali froze in his place.

Ali: min 9ijch?

Asma: la? Ali do u actually care?

Ali: Asoom-

Asma: lazm aro7lha al7en jad ta2akhart!

Ali stood in his place with a blank face for a few seconds, got in his car and drove off.

When Ali was finally close to tell Reem that he's in love with her, a guy proposes to her?

He walked in the house.

"YALLA? TIKFA MITA IBN6LA3 THIBA7NE ELYOU3"

Ali looked at Faisal without saying a word.

Faisal: shfek?

Ali: Reem inkha6bat

Faisal sighed: offff!!

Ali: ana a7ad da3e 3alay!!!  Wain ma a6igha 3oya?

Faisal: mno ele kha6ibha?!

Ali: shdarane!!!

Faisal: enzain shdarak ina aked bitwafiq! Yimkin tgol la! Yaaah

Ali: madre f9ail madre

Faisal: Asma ma galatlik shay?

Ali: laaaa ga6at el 7achwa o ra7at 7ag Reem!

Faisal: inzain i9bir! Khal tred mn bait Reem o nefham kilshay

Ali sighed, he felt his heart sinking, Reem meant so much to him and he couldn’t bare the idea of losing her.
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"Shgalat?"

"Ya yuma shfek mista3yil! Galat bitkalam Reem witshoof shitgol"
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Faisal: 3aaali tikfa!! Bas watartne wiyak!

Ali: Asom ma trid 3alay!

Faisal: 6ab3an ma ra7 trid aked lahya wehya Reem!

Ali: 6awalaaaat!! Kil hatha bas ysolfon?!

Faisal: BANAAAAAT!!!! Shmitwaqi3 ya3ni tkhali9 omorohom eb 5 digayig nafsna?

Ali gave Faisal half a smile.

Faisal: rawi2 bo 3alwa

Ali sighed.

Faisal: til3ab fifa?

Ali: WAGTA?

Faisal: obb.. ok ok la til3ab fifa!

Ali sent Asma a msg.
Wainch?

It took Asma 15 minutes to reply.
Rada el bait now

Ali: Asom radat!!!

Faisal: shitgool?!

Ali: rada elbait!!! Baro7lha al7een

Faisal: ana asoog feeek!

Ali grabbed his mobile.
I'm coming over!

Ali: yallllaa imsh shna6ir!!
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Asma parked her car, she saw Ali's car in the side mirror.

She got out of the car, noticed that Faisal was with him in the car, she gave him a quick smile he smiled back.

Ali got out of the car and walked towards her: fahmene sh9ayir!?

Asma: la takilne bigshoore!!

Asma gestured for Faisal to come, He put both hands up and asked why?

Asma: WAAY FAISAL INZIL!

Faisal laughed and got out of the car.

Faisal: shfekom?

Ali: riday 3alay!

Asma: imshaw ng3ad bil 7adeeqa! Faisal please had Ali mali khilg tara!! Rasi 7ail y3awirne already!

Faisal punched Ali on his shoulder: bas 3ad yalla ehda khal nifham

They sat down.

Asma: shtabe t3arif?

Ali: mno ele kha6abha?

Asma: abdulra7man wild khalat'ha

Ali: bas 9araat

Faisal: e9bir shway int ba3ad! Wehya shrayha?

Asma: umm

Ali: RATHYA?

Asma: SHOF 3AD! INTA AKHER WA7ID TITKALAM!

Ali: LAISH BALLAH?

Asma: Ali she's lost!! Ma tadre enta shet7is feeh o tadre bil thab6 3abdulra7man she7is feeh!

Ali: khalas 3ayal khal twafiq

Asma's eyes winded.

Ali stood up and walked to the car, he could hear Asma complain and Faisal calling him.
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Reem laid down in bed with a heavy heart, she knew that she won't be able to sleep but she was so tired, she had a really bad day and what made it worse is that she didn’t hear anything from Ali. nothing at all.

She closed her eyes for a couple of minutes, she felt her mobile vibrate.

Mabrok






It was a text from Ali..

    



13 comments:

  1. First !! ;p
    OMG !! Ana 8lt last post 7mani 56bha !! Bs laish 3li swa chthy !!! OMG!! Pls post soon 7dy waiting 3la naar ;p and 9a7 Allah ytmim ;p

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  2. SAB;*
    YES!
    Thaank you!!
    lool ameen :p

    LAB
    Thanks for reading ;)

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  3. Ana bas an6er your tweet "cold nostalgia part.." AHH... It's so good! I adore your writing!! Pls pls don't ruin Ali & Reem's relationship :( waiting for the next part :D can't wait to see what happens!!

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  4. Alaaaaay :')! Chanzain a7d y7bni hloun :( ! Amaazinng storyy walla ! Waiting for your new post !

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  5. When is the next post? Ali+ Reem =love<3 accept you followers please I want to dm u

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  6. Tkfaaaaain post bsr3a!! O 5aleeha ma ttzwj 3abdelra7man :(

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  7. Tara 3ali byn6ag! Inzain i9br rakz laish chithi walla qathni shako mabrok laish ya3ni??
    Shisma china nabi asom o faisal together ?;p
    7mni abi a6ga bakbar ma3ndi!
    O bs shb3t t7l6im ;p

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  8. Anon
    Thank you so much!!!
    I'll try my best :( Enshallah I'll be postig soon ;)

    Anon
    LOOOOL ya 7iloo 7achyich!! Thanks a lot ;)
    Enshallah I'll be posting soon!

    Anon
    As soon as I can enshallah, True!! Ok ;D

    Laila
    Enshallah!! We'll see what happens :p

    Caramela
    LOOOOOOL!! afa 3alaich a6iga lich next post :p
    china ee bekonon together?
    Ya 7ilwich o ya 7ilo ti7il6imch:**

    Deedee
    Thanks a lot ;)

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  9. Your storyyyy is amaaaziiiingggg .. Please post :* keep it up xo

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  10. Deedee
    i just posted! Enjoy it ;D

    Anon
    thank you!! i posted, Enjoy it ;D

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