Saturday, April 23, 2011

Come back when you can (33)

Quwa;**

1.Shlonkoum?!

2. Ah I'm in a really bad mood and I have no idea WHY!

3. O 6ab3an as my twitter followers know, 34 will be the last part of the story ;) 

4. This post goes to Anon N, min ziman I didn't dedicate a post to u;* 

Enjoy it;*

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S3ood sat on his car and waited for Basma, he closed his eyes hoping that everything is okay, he really didn’t want anything bad to happen.

"S3ood"

S3ood turned around and saw Basma standing: 3yon S3ood

She smiled and walked towards him: lazm agoolik shno 9ar!! TA5AYAL!-

S3ood: ihday mako shay yiswa

Basma: imbala imbala yiswa!!

S3ood opened the trunk of his car

Basma giggled: shno hatha?

S3ood smiled: ladies first

Basma laughed hoped inside, S3ood sat in front of her.

S3ood: sh9ar?

Basma: dashait el bait wala omi tgol ako wa7da isimha umm isimha umm om 5alid!

S3ood: om 5alid?!

Basma: ee!! O om 5alid 56ibatne 7ag waladha o-

S3ood: NA3AM?!

Basma: S3ood isma3ne lay el a5ir

S3ood: Basma intay min 9ijch?! Shno wa7id 5a6bich o shno asmi3ich lay el a5ir!

Basma: omi galat awafi8 3ala ele-

S3ood: ra7 twaf8een 3alay ana la2ane a7ibich o walaht 3alaich.. ra7 twaf8en 3alay ana la2ane walaht 3al sticky notes ele tarseen el thalaja.. walaht 3ala re7at el lavender ele tatris el sha8aa 3gub ma tit7amimain!! Walaht 3ala el frames ele mkawdat.houm bil 9ala o kil youm tgolele lay yibna 3yal ib natris hal frames ib 9iwarhoum!
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"el 7imdallah ma fene shay al7en bas lazm aro7 araji3 bain fatra o fatra"

Mubarak: aha

Mubarak tried so hard to show '3alya that he didn’t care, but his heart ached for her, she went through a lot without him and she regrets letting him go.

Mubarak sighed.

Ghalya: Mubarak please sami7ine

Mubarak: intay m9adga ine agdar ashel 3alaich wala akrihich?!

Ghalya smiled: sawait ele sawaita la2anik ma tistahil! Ma tistahil t3esh 7ayatik ma3a wa7da mareetha!!

Mubarak: wintay min galich ina 3indi mani3? '3alya ib hal thalath sneen ma mar youm ele yetay feh 3ala bali

Ghalya smiled.

Mubarak: 3ala kithir ma 7awalt ashelich min bali o asawi nafsi mo mihtam *sigh* trdeen ta6ren 3ala bali… Ghalya tadren kil youm kint agool 7ag nafsi 3adi trid mayta!! 3adi trid o aroo7 a3aze ahalha ib moot.ha! o kil youm…. kil youm galbi y3awirne akthar!

Ghalya's eyes were full of tears: Mubarak-

Mubarak: kil youm a7awil a9er ejabe wagool la titsha2am akeed bitrid mithil el awal o a7san! O-

Ghalya: MUBARAK!

Mubarak sighed: na3am

Ghalya: 5ala9 ana radait al7en… ana hne ma3ak!

Ghalya put her hand on Mubarak's hand

Ghalya: kil shay berid mithil el awal o a7san
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S3ood cupped Basma's face.

S3ood: Basma ma at5ayal tkoneen b7ithin rayal thani! Ma at5ayal tkoneen ib 7ayat rayal thani '3airi! Basma intay 7abebte ana o murti ana o ma7ad ib hal dinya lah el 7ag ya5thich mini!!

Basma: S3ood-

S3ood: lazm ti5taraini ana! Ana-

Basma: S3OOD!! Akeed ba5tarik inta akeed inta!

14 comments:

  1. Aaaaaaaahhh 3ajeeeeb!!
    Abi ba3ad!! Pleeeezzz post asap!! ;**

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  2. okay so shofee ana i read the first part afew days w gilt youm it5ale9ha i read it kamlah lakin i couldnt wait. so please la t3athbeny w put the next post w please make it long thank you

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  3. AAAAAHH CUUTTEEE!!!
    PLEASE POST SOON ;****

    -A*

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  4. Btw 9aloo7aa.. whats ur twitter account?

    -A*

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  5. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT!!! Hal post kaan waaaayid romansy!!<3 3ajeeeb!!;)

    Hubba Hubba

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  6. GWTPA
    Thank you;**
    Enshallah I'll post soon ;)

    Bint almehairi
    7ayach allah ib my blog ;) o enshallah I will post soon ;)

    Anon A
    Enshallah;**
    @9al7a

    Anon Hubba hubba
    THAAANK YOU!!

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  7. awwwwwww 3ajeeeeb el post wanasaaaaaaa 7adhom cute <3

    -Jo0

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  8. Great post as usual! Latgooleen inna the next post is the last! :(

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  9. i read all 3 stories in 3 days, amazing!
    xx7

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  10. Ilpooost 3ajeeeeeb !!
    Aby wa7d nafs s3ood ;(
    Cant wait for the next post bs thayg khilgy ina its the last ;(
    Loove u 9alo7a ;***

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  11. Loved the post!!!! Amazinngggg!!!!!!!

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  12. 9al7aaaaaaaaa!!!! let me tell you one thing ana wa7da min ur first readers i've been reading your story min bidayat.ha 7ata u can se my comments awal :p bas ilmoshkila ina I read it from my phone o bil phonne I cant comment ako shay that in your blogs that prevents it .... il mohim I hope that you dont end it this soon walla an6er na6ra 3ashan tnzleen a post mashalla you're a talented writer with great ideas fa 7asafa ina you end it this soon

    ;***

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  13. Hello...
    This story is one of my favorite stories!
    Your such an amazing writer. I hope you post soon!
    love your story:)

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  14. WHY DID I JST SEE THIS??? WAINI 3AN IL POST ELE DEDICATED 2 ME?! ;P Allah Allah post dedicated 2 me (a) ya ba5ty walla post mn 9aloo7aaa;** mno gadi?;p 5ala9 btyeekom il mooga al7eeen looool

    as always love ur storiesss mo gtlich shakla aku 3irs yay bl 6reeej ;p tanabu2aty e6li3t 9a7 mo cthi ? ;P

    -Anon N

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