Friday, December 10, 2010

Come back when you can (2)

Quwwaa;**

1. Shlonkoum?!

2. I'm really glad that you guys liked the stroy! Kint shwaya 5ayfa ina ma ta3jibkoum bas el 7imdallah 3jibatkoum ;)

3. This post is REALLY long :p

4. If u have any questions u may ask ;)

5. enshallah I see more comments after this post :D
Enjoy it;**

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Mother: Basoooma mama!! El 7imdallah!! Alf el 7imdallah!
Poor Khawla! She was too happy that her daughter is finally awake, but she didn’t know that
her daughter doesn’t even remember her own name!
Basma's mother rushed beside her and gave her a hug.


Basma's eyes teared up, she felt safe in her mother's arms.

Mother: 7abebte Basoooma shlonch?
Basma whipped her tears away.
Mother: la tabcheen 7abebte!! El mohim inch ib 9i7a o 3afya!

Basma shock her head: ma athkir shay

She felt her mother's body stiffen: ma tathkren shay?
Basma shock her head: la

"Khawla 7abebte el doctor yabe ykalimch"

Basma kept on staring at her mother, hathe omi isimha Khawla o hathe yaditi isimha Fatima umm hathe bint 5alti isimha uhh isimha Najla o 5alti isimha Amna!

Basma kept on repeating their names in her head, she didn’t want to forget anything!

Basma's mother left the room to go talk to the doctor

Najla:Shift movie hmm mn zmaaan!Ma athkir 8i9ita bas athkir ina elmain character f8adat el thakira! Chan ygoolonlha shoofay 9iwar 8adeema hmm 6foolat.ha ya3ni-
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F8adat thakirat.ha?

Aywa! El '6arba gat 3ala ras.ha! Ana mota2akid ine fo8dan thakira mo2a8at

Mother: mo2a8at?

Doctor: away etha bada2to tfakarooha shway shway fil 3eela o –
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Najla: Shofay hathail i7na ib 3irs Yousef wild 5ali a7mad!

Basma smiled.

Najla: Hmm o hathe Zayoona bint i5iti Maryoum, tathkren Maryoum i5ti? Kanat awal bint bil 3ayla tsoog! Gazaaina ma3aha gaz !

Najla giggled & Basma smiled.

It felt so weird, Najla was talking to Basma about a life that she forgot a life that she LIVED but forgot!

Najla: ana wiyach kina ib nafs el madrisa hmm wai3 kina nikrah Mister Dixon! 7ail malee8!

Basma smiled.

Najla: Basoma y9er twarene ay reaction? Tathkren shay?

Basma shock her head.

Najla sighed.

Basma really wished that she could remember, she saw the frustration in Najla's eyes.
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Basma stared at the streets of Al Nizha, the houses, the faces and clouds she smiled
everything in Al Nizha was different!

Najla: Basooma ba6iilaw Starbux bil jam3iya!

Mubarak: kintay t7bina

Mubarak was Basma's elder and only brother, two weeks past in the hospital & he was on his sister's side, he bought her all of her favorite magazines and talked to her about their crazy childhood he was very understanding and what surprised Basma is that she started memorizing the names and faces of all of the people that she saw, she remembered her father's face when she first saw him and she felt like she knew Mubarak when he first came which was a very good thing.

Mubarak: O hatha baitna!

Basma looked at the big beige house, its green garden with all kind of beautiful flowers.

She smiled and whispered to herself hatha baitna.

Mubarak opened the door and Basma stepped out of the car, she took a deep breath and started walking towards the house

She walked through the garden, she looked around to try to remember anything about this garden.

Mubarak's phone rang and he started talking and gestured to Basma & Najla to go on.

Basma grabbed the handle of the door and pushed it.

BASOOMA YAAT BASOOMA YAT!

Basma smiled and looked around all the family was gathered in their house

"Hathe el 3ayla el kareema!" Najla giggled and whispered to Basma.

All the kids rushed and hugged Basma.

Basooma 6awaltay bil sifar!

Eee wayed 6awaltay

Zayoona '3alooya Joodi! Wa5raw 3an Basooma la t6ee7!

Basma smiled hmm ayhe Zayoona? Ayhe '3aloya o ayhe Jood?

She closed her eyes to try to focus.

The kids pulled away from Basma, she looked at her grandmother and walked towards her.

Grandmother: 7ayallah Basmiti!

Basma smiled: Allah y7ayeech

"Mama Fa6ooma cham mara gilnalich ako 3aaish isma basmiti!"
Basma turned around and found Maryam, Najla's sister, she remembered her from the hospital.

Basma: Maryooma?

Maryam smiled: ee Maryooma!

Maryam gave Basma a hug, everyone was really glad that she remembered.

Basma started greeting everyone, she hugged the kids and started talking to them when she heard her name

"Hi Basma"

Basma turned around and found a tall beautiful lady standing

"Ahlain"

"Ana Fay Al Flani murt Bader wild 5altich Amna"

Basma smiled and shook hands with Fay: wil ni3im

Fay: yin3am ib 7alich

All the family sat down and talked about all the memories they had together.

Bader:Bsaim tathkren lama ana wiyaach 9a3dna el shyara ele ib bait yadi o tahawasht ma3ach chan adizich mn fog?

Basma gasped then laughed.

Najla: ee abaih wa3alay inkasrat eedha!!

Basma's mother: eee way! Kanat awal mara tinkisir eedha! Wigaf galbi, tathkir shlon yadik allah yri7ima zafik zaaf!

Bader laughed: inzafait wana 3al shyara o ma rithait anzil!

Basma giggled.

Amna: ma nizal ila 3ugb ma tizali'3at ryoola!

Basma laughed.

El salam 3alaikoum

Fay: Ahlaain s3ood

S3od greeted everyone and looked at Basma

When her eyes fell in his she felt like she knew him, she felt like she saw him before this!

He stretched his hand to hold hers.

"el 7imdalllah 3ala el salama"

He said it without looking in her eyes

"Allah ysalmik"

Basma sat back and s3ood went to sit at the far end of the living room near Fay and Bader, Basma waited for Najla to tell her who was he but she didn't

"Najla mn hatha?"

"uh hatha S3ood Al flani o5o Fay"

Najla whispered in Basma's ears.

Basma looked at him, he looked so uncomfortable and sad.

"Shlon kint a3rfa? A7is ine a3rfa!?" Basma whispered

Najla gulped: ma t3rfena! Ma kina n3rfa ila 3ugb ma Badoor 5atha i5ta!

Basma nodded but she didn’t believe Najla, she felt like she knew him, something clung on her heart when he touched her hand, why didn’t he look at her? Why did he look so uncomfortable?

Basma's mother interpreted her thoughts.

"Yalla ya jima3a tifathilaw 3ala el '3ada"



29 comments:

  1. Reeema;*
    Tadren ine kint na6ra raych? ;)
    Dayman it6leeen 3alay fe awal o a5ir 8i9a9e! Bidaya o 5itaam misk;**

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  2. omg! cliff hanger min galb! kfjdkfjkadfjk i wanttt too knwwww what will haappeeenn!!!! :(

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  3. loool enshallah you'll know bil 7al8a el 8adima :p

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  4. 3awirat galbi basooma!:'(
    M

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  5. I'm back from the dead ;p
    ma wlahty 3alay 9aloo7a?
    3rafteeny??

    5al a36eech hint : I used to be one of your fav. Anons ;*


    Btw I'm loving ure new story great work bas ham mo '3areeba 3laich u never fail 2 impress me with ure stories ;)

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  6. ANON N?!

    Y9ER LAW SAMA7TAY A3RIF INTAY WAINICH FEEH?
    Mo msam7itich 3ala hal '3aayba :p

    akeed walaht 3alaich;** china ur hint feha shay '3ala6? "I used to be one of your fav. Anons"

    u used to be? tsk tsk tsk ur STILL one of my fav anons;**

    Thank you;*

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  7. I LOVE THE POST <33
    THANK U FOR THE AWESOME POST;*
    PODT DOON

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  8. Thank you :D
    Atwa8a3 u mean post soon right? :p enshallah I'll post very soon ;)

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  9. 3wart galbi basma!
    love the post and the story cnt wait !;p mo 6awleen 3alana :)

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  10. A M A Z I N G

    Loved the post, can't wait for the next one!:D
    -PP;*

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  11. لامسني جداً المشهد الأخير ..
    لأنني بطريقة أو بأخرى ، أعرفه :)

    و إي حبيت المشاهد و الأحاديث
    و her brother :p !

    بعد عمري ، تسلمين

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  12. i love this :D
    post soon 9alooo7a please (:

    love you!

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  13. Amazing story;** next post mta? La ast6e3 el ent.thar;p

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  15. Sorry 9alo7a tawni agra ilnew story ;$
    bas walla 3ajeeeba i already fell in love :p
    s3ood ya s3oood <3
    plz wi9felina shakla ana 7abaita ;p
    cant wait for the next post ;D

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  16. Manoosh
    Salamat galbich;*
    Thank you ;) enshallah mane m6awla

    Anon PP
    T H A N K Y O U !
    I'll be posting very soon enshallah ;)

    Reema
    Shukraaan shukraaaan;*

    Madliar
    It loves u too ;)
    enshallah!
    love u too hun;*

    HaBaHeBo
    Thank you;* lol enshallah soon! lan tant'6reen 6aweelan :p

    Caramela
    Its okay 7abebte;*
    lol I'm glad that u did ;)
    Eee <3
    lol enshallah bil next post :p
    I'll post very soon enshallah ;)

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  17. im starting to fall in love with this story, or maybe i already fell iin love with it..... WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY 3ajeeeba your new story 7adhaaaa 3ajbatny;p
    you never fail to entertain us with your amazing stories 9aloo7ka;p
    plz plz plz plz plz plz post sooon im hooked..
    love you;*

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  18. There is something about s3ood! I can feel it!
    Z

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  19. YA SALAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM 3ALAICH

    EBDA3 WARA EBDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA3....9ARA7ATAN MA AMIL UR POSTS ABADAN EVEN UR RANDOM ONES....

    I SIMPLY LOVE UR STYLE AND U OF COURSE....

    shakla s3ood kan 7beeeeebha aw shay mn hal mail....madri laish ma 7abait fay 7asaitha wayed stuck up...

    7abait bdaaair shakla 7aboob ow etha7ik ow i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee her bro...he is the sweetest...

    hmmmmmmmmmm thats my summary of my opinion of the characters hehehe

    love you wayedddddddddddd ow kathray men el posts el7lween ow el 6waaal :*

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  20. love.
    cant wait for the next post x

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  21. Noona
    Awwww thank you so much u really made me happy;*
    enshallah I'll post soon ;)
    love u too;**

    Anon Z
    Maybe and maybe not :p

    Nawarii
    Shukraaaan shukraaaan;**
    7abebteee Nawaaari ur so sweet, maybe maybe not :p
    lol 5osh summary ;)

    love u tooooo;**


    Dreamer
    Thanks.
    I'll post soon enshallah ;)

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  22. Amaazing story
    Akeed kan bein s3od o basma 3lagt 7ub
    Post sooon! :**

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  23. LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWD HAVE MERCY ... This is one hell of a post < In a good way Of Course :D
    Loved every every every every every every bit of it .. S3ood </3 yaksir el 5a6ir .. A7iss he loved her or something :p

    Cant wait for the next one
    Love ya
    XoXo
    QB*

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  24. Latifa
    Thank you;*
    Maybe maybe not :p
    Enshallah soon ;)

    Queen Bee
    lol thank you;*
    7ada! maybe maybe not :p
    I'll post very soon enshallah ;)
    love u too;**

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  25. 9alooooooooooooo7aaaaaaaaa ;*****

    Umbaaaaaaaih 7adaaaa 3jeeb T_T <3!

    Shaakli badmnaah edmaan :p <3!

    ILOVEYOU;*

    - Fa6amiie

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  26. Ahlaaaain Fa6amiee;***
    Thank you;*
    lol I'm glad that u will :p
    I LOVE YOU TOO;*

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  27. 3ajeeeibaahh!! i just started reading ur story, kint na6rat-ha tkhali9 3ashan ma atshawag w an6er:p bs seriously, keep on ur hard work it a w e s o m e ! ! !

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