Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Come back when you can (17)

Quwa;**

1. Shlonkoum?!!

2. 9ij ina I dont tweet wayed bas I'm really happy that my readers are now my FRIENDS! ;)

3. As I said before the last part of this post is epic!! To me it is epic!

4. Abeekoum tit5aylon Basma & S3ood bil last part of the post! Imagine them!!

Enjoy it;**

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Three boring days passed, Basma slept every night with S3ood's pullover in her arms.




"AHHHHHHHHHHHH! ana abeeh tgoom "



"Shuush Zayoona bas!"



Basma opened her eyes and smiled: Zayooona gimt al7en ayech!!



Basma heard Zaina's giggles behind her door, She got out of bed put the pullover in her closet and walked to the bathroom.


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"S3oood!! Yalla goom"



S3ood: ma 3indi dawaaaaaaam!



Mother: haw adri! Yala goom ana o obok bnroo7 el shalaih



S3ood's eyes were wide open: bas intaw? El shabab bero7on?



Mother: madri kalimhoum!



S3ood: ok intaw ro7aw sbgoone



Mother: ok



S3ood quickly grabbed his mobile and sent a broadcast for his cousins and told them to go to their grandmother's shalaih.



He jumped out of bed and walked to the bathroom.


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Basma felt something weird going on, Her mother was sitting on the couch next to her grandmother and Maha was in the kitchen baking a cake with her sisters, Maryam and Zaina was in their room upstairs.



Basma: Maha ta3alay gi3day ma3ay!



Maha: la7tha shway! 5ayfa 3al cake ti7tirg!



Basma sighed and walked out of the shalaih, and she was surprised that Bnaider was full of life and people!



Basma: ohhh faj2a!



She heard her grandmother giggle: el youm el yim3a mako dawamt wala midaris!



Basma nodded: ee 9a7!


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S3ood got in his car



A7sb ashwaagi ana '3aabat athaari el shoug taw ma faaag



Nawal's voice filled the car, S3ood put the windows down and drove off


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 The ladies ate their lunch and were enjoying their gossiping time with tea, until mama
Fatima came announced that the men are coming.



Maha: yoooh! Lazm yijoon we5arboon 3alaina?



"Maaho yal kathaba! Taben ti8n3eena ink ma ishtigte lizoojik?"



Basma giggled & Maha blushed.



Grandmother: ba5ith el 5adam el shalaih yratboona lihoum



Basma: ay shalaih?



Najla: ma la7athtay el shalaih ele yamna fathe?



Basma nodded.



Najla: hatha shalaihna… lama iyon ahal el S3oodiya i7na el 7areem nig3ad ib shalaihkoum wil riyayeel ib shalaihna



Basma nodded: aaaaaha!



Mama Fatima made sure that the Shalaih were the men will be staying was clean.



Basma: ya36eeech el 3afya we5aleech lina ya rab!



Just before her grandmother opened her mother they heard car horns



Grandmother: o hathail el riyayeel w9alaw



Basma giggled: o laish el hirnat?



Najla: Barook o Badoor lazm el iz3aaaj!



Basma smiled.


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Basoooooooooooooom



Basma smiled: ahlain Barook



Mubarak: haaa shil a5bar?



Basma: mashi el 7al



Mubarak: enshallah 3jibich shalaihna 6al 3umrch



Basma smiled: 3ajabne



Basma looked around, she noticed that Fay wasn’t in the shalaih since the morning.



Basma: Maryom wain Fay?



Maryam: ib shalaih ahalha!

 Basma: aha


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 Basma looked around Maryam and Maha suddenly disappeared, Zaina was sitting on the couch with a polite smile on her face, Something was strange!



When Basma was approaching Zaina, Her grandmother pooped out of nowhere.



Grandmother: Basoma taben intimasha?



Basma smiled: yalla!



Basma and her grandmother walked on the sea shore, both of them were silent until her
grandmother decided to break the silent, Basma's eyes were on S3ood's shalaih she didn’t see
anyone standing



Grandmother: hatha shalaih-



Basma: yadat S3ood? *sigh* ee adri



Her grandmother raised an eye brow: shdarach?



Basma: kint al3ab ma3a Zayoon o faj2a i5tifat! Wala alageeha ga3da yam 3ayooza tishrab may!



Her grandmother giggled, Basma smiled.



Basma: zafait.ha wala el 3ayooza tnadene ib ismi o darait inah t3rfna



Grandmother: o galatlich inha yadat S3ood



Basma nodded.



Grandmother: aha



They walked a few steps, Basma stood and faced her grandmother.



Grandmother: shfech 7abebte ta3abtay??



Basma: la… Mama Fatooma bagolch shay



Her grandmother was looking behind Basma with a smile on her face, Basma turned around and found S3ood talking on the phone, Her heart nearly stopped she was really happy to see him.



Basma: mama Fatima bagoolich shay!



Grandmother: goolay



Basma: S3ood gali!



Grandmother: galich?



Basma: ee gali kil shay! Gali ina kan rayle o gali ina tahawashna gabil el 7adith o ine 6ala3t mn el bait o hadaita o ba3dain sawait el 7adth o ina ahale galoola ina ohwa el sibab o-



Grandmother: Basma 7abebte ihyda!



Basma was talking nonstop, She took a deep breath and put her hand on her forehead.



Grandmother: imshay el shalaih



Basma and her grandmother walked to the shalaih, Basma opened the door and the lights were off.



Basma: maa-



"SURPRISE"



Basma's eyes were wide open.



Everyone suddenly popped out of no were and Najla was holding a cake.



"Happy birthdaaaay to you! happy birthday to Basoooma happy birthdaaaaaaaaay to you"



Basma giggled, She couldn’t stop smiling: mashkoooreeen



Everyone walked outside and put the cake on the table, Basma blew her 24 candles with a huge smile on her face.


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Everything went back to normal after dinner, the men went to their shalaih, and the woman went inside because the weather was getting colder, Basma rapped a scarf around her neck and walked outside.



She closed her eyes and took a deep breath, Basma kept her eyes closed.



"Basooma"



Basma heard Zaina whisper.



Basma giggled and whispered back: na3am?



Zaina ran and took out a small box from behind a bush and came running to Basma.



Zaina: hatha 7agich



Basma smiled: aww!! 7abebte Zayoona mashkora



Zaina put her tiny finger on her lips: shuush!



Basma giggled: asfa asfa



Zaina: hach



Basma took the box from Zaina: mashkora



Zaina: S3ood 3a6ane yah gaal 3a6eeh Basoma bas la7ad yshoof *giggle*



Basma's smile grew wider she quickly looked around and found S3ood walking away, When she was about to call him.



"Basma mama ta3alay da5il el dinya bard"



Basma's mother interrupted her plan: enshallah



Basma took the box from Zaina and rushed to her room and locked the door, She took a deep breath and sat on her bed.



Buuuz buuuz



Basma heard her mobile, It was a message from S3ood.


Happy birthday Basoma ;)



Basma's smiled grew wider, She opened the box and found a pink scarf.



Basma: *gasp* abaih hatha el scarf!! Hatha el scarf!



Basma put her hand on her mouth: ma a9adig!



Basma quickly started typing a message



Thank you S3ood! Thanks a lot!
Is that scarf what I think it is?



Basma smiled and rapped the scarf around her neck.



Your welcome :)
Yup, Hal scarf kan ythakirne fech o al7en rad lich



Basma: laish radle yah dam ohwa el shay el wa7eed ele ythakra fene?! *sigh*



laish radaita le?



Basma wore her cardigan and walked down stairs, Everyone entered their room to go to sleep, all of the girls gathered in one room to watch a movie so she knew that no one would be there to annoy her.



She slid the door open and stepped outside, a cold breeze hit her she shivered, She heard her mobile buz .



3ashan ansach



Basma's eyes were full of tears! She couldn’t believe that the person that she started to fall in love with wants to forget her!



She looked at S3ood's shalaih and she saw a figure standing, Basma walked to the sea barefoot, Her feet were frozen but she didn’t care, She couldn’t believe that S3ood is giving up on them!



"Basma? "



Basma quickly turned around and found S3ood standing.



Basma: na3am?!



S3ood: shim6al3ich mn el shalaih hal 7aza?! tadren el sa3a cham?!



Basma ignored S3ood and faced the sea.



S3ood: Basma! Ana ga3d a7ache mno?!



Basma: ga3id it7achene! Wana mabe arid 3alaik!



S3ood: BASMA!



Basma turned around: laish tabe tinsani S3ood?! Laish?



S3ood was shocked, he didn’t think that she'll have the courage to ask him that question.



Basma: 6oool ma inta tsolifli 3ana kint tgool ina wigafna thid ahalna kilhoum 3ashan ba3ath! Wal7een ib kil basa6a tridli el shay el wa7ed ele ythakrik fene!! o laish? 3ashan tinsani?!



S3oood: Basma-



Basma: S3ood please 5alne akamil!



Basma gasped and wiped her tears away: S3ood ana nisait! Ana nisait kil shay o 9adigne el nisyan ma yrayi7! El nisyan yta3bik zyada! Widi athkir! Widi athkir shay wa7id kan ib 7ayati! Widi athkir isim… Maw8if… aay shaaay! Mane gadra! Mane gadra athkir! O tadre shkithir ga3da at3ab la2ane mo ga3da athkir?! GA3D AT3AB WAYED!



S3ood sighed and put his hand on his chest.



Basma sighed: el nisyan ma yrayi7!



S3ood walked closer to Basma.



Basma: a7is *gasp*



Basma put her hand on her heart: a7is ako shay yarbi6ne fek! Shay kil ma ri7t 3an bali yridne lik! Shay kil ma a8arir ine ansak ygooli laa! Basma la t7awleen…. Shay y5alene kil ma a'3amith 3aini alage wayhik jidami! S3ood abe athkirik! Abe athkirik akthar mn ay shay bil dinya bas mane gadra!! Mane gadra!

 

Basma broke down, she got down on her knees and cried, S3ood felt so weak at that point he couldn’t imagine the amount of pain that she's going through and he couldn’t believe that he was about to give up on her when she needed him, he sat on his knees in front of her and cupped her face.


S3ood: shuush


Basma lifted her head and saw tears in his eyes, tears that didn’t leave his eyes they just filled them.

Basma: ta3abt!
 S3ood: adri!

Basma unwrapped the scarf from her neck and gave it to S3ood.


Basma: 5ala 3indik please 5ala 3indik! 3al a8al bathmin ina ako shay ythakrik fene!


S3ood let go of Basma's face and took the scarf: Basma intay ma ti7tajain shay yathminlch inch 3ala bali! La2anch dayman 3ala bali ma3a aw bidon el scarf!

21 comments:

  1. i just posted ina ana first ibsriiii3aaa gabel ma someone comments before me (A)!
    and OMG il ending!!! epicccc!!!! min galb!
    its soo saddd wallah :( bas inshallah they end up together! nabi happy ending! (please)
    lots and lots and lotssss of love!

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  2. WOOOWWWW!! epiccc wont do the post's ending jusitice!
    i actually had tears in my eyes! 3ainii dam3t!
    wela mraa i cried over a post min bain kil il 8i9a9 ily graithom
    bss this postt was just soo real!
    abda3tyy 9aloo7a:*
    M

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  3. *snif* *snif*
    laish chithee laish lazim ekoon fee sad parts in every relationship that couples would pass through!!?!!
    *snif* *snif*
    mashkoora 9aloo7a 3al amaizing post!! Oo pleez lat6awlen 3alaina!! ;**

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  4. amaaaaaaaaazing wallah *o*
    sweetest couple ever, most romantic too
    I love it love it
    now really can't wait for the next post. hope s3ood wouldn't try to forget her anymore, instead he'll pursue her, yes!

    waiting patiently for the next post :D

    -Huda

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  5. Awwwww...ye'3me'6oon! te3awer elfad Basma, ma testahil elle 9ar leha. OO s3ood is adorable. I love him<3


    xx

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  6. Anon M
    Awwww!! Thank you sooooo much M;**

    GWTPA
    Yuup lazm ;(
    el 3afoo;*
    I'll post as soon as I can enshallah ;D

    Anon Huda
    Thanks a lot ;)
    I'll post as soon as I can enshallah!!
    lol thanks ;)

    Heaven
    Waaay ya zeen 7acheekoum!! 7adha t3awir elfad :p
    he loves too :p

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  7. Im in uni in the library just to read your post :p "Yes Yes Im that much of an ADDICT" :p
    Omg la ow shaklee '3ala6 im looking at the screen and crying LMAO :p

    Omg <3 :D As always worth the wait walla Cant wait for the next one :D

    Qb*
    Love you babes
    XoXo

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  8. waaaaaaaaaaay ya galby 3alaihum!!!!

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  9. Anon
    I'm sorry :p

    Queen Bee
    ur sweet words ALWAYS make my day;**
    Thank you soooo much, Love u too;**

    Rawan
    Lol thank you? :p

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  10. im usually a silent reader! but i have to comment on this! its fascinating mashalla, i read the whole blog in less than 2 days! i adore , i love! and i desire more! post as soon as possible

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  11. Glowing sunset
    Thank you for not being silent :p
    Thank you sooo much ;) enshallah I'll try my best :D

    My Prince Charming
    <3<3

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  12. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay a7la post min a7la writer;*

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  13. ONE WORD

    3ATHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAB

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  14. I think ism '3awar galb' belongs 2 ur story mo 3a9eer il tha7ya ;p


    3AWARTY GALBY 9aloo7aa shino hathaaa!!

    Epic shway 3ala el ending

    -Anon N

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  15. Noona
    A7la comment mn a7la reader;*

    Nawarii
    TWO WORDS

    THANK YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU :*

    Anon N
    LOOOOOOOOOOOL 5osh isim :p
    Thank yo;*

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  16. 9al7aaaaa allah yihdeech laish sawaitay feeny chithy?!?!?! Im crying my eyes out!!!:( 7araaaaaam!!! BUUUUUUUT............. I LOVED IT!!!!!:D <3

    Hubba Hubba ;****

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  17. omg, adre hal post 8adeem bes i just started reading, and this post made me cry like a baby!

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