Monday, December 6, 2010

Come back when you can. (1)

QUUUUUUUUUUWAA!!


1. 7ADI  WALHANA 3ALAIKOUM! WALAHTAW 3ALAY? I hope so :p


2. 6ab3an as you guys know, the story that won your votes was "Come back when you can" the small part that I wrote to you was a part that will happen in the middle of the story!! Al7en bidaina mn el awal! get it? :p


3. Why Come back when you can? Both of my characters will come back when they can shlon? U'll know later :p 


4. This story goes to you S! For announcing that you want ur future wife to be called Basma :)


Enjoy it 7abaybee;**


Yeah o if you have any questions you may ask! Bas 6ab3an you know ina shway shway after cham post u'll understand the story 100% :D


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A55 rasi y3awirni


Basma opened her eyes.




Basma?! basmaa!! Abaih Basooma gamat!


Basma looked around her and saw three strange faces! Three strange woman were standing beside her bed.


Baaasoom 7abebte tism3ene?!


Shyaboon? O mno basoma?


Tism3eeena?


She nodded, the three ladies started crying then one of them hugged Basma.


El 7imdallah!! El 7imdallah!


She pushed her away: Ana wain?! Mno intaaaw? Mno intaaaaw!!


 The old lady, the girl with the short black hair & the woman one with the brown hijab looked at each other in shock.


Yalla 3ad Basooma la tista36bain!


Eee wala! Midach gimtay 3ashan tibda dagatich!


Basma stared at them with a blank face, she saw a few tears in the old ladies' eyes.


Basma: mno Basouma?


"INTAY" The girl with the short black hair told her.


Basma: la ana mo Basma ana..


She tried so hard to remember her name… But she couldn’t remember it!


Shlon ma a3arif isimi! Akeed a3arfa! Mako a7ad bil 3alam ma y3arif isima!


"INTAY MNO?"


Basma: madri


Basma shrugged her shoulders.


"Najla! Bas 7abebte bas! Amna yuma ro7ay naday el doctor" the old lady said.


Basma looked at the machines around her, the white walls, the white bed sheets, her white shirt EVERYTHING was white!


Abaih laykoun mit! la7tha shlon mit o hathail el nass mawjooden?


The old lady stood up & ran her hand through Basma's hair, She looked so sad & Basma could fell it.


Ya rab ridlha 9i7at.ha o 3afyat.ha o ..... thakirat,ha!


Basma crossed her eyebrows shfeeha thakirte! Sh,hal nass el '3areben?


The doctor entered the room.


Doctor: 9abaaa7 el 5eeeeer ya amar!


Basma didn't reply.


Doctor: ha 7asa b 2eeh?


Basma put her hand on her rapped head: rasii wayed y3wirni!


Doctor: 6abe3e giidan! Hmm 6ayib o2lele ismik aaih?


Basma closed her eyes & tried to remember her name.


She sighed: madri


Doctor: 6ayib ism el baba aaih?


Basma looked at the old lady, her eyes were full of tears.


Doctor: ha ismo aaih?


Basma: madri


Doctor: 6ayib ism el mama aaih?


Basma felt so lost! She couldn't remember her name, her father's & mother's name!! Something was wrong & she started freaking out.


Basma: MADRI MADRI MAAAADRI! MA A3ARIF WALA SHAY! MADRI ANA SHISME MADRI ANA WAIN! MADRI HATHAIL MNO! LAAAISH MA ADRI!?! HAA? GOOLE LAISH MADRI!?


Basma started crying in a hysterical way, Then the old lady asked the doctor to leave.


The old lady came closer to Basma & hugged her.


Bas 7abebte bas omich yaya bil 6reej


Basma sniffed: ma adri mno omi!


The old lady held Basma's face: imbala! Intay tadren mno omich...intay bas mo thakrat.ha! lama tshoofenha akeed ib tathkreena! Hathe omich!! '3air 3an kil el bashar!


Basma: intay mno?


The old lady smiled: ana yaditich


Basma: yaditi?


The old lady nodded.


"EEE EEE!! Hathe mama Fa6ooma!! O ana Leena bint 5altich Amna!! Basmoo 3an el mi9a5a please tithakraay!"


Basma smiled, They were family!! The people that she thought were strangers are her family!


Mitta tawha!? Mn mita gamat?


They heard a lady shouting.


China 9oot Khawla? Her grandmother said.


Basma looked at the door & found a lady coming.


Mother: Basoooma mama!! El 7imdallah!! Alf el 7imdallah!


Poor Khawla! She was too happy that her daughter is finally awake, but she didn’t know that her daughter doesn’t even remember her own name!

15 comments:

  1. uffff im sure we missed you more 9aloo7ka mn zeman 3anich;*
    the start of your story is moo bas amazing.. 7adahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 3AJEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEBA..plz plz plz post as soon as possible 7ady mindamja ib your story..
    love you;**

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  2. Noona
    Thanks hun;*
    Awwwwww thank you;** enshallah!! I'll post very soon ;)
    love u too;*

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    1. مشالله قصصچ حلوه بالتوفيق



      عبدالله السعيدي

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  3. OFCORSE WE MISSED U!!
    FINALLY U POSTED!!!
    I LOVE THE BEGINING!!
    POST SOON LUV U;*

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  4. oooohhh i miss you shloon i dont miss you a9lan! ;*
    thanks for the post
    love the new story keep going (:
    ily 9aloooo7aaa! <3

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  5. akeed we missed u ...
    waaaaayd waaaayd 3ajeeeba el beginning
    loving the new story
    can't wait 4 nxt post
    ;*****
    luv ya

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  6. Oooooh, love the story already. I love how your stories have a lot of actions in them.

    Poor Basma.

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  7. I BEYOND LOVE THIS .........<3

    I TOLD YOU IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT :D

    Cant wait 4 the next OnE :p

    Loves Youh

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  8. 9alooo7a! we misssed u soo much!;p
    7arammmm
    cnt wait ;p

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  9. AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

    I LOVE IT...EVERY SINGLE DETAIL

    BAS ITS SHORT :(

    MROE MORE MORE 9ALOOO7TI:*

    LOVE U AND MISS U

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  10. Yaaaaay story 1! LOVED IT!! Please post soooon!

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  11. My Prince Charming
    I MISSED U ALL TOO:*
    YES I DID :D
    THANK YOU!!
    LOVE U TOO;*

    Madliar
    7abebtee I miss u too;*
    Thanks for reading ;)
    will do enshallah!
    love u too;*

    Darliam
    I missed u all too;*
    Ashwa :p mashkooora :D
    love u too;**

    heaven
    Awwww Thaanks a lot I really appricate it :D
    Yes!

    Queen bee*
    THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH!
    Soon enshallah :D
    Love u too;*

    Manoosh
    I missed u guys too;*
    I'll post soon enshallah!

    Nawarii
    THAAAANK YOU!!
    IT LOVES U TOO!
    lol yala 3ad its not short :p
    Love u and miss u too;*

    Cashmere.Poison
    Yes!! THANK YOU! enshallah very soon :D

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  12. 9aloo7aaaa ;**
    6ab3an walahna 3alaich... Bedoon shak ;D

    Intay eshlonich weshlon eldenya ma3ach?!?!
    Eb9ara7a... Web9ara7a you're doing a splendid job in writing this story!! Wayid e3jebatny fekrat eftita7ich 7ag the story weshlon dashaitay ebaction w ba3dain you introduced the characters...!!

    So e5ti9ar 7ag Keli bagoola.... KEEP UP THAT THING U R DOING TO IMPRESS US WITH UR POSTS!!! ;D

    Ams kint ga3da Agra kel elcomments min the deleted section eb my email oo ektishaft that half of our conv. Yetkalam 3An food... Ana adizltich wentay etdizeely..!! Et9adgeen hatha eley e7na fal7een feeh!!! 9ij lay galaw e3yal a5er ziman..!!! ;p Mayfakroon ela beb6oonhom..!!! :p

    Agool chiny garagt wayid 3ala rasich...!??!!?!? Ef8ayra 5ala9 3ayal 7abat elbanadol 3alay..!!! ;p


    3ayal Ana mawa9eech 3ala 3mrich Yuma oo Deray Balich 3ala nafsich.. Inzain Yuma...!?!?

    Eeh 3afya 3alaich eeh dayman 5aleech chithee bint omich..!!! XD terbayat eedy!!! :p

    Oo last but not least.. Love ya girl ;**

    Oo ur blog BAS 3ashan ma yiz3al wemid boza 3alaina..!!! :P

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  13. Il8i9a Simply 3ajeeeba ;**

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  14. GWTPA
    Ahlaaaaaaaaaain;*

    Tamaaam wala kil shay b5air wintay shakhbarich?
    Thaaank you so much you really made my daaay;**

    THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH :**

    9ij? when did we talk about food? :p
    lol mashkoora!!
    love u too;**


    Munira
    Shukran wintay a3jaab;**

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