Friday, October 11, 2013

Empty Spaces -18- (FINALE.)


Hi
*Sorry for not posting last week, I had a hectic week and I wasn't inspired at all.

*This is the last part of the story! I may write another story if you have any
 suggestions or ideas for new stories please let me know privately on ask or on kik!

*Thank you ALL for the love and support though out this story and all stories I wrote.

Enjoy it!
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Lama sighed while putting her hair in a messy bun.

"what is this?"

 "bed"

"9aaaaa7!!!"

"Yalla now go!"

"NO NO NO NOOH"

"Baraaaaaaaak!!"

Barak: shfeekoum?

Lama: ta3abt!

Barak laughed: Noora!!! baba! Yalla!

Nora: MAMA NAUGHTY!

Barak tried to hide his smile: La! 3aib!

Lama looked at Barak while he carried baby Noora and put her in bed. She looked at 
her daughter's brown curls, big eyes and tiny hands wrapped around her father's 
neck.

She couldn't ask for anything more, She's living in the house where she grew up, her husband and daughter are healthy and happy and that was more than enough.

There was a bit of changes that was done in the house, but mama Nora's room stayed the same, it still smells like her.. In rough days Lama walks to Mama Nora's room and stays there for hours.

"tfakren fene?"

Lama giggled: sh'hal thiqa?

Barak: eb ma7alha! Etha ma ra7 tfakren fene btfakren ib mno?

Lama shrugged her shoulders: shakh9 thani

Barak gave her a straight face: masma3?

Lama whispered: ga3da afakir ib shakh9 thani

Barak: MA ASMA3?

Lama: ohhh khalas khalas ga3da afakir feek!!

Barak: ee 3abali

Lama imitated Barak "eeh 3abaali"

Barak tried to hide his laugh he rushed towards Lama and started tickling her.

Lama couldn't breathe from laughing.

"Mamaaaaaa"

Lama: baaaas baraaak hidne!!!

"Mamaaaaaaaaaah"

Lama tried to escape from Barak's hands that were wrapped around her.

"MAMAAAAA"

Barak finally let Lama go, she rushed to their daughter: hala mama?

Lama found Baby Nora sitting on the floor: abaih Barak!! Sh6al3aha min frash'ha?

Barak laughed: Nora? Baba!! Shlon nigaztay min frashich?

Nora couldn't be happier, she was giggling and clapping, Barak put her back in her bed.

Barak: imshay

Lama: mani mit7arka! Ba3arf shlon ti6la3 min frash'ha! Wayed 3ali 3alaiha!

Lama and Barak sat on the floor in front of Nora's bed, they could see her big eyes staring at them waiting for them to leave.

Lama: 7abebe? Nora namat 9a7?

Barak: eee namat!

They heard her giggle and cover her face with her teddy bear, Lama and Barak stayed in the same place for half an hour, Lama closed her eyes and put her head on Barak's shoulder.

Barak: 7abebete la tnameen

Lama: hmmm

Barak laughed: gilna la tnameen

Lama: osh

Barak: bas gomay khal nrou7 inaam

Lama: wetha Nora 6la3at min frash'ha?

Barak: ma ra7 ti6la3 goumay!

Lama through herself on Barak while they're walking to their room.

Barak: maaa amshe 3adil ya3ni?

Lama: kaifik 3ad

Lama and Barak got ready for bed, Lama covered herself with the blanket.

Barak: shiftay? Gitlich etha khalainaha btnam!

Barak closed the lights and got in bed, he wrapped his arms around Lama and closed his eyes.

"Mama?"

Lama: barak sima3t ele sima3ta?

Barak: khasawe nafsna ma sima3na tikfaain

"MAMAAAA!!! BABAAAAA!!!"

Lama opened the lamp and saw Lama standing with a wide smile.

Barak laughed: el ibtsamaaaa shireeeeraaaaa!!

Lama: la tith7aak Barak! Khal t7is inha sawat shay ghala6!

Barak: ta3alaaay 7abeebtaaat Baba!!

Lama: ma9adig!! Baraaak!!! La t3awidha!

Barak carried Nora and put her in bed between them, Lama looked at her husband, 
They went through a lot but they stayed strong for each other.


Fay married a 90 year old man, he died and she inherited a big share of his money, 
she eventually got what she wanted which is money and nothing else.

Lama and Barak filled each other's empty spaces, they found the love and felt safe having each other.


9 comments:

  1. awalan 7emdilah ure okay kena n7ateeechhhh! o thank you 3al post elnaaaarii , nantathir elmazeed inshalah..��

    -D

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  2. Awwwwww such a beautiful ending! Loved it

    Thanks a million for everything and enshalla everything is better now :D

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  3. Awwwww :'(!!! Amazingg ending!! Such a great story with a great ending, thaaank you for posting ;*

    -M.

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  4. 7abaaayb galbi I love them :') & please lat7rmeena mn your talent! I believe you're one of the best, very rare bloggers in here.

    Thanks for the story and I hope I read something new soon <3

    - A reader from dubai

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  5. Ambaaiiiiiihhhhh eccuuuuuteeeee :'(
    7aaiiiiil 7baaaiiiit al paart
    bs 7safa 5l9aat bsr3aa :(
    thaaank you for the great story ♥
    we love you ♥

    -Z

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  6. Thankyouuu , jdd walla y36ich al3afya wl3wznach wenty mrei'9a wenty mshghola , oo we are waiting ur book cuz your such agood writer

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  7. AMAAAZING!! I really loved ur story *-*
    Keep the good work <3

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  8. waaaaaay 7ad oma 3ajeeb elpost!
    wayed 7abaitaaah
    w babay noura 7adha cuteee
    w elacyat? BARAAAK ya3ni che astanis lain aschoof young couple w eldad shayl elbaby w he's happyyy! a7s che they're a happy family<3
    w pleaaaaase pretty please with wipped cream and a cherry on top nabi the next story 3an a married couple!
    a7la shay!<3
    and again w last but not least, THANKYOU 3ALA A7LA STORY YA A7LA BLOGGER BELWOJOODDD<3 9IJ MN GALB I'M WAITING FOR YOUR'E NEXT STORY 3ALA NAAAR

    -an anonymous reader that decided to comment because why not

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