Wednesday, December 22, 2010

Come back when you can (6)

Quwa;*

1. Shlonkoum?

2. Min the NEXT part ra7 yibda el action!

3. If ur confused of anything ask me! Bas dont ask me to tell u what will happen :p

4. This post goes to Mudmin Rwaished! Enjoy Lebanon o take care :D

Enjoy it;**

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Basma left the company after Najla's promise that she would explain everything if Basma
goes home.

She got her mobile out of the purse and called shayi5: yala shai5 ta3al
Basma took a deep breath and started coughing, it was a smell of cigarettes, She turned around and found s3ood smoking, he lend his back on the wall a looked at the floor.

She was going to walk to him and apologize when his mobile rang: allo… hala.. b5air el 7imdallah.. ee 5air enshallah.

He started walking towards her, she quickly turned her face, he walked right beside her without saying a word and totally ignored her.

Maleeeeee8!

Shayi5 arrived and Basma got in the car.
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Najla: Tiwahagt ma 3araft sharid 3alaiha!

Mubarak: Shgiltay? Laykoun giltay el 9ij?

Najla: La! Gitlha troo7 el bait o lama a5ali9 el dawam amirha wagoolha!

Mubarak: uff 5ala9 ana at9araf!

Mubarak walked out of the office

Najla: s3ood kan mawjood

He quickly turned around: gal shay?

Najla: galha ina ohwa 5atha mukanha 3ashan chithi ma gamat tisht'3il hnne

Mubarak sighed a sigh of relief: o shsawait?

Najla: 3a9ibat 3alaih

Mubarak: ma ra7 agoolha el 9ij bas lama tisma3 el 9ij maradha bit3arif ina ele sawaina 7ag ma9la7at.ha

Najla sighed.
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Basma: Ma7ad y3rif ma9la7te ela ana! Ma7ad!

Mother: Basoma el 8i9a 6iweeela o ma tiswa t9ad3een rasich o rasi 3alaiha!

Basma: mama please a7ataj a7ad yjawib as2lte!

Mother: Gitlich ejabat el as2ela ele ib balich ra7 ita3bich o ita3ibna ma3ach

Basma grabbed her purse and walked downstairs.

"Basma wain ray7a!!"

Basma got out of the house and sat on the door steps, she saw Shayi5 washing the car.

Wain aro7? Mno besa3idne?

A single tear fell out of Basma's eyes and she remembered the first person that wiped away her tears and comforted her when she was at the hospital!

Basma: Shaaayi5! Yalla sha'3il sayara bnroo7 bait Mama Fatima
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Basma slowly put her hand on the handle of the door and pushed it.

She looked around the house, the beige and brown walls, the sunlight made her feel calm, the house was so peace full and quite, she slowly walked inside and looked around

"Yalla marry mo t6awleeen!! Mama Latifa btye ba3ad shway!"

Basma walked upstairs towards her grandmother's voice.

She found her grandmother sitting on the couch and drinking tea, Basma threw herself in her grandmother's arms and cried.

"smila 3alaich, Basoma 7abebte shfech"

Basma: ana mi7tara!

Grandmother: mn mno?

Basma: mn el kil!

Her grandmother wiped her tears away: shush ihday o golele sh9ayr?

Basma: a7is el kil ychathib 3alay! Ma7ad rathe ygoole el 9ij!

Basma felt her grandmother's face change color, she quickly stood up and looked at the other side: shta89deen?

Basma: el youm gali oboy o Barok o Najla ine ma sht'3il! O lama ri7t el sharika kil el staff 3arafne o gali mita arid el dawam!

Her grandmother sighed.

Basma: o hal s3ood hatha, Ybi6 el chabd! Laish a7isa ma ywa6ine… laish ykrahne?! Ana kint a3rfa gabil el 7adith?! Aked ma kint a3rfa aw kint a3rfa bas akraha!!

Grandmother: Basoma mama … s3ood 5osh rayal o wil ni3im feeh –

Basma: yirfa3 el tha'36!

Grandmother: aked mo 8a9da y2athech.. s3ood math'3oo6 hal fatra

Basma: math'3o6 ib shno??! Yt3amal ma3a kil el nass ib 8ilat adab!

Grandmother: haw Basoma! S3od mo 8aleel adab ohwa bas shded shway

Her grandmother's plan worked she shifted Basma's mind away from work and into s3ood, she did what all the family warned her not to do! She made Basma think about s3ood.  

Basma: shfeh math'3o6?

Grandmother: bagoolich bas ykoun baini o bainch

Basma nodded.

Grandmother: S3od wayed sha6ir ib sh'3la, gabil 7adthich ib cham shahar i5sarat sharikat oboh hmm a3ti8id inbagat! O la mno titwa83ain bagha?

Basma: mno?

Grandmother: 5al s3ood!

Basma's eyes widened

Grandmother: 6ab3an obo s3ood tiwahag o dar el dinya kilha o ma liga ila yadich o 3amamich ysa3dona!

Basma: ok o ba3dain?

Grandmother: gam yadich shara6 shar6 3ashan nsa3idhoum

Basma: ele ohwa?

Grandmother: el shar6 kan ina lazm ysha'3lon s3ood 3indina

Basma: off!

Grandmother: mithil ma ra7 yistifedon mina lazm nistfed minhoum! Hatha business mo li3ba

Basma: inzain o kil hal 7achi mita 9ar?

Grandmother: 9ar bil fatra ele kintay feha ib '3ayboba.

Basma: inzain dam S3od wayed sha6ir bil sh'3il shlon inbagat sharikat oboh o ohwa mawjood!?

That was the magical question, if Basma knew the answer of that question a big part of the riddle will be solved

Her Grandmother sighed: umm ohwa kan shwaya mash'3ol 3an el sharika fe thech el fatra

Basma raised an eyebrow: mash'3ol ib shno?!

She felt her grandmother's tension: ma athkir
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hkan S3ood mash'3ol feh lama ana kint ib '3aybooba?! Ma38oola kan mash'3ol fene? La la aked la! El rayal ma ywa6ine ib ynsh'3il fene? 6aaal! El salfa 9idfa! Insha'3al 3an el sharika wana bil '3aybooba fa umm fa a5ath mukani 9a7? Uff aked 9a7

Basma's grandmother noticed her deep thinking, she hoped that Basma would jump into some right conclusions about S3ood, she hoped that Basma would remember.

16 comments:

  1. umm maybe kan mash8ool fe basooma l2ana he maybe he used to love her?;p
    post soon!:)

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  2. 9aloo7aaa!! ;D

    Hehehehehe madree laish yetney eltha7ka youm garat that u posted....!!! Don't ask why... Chethee men Allah!! ;p

    elpost Kant 3ajeeb nafs kel Mara..!!
    Ya36eech el3afya oo maga9artay!!

    Oo pweeeez post soon!! Abi a3arif eshra7 e9eer!! ;D

    oo last but not least... Luv u girl!! ;**

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  3. IM IN LOOOVE WITH UR STOORY XD
    keep it up,,, luv u ;**

    HYPER

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  4. waaay 7abeebti basoom maskeena... there is something behind s3ood im sure..

    im loving your story more then ever 9aloo7ka... 7adha 3ajeeba i think it might be the best story you have written.. im hooked;p

    post soon plz
    love you;*

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  5. I was right :O

    Bas mabgoul right fe shnu (A)!

    9alO7a yaah yaah shalpost il3jeeb! <3

    OUFFF A7BAAAH ! <3

    ILOVEYOUSOMUCH ;**

    - Fa6amiie ;*

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  6. 7abait ilyada ;**
    7asa ihya ili kant tbehum ytzawjon !!
    Khal itgolaha o tkhali9 ;p
    inzain laish kilhum maybon ygololaha dam s3ood zain !!
    Akeed iho sibab il7adth fa chithy ihma maybon ygolon !!
    Lool 9alo7aa gmtay tkhlena nfakir ;p
    love u ya 7ilwa ;**

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  7. 7ARAAAAAAM maskeena mi7tara!! post soon please:D
    love you;*
    geraninium XD

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  8. Elsalfa chayda!!!! et7ayer, kana solving a puzzle, wallah!!


    Post soon:)

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  9. omg! fe amal s3ood and basma ma56oobeen?!
    i loveeedddddd the post <3!!!

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  10. Manoosh
    7ayallah el first ;D
    maybe, maybe not :p
    EnshAllah

    GWTPA
    Halla o '3aaala ;D
    lol I'm glad that it made you laugh!
    Thank you;*
    Allah y3afeech, Enshallah
    love u too;**

    Anon HYPER
    ITS IN LOVE WITH YOU TOO!
    enshallah, Love u too;*

    Noona
    7adha, Yup im sure too :p
    Meee too! I think its the best story I wrote so far ;D
    enshallah
    Love u too;*

    Anon Fa6amiie
    Ib shno? :p
    Intay a3jaaab <3
    ILOVEUTOO:**

    caramela
    Eee tyanin ;)
    maaadri maybe, maybe not :p
    maaadri maadri madrii :p
    lol zaaain yalla fakraw akthar
    Love u too;**

    geraninium
    Rija3na 3ala 7AAARAM? :p
    enshallah I'll post asap
    love u too;**

    Heaven
    Yup! lol yalla 3ayal try solving it!
    Enshallah ;D

    Noodie
    Maaaaaaadri :p
    Thank you ;*

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  11. YYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYY
    BASOOOM THINK MORE HARDER
    YALLLAH BASOOM
    LOVED IT POST SOON

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  12. im commenting before reading the post aslan! i wanted to thank you 7g el ehdaa2 ;p w akeeeeeed i'll be having fun here dam enich ur posting:D so let me read the post w comment mara thanya :p

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  13. Anon
    Eeee lazm she thinks :p
    Thank u, enshallah ;D

    Mudminn Rwaished
    Ur most welcome,awww thanks ;D
    ha sha5bar Lebanon?!
    Enjooy it!

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  14. 7ADAA QAAWWYY EL POST!
    wala lebnan 3ajeeeeba w el jaw a7la ba3ad!
    waiting for the next one 3ala naaar;p w thanks again 7g el ehdaa2!

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